A Bit Much
OK, I like this series, but two things:
1) This is the fourth gay/baseball book I've read by four completely different authors who have made the mistake of having the HOME team bat in the top of the inning (in this one, the Milwaukee Mavericks are visiting Dallas, which bats in the top of the sixth). Please. This is stupid.
2) In each of the other books, one of the characters was a bit anal or thought he was straight. In this one, both Kevin and Clint are jerks. Kevin opens his mouth before his brain functions and Clint is so hung up on not having a relationship that he lies his way through the one he develops with Kevin--after Kevin's girlfriend Amber leaves him for a job in Hollywood.
Get it?
After that, Kevin, who thinks he's bi and maybe gay crawls all over Clint, who lets him, and Clint gets hot and cold depending on the weather, it seems.
Weirdly, however, I stuck with this one, probably just to get through it. Granted, some of the other men from earlier books help out here, but mostly these two are just jerks. In addition, the Epilogue is totally and completely confusing--it seems as though whole paragraphs are excised which would tell us where it takes place (is it Las Vegas? Isn't that in Clark County?" and how it is put together (what is Amber doing there? Lucy, 'splain!!)
In addition, this is one of at least two chapters in which the narrator (either Kevin or Clint) switches the name of the other guy with his own (e.g., if Kevin is describing something about Clint, he will refer to Clint as Kevin in the same paragraph; this has happened in several other books by other authors with alternating chapter narrators and requires a good proofreader.)
I will buy the next book in the series because it can only get better.