This has got to be one of the worst fan made projects i have ever had the disgrace of watch and hear, not only does this ''short animation'' lack of basic filmmaking skill, but it's also full of badly taken decisions by the director, awful and overcharged of pandering references for the bronies, and probably the worst pacing ever done by an editor.
How should i even start? The story itself and the main purpose of it aren't that interesting to begin with, all the writers thought about, was about making something that the show already showed to it's audience, and duplicate it WOOSH Super creative ideas out there guys.
Characters don't act like they should be, the ridiculously flawed edition makes the whole experience make you wish the animation was already over, the voices sometimes are extremely low volumed and hard to understand (Not counting of course, how badly they were acted) and overalls the story doesn't hook you up because it's so unoriginal and empty.
For the first fan made episode ever, this just makes you want to watch the original show.
It's obvious there's no substitute for experience, and this project reflects it very well.