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English for Academic and Professional                       6. An abstract is a summary of a novel.
Purposes (EAPP) aims to enhance your
communication skills particularly in writing                7. The conclusion is the section that
academic and professional compositions. It is                  summarizes the main points of the essay.
designed to develop your abilities to utilize
appropriate language in academic writing from               8. A summary is a condensed form of a text
various disciplines using correct text structures.             which is usually half of the original
                                                               material.
It provides language instruction for academic
studies. Language skills addressed include:                 9. To introduce a topic in an essay, the writer
listening comprehension, fluency development, oral             must be able to explain its details.
intelligibility, reading, grammar, writing, and
vocabulary development. English for Academic and            10. A research paper contains background of
Professional Purposes is aimed at improving the                 the study, body, and recommendations.
learner's communication skills in the writing
medium in preparation for higher education where        B. Put the jumbled parts of a common research
there will be a greater demand for producing            paper in order by using letters to represent the
academic papers in various fields of study.             sequence. Write letters A - J.
At the end of the first lesson, the learners shall be   1. Presentation of the Research Problem
able to:                                                2. Title of the Research Paper
                                                        3. Presentation of the Results
    1. define academic text, summarizing and            4. Recommendation
       summary from various writers, thesis             5. Overview of Scope of Research
       statement, and outlining;                        6. Interpretation and Discussion of Results
                                                        7. The Reference List
    2. determine text structure of an academic          8. The Abstract
       text;                                            9. Review of Past Research Relevant to the Paper
                                                        10. Description of Methods used to Carry out the
    3. explain the components of the three-part             Research
       essay structure;
                                                        ACADEMIC TEXT STRUCTURE
PRE-TEST
                                                        ACADEMIC TEXT
A. Write T if the statement is correct and F if it is   – critical, objective, specialized texts written by
incorrect. Write your answer in your notebook.          experts, or professionals in a given field using
                                                        formal language.
    1. Formality in academic writing requires
       precision to make a legitimate piece of          – based on facts with solid basis
       writing.
                                                        ACADEMIC WRITING, therefore, is generally quite
    2. Writing is a form of communication that is       formal, objective (impersonal) and technical.
       shaped by the following factors: topic, role,
       and audience.                                    technical
                                                        – Uses vocabulary specific to the discipline
    3. The use of personal pronouns such as I,
       you, and we is acceptable in academic            formal
       writing.                                         – Avoids casual or conversational language, such
                                                        as contractions or informal vocabulary
    4. “How can these problems be solved?” is an
       example of a critical question.                  objective
                                                        – Avoids direct reference to people or feelings, and
    5. Because is an example of transitional            instead emphasizing objects, facts, and ideas.
       device that expresses cause and effect.
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                                                        sections can be appropriate. For longer texts or
To be a good academic writer, you will need to          theses, they may be several pages long.
learn the specific styles and structures for your       INTRODUCTION
discipline, as well as for each individual writing      – its purpose is to clearly tell the reader the topic,
task.                                                   purpose, and structure of the paper
Some examples of academic writing are as                – might be between 10 and 20 percent of the length
follow:                                                 of the whole paper and has three main parts
LITERARY ANALYSIS: A literary analysis essay                A. The most general information, such as
examines, evaluates, and makes an about a literary             background and/or definitions.
work. As the name suggests, a literary analysis
essay goes beyond mere summarization. It                    B. The core of the introduction, where you
requires careful close reading of one or multiple              show the overall topic, purpose, your point
texts and often focuses on a specific characteristic,          of view, hypotheses, and/or research
theme, or motif.                                               questions (depending on what kind of paper
                                                               it is)
RESEARCH PAPER: A research paper uses
outside information to support a thesis or make an          C. The most specific information, describing
argument. Research papers are written in all                   the scope and structure of your paper.
disciplines and may be evaluative, analytical, or
critical in nature. Common research sources             •   You should write your introduction after you
include data, primary sources (e.g., historical             know both your overall point of view, (if it is a
records), and secondary sources (e.g., peer-                persuasive paper) and the whole structure of
reviewed scholarly articles). Writing a research            your paper. You should then revise the
paper involves synthesizing this external                   introduction when you have completed the main
information with your own ideas.                            body.
DISSERTATION: A dissertation (or thesis) is a           THE BODY. It develops the question. “What is the
document submitted at the conclusion of a Ph. D.        topic about?” It may elaborate directly on the topic
program. The dissertation is a book-length              sentence by giving definitions, classifications,
summarization of the doctoral candidate’s research.     explanations, contrasts, examples, and evidence.
                                                        This is considered as the heart of the essay
Academic papers may be done as a part of a class,       because it expounds the specific ideas for the
in a program of study, or for publication in an         readers to have a better understanding of the topic.
academic journal or scholarly book of articles          It usually is the largest part of the essay.
around a theme, by different authors.
                                                        CONCLUSION. The conclusion is closely related to
STRUCTURE is an important feature of academic           the introduction and is often described as its ‘mirror
writing. A well-structured text enables the reader to   image’. This means that if the introduction begins
follow the argument and navigate the text. In           with general information and ends with specific
academic writing, a clear structure and a logical       information. The conclusion moves in the opposite
flow are imperative to a cohesive text. These are       direction. It usually begins by briefly summarizing
the two common structures of academic texts that        the main scope or structure of the paper, confirms
you need to learn which depends on the type of          the topic that was given in the introduction, ends
assignment you are required: the three-part essay       with a more general statement about how this topic
structure and the IMRaD structure.                      relates to its context. This may take the form of an
                                                        evaluation of the importance of the topic,
THE THREE-PART ESSAY STRUCTURE                          implications for future research or a
– is a basic structure that consists of introduction,   recommendation about theory or practice.
body and conclusion
                                                        The IMRaD
The introduction and the conclusion should be           (Introduction, Methods, Results and Discussion)
shorter than the body of the text. For shorter
essays, one or two paragraphs for each of these         Introduction
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– usually depicts the background of the topic and        5. The journey ( enhance )
the central focus of the study
                                                         6. The patient ( cry )
Methodology
– lets the readers know the data collection              7. Mrs. Cruz ( appeal )
methods, research instrument employed, sample
size and so on                                           8. Filipino people ( provide )
Results and Discussion                                   9. A child ( love )
– states the brief summary of the key findings or
the results of your study                                10. The lecturer ( explain )
THE LANGUAGE OF ACADEMIC WRITING                      What is the difference in the following pairs of
At the end of the lesson, the learners are expected   sentences? Explain your answer.
to:
                                                      Pair 1
   1. Determine language style in academic
      writing;                                        ( Sentence 1 )
                                                      It was raining cats and dogs
   2. Differentiate language style used in
      academic texts from various disciplines;        ( Sentence 2 )
                                                      It was raining very heavily.
   3. Construct paragraphs using academic
      language.                                       Pair 2
Let’s Recall                                          ( Sentence 1 )
                                                      We believe the practice is unsustainable.
   ❖ A well-structured text enables the reader to
     follow the argument and navigate the text.       ( Sentence 2 )
                                                      It is believed the practice is unsustainable.
   ❖ A clear structure and a logical flow are
     imperative to a cohesive text.                   ACADEMIC LANGUAGE
                                                      represents the language demands of school
   ❖ Most academic texts follow established           (academics). Academic language includes
     structures such as: the three-part essay         language used in textbooks, in classrooms, on
     structure and the IMRaD structure.               tests, and in each discipline. It is different in
                                                      vocabulary and structure from the everyday spoken
   ❖ Structure should be considered on all levels     English of social interactions.
     of text so you will also find information on
     structuring paragraphs.                          Each type of communication (both academic and
                                                      social) has its purpose and neither is superior to the
Oral Activity                                         other.
Use the given subject and verb in constructing your
own sentence. Observe subject-verb agreement in       ACADEMIC WRITING is generally quite formal,
your sentences. You may add “s” or “es” to the        objective (impersonal) and technical as illustrated in
verb.                                                 the diagram.
   1. United States ( make )                          Furthermore, you can make your writing more
                                                      formal, objective, and technical by following the
   2. The students ( excel )                          given examples.
   3. English language ( help )                       FORMAL
                                                      ❖ Choose formal instead of informal vocabulary.
   4. The books ( improve )                             For example, ‘somewhat’ is more formal than ‘a
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  bit’, ‘insufficient’ is more formal than ‘not
  enough’.                                              ❖ Be careful about the meaning of technical
                                                          terms. Often the same word has a different
❖ Avoid contractions. For example, use ‘did not’          meaning in another discipline. For example,
  rather than ‘didn’t’.                                   ‘discourse’ is a technical term used in multiple
❖ Avoid emotional language. For example,                  disciplines with different meanings.
  instead of strong words such as ‘wonderful’ or        ❖ Use the key categories and relationships in
  ‘terrible’, use more moderate words such as             your discipline, that is, the way information and
  ‘helpful’’ or ‘problematic’.                            ideas are organized into groups. For example,
                                                          in the discipline of Law, law is separated into
❖ Instead of using absolute positives and                 two types: common law and statute law.
  negatives such as ‘proof’ or ‘wrong’, use more
  cautious evaluations such as ‘strong evidence’        ❖ Knowing these distinctions will help you
  or ‘less convincing’.                                   structure your writing and make it more
                                                          technical and analytical.
OBJECTIVE
 ❖ Move information around in the sentence to           A sentence may be one of four kinds, depending
   emphasize things and ideas, instead of people        upon the number and type(s) of clauses it contains.
   and feelings. For example, instead of writing ‘I
   believe the model is valid, based on these           ❖ An independent clause contains a subject, a
   findings’, write ‘These findings indicate that the     verb, and a complete thought.
   model is valid’.
                                                           I wrote my first novel last year
 ❖ Avoid evaluative words that are based on non-
   technical judgments and feelings. For                ❖ A dependent clause contains a subject and a
   example, use ‘valid’ or ‘did not demonstrate’          verb, but no complete thought.
   instead of ‘amazing’ or ‘disappointment’.
                                                           after I wrote my first novel last year
 ❖ Avoid intense or emotional evaluative
   language. For example, instead of writing            A SIMPLE SENTENCE has one independent
   ‘Parents who smoke are obviously abusing             clause.
   their children’, write ‘Secondhand smoke has         – NO commas separate two compound elements
   some harmful effects on children’s health’.          (subject, verb, direct object, indirect object,
                                                        subjective complement, etc.) in a simple sentence.
 ❖ Show caution about your views, or to allow
   room for others to disagree. For example,            A COMPOUND SENTENCE has two independent
   instead of writing ‘I think secondhand smoke         clauses joined by:
   causes cancer’, write ‘There is evidence to
   support the possibility that secondhand smoke        A. a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but,
   increases the risk of cancer’.                       or, yet, so),
 ❖ Find authoritative sources such as authors,          B. a conjunctive adverb (e.g. however, therefore),
   researchers and theorists in books or articles,      or
   who support your point of view, and refer to
   them in your writing. For example, instead of        C. a semicolon alone.
   writing ‘Language is in my view, clearly
   something social’, write ‘As Halliday (1973)         Punctuation Patterns:
   argues, language is intrinsically social’.           A. Independent clause, coordinating conjunction
                                                        independent clause.
TECHNICAL
❖ You need to develop a large vocabulary for the        B. Independent clause; conjunctive adverb,
  concepts specific to the discipline or                independent clause.
  specialization you are writing for. To do this,
  take note of terminology used by your lecturer        C. Independent clause; independent clause.
  and tutor, as well as in your readings.
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A COMPLEX SENTENCE has one dependent                      5. I love ice cream. I love tomatoes and healthy
clause (headed by a subordinating conjunction or a           foods too.
relative pronoun) joined to an independent clause.
                                                          I love ice cream, tomatoes, and healthy foods, too.
Punctuation patterns (to match A, B, C and D
above):                                                   6. Tim was shy. He usually refused invitations.
A. Dependent clause, independent clause                   Tim was shy; he usually refused invitations.
B. Independent clause dependent clause                    Throughout history money and religion were closely
                                                          linked; there was little distinction between
C. Independent, nonessential dependent clause,            government and religion.
clause.
                                                          Martha Stewart is a celebrity, but he fact that her
D. Independent essential dependent clause clause.         television show is filmed at her home irritates her
                                                          neighbors.
A COMPOUND-COMPLEX SENTENCE has
two independent clauses joined to one or more             7. People begin to recycle. They generate much
dependent clauses.                                        less trash.
Punctuation patterns:                                     When people begin to recycle, they generate much
                                                          less trash.
A. Follow the rules given above for compound and
   complex sentences.                                     8. Joshua pleaded with his mother. She would not
                                                          give him any money.
B. A compound-complex sentence is merely a
   combination of the two.                                Joshua pleaded with his mother because she would
                                                          not give him any money.
1. Bill loves hiking and camping. Bill loves
   canoeing best.                                         9. I moved to Chicago. I first applied for a job. I
                                                          looked for an apartment.
Bill loves hiking and camping but he
loves canoeing best.                                      I moved to Chicago, first applied for a job and
                                                          looked for an apartment.
2. Relaxation can be difficult to learn. Some
   people do seek help.                                   READING ACADEMIC TEXTS: Using Various
                                                          Techniques In Summarizing A Variety Of
Relaxation can be difficult to learn so some              Academic Texts
people do seek help.
                                                          SUMMARY
3. Teachers don't like it when you read while they        − a brief statement or account of the main points
   are trying to teach. Teachers especially don't           of something
   like it when you talk while they are trying to
   teach.                                                 −   a record in a reader's own words that gives the
                                                              main points of a piece of writing such as a
Teachers don’t like it when you read while they are           newspaper article, the chapter of a book, or
trying to teach, but they especially don’t like it when       even a whole book
you talk while they are trying to teach.
                                                          What is Summarizing?
4. Hunter likes heavy metal music. Hunter enjoys          According to Buckley (2004), in her popular writing
   hip-hop tunes also.                                    text Fit to Print, summarizing is reducing text to
                                                          one-third or one-quarter its original size, clearly
Hunter likes heavy metal music, yet he enjoys hip         articulating the author’s meaning, and retaining
hop tunes also.                                           main ideas.
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According to Diane Hacker (2008), in A Canadian
Writer’s Reference, explains that summarizing            9. You will fully understand what the document
involves stating a work’s thesis and main ideas             is when you organize all ideas.
“simply, briefly, and accurately”.
                                                         10. One of the things you can do is to write
From dictionaries, it is defined as taking a lot of          down all information in a coherent and
information and creating a condensed version that            precise form. Keep in
covers the main points; and to express the most          11. mind that a summary is a condensed
important facts or ideas about something or                  version of the
someone in a short and clear form.                       12. original paper, so avoid making it long.
reducing text - “simply, briefly, and accurately”        13. You can also decide to represent
                                                             information through using dimensional
clearly articulating - condensed version                     constructions in representing concepts,
                                                             skills, or facts.
thesis - most important facts or ideas
                                                         14. Paraphrasing is one of the skills you can do
main ideas - short and clear version                         in writing a summary. With it, do not use the
                                                             same words with the author.
Various techniques in summarizing a variety of
academic texts                                            With the tips above, you will no longer worry
                                                      whenever you need to summarize because it is
   1. Read the work first to understand the           your one stop solution to having a fantastic
      author’s intent. This is a crucial step         summary that offer nice details to readers. Follow
      because an incomplete reading could lead        the tips and you will not make mistakes.
      to an inaccurate summary. Note: an
      inaccurate summary is plagiarism!               Example:
   2. One of the summarization techniques you         Japanese Rail Tunnel
      can do is to present information through
      facts, skills and concept in visual formats.            Due to an increase in traffic between the
      You can provide the cause and effects           various island which make up Japan, and
      chart, time lines, and Venn                     predictions of a continuing growth in train travel, a
   3. diagrams, templates for outlines, use flow      rail tunnel was built to connect the islands of
      charts or                                       Honshu and Hokkaido. The Seikan Tunnel in Japan
   4. infographics.                                   is today the longest tunnel in the world, with a
                                                      length of almost 54km. When the tunnel was
   5. To avoid difficulty, you need first to know     opened in 1988, all existing trains went through it.
      the main points and the supporting details.     However, newer Japanese bullet trains have never
      You can exclude any illustrations, examples     used the tunnel because of the cost of extending
      or explanations.                                the highspeed line through it. Consequently, the
                                                      train journey from Tokyo to Sapporo still takes
   6. You need to analyze the text to save time in    about ten hours. In contrast, the journey by air
      thinking what you will do.                      takes only three and a half hours. This has
                                                      combined with the fall in the cost of flying, has
   7. Think what information you will put in your     meant that more people travel by plane than train
      summary. Be sure to cover the main points       and the tunnel is not used as much as forecasters
      and arguments of the document.                  had predicted.
   8. One of the best things to do in auto               ▪   Increase in traffic
      summarizing to restating the words into            ▪   Connect islands (Honshu & Hokkaido)
      different one. You should avoid using the          ▪   Predictions and continuing growth
      original words of the author instead; use          ▪   The longest rail tunnel
      your own vocabulary but be sure to retain          ▪   Opened 1988
      the information.                                   ▪   54 km
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  ▪ Bullet trains                                          Technique 2: SAAC Method
  ▪ Never used tunnel                                               The SAAC Method is another useful
  ▪ Fall in the cost of flying                             technique for summarizing any kind of text (story,
  ▪ Not used as much as forecasters predicted              article, speech, etc). SAAC is an acronym for
                                                           “State, Assign, Action, Complete.”
Summary
        The longest railway tunnel in the world links      Each word in the acronym refers to a specific
the islands of Honshu & Hokkaido. This 54km                element that should be included in the summary.
tunnel was inaugurated in 1988 to deal with the
predicted increase in rail traffic. However, the fall in   State: name of the article, book, or story
the cost of flying and the fact that high speed trains     Assign: the name of the author
cannot use the tunnel have resulted in the tunnel          Action: what the author is doing
being less widely used than expected.                      (example: tells, explains)
                                                           Complete: complete the sentence or
Another 5 Easy Techniques in Summarizing                   summary with keywords and important details
Various Academic Texts
                                                                  This method is particularly helpful for
Technique 1: Somebody Wanted But So Then                   students who are learning the format of a summary
        “Somebody Wanted But So Then” is an                and need reminders to include the title and author’s
excellent summarizing strategy for stories. Each           name. However, SAAC does not include clear
word represents a key question related to the              guidance about which details to include, which
story’s essential elements:                                some students might find tricky. If you use SAAC,
                                                           be reminded of the types of details that belong in a
Somebody: Who is the story about?                          summary before starting to work independently.
Wanted: What does the main character want?
But: Identify a problem that the main character            Here is an example of SAAC in action:
encountered.                                               State: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
So: How does the main character solve the                  Assign: Aesop (a Greek storyteller)
problem?                                                   Action: tells
Then: Tell how the story ends.                             Complete: what happens when a shepherd boy
                                                           repeatedly lies to the villagers about seeing a wolf
Somebody: Little Red Riding Hood
Wanted: She wanted to take cookies to her sick             Using the four SAAC cues, this is a summary of
grandmother.                                               “The Boy Who Cried Wolf” in complete sentences:
But: She encountered a wolf pretending to be
her grandmother.                                                   The Boy Who Cried Wolf, by Aesop (a
So: She ran away, crying for help.                         Greek storyteller), tells what happens when a
Then: A woodsman heard her and saved her from              shepherd boy repeatedly lies to the villagers about
the wolf.                                                  seeing a wolf. After a while, they ignore his false
                                                           cries. Then, when a wolf really does attack, they
After answering the questions, combine the                 don’t come to help him.
answers to form a summary:
                                                           Technique 3: 5 W’s, 1 H
        Little Red Riding Hood wanted to take                     The 5 W’s, 1 H strategy relies on six crucial
cookies to her sick grandmother, but she                   questions: who, what, when, where, why, and how.
encountered a wolf. He got to her grandmother’s            These questions make it easy to identify the main
house first and pretended to be the old woman. He          character, the important details, and the main idea.
was going to eat Little Red Riding Hood, but she
realized what he was doing and ran away, crying            Who is the story about?
for help. A woodsman heard the girl’s cries and            What did they do?
saved her from the wolf.                                   When did the action take place?
                                                           Where did the story happen?
                                                           Why did the main character do what he/she did?
                                                           How did the main character do what he/she did?
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Let us try this technique with a familiar fable such      Oral Activity:
as “The Tortoise and the Hare.”                           Each student will have to tell his/her favorite book
                                                          or movie in a minute or so. This is a fun, quick way
Who? The tortoise                                         to practice summarizing on a regular basis.
What? He raced a quick, boastful hare and won.
When? When isn’t specified in this story, so it’s not     When is summarizing useful?
important in this case.                                   Summarizing is useful in many types of writing and
Where? An old country road                                at different points in the writing process.
Why? The tortoise was tired of hearing the hare           Summarizing is used to support an argument,
boast about his speed.                                    provide context for a paper’s thesis, write literature
How? The tortoise kept up his slow but steady             reviews, and annotate a bibliography. The benefit
pace.                                                     of summarizing lies in showing the ‘big picture’,
                                                          which allows the reader to contextualize what you
Using the answers to the 5 W’s and 1 H to write a         are saying. In addition to the advantages of
summary in incomplete sentences.                          summarizing for the reader, as a writer you gain a
                                                          better sense of where you are going with your
       Tortoise got tired of listening to Hare boast      writing, which parts need elaboration, and whether
about how fast he was, so he challenged Hare to a         you have comprehended the information you have
race. Even though he was slower than Hare,                collected.
Tortoise won by keeping up his slow and steady
pace when Hare stopped to take a nap.
Technique 4: First, Then, Finally
        The “First Then Finally” technique helps
students summarize events in chronological order.
The three words represent the beginning, main
action, and conclusion of a story, respectively.
First. What happened first? Include the main
character and main event/action.
Then. What key details took place during the
event/action?
Finally. What were the results of the event/action?
Here is an example using “Goldilocks and the
Three Bears.”
         First, Goldilocks entered the bears’ home
while they were gone. Then, she ate their food, sat
in their chairs, and slept in their beds. Finally, she
woke up to find the bears watching her, so she
jumped up and ran away.
Technique 5: Give Me the Gist!
       When someone asks for “the gist” of a story,
they want to know what the story is about. In other
words, they want a summary --- not a retelling of
every detail.
The ‘gist’ method is just like giving a friend the gist
of an ordinary story or experience.