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The Mind Hacker #1
The Family Man
AJ Rose is back and in full effect! If you’ve ever read anything by AJ you’ll be excited to know this book has that draw-you-in-and-hold-you-down effect we’ve all come to love in their stories. If AJ is new to you, strap in. This story takes you for the ride of your life! - Miski Harris, Author of "Don't Ask, Don't Tell"
Special Agent Jon “Ice Man” Anderson is one of the FBI’s best monster hunters, catching predators using their darkness against them. It’s his purpose, and he’s relentless.
Rookie Special Agent Tracey Smith is Jon’s opposite, shining light in the shadows and counteracting the dark with hope. Together, they may be the perfect combination to catch The Family Man, a sniper terrorizing St. Louis, dealing death through the scope of a high-powered rifle.
They can’t afford distractions.
Jon can’t ignore the feelings Tracey has evoked.
Feelings he hasn’t allowed himself in years.
Jon’s not the only one compelled by Tracey….
In a city held hostage, the FBI races to stop the killing.
Before the sniper finds them,
And they lose everything.
The Mind Hacker: The Family Man is the 107,000-word opening salvo of a gay romance/suspense series following a law enforcement/workplace pairing through a bisexual awakening all the way to their eventual happily-ever-after.
Content warning: The Mind Hacker series contains themes of dark violence, including off-page sexual assault, psychological manipulation, narcissism, and other disturbing themes. If you’d like specifics, the author will happily answer questions through their email: ajrosefiction[at]gmail[dot]com.
Every word and cover of every book published by this author has been crafted by a human and always will be.
Special Agent Jon “Ice Man” Anderson is one of the FBI’s best monster hunters, catching predators using their darkness against them. It’s his purpose, and he’s relentless.
Rookie Special Agent Tracey Smith is Jon’s opposite, shining light in the shadows and counteracting the dark with hope. Together, they may be the perfect combination to catch The Family Man, a sniper terrorizing St. Louis, dealing death through the scope of a high-powered rifle.
They can’t afford distractions.
Jon can’t ignore the feelings Tracey has evoked.
Feelings he hasn’t allowed himself in years.
Jon’s not the only one compelled by Tracey….
In a city held hostage, the FBI races to stop the killing.
Before the sniper finds them,
And they lose everything.
The Mind Hacker: The Family Man is the 107,000-word opening salvo of a gay romance/suspense series following a law enforcement/workplace pairing through a bisexual awakening all the way to their eventual happily-ever-after.
Content warning: The Mind Hacker series contains themes of dark violence, including off-page sexual assault, psychological manipulation, narcissism, and other disturbing themes. If you’d like specifics, the author will happily answer questions through their email: ajrosefiction[at]gmail[dot]com.
Every word and cover of every book published by this author has been crafted by a human and always will be.
377 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 8, 2024
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April 12, 2024
I've given this a B at AAR
The Family Man is a promising start to a new romantic suspense series, The Mind Hacker , from new-to-me author AJ Rose featuring a small team of special agents who work for the FBI’s Behavioural Analysis Unit. There are a few stock-in-trade tropes here and the author sometimes gets bogged down with too much description and explanation, but I enjoyed the story overall. The action sequences are tense, the sex scenes are hot and the two leads are interesting and likeable. Their relationship is in the early stages here, but that’s pretty much what I expect from book one in a same-couple series, and the eventual HFN feels right and promises more to come.
Special Agent Tracey Smith is the youngest agent ever to join one of the FBI’s elite NCVAC (National Center for the Analysis of Violent Crime) teams within the BAU. He might be young, but he knows he’s good at what he does and he’s no stranger to hard work, having worked as a police psychologist for three years while also earning his PhD. The small, four-person team he is assigned to is headed up by Supervisory Special Agent Jonathan Anderson, and Tracey has barely had time to get his feet under his desk when they, together with their colleagues Sarena Mercado and Perry Vaughn, are sent to St. Louis on the trail of a serial killer – a sniper – who is picking off victims seemingly at random and often in broad daylight.
I’m not going to say too much about the plot, save that it’s intricate, clever and well-executed, with some really tense moments that are nicely balanced with humour, character interaction and the slowly unfolding attraction between the two leads. The author has clearly done their research about the way the BAU works and what their role is within an investigation such as this one, but the downside of that is that there’s the odd step into a bit too much minutiae and an occasional ‘flabbiness’ in the pacing, but I appreciated the attention to detail for the most part.
The central pairing is something of a staple of procedurals – the old hand and the rookie. Jon is one of the BAU’s top agents and is enigmatic and inscrutable, nicknamed the ‘Ice Man’ because he’s so focused and tightly controlled. He’s an excellent mentor though – I really liked that he so strongly encourages Tracey to pursue a life outside the bureau for the sake of his personal well-being, and his willingness to let Tracey take the lead in certain areas of the investigation once he’s shown a real aptitude for them. Jon compartmentalises his life for a very good reason – some of the stuff he has to deal with is the sort of thing no human being should ever have to see – but it’s led to the break-down of his few personal relationships because his desire to keep his loved ones away from the darkness that is a part of his everyday life means they’ve felt he’s shutting them out. (I get it - but the profiler-who-feels-tainted-because-he-has-a-knack-for-getting-into-the-minds-of-killers is such an overdone stereotype.) Jon has resigned himself – for the time being – to casual hook-ups that don’t require any emotional investment, until the newest member of the team starts to get under his skin. But getting involved with a colleague – and a subordinate – is a very bad idea, and he is determined to keep his distance.
It doesn’t take long for Tracey to develop a serious case of hero worship over his mentor. Although when the man starts to appear in his dreams, he quickly works out that it’s not just Jon’s keen mind, work ethic or solve rate that is drawing him to the older man, and that he – Tracey – is clearly not as straight as he thought he was. It’s just a crush – or that’s all it can be, because the bureau’s fraternisation policy is very clear – but, sensing Jon’s deep loneliness, Tracey thinks maybe he can be what the other man might need in another way. A friend.
I really liked the progression of their romance. It’s a smoldering slow-burn with sexy almost-kisses and lots of longing – and it doesn’t feel implausible (there are no ‘we’re under fire so we must shag’ moments, here!) or get in the way of the plot. Jon and Tracey have strong chemistry and the author does a good job of developoing their emotional connection; they hook up a couple of times and the book ends on a firm HFN, but they still have a way to go – and things aren’t going to be easy because they’re going to have to keep everything on the downlow at work if they’re going to try having an actual relationship.
I liked both characters a lot – there’s a bit of a grumpy/sunushine vibe going on and they’re very different in many ways, but the intellectual and emotional connections they form feel very real. I enjoyed the secondary characters and their chemistry and interactions, too – Sarena and Perry are not just window dressing and are important to the investigation. One niggle, though - I was surprised at finding out that Jon is thirty-five, because that seemed young for him to have the experience and the seniority that he has; I’d expected him to be early forties at least. Maybe the author didn’t want a big age gap between the leads (Tracey is twenty-eight), but having Jon ten or twelve years older would have felt more realistic.
Despite my criticisms, I was pretty much glued to The Family Man from start to finish, and would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a new romantic suspense series to try.
This review originally appeared at All About Romance .
The Family Man is a promising start to a new romantic suspense series, The Mind Hacker , from new-to-me author AJ Rose featuring a small team of special agents who work for the FBI’s Behavioural Analysis Unit. There are a few stock-in-trade tropes here and the author sometimes gets bogged down with too much description and explanation, but I enjoyed the story overall. The action sequences are tense, the sex scenes are hot and the two leads are interesting and likeable. Their relationship is in the early stages here, but that’s pretty much what I expect from book one in a same-couple series, and the eventual HFN feels right and promises more to come.
Special Agent Tracey Smith is the youngest agent ever to join one of the FBI’s elite NCVAC (National Center for the Analysis of Violent Crime) teams within the BAU. He might be young, but he knows he’s good at what he does and he’s no stranger to hard work, having worked as a police psychologist for three years while also earning his PhD. The small, four-person team he is assigned to is headed up by Supervisory Special Agent Jonathan Anderson, and Tracey has barely had time to get his feet under his desk when they, together with their colleagues Sarena Mercado and Perry Vaughn, are sent to St. Louis on the trail of a serial killer – a sniper – who is picking off victims seemingly at random and often in broad daylight.
I’m not going to say too much about the plot, save that it’s intricate, clever and well-executed, with some really tense moments that are nicely balanced with humour, character interaction and the slowly unfolding attraction between the two leads. The author has clearly done their research about the way the BAU works and what their role is within an investigation such as this one, but the downside of that is that there’s the odd step into a bit too much minutiae and an occasional ‘flabbiness’ in the pacing, but I appreciated the attention to detail for the most part.
The central pairing is something of a staple of procedurals – the old hand and the rookie. Jon is one of the BAU’s top agents and is enigmatic and inscrutable, nicknamed the ‘Ice Man’ because he’s so focused and tightly controlled. He’s an excellent mentor though – I really liked that he so strongly encourages Tracey to pursue a life outside the bureau for the sake of his personal well-being, and his willingness to let Tracey take the lead in certain areas of the investigation once he’s shown a real aptitude for them. Jon compartmentalises his life for a very good reason – some of the stuff he has to deal with is the sort of thing no human being should ever have to see – but it’s led to the break-down of his few personal relationships because his desire to keep his loved ones away from the darkness that is a part of his everyday life means they’ve felt he’s shutting them out. (I get it - but the profiler-who-feels-tainted-because-he-has-a-knack-for-getting-into-the-minds-of-killers is such an overdone stereotype.) Jon has resigned himself – for the time being – to casual hook-ups that don’t require any emotional investment, until the newest member of the team starts to get under his skin. But getting involved with a colleague – and a subordinate – is a very bad idea, and he is determined to keep his distance.
It doesn’t take long for Tracey to develop a serious case of hero worship over his mentor. Although when the man starts to appear in his dreams, he quickly works out that it’s not just Jon’s keen mind, work ethic or solve rate that is drawing him to the older man, and that he – Tracey – is clearly not as straight as he thought he was. It’s just a crush – or that’s all it can be, because the bureau’s fraternisation policy is very clear – but, sensing Jon’s deep loneliness, Tracey thinks maybe he can be what the other man might need in another way. A friend.
I really liked the progression of their romance. It’s a smoldering slow-burn with sexy almost-kisses and lots of longing – and it doesn’t feel implausible (there are no ‘we’re under fire so we must shag’ moments, here!) or get in the way of the plot. Jon and Tracey have strong chemistry and the author does a good job of developoing their emotional connection; they hook up a couple of times and the book ends on a firm HFN, but they still have a way to go – and things aren’t going to be easy because they’re going to have to keep everything on the downlow at work if they’re going to try having an actual relationship.
I liked both characters a lot – there’s a bit of a grumpy/sunushine vibe going on and they’re very different in many ways, but the intellectual and emotional connections they form feel very real. I enjoyed the secondary characters and their chemistry and interactions, too – Sarena and Perry are not just window dressing and are important to the investigation. One niggle, though - I was surprised at finding out that Jon is thirty-five, because that seemed young for him to have the experience and the seniority that he has; I’d expected him to be early forties at least. Maybe the author didn’t want a big age gap between the leads (Tracey is twenty-eight), but having Jon ten or twelve years older would have felt more realistic.
Despite my criticisms, I was pretty much glued to The Family Man from start to finish, and would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a new romantic suspense series to try.
This review originally appeared at All About Romance .
November 22, 2024
If you’re a fan of the TV show Criminal Minds this is a must read. It follows newbie Agent Tracey Smith as he joins the Behavioral Analysis Unit of the FBI. His first case is a tough one and even though he is brilliant, he also struggles in his new position. His boss, Jon Anderson is a veteran at seeing the worst of the worst. He knows that not only is Tracey brilliant, he knows he has to harden his heart.
I thoroughly enjoyed this one and I can’t wait to jump into book 2.
I thoroughly enjoyed this one and I can’t wait to jump into book 2.
October 1, 2024
***4.5 Stars***
May 23, 2024
2.5 🤷🏽♀️🤷🏽♀️🤷🏽♀️ (IDKs)
The first 4/5ths of this book were great. The sexual tension, the thrill of the mystery the unit needed to solve - it all had me on the edge of my seat.
And then the last 1/5th happened. Tracey screwed everything up for a can of Sprite. SPRITE. He knew an unhinged sniper was after him, and he thought, "Man, I'm really thirsty. Lemme risk my life for some soda." Everything after that was over the top and corny.
I should have known this book was taking a turn for the worse when the unit didn't even solve the crime, a civilian did. AFTER they prompted the murderer to kill her mother sooner rather than later.
Like, did the author just give up? I was so excited, thinking I'd found a new series to fangirl over.
The first 4/5ths of this book were great. The sexual tension, the thrill of the mystery the unit needed to solve - it all had me on the edge of my seat.
And then the last 1/5th happened. Tracey screwed everything up for a can of Sprite. SPRITE. He knew an unhinged sniper was after him, and he thought, "Man, I'm really thirsty. Lemme risk my life for some soda." Everything after that was over the top and corny.
I should have known this book was taking a turn for the worse when the unit didn't even solve the crime, a civilian did. AFTER they prompted the murderer to kill her mother sooner rather than later.
Like, did the author just give up? I was so excited, thinking I'd found a new series to fangirl over.
March 11, 2024
This was so good! This is my favorite type of story, a murder/mystery type that has a budding romance. There was a lot of action and it moved fast so there was no time for the story to drag. The author encompassed the lives of criminal analysts and psychologists working for the BAU in a way I’ve not seen in other books. This is a hard job, often lonely and haunting. Having Tracey as a rookie still thinking there is good in humanity and Jon who is damaged not only from what he has seen in the job but from his own past was a good mix because they each see something in the other that draws them together. It’s almost as if they can balance each other out and lean on each other. Who else would understand what they see in their jobs besides a fellow agent?
While the story moves at a fast pace I did feel like the romance moved a little too fast. Tracey has never admitted that he is attracted to men before and while him accepting himself is great he jumps in quickly with his boss during a very high pressure situation. I would have thought that there would be more indecision on both their parts. For how much risk it is to their jobs they started a sexual relationship very quickly. On the other hand I loved how Tracey saw what Jon needed and was able to comfort him. Jon seems like a complex character but Tracey is able to get him to open up and trust him.
I am very excited for more in this series. This book is just the beginning for this relationship and what they will do to juggle being together in secret while working on cases that have the worst of the worst humanity has to offer. The psychological effects are fascinating to read about, something that other books haven’t really dug into.
Overall this was near perfect. I wish the next book was available already. I’ll be waiting with bated breath!!!!!
ARC received for review
All thoughts and opinions are my own
While the story moves at a fast pace I did feel like the romance moved a little too fast. Tracey has never admitted that he is attracted to men before and while him accepting himself is great he jumps in quickly with his boss during a very high pressure situation. I would have thought that there would be more indecision on both their parts. For how much risk it is to their jobs they started a sexual relationship very quickly. On the other hand I loved how Tracey saw what Jon needed and was able to comfort him. Jon seems like a complex character but Tracey is able to get him to open up and trust him.
I am very excited for more in this series. This book is just the beginning for this relationship and what they will do to juggle being together in secret while working on cases that have the worst of the worst humanity has to offer. The psychological effects are fascinating to read about, something that other books haven’t really dug into.
Overall this was near perfect. I wish the next book was available already. I’ll be waiting with bated breath!!!!!
ARC received for review
All thoughts and opinions are my own
May 2, 2024
This is not terrible, but not great, either. It's very info-dumpy at first (which is probably great if you know nothing about this type of crime fighting). It becomes less so farther in, but never stops. I already knew everything dumped at me, so...
Worse, the author dumps what characters are feeling as well, telling rather than showing me in more realistic ways. Maybe the author will improve, but I'm not going to bother with book 2.
And, there were no plot surprises for me. Some tension, but not enough to lure me further.
Worse, the author dumps what characters are feeling as well, telling rather than showing me in more realistic ways. Maybe the author will improve, but I'm not going to bother with book 2.
And, there were no plot surprises for me. Some tension, but not enough to lure me further.
September 12, 2024
I had a love-hate relationship with this book.
FBI agents, boss/subordinate forbidden romance, serial killer, hurt-comfort.
Love: The characters and the FBI/BAU atmosphere. Seeing new special agent Tracey Smith join a team of profilers in DC and dive right in analyzing killers and behavior and Stuff is fascinating and read authentically (though I’m sure it’s fictionalized, and the author has a nice note up front about taking license with real-world rules). Tracey’s earnest, smart AF, kind, enthusiastic, intuitive with people…all the things you want in a rookie profiler. Jon Anderson (yes, we get the Smith-Anderson jokes here, for those my age iykyk) is the jaded team leader with the uncanny knack for putting himself in a killer’s perspective and all the nightmares that go along with it. His physical response to his new (straight) team member is immediate and unwelcome, but what’s poignant and lovely is how much he appreciates Tracey’s attitude and intelligence and is soon privately upset that Tracey will become hardened and jaded by this job. Too adorable (and sad!). If he could protect Tracey from it all, he would. I loved their quick work chemistry and repartee. Nice setup.
When Tracey learns Jon is gay from another teammate (who feels bad for accidentally outing him), he’s suddenly struck by how…intrigued he is. Tracey’s bi-awakening could have been too convenient, but the author includes an enlightening conversation with Tracey’s best friend of many years, who opens his eyes to this maaaayyybe not being such a new thing for Tracey. In fact it isn’t new at all, despite Tracey just having broken up with a woman he’d thought he might marry (due to distance/she didn’t want to move, which tells you all you need to know about that relationship. She’s a nonentity, but, just sounded so lackluster). And while Jon and Tracey’s road to any kind of relationship isn’t easy—in fact, it’s forbidden, Tracey’s just figuring himself out, Jon keeps people at arm’s length—oh, and, there’s a sniper serial killer terrorizing St. Louis!—seeing these two connect personally and feel so right together is a lot of fun and believable.
Hate: Chapter 2 nearly ruined the whole book for me. WHY did we need to see Even worse, it’s actually Like what the hell? Gratuitous, and for me very unwelcome, it added nothing to the story and for me was icky Total turn-off for me. And now I see that this character is going to be the “former F-buddy friend” and no doubt Tracey will also become friends with him and everything will be hunky dory for everyone. Except me LOL.
Also hate: Tracey acting out of character and TSTL toward the end, and events becoming less and less believable. That was aggravating. And then the ending not being the ending and an even more unlikely thing then happening. I’m sorry but who are these near-psychic villains who can just pop up anywhere and get away with anything? It became too OTT to be credible and clashed with the nice authenticity of the rest of the book. Plus toward the end, the agents didn’t need conveniently, which was irritating.
Overall though, I really enjoyed the dynamic between the heroes and look forward to reading their next book. Here’s hoping the action stays more credible and more based on the reality of their jobs. Because when the focus is on that, the story telling is entertaining and strong.
HFN, FBI agents, forbidden boss-direct report setup, bi-awakening with first-times with a man, hurt-comfort, behavior profiling, serial killer plot. No cheating or OM drama, but, unwelcome OM detailed sex scene up front. I could deal bc it happened so early, but it didn’t come into play in either the romantic conflict or the internal for that MC, and so, useless/gratuitous. Le sigh. Recommended, and looking forward to the next book.
FBI agents, boss/subordinate forbidden romance, serial killer, hurt-comfort.
Love: The characters and the FBI/BAU atmosphere. Seeing new special agent Tracey Smith join a team of profilers in DC and dive right in analyzing killers and behavior and Stuff is fascinating and read authentically (though I’m sure it’s fictionalized, and the author has a nice note up front about taking license with real-world rules). Tracey’s earnest, smart AF, kind, enthusiastic, intuitive with people…all the things you want in a rookie profiler. Jon Anderson (yes, we get the Smith-Anderson jokes here, for those my age iykyk) is the jaded team leader with the uncanny knack for putting himself in a killer’s perspective and all the nightmares that go along with it. His physical response to his new (straight) team member is immediate and unwelcome, but what’s poignant and lovely is how much he appreciates Tracey’s attitude and intelligence and is soon privately upset that Tracey will become hardened and jaded by this job. Too adorable (and sad!). If he could protect Tracey from it all, he would. I loved their quick work chemistry and repartee. Nice setup.
When Tracey learns Jon is gay from another teammate (who feels bad for accidentally outing him), he’s suddenly struck by how…intrigued he is. Tracey’s bi-awakening could have been too convenient, but the author includes an enlightening conversation with Tracey’s best friend of many years, who opens his eyes to this maaaayyybe not being such a new thing for Tracey. In fact it isn’t new at all, despite Tracey just having broken up with a woman he’d thought he might marry (due to distance/she didn’t want to move, which tells you all you need to know about that relationship. She’s a nonentity, but, just sounded so lackluster). And while Jon and Tracey’s road to any kind of relationship isn’t easy—in fact, it’s forbidden, Tracey’s just figuring himself out, Jon keeps people at arm’s length—oh, and, there’s a sniper serial killer terrorizing St. Louis!—seeing these two connect personally and feel so right together is a lot of fun and believable.
Hate: Chapter 2 nearly ruined the whole book for me. WHY did we need to see Even worse, it’s actually Like what the hell? Gratuitous, and for me very unwelcome, it added nothing to the story and for me was icky Total turn-off for me. And now I see that this character is going to be the “former F-buddy friend” and no doubt Tracey will also become friends with him and everything will be hunky dory for everyone. Except me LOL.
Also hate: Tracey acting out of character and TSTL toward the end, and events becoming less and less believable. That was aggravating. And then the ending not being the ending and an even more unlikely thing then happening. I’m sorry but who are these near-psychic villains who can just pop up anywhere and get away with anything? It became too OTT to be credible and clashed with the nice authenticity of the rest of the book. Plus toward the end, the agents didn’t need conveniently, which was irritating.
Overall though, I really enjoyed the dynamic between the heroes and look forward to reading their next book. Here’s hoping the action stays more credible and more based on the reality of their jobs. Because when the focus is on that, the story telling is entertaining and strong.
HFN, FBI agents, forbidden boss-direct report setup, bi-awakening with first-times with a man, hurt-comfort, behavior profiling, serial killer plot. No cheating or OM drama, but, unwelcome OM detailed sex scene up front. I could deal bc it happened so early, but it didn’t come into play in either the romantic conflict or the internal for that MC, and so, useless/gratuitous. Le sigh. Recommended, and looking forward to the next book.
February 29, 2024
This was a great first book in this series, and I can't wait to see where these two go.
The story and characters drew me in from the beginning, and I couldn't put it down. Jon and Tracey are complete opposites who have great chemistry ... but not only that, they way they talked with each other worked perfectly. I loved how the relationship developed.
The rest of the team is a great addition and fun secondary characters.
the story was well done and had me on the edge of my seat. I don't envy law enforcement because, realistically speaking, they often need another case for more information on the bad guys but nobody really wants that.
The only small complaint is that around 70, 75% there was a small part where the story did not work as smoothly as before.
Nevertheless, I loved it and am really looking forward to the next book.
The story and characters drew me in from the beginning, and I couldn't put it down. Jon and Tracey are complete opposites who have great chemistry ... but not only that, they way they talked with each other worked perfectly. I loved how the relationship developed.
The rest of the team is a great addition and fun secondary characters.
the story was well done and had me on the edge of my seat. I don't envy law enforcement because, realistically speaking, they often need another case for more information on the bad guys but nobody really wants that.
The only small complaint is that around 70, 75% there was a small part where the story did not work as smoothly as before.
Nevertheless, I loved it and am really looking forward to the next book.
March 23, 2024
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.25 stars
The Family Man is the first in A.J. Rose’s new Mind Hunter series and it is off to a great start. This is an exciting thriller focused on a team of FBI agents out to help catch a sniper terrorizing St. Louis. I found the suspense side of things incredibly compelling and I was totally drawn in to the investigation. Rose does such a nice job really giving the reader a front-row seat to the case as we watch Jon, Tracey, and their team work to figure out who is behind the killings. The work the Behavioral Analysis Unit does is really fascinating and I felt so drawn in seeing how they put the pieces together and watching how their minds work as they start to hone in on the killer. I have no idea how authentic this is, and Rose notes at the beginning that they took some liberties in terms of making these folks more on the ground investigating than they would likely be in real life. But as a reader, the details are so well done that I felt like I was following a real investigation.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
4.25 stars
The Family Man is the first in A.J. Rose’s new Mind Hunter series and it is off to a great start. This is an exciting thriller focused on a team of FBI agents out to help catch a sniper terrorizing St. Louis. I found the suspense side of things incredibly compelling and I was totally drawn in to the investigation. Rose does such a nice job really giving the reader a front-row seat to the case as we watch Jon, Tracey, and their team work to figure out who is behind the killings. The work the Behavioral Analysis Unit does is really fascinating and I felt so drawn in seeing how they put the pieces together and watching how their minds work as they start to hone in on the killer. I have no idea how authentic this is, and Rose notes at the beginning that they took some liberties in terms of making these folks more on the ground investigating than they would likely be in real life. But as a reader, the details are so well done that I felt like I was following a real investigation.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
March 5, 2024
I really liked this book. A.J. Rose really brought her characters to life. The investigative process was well researched and not glossed over. I enjoyed the analysis that BAU agents provided and how it all meshed with the active case.
There was plenty of steam but it was not insta lust. It read organic and fit with the story and the characters. Both men, Jon and Tracey, were such well written and multidimensional MCs. I loved the side characters and how they all interacted as a group. They all had good chemistry together. There was plenty going on and the pace was steady. The humor was funny and appropriate.
All in all, I am pretty excited to read the next one. The case might have been closed but the relationship between Jon and Tracey is just starting. The bond is deepening and the feelings are beginning to grow. I can't wait to read how they are going to navigate no fraternization policy and the dangerous criminals they investigate. It was a thoroughly researched and well written suspense/mystery with a good side of angsty/spicy romance with HFN. I enjoyed it.
There was plenty of steam but it was not insta lust. It read organic and fit with the story and the characters. Both men, Jon and Tracey, were such well written and multidimensional MCs. I loved the side characters and how they all interacted as a group. They all had good chemistry together. There was plenty going on and the pace was steady. The humor was funny and appropriate.
All in all, I am pretty excited to read the next one. The case might have been closed but the relationship between Jon and Tracey is just starting. The bond is deepening and the feelings are beginning to grow. I can't wait to read how they are going to navigate no fraternization policy and the dangerous criminals they investigate. It was a thoroughly researched and well written suspense/mystery with a good side of angsty/spicy romance with HFN. I enjoyed it.
February 26, 2024
I've been wanting to read this book ever since I saw a promo for it on an FB group. Thanks to GRR for the opportunity for me to read this.
I absolutely loved this book it was so good. Tracey and Jon were great characters, and I liked the side characters also. I really hope there is a second one coming.
Thanks to GRR for the ARC.
I absolutely loved this book it was so good. Tracey and Jon were great characters, and I liked the side characters also. I really hope there is a second one coming.
Thanks to GRR for the ARC.
March 10, 2024
This was the first book I read by this author and I am super happy I did. It had a great combination of suspense/plot and sexual tension between the two MMC. I can’t wait for the next book!
March 16, 2024
Meh:/
March 31, 2024
This is a nice start to a new series by A J Rose. I love an FBI/law enforcement investigation mixed in with a romance and this gives me both.
The characters are good
Even though this is book #1, it doesn't end on a cliff-hanger
The serial killer aspect was on point and kept me turning
The atmosphere and tone of the story painted a good world
I'm keenly looking forward to the next book in the series
The characters are good
Even though this is book #1, it doesn't end on a cliff-hanger
The serial killer aspect was on point and kept me turning
The atmosphere and tone of the story painted a good world
I'm keenly looking forward to the next book in the series
March 8, 2024
Man, Did I ever miss A.J. Rose! This book was amazing and it left me with such a book hangover. I cannot wait for the next book. I have a feeling this might even surpass power exchange as my favorite series.
March 13, 2024
Seeing Through a Killer’s Eyes
The Mind Hacker
The Family Man Book 1
Copyright© 2024
Author: AJ Rose
Publisher: The Grim Writer Press
I first discovered AJ Rose a few years ago whilst exploring kink and LGBTQIA+ fiction, plus my own identity and preferences.
The first book of theirs that I read lit a fire under me, from the in-depth characterisations, to the exploration of BDSM Lifestyle and the psychology of criminals. I was hooked.
So I was delighted to see they had just written a new book to start off a series; The Family Man
Tracey Smith is new to the DC BAU (Behavioural Analysis Unit) think Criminal Minds. At twenty eight years old, he’s ahead of the game, having gained hands on FBI experience whilst achieving his degree followed by a MA and PhD in areas of Psychology and related studies.
Thanks to his teenage years, Supervisory Agent Jon Anderson – known to those near him as the Ice Man - can empathise with the killer, see their motivations. Though he can see through the perp’s eyes, stopping the monsters, not becoming one, is what satisfies him; using his inner darkness for good.
But something is starting to melt the ice around the Ice Man’s heart; young, handsome, smart and funny, could Tracey possibly be the one to crack through his frozen exterior?
Both men and the rest of the Behavioural Analysis team - Sarena and Perry - have been called out to help on a sniper serial case in St. Louis. As they investigate, Tracey becomes fascinated by Jon, and begins to question his own sexuality, so we have his bi-awakening. The more he is attracted to Jon, the more he realises his calm, efficient FBI veneer hides a cinnamon roll sweetness.
The serial killer aspect of the novel, the procedural elements are well researched and gripping, with lots of tension and action, whilst the team bonding is fun and the steam increases as the novel progresses. We also have a great hurt/comfort vibe at play here, but I also think it’s the first time in a while I’ve seen a character acknowledging the logistics of bottoming, including being ‘regular’, something as readers we don’t generally think of, but it’s integral to the authenticity of the book.
I love this writer, so having a new series by them to start was an exciting prospect.
It’s intense, funny, emotional, intriguing and brimming with heat.
A terrific book.
The Mind Hacker
The Family Man Book 1
Copyright© 2024
Author: AJ Rose
Publisher: The Grim Writer Press
I first discovered AJ Rose a few years ago whilst exploring kink and LGBTQIA+ fiction, plus my own identity and preferences.
The first book of theirs that I read lit a fire under me, from the in-depth characterisations, to the exploration of BDSM Lifestyle and the psychology of criminals. I was hooked.
So I was delighted to see they had just written a new book to start off a series; The Family Man
Tracey Smith is new to the DC BAU (Behavioural Analysis Unit) think Criminal Minds. At twenty eight years old, he’s ahead of the game, having gained hands on FBI experience whilst achieving his degree followed by a MA and PhD in areas of Psychology and related studies.
Thanks to his teenage years, Supervisory Agent Jon Anderson – known to those near him as the Ice Man - can empathise with the killer, see their motivations. Though he can see through the perp’s eyes, stopping the monsters, not becoming one, is what satisfies him; using his inner darkness for good.
But something is starting to melt the ice around the Ice Man’s heart; young, handsome, smart and funny, could Tracey possibly be the one to crack through his frozen exterior?
Both men and the rest of the Behavioural Analysis team - Sarena and Perry - have been called out to help on a sniper serial case in St. Louis. As they investigate, Tracey becomes fascinated by Jon, and begins to question his own sexuality, so we have his bi-awakening. The more he is attracted to Jon, the more he realises his calm, efficient FBI veneer hides a cinnamon roll sweetness.
The serial killer aspect of the novel, the procedural elements are well researched and gripping, with lots of tension and action, whilst the team bonding is fun and the steam increases as the novel progresses. We also have a great hurt/comfort vibe at play here, but I also think it’s the first time in a while I’ve seen a character acknowledging the logistics of bottoming, including being ‘regular’, something as readers we don’t generally think of, but it’s integral to the authenticity of the book.
I love this writer, so having a new series by them to start was an exciting prospect.
It’s intense, funny, emotional, intriguing and brimming with heat.
A terrific book.
November 24, 2024
I started this one a while ago, then put it down at about 20% and took quite a few weeks until I picked it up again. It was not bad, I was just very bussy and not in the mood for this type of book.
I finally managed to finish it, so I will sum up my issues and you may notice a pattern:
*I found the attraction happened too quickly, especially on Jon's side, considering how he is supposed to be "the ice man".
*Tracey's way of finding out hes bi was ridiculous. Sorry, I can't buy it and his reaction was so random. All his talks to Jon about him finding out he is bi so soon after knowing each other and in the middle of a case, felt so weird to me.
*The "Babe", "baby" nick names came way too soon.
So yes, my main issues came from how fast their relationship happened. It felt so out of character for the personalities the MCs were supposed to have, particularly Jon.
Now, the case: it was interesting and I kept reading because I wanted to know who'd done it. But the resolution felt so anticlimatic. You can tell the author did research on proper investigation procedures and the way the FBI actually works. Then explain to me why on earth would Tracey, a very smart and sensitive person, risk his own life and the case they were trying to solve, because he felt like going out to drink/eat something?... dude! And I mentioned the resolution being anticlimatic because, for all they kept going about the profiling, the culprit wasn't discovered by them, but someone else told them his identity.
Overall, I thought I'd like it more than I did.
I finally managed to finish it, so I will sum up my issues and you may notice a pattern:
*I found the attraction happened too quickly, especially on Jon's side, considering how he is supposed to be "the ice man".
*Tracey's way of finding out hes bi was ridiculous. Sorry, I can't buy it and his reaction was so random. All his talks to Jon about him finding out he is bi so soon after knowing each other and in the middle of a case, felt so weird to me.
*The "Babe", "baby" nick names came way too soon.
So yes, my main issues came from how fast their relationship happened. It felt so out of character for the personalities the MCs were supposed to have, particularly Jon.
Now, the case: it was interesting and I kept reading because I wanted to know who'd done it. But the resolution felt so anticlimatic. You can tell the author did research on proper investigation procedures and the way the FBI actually works. Then explain to me why on earth would Tracey, a very smart and sensitive person, risk his own life and the case they were trying to solve, because he felt like going out to drink/eat something?... dude! And I mentioned the resolution being anticlimatic because, for all they kept going about the profiling, the culprit wasn't discovered by them, but someone else told them his identity.
Overall, I thought I'd like it more than I did.
February 29, 2024
This was awesome and read like an episode of ‘criminal minds’ or CSI! (In fact the whole way through I pictured Tracey as Spencer Reid!)
Newbie FBI agent Tracey Smith has joined the Behavioural Analysis Unit as a behavioural profiler - using his background in psychology to help catch serial killers. On his first day, he meets his intriguing boss, Jon Anderson, and it makes him start to question his whole stance on romance.
Tracey doesn’t get long to settle in before the team are called to St.Louis to try and stop a serial killer who has been sniping people with a rifle in crowded areas. As Jon and Tracey work together, they learn more about each other and start to bare their darkest secrets to each other in a bid to stay sane during this claustrophobic case.
I loved the action in this one - it was definitely a thriller first, romance second. In fact the whole reason this book only gets 4/5 stars from me is that I actually felt like the romance let it down a bit! I didn’t really buy the relationship between Jon and Tracey - I also wanted to know more about the ability of getting into criminal’s mindsets that was alluded to a couple of times. It’s something that apparently bothers him, but it’s never fully explained. Maybe it’ll come to light more in the rest of the series?
Either way, a really thrilling (and gory!) read, perfect for fans of romantic suspense and crime dramas!
Newbie FBI agent Tracey Smith has joined the Behavioural Analysis Unit as a behavioural profiler - using his background in psychology to help catch serial killers. On his first day, he meets his intriguing boss, Jon Anderson, and it makes him start to question his whole stance on romance.
Tracey doesn’t get long to settle in before the team are called to St.Louis to try and stop a serial killer who has been sniping people with a rifle in crowded areas. As Jon and Tracey work together, they learn more about each other and start to bare their darkest secrets to each other in a bid to stay sane during this claustrophobic case.
I loved the action in this one - it was definitely a thriller first, romance second. In fact the whole reason this book only gets 4/5 stars from me is that I actually felt like the romance let it down a bit! I didn’t really buy the relationship between Jon and Tracey - I also wanted to know more about the ability of getting into criminal’s mindsets that was alluded to a couple of times. It’s something that apparently bothers him, but it’s never fully explained. Maybe it’ll come to light more in the rest of the series?
Either way, a really thrilling (and gory!) read, perfect for fans of romantic suspense and crime dramas!
March 9, 2024
This book combines my two favorite genres: mystery and romance. A seasoned FBI agent in the BAU, Jon Anderson has the ability to understand the killers' thoughts. Jon is somewhat reserved and has a troubled family history involving his older brother. Even though things are looking up, the FBI still has its share of macho agents, which makes life difficult for homosexual men working for the agency. During his first week on the job, rookie agent Tracey Smith gets her baptism by fire on a sniper case in St. Louis. He ends up befriending Jon and finds himself quite impressed by him. His bisexuality and his attraction to Jon become clear to him over time. A particularly trying day on the case leads him to reveal to Jon that he is bisexual. Jon tries to conceal his feelings for Tracey while he assists her in coping with his new insight. It was fascinating to watch the development of Jon and Tracey's friendship as well as the team's efforts to identify the shooter and create a profile. The book reveals the amount of time and effort they have to put into researching and reviewing files and CCTV footage for relatively short moments of risk. I can't wait to find out what happens next in the team's investigation and in Jon and Tracy's relationship because I loved this book so much.I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.
March 10, 2024
I received this book from a third party and agreed to do an honest review.
The book opens with a meeting at FBI headquarters with the new guy Tracey showing his skills and the response from the man who becomes his team lead. Tracey is told there is little travel involved with being a profiler. Background, Tracey had left his relationship behind when he moved to DC.
Surprisingly, the book very quickly moves to St. Louis as the team Tracey has joined is to find a criminal who has killed several seemingly unconnected individuals without a trace - all with bullets that divide inside the victim's core organs leading to immediate death.
Tracey is assigned a hotel room connected to that of the team lead who appears cold but who seems to open up to Tracey. The other two team members seem to profile something going on.
To go into details of how the team gets back to Washington would be to be a spoiler but just let it be said Tracey is injured and the team leads shows how much Tracey means to him. In the end the two men seem to have a future even though Tracey had previously not recognized any leaning to LGBTQ+.
My enthusiasm for the book is two-fold. The characters of the four team members are extremely well-developed and the plot is intricate but easily understood. This is the first book I have read of this author and I look forward to more of the author''s writing.
The book opens with a meeting at FBI headquarters with the new guy Tracey showing his skills and the response from the man who becomes his team lead. Tracey is told there is little travel involved with being a profiler. Background, Tracey had left his relationship behind when he moved to DC.
Surprisingly, the book very quickly moves to St. Louis as the team Tracey has joined is to find a criminal who has killed several seemingly unconnected individuals without a trace - all with bullets that divide inside the victim's core organs leading to immediate death.
Tracey is assigned a hotel room connected to that of the team lead who appears cold but who seems to open up to Tracey. The other two team members seem to profile something going on.
To go into details of how the team gets back to Washington would be to be a spoiler but just let it be said Tracey is injured and the team leads shows how much Tracey means to him. In the end the two men seem to have a future even though Tracey had previously not recognized any leaning to LGBTQ+.
My enthusiasm for the book is two-fold. The characters of the four team members are extremely well-developed and the plot is intricate but easily understood. This is the first book I have read of this author and I look forward to more of the author''s writing.
March 1, 2024
You might remember AJ Rose from some years ago - I know that her Power Excange series is one of my favorites of all time. Well, I was over the moon when I found out that she's back with a new series and she's here to stay! I was provided with an ARC by GRR.
This is a great law enforcement procedural/mystery/slow burn/forced proximity/bi awakening...
Extremely well researched, characters drawn out in depth including the side characters. I was drawn in at the page one and couldn't stop.
There's a grumpy/ sunshine element in this story, but most of all, besides a thrilling man hunt, there's a seasoned, jaded team leader Jon, with many secrets and urges he's trying to keep contained and he's afraid of. So he's put on a facade that earned him a nick name Ice man. Suddenly introduced to his new team member, incredibly smart and kind hearted rookie Tracey shakes his world and his walls start to crumble.
Enter Tracey. He's trying to find his footing in big leagues, dealing with a recent break up and relocation. All he needs on the top of it is bi awakening...
There's no words to describe how much I've enjoyed this book and I can't wait for the next one in the series. Highly recommended!
This is a great law enforcement procedural/mystery/slow burn/forced proximity/bi awakening...
Extremely well researched, characters drawn out in depth including the side characters. I was drawn in at the page one and couldn't stop.
There's a grumpy/ sunshine element in this story, but most of all, besides a thrilling man hunt, there's a seasoned, jaded team leader Jon, with many secrets and urges he's trying to keep contained and he's afraid of. So he's put on a facade that earned him a nick name Ice man. Suddenly introduced to his new team member, incredibly smart and kind hearted rookie Tracey shakes his world and his walls start to crumble.
Enter Tracey. He's trying to find his footing in big leagues, dealing with a recent break up and relocation. All he needs on the top of it is bi awakening...
There's no words to describe how much I've enjoyed this book and I can't wait for the next one in the series. Highly recommended!
March 8, 2024
I love a book with a good mystery plus romance and this book has that. Jon Anderson is a veteran FBI agent in the BAU and is able to get into the mind of the killers. Jon has a tragic family past that involves his older brother and is a bit reserved. It's not easy being a gay man in the FBI who even though times are better still have their macho type agents. Tracey Smith is a rookie agent with the BAU and gets a baptism by fire when during his first week with the unit they have a sniper case in St. Louis. He decides to befriend Jon and is a bit in awe of him. He slowly comes to realize that he is attracted to Jon and that he is bisexual. He ends up telling Jon that he is bisexual after a particularly tough day on the case. Jon helps Tracey deal with his new realization and at the same time tries to keep his feelings of attraction for Tracey to himself. It was great to see how Jon and Tracey's relationship progresses and how the team built a profile and helped to determine who the sniper was. The book shows just how much tedious research and looking through files and CCTV that they have to do with brief episodes of danger. I really enjoyed this book and am eager to see what case the team has next and how Jon and Tracy's relationship progresses.
March 8, 2024
The Family Man is my first A.J. Rose book, and what an excellent choice it was! This was a fast-paced, clever, suspenseful crime novel, filled with compelling characters and a touch of romance to keep readers captivated.
I absolutely fell in love with our two very Special Agents Tracey Smith and Jon Anderson. Talk about a grumpy/sunshine pairing. Agent Smith is a bright ray of rookie light to Agent Anderson's grumpy cynicism. I love how their relationship developed, not necessarily just as a slow burn but as a really deep-rooted kinship. Watching the delicate, masterful way Tracey broke down Jon's walls and cold exterior just dove right into my heart.
A.J. Rose's writing cleverly balanced the crime-solving plot with the romantic touchpoints, as well as allowing all the characters (not just the two main MCs) to really shine. The witty banter between the members of Unit 4 has been some of my favorite writing in a long while. I just love this team dynamic. It's clear that this is going to be the start of a great series for Unit 4 of the BAU and I'm looking forward to reading about many more criminal adventures in future Mind Hacker books.
I absolutely fell in love with our two very Special Agents Tracey Smith and Jon Anderson. Talk about a grumpy/sunshine pairing. Agent Smith is a bright ray of rookie light to Agent Anderson's grumpy cynicism. I love how their relationship developed, not necessarily just as a slow burn but as a really deep-rooted kinship. Watching the delicate, masterful way Tracey broke down Jon's walls and cold exterior just dove right into my heart.
A.J. Rose's writing cleverly balanced the crime-solving plot with the romantic touchpoints, as well as allowing all the characters (not just the two main MCs) to really shine. The witty banter between the members of Unit 4 has been some of my favorite writing in a long while. I just love this team dynamic. It's clear that this is going to be the start of a great series for Unit 4 of the BAU and I'm looking forward to reading about many more criminal adventures in future Mind Hacker books.
March 4, 2024
First in series (The Mind Hacker). Mystery suspense. Coworkers. Mentor/mentee. Hurt/comfort. Dual POV. Heed content warnings. Tracey is the newest addition to the FBI’s Behavioral Analysis Unit, and his first week is a trial by fire as his team is sent to profile a sniper serial killer. Jon is the locked down team leader, compartmentalizing and keeping himself focused is his norm, except there’s an unexpected connection with the brilliant agent Tracey that blindsides both of them. This is a well written procedural investigation story, and there is a big slice of attraction that has Jon and Tracey very much on edge and being careful, but it’s undeniable for both of them. I enjoyed that the law enforcement members were all intelligent and driven, the team worked together professionally, and even though Jon and Tracey were crossing ethical work lines the way they felt towards each other was worth the risks. A gripping start to a new series, with main characters that are excellent at their jobs but also unwilling to lose something special. HFN.
March 10, 2024
I am always on the looking for new mystery and suspense books to read. Add in some romance, and I am extra eager to dive in. Thus, I went into The Family Man with high hopes.
Without a doubt, this first book in The Mind Hackers series has guaranteed I will be back for more. I was instantly hooked and could not get enough of the story. I powered through it, eager to see how the pieces would come together, and could not get enough. I will be honest and say that I did find some elements dragged a little and some felt a bit too easy, but this was not enough to remove my enjoyment of the story. There was so much to keep me engaged, which is why I could not put it down until I saw how all the pieces came together. It certainly has me eager for what comes next for the characters.
All in all, The Family Man was a great introduction to The Mind Hackers series. It is certainly worth a read for those who enjoy their romantic suspense to be heavy on the police procedural side.
Without a doubt, this first book in The Mind Hackers series has guaranteed I will be back for more. I was instantly hooked and could not get enough of the story. I powered through it, eager to see how the pieces would come together, and could not get enough. I will be honest and say that I did find some elements dragged a little and some felt a bit too easy, but this was not enough to remove my enjoyment of the story. There was so much to keep me engaged, which is why I could not put it down until I saw how all the pieces came together. It certainly has me eager for what comes next for the characters.
All in all, The Family Man was a great introduction to The Mind Hackers series. It is certainly worth a read for those who enjoy their romantic suspense to be heavy on the police procedural side.
March 8, 2024
"Something about Tracey Smith stirred Jon’s protective tendencies. He didn’t have many of those— he was more effective as a criminal mind rather than a victim advocate— so when they did surface, they were unusually strong. Tracey carried a wholesomeness the world hadn’t yet tainted despite his age and profession."
The Family Man was my first book by A.J. Rose but I will definitely be checking out their back catalogue now! Totally loved this romantic suspense/thriller, based around an elite FBI team of behavioural analysts, on the trail of a serial sniper. Our MCs are Jon Anderson, the team leader and his new rookie analyst, Tracey Smith.
This is the first book in the author's planned The Mind Hacker series which does contain themes of dark violence, including off-page SA, psychological manipulation, narcissism and other disturbing themes.
So many of my fave trope/vibes:
🖤plot driven
🖤co-workers
🖤found family
🖤hurt/comfort
🖤bi-awakening/steamy scenes
🖤grumpy/sunshine vibes
🖤HEA
A definite must read!
5 stars
The Family Man was my first book by A.J. Rose but I will definitely be checking out their back catalogue now! Totally loved this romantic suspense/thriller, based around an elite FBI team of behavioural analysts, on the trail of a serial sniper. Our MCs are Jon Anderson, the team leader and his new rookie analyst, Tracey Smith.
This is the first book in the author's planned The Mind Hacker series which does contain themes of dark violence, including off-page SA, psychological manipulation, narcissism and other disturbing themes.
So many of my fave trope/vibes:
🖤plot driven
🖤co-workers
🖤found family
🖤hurt/comfort
🖤bi-awakening/steamy scenes
🖤grumpy/sunshine vibes
🖤HEA
A definite must read!
5 stars
May 23, 2024
Great first in series
This was a good mystery romance.
The mystery aspect of the story was OK, I enjoyed it until the end when the villain became sort of unbelievable .
But I always enjoy any type of law-enforcement/police thriller, and this one was not disappointing.
In a small way for me, it was reminiscent of the art of murder series by Josh Lanyon.
Although the romance aspect was much quicker to insta-love. Jon is likable and didn’t seem too much of a “Ice man”.
Tracey is the new guy. Kind of sweet.
Anyway, I know my reviews are terrible, but they’re mostly just for me to remind myself and refresh myself when I’m trying to go back and remember books . I like this one, but I didn’t. I rated it four stars, but it was more like 3 1/2 stars.
But I did like it well enough that I will read the next book .
This was a good mystery romance.
The mystery aspect of the story was OK, I enjoyed it until the end when the villain became sort of unbelievable .
But I always enjoy any type of law-enforcement/police thriller, and this one was not disappointing.
In a small way for me, it was reminiscent of the art of murder series by Josh Lanyon.
Although the romance aspect was much quicker to insta-love. Jon is likable and didn’t seem too much of a “Ice man”.
Tracey is the new guy. Kind of sweet.
Anyway, I know my reviews are terrible, but they’re mostly just for me to remind myself and refresh myself when I’m trying to go back and remember books . I like this one, but I didn’t. I rated it four stars, but it was more like 3 1/2 stars.
But I did like it well enough that I will read the next book .
September 19, 2024
As with all of AJ Rose's books, I enjoyed getting to know the main characters. The relationship between the two MC's feels natural, and it is easy to be charmed by their interactions.
As an avid reader of both fiction and non-fiction mysteries, I appreciated the interesting approach to creating a villain for the MC's to catch, but I struggled a bit with the law enforcement procedure. A couple moments were a bit too dramatized for me. I did enjoy the core of the plot and action, but I had a bit of trouble getting past the law enforcement procedure missteps. Theoretically, the moments are possible, just really improbable. As long as you aren't reading too many books by retired FBI agents you probably won't notice.
This story is an entertaining M/M action/romance, and I am looking forward to starting the next one.
As an avid reader of both fiction and non-fiction mysteries, I appreciated the interesting approach to creating a villain for the MC's to catch, but I struggled a bit with the law enforcement procedure. A couple moments were a bit too dramatized for me. I did enjoy the core of the plot and action, but I had a bit of trouble getting past the law enforcement procedure missteps. Theoretically, the moments are possible, just really improbable. As long as you aren't reading too many books by retired FBI agents you probably won't notice.
This story is an entertaining M/M action/romance, and I am looking forward to starting the next one.
March 7, 2024
New to me author, new R/S series? Yes, so good! Tracey, our new to BAU, joins an established team led by Jon. Before Tracey can even unpack, they are dropped in the middle of a serial killer search in St. Louis. Tracey has always identified as straight but there's just something about Jon, but no, Jon is his immediate supervisor. Jon also notices Tracey beyond his qualifications for the job. So the dance begins. All this plays out while the team is helping the locals with the search for "Family Man". AJ gives us an explanation of the liberties they took with BAU but the crime procedure still rang true, not far fetch. Perry and Sarena, the rest of the team, Brian, J0n's best friend, and Sutherland, the boss (I want him to look like Skinner!) contribute to the narrative. The suspense arc and the developing relationship are balanced, neither one overwhelming the other. I like Tracey does not do a major I'm bi meltup but Jon tries to back off due to his baggage and being Tracey's supervisor. Even with that, there was no real power inequity through the story. The author is either from St. Louis or researched the heck out of the community. The details, streets, areas, climate, etc., made the city a character all its own. The suspense arc is resolved, so I am assuming each book will have a new mystery/suspense narrative while Tracey and Jon's relationship will continue to evolve. Can't wait for the next one!
March 10, 2024
When I read the blurb for this book I was really looking forward to jumping right in. There's so much to like: murder mystery FBI case to solve, good characters, interesting dynamics, good pace and twists and turns I didn't see coming. My only issue is that for some reason I really struggled to connect with Jon, Tracey and the case. It took until about 50% for me to feel invested in what was happening and it just felt like a struggle to reach that point. It's absolutely no disrespect to the writing, characters or plot. I can't really pinpoint why I haven't just fallen in love with them both and been gripped by the story like I thought I would. I think that, sadly, this one just isn't for me.
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