Assessing Writing
Nylvie Loire Collamat
• State a rationale for assessing writing as a separate skill as well as a skill
  that integrates with reading and possibly other skills.
• Discern the overlap between assessing writing as an implicit, unanalyzed
  ability and its explicit, form-focused counterpart.
• Incorporate performance-based assessment into your own assessment
  instruments.
• Develop assessments that focus on one or several micro- and macroskills of
  writing within a specific genre.
• Design assessments that target one or more modes of performance, ranging
  from imitative production to extensive writing.
Genres of
Writing
Academic Writing
• Papers and general subject
  reports
• Essays and compositions
• Academically focused journals
• Short-answer test responses
• Technical reports – lab reports
• Theses and dissertations
Job-related Writing
• Messages – phone messages
• Letters/emails
• Memos – interoffice
• Reports – job evaluations, project reports
• Schedules, labels and signs
• Advertisements and announcements
• Manuals
Personal Writing
•   Test messages, tweets, e-mails, letters, greeting cards, invitations
•   Messages and notes
•   Calendar entries, shopping lists, and reminders
•   Financial documents
•   Forms, questionnaires, medical reports, immigration documents
•   Diaries and personal journals
•   Fiction – short stories and poetry
Types of Writing
Performance
Imitative
• Learners try to master the mechanics of writing – writing
  letters, words, punctuation marks, and brief sentences.
• Form is the primary focus.
Intensive (controlled)
• Meaning and context are important in determining the
  correctness and appropriateness.
• Assessment tasks are more concerned with a focus on form
  and are strictly controlled by the test design.
Responsive
• Learners are required to perform at a limited discourse level
• Connecting sentences into a paragraph
• Creating logically connected sequence of two or three paragraphs.
Extensive
• Successful management of all the processes and strategies of
  writing for all purposes
• Focus on achieving a purpose, organizing and developing ideas
  logically, using details to support or illustrate ideas, demonstrating
  syntactic and lexical variety, engaging in the process of creating
  multiple drafts to achieve a final product.
Microskills and
Macroskills of
Writing
Microskills of Writing
1. Produce graphemes and orthographic patterns of English
2. Produce writing at an efficient rate of speed to suit the
   purpose
3. Produce acceptable core of words and use appropriate
   word order patterns
4. Use acceptable grammatical systems (e.g., tense,
   agreement, pluralization), patterns, and rules
5. Express a particular meaning in different grammatical forms
6. Use cohesive devices in written discourse
Macroskills of Writing
1. Use of rhetorical forms and conventions of written discourse
2. Appropriately accomplish the communicative functions of
   written tests according to form and purpose
3. Convey links and connections between events and
   communicate such relations as main idea, supporting idea,
   new information, given information, generalization, and
   exemplification
4. Distinguish between literal and implied meanings when
   writing
5. Correctly convey culturally specific references in the context
   of the written text
Macroskills of Writing
6. Develop and use a battery of writing strategies, such as
   accurately assessing the audience’s interpretation, using
   prewriting devices, writing with fluency in the first drafts,
   using paraphrases and synonyms, soliciting peer and
   instructor feedback, and applying feedback when revising
   and editing
  Designing Assessment
Tasks: Imitative Writing
                      • Copying – there is nothing innovative or
Tasks in(Hand-)writing modern about directing a test-taker to
                        copy letters or words.
Letters, Words, and
Punctuations
 Tasks in (Hand-)writing Letters,
 Words, and Punctuations
• Listening Cloze Selection Tasks –
  combination of dictation and a
  written script that has a relatively
  frequent deletion ratio.
    • Purpose: not to test spelling
      but give practice writing.
Tasks in (Hand-)writing Letters,
Words, and Punctuations
   • Picture-Cued Tasks – Familiar
     pictures are displayed, and
     test-takers are told to write the
     word that the picture
     represents.
Tasks in (Hand-)writing Letters,
Words, and Punctuations
  • Form Completion Tasks– a
    variation on pictures is the use of a
    simple form that asks for name,
    address, phone number, and other
    data.
                          • Converting Numbers and Abbreviations to
                            Words – reasonably reliable method to stimulate
Tasks in (Hand-)writing     hand-written English.
  Letters, Words, and         • Lacks authenticity and more of a reading task
                                than writing task
     Punctuations             • Converting abbreviations to words is more
                                authentic.
Spelling Tasks and Detecting
    Phoneme-Grapheme
       Correspondence
   • Spelling Tests – the teacher
     dictates a simple lists of words,
     one word at a time; then uses the
     word in a sentence and repeats
     the sentence.
       • Scoring emphasizes – correct
         spelling
                                              Spelling Tasks and Detecting
Choose the correct word for each photo.           Phoneme-Grapheme
         Encircle your answer.                       Correspondence
                                                • Picture-Cued Tasks – pictures
                                                  are displayed with the
                                                  objective of focusing on
                                                  familiar words whose spelling
                                                  may be unpredictable.
Boot or book    read or reed   rain or rein
                                                    • Opportunity to present
                                                      challenging words and
                                                      word pairs: boot/book,
                                                      read/reed, bit/bite, and so
                                                      on.
Spelling Tasks and Detecting
    Phoneme-Grapheme
       Correspondence
  • Multiple Choice Techniques–
    presenting words and phrases
    in the form of a multiple-choice
    task risks crossing over into the
    domain of assessing reading.
      • Serve as formative
        reinforcement of spelling
        conventions.
Spelling Tasks and Detecting
    Phoneme-Grapheme
       Correspondence
   • Matching Phonetic Symbols – if     • Mixed opinion regarding the value
     students have become familiar        of using phonetic symbols at the
     with the phonetic alphabet, they     literacy level.
     could be shown phonetic symbols    • Helps students perceive the
     and asked to write the correctly     relationship between phonemes
     spelled word alphabetically.         and graphemes.
Designing Assessment Tasks:
Intensive (Controlled) Writing
Intensive (Controlled) Writing
 • Display writing – students produce language
   to display their competence in grammar,
   vocabulary, or sentence formation and not
   necessarily to convey meaning for an
   authentic purpose.
Designing Assessment Tasks:
Intensive (Controlled) Writing
• Dictation and Dicto-Comp
   • Dictation – simply the rendition in
     writing of what one hears aurally, so
     it could be classified as an imitative
     type of writing, test-taker’s
     performance centers on correct
     spelling.
   • Dicto-comp – a paragraph is read at
     normal speed, usually two or three
     times, then the teacher asks
     students to rewrite the paragraph
     from the best of their recollection.
Designing Assessment Tasks:
Intensive (Controlled) Writing
• Grammatical Transformational
  Tasks – the practice of making
  grammatical transformations –
  orally or in writing
   • Devoid of any meaningful
     value.
   • Easy to administer and
     therefore practical
   • Taps into a knowledge of
     grammatical forms that are
     performed through writing.
                             • Picture-cued Tasks – a variety of picture-cued
                               controlled tasks have been used in English
                               classrooms around the world.
                                 • Main advantage – giving of non-verbal means
                                   to stimulate written responses.
                                 • Short Sentences – the test-taker writes a brief
                                   sentence
                                 • Picture Description – test-takers are asked to
                                   describe the picture. The test is specific on how
                                   to describe the picture. (E.g., use the following
                                   prepositions to describe the picture below: on,
                                   over, under, next to, around)
Designing Assessment Tasks:
Intensive (Controlled) Writing
Designing Assessment Tasks: Intensive
(Controlled) Writing
• Picture Sequence Description – a
  sequence of three to six pictures
  depicting a story line can provide a
  suitable stimulus for written
  production.
    • Pictures must be simple and
      unambiguous
    • Simple form of verb must be
      written below the picture if the
      criterion is the grammatical form
      of the verb
Designing Assessment Tasks:
Intensive (Controlled) Writing
• Picture Sequence Description:
   • A few different correct
     responses can be given
   • If criteria in this task are lexical
     and grammatical choices – a
     rating scale should be designed.
• Most common vehicle for a deliberate
  focus on vocabulary is reading.
• Major techniques used to assess
  vocabulary:
    • Defining
    • Using a word in a sentence
  Vocabulary
  Assessment                                  Read (2000) suggested several types of items to
                                              assess basic knowledge of the meaning of a word,
                                              collocational possibilities, and derived
  Tasks                                       morphological forms. The example above focused
                                              on the word interpret.
                       • It is form-focused
                       • Collocations and morphological variants
                       • lexical choice is one of several possible
                         components of the evaluation of extensive
                         writing.
Ordering
Tasks      • Challenging to test-takers whose learning
             styles do not dispose them to logical-
             mathematical problem solving.
              • Sentences are kept very simple, with perhaps no
                more than four or five words.
              • Only one possible sentence can emerge.
              • Students have practiced the technique in class.
Short-Answer and
Sentence-Completion Tasks
• Heavy participation of reading
  performance
• Ranges from very simple and
  predictable to somewhat more
  elaborate responses
• Reading-writing connection is apparent in the
  first three items but has less effect in the last
  three.
• Scoring on a scale of 2-1-0 scale – most
  appropriate way to avoid self-arguing about
  the appropriateness of a response.
Issues in Assessing
Responsive and
Extensive Writing
                              • Creates opportunity for test-takers to offer
                                an array of possible creative responses
Responsive and                • Learners can choose vocabulary, grammar,
                                and discourse but with conditions.
Extensive                     • Criteria include discourse and rhetorical
Writing                         conventions, paragraph structure and
                                connecting paragraphs
                              • Developing sequence of connected ideas
The ART and SCIENCE             and empathizing with audience
   of composing –
     real writing     •   Short reports – structured formats and conventions
                      •   Responses to the reading of an article or story
                      •   Summaries of articles or stories
                      •   Brief narratives or descriptions
                      •   Interpretation of graphs, tables, and charts
Issues
Authenticity
•   Content and validity should be ensured.
•   Established the basic building blocks of writing
•   Setting of authentic real-world contexts
•   Teacher – facilitator or coach and less of an instructor
•   Assessment – formative, not summative, and positive washback
Issues
Scoring
• Attuned – form and function of the test
• Impact and effectiveness
• How are you to score such creative production, some of which is more artistic
  than scientific?
Issues
Time
•   Not necessarily constrained by time
•   Freedom to produce multiple drafts
•   Continuous refinement
•   Relies on essential drafting process for its ultimate success
Designing Assessment
Tasks: Responsive and
Extensive Writing
Paraphrasing
• Ensure learners understand the importance of paraphrasing
• Criterion: convey similar or the same message; grammar and
  vocabulary second
• Informal and formative assessment
• Opportunity for teachers and students to gain positive
  washback
Guided Question and Answer
• Series of questions are made that essentially serves as an
  outline of the emergent written text
                                           Scoring: analytic or
                                           holistic
           Outline: self-created; guides the
           learner through a presumably
           logical development of ideas that
           have been given.
Paragraph Construction Tasks
                 Good writers are often good readers.
            Writing is the art of emulating what one reads.
Topic Sentence Writing – assessment of the effectiveness
of a topic sentence consists of:
• Specifying the writing of a topic sentence
• Scoring points for its presence or absence
• Scoring and/or commenting on its effectiveness in stating the topic
Paragraph Construction Tasks
                  Good writers are often good readers.
             Writing is the art of emulating what one reads.
Topic Development Within a Paragraph – four criteria to
assess the quality of a paragraph:
• Clarity of expression of ideas
• Logic of the sequence and connections
• Cohesiveness or unity of the paragraph
• Overall effectiveness or impact of the paragraph as a whole
Paragraph Construction Tasks
                 Good writers are often good readers.
            Writing is the art of emulating what one reads.
Development of Main and Supporting Ideas Across Paragraphs –
elements to consider when evaluating a multiparagraph essay:
• Addressing the topic, main idea, or principal purpose
• Organizing and developing supporting ideas
• Using appropriate details to undergird supporting ideas
• Showing facility and fluency in the use of language
• Demonstrating syntactic variety
Strategic Options
  Developing main and supporting ideas is the goal for the writer
 attempting to create an effective text, whether a short one- to two-
       paragraph one or an extensive one of several pages.
Attending to Task
 • Task has been designed by the teacher; the writer must fulfill the
   criterion of the task.
 • Compare/contrast
 • Problem/solution
 • Pros/cons
 • Cause/effect
  Strategic Options
      Attending to Genre
   Extent by which constraints and
opportunities of the genre are exploited
Standardized Tests of Responsive
Writing
• Standardized tests –
  TOEFL, MELADB, PTE,
  IELTS
  • A prompt
  • Require the test-taker to
    respond within a time
    limit
  • Scored with a rating scale
Standardized Tests
of Responsive
Writing
 • PTE Essay Scoring Guide
 • Not intended to mirror the
   real world
 • They rend to elicit a sample
   of writing performance that
   will be indicative of a
   person’s writing ability in the
   real world.
Standardized Tests of Responsive
Writing
• Standardized tests – indicators not a fail-safe, infallible measures
  of competence. Secondary measures should be employed for
  learners who:
   • Are on the threshold of a minimum score
   • May be disabled by highly time-constrained or anxiety-producing
     situations
   • Could be culturally disadvantaged by a topic or situation
   • Have had a few opportunities to compose on a computer (in the case of
     computer-based writing tests)
Scoring Methods for Responsive
and Extensive Writing
                   Advantages
                   • Fast evaluation
                   • Relatively high inter-rater reliability
                   • Scores represent standards easily
                     interpreted by lay persons
                   • Applicability to writing across many
                     different disciplines
                   Disadvantages
                   • One score masks differences across
                     the subskills within each score
                   • No diagnostic information is available
                     (no washback potential)
Holistic Scoring   • The scale may not apply equally well
                     to all genres of writing
                   • Raters need to be extensively trained
                     to use the scale accurately
• Provides little washback into the writer’s further stages of writing.
• Focuses on the principal function of the text thus offers some feedback potential
• Classroom evaluation of learning is best served - 6 major elements or writing are scored
• Allows learners to home in on weaknesses and capitalize on strengths
Analytic Scoring
                                    • Analytic profile suggested by Jacobs,
                                      Zinkgraf, Wormuth, Hartfiel, and
                                      Hughey (1981)
                                    • The order in which the five categories
                                      are listed may bias the evaluator
                                      toward the greater importance of
                                      organization and logical
                                      development as opposed to
                                      punctuation and style
Analytic Scoring
Analytic Scoring
   Primary-Trait Scoring
• Focuses on “how well students can    Primary-trait score assesses:
  write within a narrowly defined
  range of discourse” (Weigle, 2002,   • Accuracy of the account of the
                                         original (summary)
  p. 110)
                                       • Clarity of the steps of the procedure
• Assigns a score based on the           and the result (lab report)
  effectiveness of the text’s          • Description of the main features of
  achieving that one goal                the graph (graph description)
  • Example: persuasive essay – the    • Expression of the writer’s opinion
    score depends on the                 (response to an article)
    accomplishment of the function.
Beyond Scoring: Responding to Extensive Writing
        The rich domain of assessment lies beyond
   mathematically calculated scores in which a developing
    writer is coached from stage to stage in a process of
           building a storehouse of writing skills.
       To give maximum benefit of assessment, it is important to
       consider:
       • Earlier stages (from freewriting to the first draft or two)
       • Later stages (revising and finalizing)
       • Involvement of self, peers, and teacher at appropriate
         steps in the process
Assessing Initial Stages of the Process of
Composing
Assessing Later Stages of the Process of
Composing
1. It is virtually impossible to isolate any one of the four skills,
   perhaps with the exception of reading; at least one other mode
   of performance will usually be involved. Don’t underestimate the
   power of the integration of skills in assessments designed to
   target a single skill area.
2. The variety of assessment techniques and item types and tasks is
   virtually infinite in that there is always some possibility for
   creating a unique variation. Explore those alternatives but with
   some caution.
3. May item types that have been presented in these last four
   chapters target language forms as one of the possible
   assessment criteria. Make sure you are clear about the extent to
   which your objective is to assess form or function or both.
• Look at the list of micro- and Macroskills of writing. In pairs,
  with each person assigned to a different skill, brainstorm some
  tasks that assess those skills. Share your findings to the rest of
  the class.