Under the Clouds of Love

I liked your short-film, someone might question about the running time whether its too long or not, but to me I found the whole time span quite perfect. This sort of slow pace is very much appropriate for the expression of teen-age love stories. The acting was not that up to the mark, but at this level you can't expect professional acting from this newbie artists.So I get that. I loved the leading actress's performance, the boy also did well. I also loved the idea of being make it as a silent film.It added an extra flavor into it.Camera work and the music score was good. Some shots were really impressive, specially when the girl was walking the shadow of that boy also following with her, very nice idea indeed.

Overall a very nice attempt. I am giving it 7/10.