Legislative Drafting Challenges
Legislative Drafting Challenges
Legislative Drafting
          The reader of this Chapter may imncdiately be remindcd of
                                                                               the
     remark of George Bernard Shaw that-he who knovs does and that sarcastic         he who
     docs not know teaches. The author himsclf was so remindecd
                                                                       whenever carne
                                                                                    he
    across the statemcnt hat a particular provision of law was
    He felt whether the critic would rcally have done any            inatistically   drafted.
                                                                 better. For example, in
    Pul1kuri Kotavva v. Empcror, Sir John
    the Judicial Commitee of the Pivy Council.Beaumont,
                                                   said:
                                                              delivering the opinion of
             "Scction 27. which is not artistically wordcd. provides an
        ilhe prohibition imposcd by ilhe preceling                             exception 1o
                                                         section, and enablcs certain
        statements made by a person in police custody to bc proved."
        Actually, the author alvays thought that the section was very well
    bySir James Stcphen, and it was judicial                                         drafted
                                              interpretation
   only an cxception to the preceding Section 26', but also tothat  made     Section  27 not
   enabled the police to use their 'persuasive powers to                  Section    25   and
   accused in their custody Jeading to the discovery of        extract   statements     from
   Stephen, having categorically excluded from the certain     field
                                                                         facts. Sir James
                                                                       of relevance all
   confessions to the police under Section 25, intended, when he drafted Section
  27, that it should be an exception only to
                                                      Section
  confessions topersons other than the police, by using the26,words   which deals with
                                                                           'in the custody
  of a police officer'. Police custody is a
  Sir John Beaumont himself says so, but    requirement   only   in Sections 26 and 27.
                                               then prOceeds as if such statements
  could be made to the police. It is respectfully
  must be reconsidered. Its approval by the Supreme submitted that this interpretation
  web in Deoman                                           Court has led to the tangled
                    Upadhayaya case?.
        All the same, while reading through the
                                                    various cases for purposes of
  understanding the various rules of interpretation the
 difficulty that a court vas faced with, while trying toauthor
                                                          gather
                                                                 felt that much of the
                                                                   the intention of the
 legislature, could have been avoided if certain basic rules were
 draftsman and also, if his attention is drawn to the                  followed by the
 using various expressions and words. The author has    difficulties  in  choosing and
 better men have feared to tread.                         therefore rushed in where
     Language is not merely a means of
 medium of talk. Words are the tools withcommunication
                                                 which
                                                              but it is also the chief
 person speaks to another, however ambiguous the language operates. When a
 makes his meaning clear by the language of words chosen may be, he
modulation of his voice and change in intonation. But  gesture as well as by the
and they are read, these other aids are not                when words are printed,
must be, as far as possible, precise, and the available, and  hence, the words used
such that there is no syntactic                arrangement   of the words should be
                                  ambiguity.
 I. AJR 1947 PC 67: (1947) LR 74 IA 65, 76.
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2. AJR 1960 SC125: (J961) 1 SCR
                                    14.
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                                  Legislaiive Draftine                             703
    In India there is a spec:al ditioltv because the languaye used is thc English
inguage. Eve if one of the vanous Ind1an languages were used the probBem
 wWOuld Continue, because. no lnguagC Is knoWD to all the Indian people, vith
the iesult that shades of meaning are not always clear. Words derive colour from
 heir coniext and many wOrds in daly Usc have. as \Wittgenstein puts i, blurrcd
cdges'. The central meaing of aword would perbaps be fairly clear but fringe
meanings are not always obvious. It is. therefore. necessary that the draftsman
should usc, as far as possible. onc word only for a particular mcaning which he
has in mind. For doing this he should frequently consult dictionaries and
anthologies of synonyms. Even so. it will not always be possible to choose the
 right vOrd, and judges,      when interprcting a statute,     will have to take into
account various considerations. For example. it is very difficult to draw the line
between drunk and soher, between thick and thin, between long and short,
reasonable and unreasonable. few and many, rich and poor, etc.
    Another requircment is that the draftsman should avoid words which may
 have emotional overtones. The Preamble to the Indian Constitution is highly
sonorous, inspiring. evocative and so fully charged with emotion, that the result
Is, in trying to use it for the interpretation of various Aricles of the Constitution.
Jeamed Judges have not been able to see with the same eye.,The learned advise,
quoting Montesqicu, that 'it is essential that only such words should be used by
the law-giver as are bound to producc the same notion in the minds of all men
but this would be a task for a superman. Even so, if the draftsman remembers
 hisobjective he would be able to avoid many pitfalls. Sir Ernest Gowers' advice
JS,
3. 'Rogets' International Thesaurus', 3rd Edn., Oxford ard lBD Publishing Co. Pvt. Ltd., 66
   Janpath, New Delhi I10 001. This is the only true Ro ' s Thesaurus which preserves Peter
   Roget's Original Methodology and Schene.       lot' /ersions and editions carrying Roget's
   name merely purport lo be lhe real thing.
4. ElectionCommission, In re, Special Ref. No. I of 2002, (2002) 8SCC 237.
5. Aswini Kumar Ghose v, Arabinda, 0Se,AIR 1952 SC 369.
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    706
                                  Interprctation of Statutes                        {Chap.
          7he co111121a iS 1 natier of sCnSe and
                                                  experience. The only rule is that if it
      makes the meaning clerer put in aCODMa; if not, leave it out. A
    to mark off a phasc or a clause vhen it is                              comma is used
    (o do so. l is also uscd io mark a series of  thought that  it makes the sense clearer
    use of the conna is when a Word is placed out ofwords,  plhrases, or clauses. Another
    of stress. This use is however                         its  natural  order for the sake
                                    unlikely t0 OcCUr in legislative drafting.
         How far a clause whic: follows upon a
                                                     coma governs cvery claUSe that
   prccedles the cOMMa is a matter not free from doubt.6
        The semicolon is an important and
   than a comma, which is used morc for interesting           mark to use. It is
                                                 a pause; but the semicolon stronger
  imply a complete break like the full stop. It only                              does not
  the same time a link between                           makes    a partial break and is at
                                    sentences appearing on the same subject. It often
  implies that what follows at least
  that comes before it. It is often usedpartially explains and amplifies the sentence
  'and' or 'or or but'.
                                           instead of a comma when it is followed by
       Colon.-It implies that what
  that comes before it. It is generally follows
                                          used
                                                 explains and amplifies the sentence
  of some word such as 'namely'.               before a quotation, or to take the place
                                         STYLE
      The persons whoare likely to be affected when a
 three different categories:                          new Jaw is made fall into
      (1) The persons who make the Jaw:
      (2) Those memnbers of the State whose
                                            rights and liberties are likely to be
 affected by the law; and
      (3) The judiciary.
      The purpose of legislation is to establish
  known to those who are likely to be affected by legal      rules and to make them
                                                       those rules. Therefore, the first
  condition is sirnplicity.[While precision is essential,
 opening chapter of this book, too much adherence as            it was indicated in the
 unnecessary complexity and, therefore, to obscurity. toInprecision       may lead to
                                                                  Jane Austen's novel
 'Northanger Abbey', the heroine
enough to be unintelligible.']ToCatherine
                                       achieve
                                                 Moreland says, l cannot speak well
the use of words, directness towards the simplicity there must be economy in
used, and some kind of order.                  thought,a familiarity of the language
     Brevity is, of course, the soul of wit, but economy
to such an extent as to sacrifice clarity.                    should never be carried
become obscure." The famous French poet      (Horace  said:   I labour to be brief and
                                                 Boileau advises:
          Polissez le sans cesse, et le repolissez:
          Ajoutez quelquefois, et souventeffucez.
     of the meconClable decisODs on the jusdem Generis ule and the expressio
     niLS rule, is best to state the class irstand then cumcrate the items intended
     io be exCCpled.
          As regards tensc, the normal ule is to use the present tensc for the operation
     of the law and indicate by appropriate words conditions preccdent in the past
     lense and applicability of the Act to past and future cvents by using the phrase
      before or after the Ac'.
        Since the 'masculine' cmbraccs the feminine and 'singular'' includes
     "plural" it is in order to use the masculine singular form. If exceptions are
    intended they should be indicated.
        In every drafting process there are five stages: (1) an understanding of what
    is wanted, (2) analysis, (3)design, (4) composition, and (5) scrutiny.
         As regards the first stage the draftsman should be very clear in his mind as
    to what a particular department of the Governnent, which is interested in the
    statute, or the Minister at whose behest the drafting is being undertaken, wants.
     Constant consultation, therefore, is necessary before the draftsman can make his
    draft final. The draftsman should have an understanding of the background
   information so that he can fit in the legislation in proper perspective or context.
   The main object of the statute should be clearly and fully stated; the means
   whereby such objects are to be achieved should also be set out elaborately and
   clearly. The draftsman should have a thorough understanding of the legal
  implications and difficulties; for example, he should know whether the
  particular matter is mentioned in the list with respect to which the legislature is
  competent. He should also know whether the particular legislation can be
  included in the item set out in the list. After satisfying himself of the legislative
  competency, he should make sure that no provision of the Constitution is
  vjolated, such as Fundamental Rights and other Articles such as Articles 301 to
  304. He must make sure whether prior sanction of the Governor or the President
 is to be obtained; in which House of the Legislature the Bill should be
 introduced and, whether subsequent assent of the President is necessary. Thus,
  he must have a comprehensive knowledge of the Constitution and legislative
 procedure. Suppose a sales or purchase tax is to be imposed, care should be
 laken to see if inter-State sales are involved. The draftsman should also take
 care to see that Jegislation does not go contrary to Directive Principles set out in
 Part IV of the Constitution.
     The drafts1man should then enter the second stage, that is, he should analyse
 the existing law, the potential dangers of violating provisions of the
 Constitution, and more than anything else, he nust have pragmatic intuition,
 i.e., he must be certain that the statute which he produces will be workable. All
 decisions of courts, reports of any committees, discussions in journals, in short,
 all relevant material must be analysed. Any prior attempts or legislation in our
and other countries should be examined. We become wise only by avoiding the
errors committed by others. "A legislation is made to be passed as razors are
made to sell." One danger lies in making a statute retrospective. Whether such
retrospective legislation is permissible and whether it achieves the purpose of
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                                      Chuptcr XIIl
                          Legislativc Drafting
   The reader of this Chapter may immediatcly be reminded of the sarcastic
remark of George Bemard Shaw that---he who knows does and that he who
docs not know tcaches. The author himsclf was so reminded whenever he carne
acrOss the statement that aparticular provision of Jaw was inartistically drafted.
He felt whether the critic would rcally have done any better. For example, in
Pul1kuri Kotayya v. Emperor, Sir John Beaumont, delivering the opinion of
the JudicialCommittee of the Privy Council. said:
         "Section 27, which is not artistically worded. provides an exception to
    the prolhibition imposcd by the preceding section, and enables certain
    statements made by a person in police custody to be proved."
    Actually. the author always thought that the section was very well drafted
by Sir James Stephen, and it was judicial interpretation that made Section 27 not
 only an exception to the 'preceding Section 26', but also to Section 25 and
 enabled the police to use their persuasive powers' to extract statements from
 accused in their custody leading to the discovery of certain facts. Sir James
 Stephen, having categorically excluded from the field of relevance all
 confessions to the police under Section 25, intended, when he drafted Section
 27, that it should be an exception only to Section 26, which deals with
 confessions to persons other than the police, by using the words 'in the custody
 of a policeofficer'. Police custody is a requirement only in Sections 26 and 27.
 Sir John Beaumont himself says so, but then proceeds as if such statements
 could be made to the police. It is respectfully submitted that this interpretation
 must be reconsidered. Its approval by the Supreme Court has led to the tangled
 web in Deoman Upadhayaya case?.
      All the same, while reading through the various cases for purposes of
  understanding the various rules of interpretatiön the author felt that much of the
  difficulty that a cout was faced with, while trying to gather the intention of the
  legislature, could have been avoided if certain basic rules were followedby the
  draftsman and also, if his attention is drawn to the difficulties in choosing and
  using various expressions and words. The author has therefore rushed in where
  better nen have feared to tread.
      Language is not merely a means of communication but it is also the chief
  mediumn of talk. Words are the tools with which language operates. When a
  person speaks to another, however ambiguous the words chosen may be, he
  makes his meaning clear by the language of gesture as well as by the
  Tnodulation of his vojce and change in intonation. But when words are printed,
  and they are read, these other aids are not available, and hence, the words used
   must be, as far as possible, precise, and the arrangement of the words should be
   such that there is no syntacticambiguity.
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    1. AIR 1947 PC 67: (1947) LR 74 IA 65, 76.
    2. AJR I960 SC 1025: (1961) 1 SCR 14.
                                                 |702 )
                                                                                 703
                                 Legislative Drafting
                                                                            English
     In Ibdia there is a special ificultv becausc the language uscd is the
ianguage. Even if one of the various Indian languages were used the problem
  would continue, because, no language is known to all the Indan people, with
the resl that shades of meaning are not always clear. Words derive
                                                                       colour from
                                                                            blurred
their context and many words in daily use have, as \Wittgenstein puts i,
                                                                          but fringe
 cdges'. The central meaning of a word would perhaps be fairly clear draftsman
                                                                     the
   meanings are not always obvious. I is, therefore, necessary that
                                                                                   he
 should use, as far as pOssible. one word only for aparticular mcaning whichand
 has in mind. For doing this he should frequently consult dictionaries
                                                                                  the
 anthologies of synonyms. Even so, it will not always be possible to choose into
                                                                       to  take
 right word, and judges, when interpreting a statute, will have
                                                                   to draw the line
 account various considerations. For example, it is very difficult
                                                                         and short,
between drunk and sober, between thick and thin, between long
reasonable and unreasonable, few and many, rich and poor, etc.
                                                                     words which may
      Another requirement is that the draftsman should avoid    Constitution is highly
 have emotional overtones. The Preamble to the Indian emotion, that the result
 Sonorous, inspiring. evocative and so fully charged with
                                                   various Articles of the Constitution,
 is, in trying to use it for the interpretation of            eye.,The learned advise,
 leaned Judges have not been able to see with the same
                                                        such words should be used by
 quoting Montesqieu, that 'it is essentialthat onlynotion in the minds of all men
                                           same
 the law-giver as are bound to produce the
                                           Even so, if the draftsman remembers
 but this would be a task for a superman.
                                              pitfalls. Sir Emest Gowers' advice
 his objective he would be able to avoid many
 is,
                                                           seems to be based upon
             The whole of our modern drafting technique
                                                          possible, to cover every
        the obviously fallacious assumption that it istrying to do the impossible
        particular eventuality. s it not time we gave up
                                                      general principles?
        and concentrate instead in laying down broad
        According to Prof Harry W.Jones,
                                                         interpretation, on issues which
             It must be kept in mind that so called
                                                      draftsmen of a statute, is, itself,
        were wholly beyond the foresight of the issue is whether the inevitable
        Jegislative in character. The substantial
        judicial legislation is to forward the policy  of the legislative authority or to
                                                   he must act as a lawmaker to fill in
        retard its fulfilment. The judge, when                                  delegated
              gaps of a statute, exercises not  original legislative power but possessed
        the                                      upon administrative officers
        power, comparable to that conferredlegislative authority. Each has the duty     of
        of  rule-making    or subordinate                                   detailed rules
         implementing the general       policy of an enactment with
                                                                unforeseeable particular
                                    the infinite variety of legislation is, in effect,
         applying that policy tocircumstance      that judicial
         situations of fact. The                    insisting upon the necessity of its
          retroactive, is but another  reason  for
                                                    policy.' "
         consistency with the general legislative                              19 of the
                      'reasonable"  in  'reasonable restrictions" in Article
         The word
                          such word   which  requires  judicial ingenuity and perspicuity
       Constitutionis one
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    in its interpretation. Suppose a restriction is imposed on a fundamental right.
    Prot Alan Gledhillremarked in 1964 in his Republic of lndia':
              The Dircctive Principles set out a number of objectives to guide
         legislative and cxCcutive policy. They are no: enforceable in a court but a
        study of the legislation of the Indian Legislatures since Independence will
        reveal that Indian Ministers havc discharged their constitutional duty to
        apply the principles when sponsoring legislation. The principles are not
         without importance in courts; some Fundamental Rights may be restricted
       in the public intcrest; if the object of a restriction is to attain any objective
        included in the Directive Principles, no one can be heard to say that it is not
       in the public intcrest."
       But the point is, whilo the courts will not hear an argument that a particular
   restriction is not in the public interest, courts will have to determine whether the
   restriction is 'reasonable' and if it is not reasonable, what would be reasonable.
   In the author's opinion courts should have played a more activist
                                                                           role and not
   merely acted as a brake on legislative impulse. This they could do, because,
   counsel will place before them all the relevant material.,After all, we
   adopted Democratic Socialism, to be attained by Fabian methods and nothave        by
     what Herbert Spencer calls the 'New Toryism'.
         There are many words which have different
    context. The draftsman will have to be careful tomeanings      depending upon the
                                                         avoid such words and must
    choose a synonym with a more precise
   did not know the difference between meaning. There is a story of a lady who
                                          Catholicism and
   was intrOduced to two clergymen, a Catholic and a Protestantism: When she
   that the Catholic gentleman was 'Father so and         Protestant, and she was told
                                                     so',
  asked him if he was also a father, to which the she turmed to the other and
      No, Iam a married man and have four               Protestant gentleman replied,
                                            children.""
        Therefore, a command over the language, a thorough
  acquaintance   with other relevant material relating to the knowledge         of the law,
 of the objective to be                                         law,  a clear   perception
                          achieved, and the capacity to express in clear and
 language how the legislature intends to achieve thè                                precise
 essential in a draftsman. It was Stendhal's                     object,  are   absolutely
 exarmple of perfect style and that is the Code     position   that  there   is  only one
 would read that Code once every year in         Napoleon.    It was  said that
                                             order to make his style more Stendhal
      Before the technical details are                                          precise.
more concerned with the                 discussed  there  are  some   aspects which are
                            mechanical
      (1) The draftsman should
                                         aspects of drafüng:
                                    have a separate page for each
should leave a                                                           section and he
 occur. Such asufficiently     wide margin for
                  method would also facilitateanyeasy
                                                    notes or corrections as they
 particular section has to be referred to .for the reference, because, if a
section, a loose sheet                              purpose of drafing another
the scope of an earlier will be more helpful than turning over pages to find
changed if necessary.   section.                                              out
                                  Moreover, the arrangement of the sections can be
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                                                                       another
     (2) The draftsnan must have at least one good dictionary, ad Dictionaries
cxplaining the usage of words. Chambers and the Concise OxfordThesaurus for
                                                          Roget's
are idcal for thcsc purpOsCS. I is also nccessary to have
                                                                 precise word
choos1ng the next appropnate synonym or even for arriving at the
in the first placc.
     (3) 1f a team of draftsmen is working on a long and complex measurc, apart
from consultations between thcm, there shouldbe someone to supervise and co
ordinate their work for the production of a consistent and integral whole.
                                                                               skill.
    Drafting the text of astatute or aConstitution is not just an art but is a
It is not disputed that a good legislation is that the text of which is plain, simple,
unambiguous, precise and there is no repetition of words or usage ofa
superfluous language. Lhe skill of a draftsman in the context of drafting
statute or the Constitution lies in brevity and employment of appropriate
phraseology wherein superfluous words or repetitive words are avoided. It
                                                                 drafting the
appears that the aforesaid principle was kept in mind while 1919 and the
Government of India Act, 1915; the Government of India Act,
                                                                          has
Government of India Act, 1935. The draftsman of the Constitution of India
                                                                that there is no
taken care to maintain brevity and the phraseology used is such
                                                                          in the
ambiguity while making provisions of the constitutional institutions
provisions of the Constitution.4
                                     PUNCTUATION
    Crawford, in his book on 'Statutory Construction', says that when a statute
                                                                        should
is carefully punctuated, there is no doubt as its meaning, weight has its
undoubtedly be given to punctuation. Punctuation, therefore, certainly plain
uses but the general tendency of courts is not to allow it to control the
                                                                     use
meaning of a text. This is because the draftsman very often does not
punctuation marks properly. It is, therefore, essential that some knowledge of
the use of punctuation be necessary.
      It need not be denied that punctuation may have its uses in some cases, but
                                                                        allowed to
 it cannot certainly be regarded as a controlling element and cannot be
 control the plain meaning of a text.5
                                                                         stop.
    The Stop.-The most important punctuation mark is the period or fullneither
It has to be placed at the end of a complete sentence which is
exclamatory nor interrogatory. Of course, in legislative drafting exclamatory or
 interrogative sentences will not occur. An incomplete sentence should however
end with a dash. It should be noticed carefully whether the final stop should be
inside or outside the quotes. One can tell easily by the sense.
 3. 'Rogets' International Thesaurus', 3rd Edn., Oxford a-d IBD Publishing    Co. Pvt. Ltd., 66
                                                                                preserves Peter
    Janpath, New Dclhi 110 001. This is the only true Ro i's Thesaurus whichcarrying    Roget's
    Roget's Original Methodology and Scheme. lot''versions and editions
    name merely purport to be the real thing.
 4. Election Commission, In re, Special Ref. No. I of 2002, (2002) 8 SCC 237.
 5. Aswini Kumar Ghose v. Arabinda Bdse, AIR 1952 SC 369.
                       159
       The commma is a malter of sense and expeicnce. The only rule is that if it
  makes the meanng learer put in a CoMma: if not, lcave it out. A COMDma is used
  to mark off a phrase or aclause when it is thought that il makcs the sense clcarer
  1o do s0. is also uscd to mark aseries of words. phrases, or clauscs. Another
  use of the coma is when a word is placed out of its natural order for the sake
  of stress. This usc is hovever unlikcly to occur in  legislative drafting.
      How far a clausc which follows upon acon1ma governs every clause
                                                                       that
  prccedes thc coMma is amatter not frec from doubt 6
      The semicolon is an important and interesting mark to use. It is
 than a comma, which is used more for a pause: but the semicolon does       stronger
                                                                                  not
 imply a complete break like the full stop. It only makes a partial break and is at
 the sanme time alink between sentences appearing on the same
 implies that what follows at least partially explains and amplifiessubject.
                                                                             It often
 that comes before it. It is often used instead of a comma when it is the sentence
 'and' or 'or' or but'.                                                followed by
       Color.-It implies that what follows explains and amplifies the sentence
 that comes before it. I is generally used before a quotation, or to
 of some word such as 'namely'.                                      take the place
                                        STYLE
     The persons who are likely to be affected when anew law is made fall into
 three different categories:
      () The persons who make the law;
      (2) Those menmbers of the State whose rights and
                                                       liberties are likely to be
 affected by the law; and
     (3) The judiciary.
     The purpose of legislation is to establish legal rules and to
                                                                      make themn
 known to those who are likely to be affected by those rules. Therefore,
 condition is simplicity.While precision is essential, as it was indicatedthein first
 opening chapter of this book, too much adherence to precision may lead the        to
unnecessary complexity and, therefore, to obscurity. In Jane Austen's novel
   Northanger Abbey', the heroine Catherine Moreland says, Icannot speak well
enough to be unintelligible.""]To achieve simplicity  there must be economy in
the use of words, directness towards the
used, and some kind of order.
                                          thought, familiarity of the language
                                                   a
     Brevity is, of course, the soul of wit, but economy should never be
to such an extent as to sacrifice clarity. [Horace                         carried
                                                   said: *1 labour to be brief and
become obscure.'" The famous French poet Boileau advises:
        Polissez le sans cesse, et le repolissez:
        Ajoutez quelquefois, et souventeffacez.
6. State of W.B. v. Swapan Kumt   he, (1982) I SCC 561: 1982 SCC (Cri) 283.
     (Polish it without ceasing and poisb i again; add Occasionally, and more
 often ub out.)
     In order tobe simple one has to be straightforward. Circumlocution of every
  kind must be avoided. Thercfore, it is necessary that a draft should be read over
 and over again and scrutinized to see if there are any roundabout expressions.
     I is obviously necessary that familiar words should be used for conveying
 the draftsman's idea instead of the unfamiliar. Hence a draftsman should have
 with hin not only an ordinary dictionary but a dictionary of synonyms from
 which he can choose more familiar words and avoid obscure ones.
     As far as order is concerned the draftsman should maintain some kind of
 logical relationsbip between one part of the draft and the other. There should
 obviously be spme order ìn the chapters and within cach chapter.
                                           PRECISION
     Precision     and   brevity     are    generally the hallmarks of legislative
 draftsmanship.?
     To be precise adraftsman must be clear in his mind as to what exactly he
  wants to say and he must also have a capacity to say exactly what he means.
( Napoleon is supposed to have said, "Be clear and the rest will follow."" This
 certainly is true to a great extent\If one is clear in onc's mind as to what exactly
  one wants, one will generally find the necessary words to clothe one's ideas.
 ÇBut, Dr Samuel Johnson, in one of his Essays, points out: "It is asserted by
  Horace, that 'if matter be once got together, words will be found without any
  difficulty'; a position which, though sufficiently plausible to be asserted in
  practical precepts, is by no means strictly and philosophically true] If words
  were naturally and necessarily consequential to sentiments, it would always
  follow, that he who has most knowledge must have most eloquence, and that
  every man would clearly express what he fully understood.' One obvious hint
  is to use simple and direct sentences, each containing one idea, for such
  precision. They may not always be elegant, but elegance, as the great Einstein
  said, is a matter for the tailor. What is wanted in law is clarity and precision and
  if elegance 'happens', well and good. The active voice with finite verbs should
  be preferred.
      There are certain miscellaneous matters relating to style about which there
  is general agreement. They are references to dates, numbers, legislation,
  spelling, capitals, symbols and abbreviations. As regards dates, the best method
  of referring to adate is '2nd January, 1979'. With respect to numbers, it is best
  to use figures instead of words, and with regard to figures the commonly
  accepted Arabic figures should be used. Unfortunately there is a tendency to use
   Hindi figures for numbers and this is bound to cause confusion even if all
  Indians become familiar with such numbers. When numbers are so important in
  international malters, commonly accepted symbols should be used. In such a
  matter misguided chauvinism has no place. As regards reference to legislation
       There are however, certain special words and phrases with    respect the    to
   use of which the draftsman should be very cautious. For
                                                              example, the words
   'aforesaid', 'said', 'above-mentioned' and 'aforementioned' are best avoided,
   and instead a specific reference to the provision referred to should be made.
  Similarly, in using the words 'preceding', 'foregoing", 'following' care should
  be taken and the    draftsman could not do better than to avoid them and making a
    more specific reference. The same observations apply to the words 'above' and
    'below'. So also in the case of 'herein' and 'hereinafter'. The word 'hereby' is
   used by a draftsman more often than is necessary; for example, Section 23 is
  hereby repealed''. The word 'hereby' is unnecessary. Words like 'namely' or
   'that is to say', should rarely be used. The words 'whatsoever',
  and 'whosoever' are also to be avoided; instead, the words          'wheresoever',
                                                                          'whatever',
  'wherever' and whoever' should be used. Another phrase to which a draftsman
  very often resorts is "it shall be the duty of". The usage is not incorrect but
                                                                                      it
  would be less pedantic and certainly more simple and exact to merely use the
 word 'shall'. Whenever discretion is sought to be conferred instead of
 phrases "it shall be lawful for or 'shall not be lawful for', it is better tousing the
                                                                                use the
 simpler word 'may'. A constant reference to 'the provisions' of the statute, is
 also as a matter of style to bc avoided. For example, instead of
                                                                                 saying
 'notwithstanding the provisions of any other law' it is sufficient to say
  'notwithstanding any other law'.
      In using the following words special care must be taken by the
 They are"and", "or" and "nor"; "in", "all", "each", "every", "deem",draftsman.
                                                                           "less
 than", "more than", "not exceeding", 'exceeding", "above'", "below", "over",
 "under", "notwithstanding", "subject to", "otherwise", "shall", "may", "'such",
 'same", "where", "when'", "unless'", "except", "existing" (existing may mean
existing at the commencement of the Act or thereafter), "before", "after",
"forthwith", "as soon as possible", "immediately", "without delay", "without
any reasonable delay'", "as SQon as may be" and "without undue delay". In view
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of the iteconcilable decisions on the Ejusdem Generis rule and the expressio
unius rule, it is best to state theclass first and thcn enumerate the items intended
io be excepted.
     As regards tcnse. the normal rule is to use the present tense for the operation
of the law and indicate by appropriate words conditions precedent in the past
tense and applicability of the Act to past and future events by using the phrase
"before or after the Act''.
    Since the 'masculine' cmbraces the "feminine and 'singular' includes
"'plural" it is in order to use the masculine singular form. If exceptions are
intended they should be indicated.
    Inevery drafting process there are five stages: (1) an understanding of what
is wanted,(2) analysis,(3)design, (4) composition, and (5) scrutiny.
   As regards the first stage the draftsman should be very clear in his mind as
to what a particular department of the Government, which is interested in the
statute, or the Minister at whose behest the drafting is being undertaken, wants.
Constant consultation, therefore, is necessary before the draftsman can make his
draft final. The draftsman should have an understanding of the background
information so that he can fit in the legislation in proper perspective or context.
The main object of the statute should be clearly and fully stated; the means
whereby such objects are to be achieved should also be set out elaborately and
clearly. The draftsman should have a thorough understanding of the legal
implications and difficulties; for example, he should know whether the
particular matter is mentioned in the list with respect to which the legislature is
competent. He should also know whether the particular legislation can be
included in the item set out in the list. After satisfying himself of the
competency, he should make sure that no provision of the Constitution     legislative
violated, such as Fundamental Rights and other Articles such as Articles 301 tois
 304. He must make sure whether prior sanction of the
is to be obtained; in which House of the                  Governor or the President
                                                   Legislature the Bill should be
introduced and, whether subsequent assent of the President is
he must have acomprehensive knowledge of the                       necessary. Thus,
procedure. Suppose a sales or purchase tax is to beConstitution      and legislative
taken to see if inter-State sales are involved. The imposed, care should be
 care to see that Jegislation does not go               draftsman should also take
PartIV of the                             contrary to Directive Principles set   out in
                Constitution.
      The draftsman should then enter the
the existing law, the potential dangers       second stage, that is, he should analyse
Constitution, and more than anything else, heof must    violating provisions of the
                                                            have pragmatic intuition,
i.e., he must be certain that the
                                   statute which he produces will     be workable. All
decisions of courts, reports of any committees,
all relevant material must be                        discussions in journals, in short,
 and other countries should be  analysed.    Any  prior attempts or legislation in our
errors committed by others. A     examined.   We  become wise only by avoiding the
                                     legislation is
made to sell." One danger lies in making a made to be passed as razors are
                                                 statute retrospective. Whether such
retrospective legislation is permissible and whether       it achieves thepurpose
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       making it rctrospective should be clcarly kept in mind by the
       statute should violate Public International Law or                     draftsman. No
       nations. I should not conflict with existing law unless   go   against the comity of
      in which case, it should be                                  such conflict is intcnded.
                                    cxpressly
      matter 1which the draftsman should       stated. Territorial   competence is another
      much power to the officers of the       remember.    The    law should not give too
                                             Government;
      should, as far as possiblc, be avoided. A the same   that is, bureaucratic autOcracy
      may affcct the interests of Government                   time, any proposals which
     kept within strict limits. Therefore, the  departments    or public bodies should be
     authorities on whom power is intended todraftsman               should ascertain the
                                                          be conferred, their inter se
     relationship and the extent of the power. Equally, he should determine who the
     persons are on whom duties, liabilities and
    has the coresponding rights and how theseobligations are to be imposed, who
    enforced. If a repeal is intended it is better torights    and obligations are to be
                                                         say so instead of leaving it to
    implication. Above all, practicability or workability is a matter which is
    often forgotten by the draftsman   in his anxiety to produce a statute which very
    satisfy his Minister's zeal.                                                      would
        The third stage relates to design. Here the
    whether legislation is in fact necessary or whether,question     to be considered is
                                                           under the existing law, by
    means of administrative instructions the same
                                                       results can be achieved. Two
   factors must be considered: (a) the position of the
   various connected statutes. If the legislation is not ofnewan
                                                                   statute in relation to
   short precis of the basic objectives to be achieved and        amending   character a
                                                             the means by which those
  objectives are to be achieved should be made. Then
  and developed. It is better to make a marginal note ateach topic must be taken up
                                                            this stage to describe each
  proposed clause. Care should be taken to see that distinct
  matters should not be included in one and the same Act. Theand totally different
  not be tenuous. Sir Cecil Carrs gives an                            connection should
                                                instance of 'he head of an        Oxford
  College, in far-off days when such appointments were
  of celibacy, who astonished the                             subject  to  the condition
                                       fellows of his Society, by announcing his
  marriage and confronting them with a clause in a local Canal Act
  him statutory sanction'. There is also another                             which gave
                                                 story:
           "More than a hundred years ago, when divorce in the
       was possible only by Act of Parliament, an unhappily              modern sense
       was promoting a Waterworks Bill for his town; and inmarried Town Clerk
      with something technical about filter beds and              clause 64, mingled
      innocent Jittle phrase 'and the Town Clerk's marriagestopcocks, appeared the
     Nobody could explain how these words got there, and, isin hereby
                                                                   fact,
                                                                             dissolved'.
     noticed them while the Bill was going through                        nobody ever
                                                      Parliament,
     fast asleep Jong before they got to that clause. In            for everyone    was
     Assent was given, and the Town Clerk lived happily ever  due  course    the Royal
                                                                   after."
    In the case of amending legislation there are
law may amend by deleting some seçtiÍn orthree types: (a) the amending
                                                        sections, or deleting and
substituting new materials; (b) the new law may completely       repeal the old one;
8. (1950) 66 LQR 216.
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                                           with the carier lav though apparently  it
and (c) it might implicdly be connectedadvisable   for the draftsman to collect and
is aseparate enncment. It would be                          amended, preferably in
clarify all judicial interprctations of the portions to be          and omissions
chronological order, and make adcquate provision for the errors
                                                                    the particular
pointed out. The draf1sman should consider which category
legislation he is drafting falls into and should draft suitably.
                                                                         which is
     The fourth stagc may be described as the composition stage
described by Sir James Stephen in the following words:
                                                                              full
             With regard to any work that Ihave done, Ihave always found it
     of mistakes and when they have been pointed out to me by some other
     person, Iconsidered Iwas under the same sort of obligation to him as one is
     to adentist. It is not very pleasant when you hear about it.'"
     Sir Alison Russel also states to the same effect thát 'every draftsman
knows what a painful experience it is to listen to an amendment being suggested
which spoils the symmetry of his draft".
    The draftsman should, therefore, discipline himself to accept criticism, in
fact he should invie it. He has to discuss the matter with others and consider the
various items of criticism offered in the proper spirit and take full advantage of
such criticism. Each draft produced must be subjected to a careful and searching
scrutiny and one should not be tired if it involves a number of revisions. If there
is no special hurry in producing the legislation the draftsman would do well to
put aside his draft for some time and then read it. That would disclose to him the
deficiencies in his draft. A draftsman should not hesitate to use as precedents
similar laws made in other States or other countries. A study of such laws would
definitely help him as a source of new ideas apart from the actual wording of the
draft. In using such a precedent the draftsman should also note if any
amendments have been made and also the case law on that statute so that he can
avoid the mistakes and deficiencies of the statute which he is using as a model.
He will thus produce a better draft.
    In using referential legislation one technique is the direct amendment of a
principal statute by another statute. The second method involves the adoption or
incorporation in a statute of provisions of an existing statute. This is done not by
re-enacting those provisions in the new statute but by merely referring to them.
In the case of such referential legislation there are bound to be legal
complications in construing the legislation, and also, when the incorporated
legislation is subsequently amended or repealed. All these must be taken care of
by the draftsman. The last stage consists of a very careful scrutiny. Here it must
be remembered that criticism of a section read and seen
                                                                  countless times
becomes hard. Drafting is a field in which 'familiarity may breed satisfaction'.
Such ascrutiny should be done by more than one person, checking, and re
checking all references and cross-references in order, not only to clarify all
ambiguities, but also tÝ correct obvious mistakes. It is true that a court can
correct such mistakes, as for example mistakes in aschedule, but it is well to
remember that the court's power is only to correct obvious slips of
draftsmanship.
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           The statute should obviously be arranged in
     then contain a broad outline of how the             parts. The first draft should
                                               various parts should be organiscd and
      arranged with sub-divisions, heads and sub-heads.  After the first draft is drawn
     up, the next stage is to draw up the schcme,
     the                                          consisting of: (a) the long title, (6)
          preamble, (c) the enacting formula, (d) the short title, (e) the
      application, () definiiions, (g) he main provisions, () provisions extent and
     administrative machinery, if any, (i) penal provisions, if any, ) relating to
     regulation-making     power, (k) any temporary provisions, () repcal andrule-and
     clauses, and (n) schedules, if any. Such an                                        saving
    clarity of presentation and it makes reference easy.  arrangement      would   help  in the
     to consider the various parts such as                    Under   this head  we  will  have
                                            headings,    illustrations,  marginal
    arrangement of sections. The real danger in all these matters is that thenotes, and
    of the heading may be utilised and
                                            construed     in such   a
                                                                                     language
    restrict the actual scope of the language used in the              way   as to  en]arge or
    was mentioned in the first chápter this is                enacting    provision. But as it
                                                      not a real danger if the method
   suggested by the author is adopted;
   clearly kept in mind then it is very easynamely,    if the objcct of the legislature is
                                              to interpret the section, because, we will
   then cho0se that interpretation which will
                                                 achieve the object. It is better to have
   general provisions first and then special provisions.
   given to important provisions over the                     Similarly, priority should be
   permanent proviSions over temporary ones.not-so-important provisions, and to
        Every Act has a long title and it has a
                                                      purpose, namely, it indicates the
  general object of the Act. In construing any provision
  can sometimes be utilised. That                               of the statute the long title
                                       being so, it is better to make it as elaborate        as
  possible. Where a long title refers to another Act, the
  short title of that other Act.                               reference should be by the
       Next comes the preamble. The preamble, like
  Act and may                                                the long title, is    part of the
                 legitimately be used as an     aid to
   necessary but proper to make it as elaborate asconstruction.         Hence  it  is not only
                                                            possible. Herald J. Laski once
   said, the preamble is at least an
                                        authoritative     guide which, in the hands of a
   competent draftsman, could hardly fail to be an instrument of
   good mneans, as Coke put it, for
                                     collecting     the  intent  and
                                                                            clarification, a
   which the makers of Act intended to                                showing the mischief
  remember that there are obvious            remedy."    " At the same time it is
                                                                                       well to
  in a concise andcompressed form.dangers in trying to state objectives of the Act
       Thereafter comes the enacting
 Parliament (-Legislature) inthe .formula         which, in India, is "Be it enacted by
                                         year of the Republic of India as follows:
      Next comes the short title. The
 of reference. Lord Moulton             function of the short title is to enable facility
necessity of always referringdescribed
                                            it as a statutory
                                to the  Act   by  its
                                                                  nickname to obviate the
of the apostrophe in the short title                   full  and descriptive title.
                                      should    be carefully watched-for The use
'Advocates Act' is correct. "Advocate's Act' is incorrect,                      example
concerned with Advocates and       it is not possessed by              because    the Act is
which would justify the use of apostrophe.                        Advocates the sense
                                                                              in
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       he statute could hen deal with the
                                          date                  of   commencement   of the
  Cnacment or of any p:ovisiOD         of thc
                                         cnacnent. Sometimes some provisions of
 a statute are t0 come into forcc at a future  late, by a
 Gazetle. If that is so, il should be made clear in thc Notification   in the Official
                                                          clause of the Bill dcaling
  With CONNEncement.
      The nexI stagc is the teIritorial application of the Act.
 there is obviously no difficully because the statute can onlyAs regards the area,
 over which the legislature has jurisdiction; but in the         operate in the area
 persons outside, as in the realm of taxation, statutes
                                                           application of the Act to
 extrateritorially. The competence to pass such a legislation must, may    operate
                                                                     therefore, be
 carefully examined by the draftsman.
      In dealing with definitions the word to be
                                                   defined must be
 inverted commas. A definition may, (a) narrow the common identified (b)       by
                                                                     meaning,
 extend its ordinary meaning, or (c) limit the meaning of a word which  has more
 than one meaning. Remembering these possibilities the draftsman should
 carefully define the words by using appropriate terminology. When the word
 'means' is used it may be taken that the stipulated meaning is
                                                                       expressed
 completely and nothing is omitted. If the word 'includes' is used it means  that
 the stipulated meaning is incomplete and that only a part of the intended
 meaning is expressed.?
    In South Gujarat Roofing Tiles Manufacturers Assn. v. State of Gujaratl0,
 the Supreme Court held that:
           "it is true that 'includes' is generally used as a word of extension, but
      the meaning of a word or phrase is extended when it is said to include
      things that would not properly fall within its ordinary connotation. But it
      may sometimes mean 'means'."
     The expression 'means and includes' should never be used because the
draftsman would then be trying to put together complete and incomplete
meanings.
     Some more rules relating to definitions are- -generally, words must be
chosen and given the meaning according to accepted usage. This applies to
technical words also. If words are used in a former statute with a particular
meaning and the same words are used in a latter statute, it is a good rule to
confine such words tosuch meanings only. Otherwise, allthe Law Lexicons are
useless and may be thrown into the dustbin. Different words for the same
meaning should be avoided and equally the use of the same word for different
neanings should also be avoided. The legislature should be reasonably
consistent. Words defined in the General Clauses Act, 1897 should be given the
same meaning and should not be defined in the particular enactment. If a
different meaning is intended it is better still to use a more appropriate word.
The draftsman should be imaginative and use words which will stand the test of
time when old words may take in newmeanings. Also, (a) adefinition should
 9. See also Municipal Corpn. of Delhi v. Tek Chand Bhatia, (1980) 1SCC 158.
J0. (1976) 4 SCC 601.
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 never include anv substantive   matter. (b) a word that is not uscd in an cnactment
 should not be dcfincd. () a definition should not ncl:de fantastic meanings.
 and () though il is generally done, it is not necessary to statc that adefinition of
  aword is to apply also to its granmatical variations and cognate expressions.
 Similarly, the words 'unless the context otherwise requres may also be omitted
 though it is safer to usc them. In Meur v. Jacobsl!, it was held that such words
 are always implicd.
     In legislative drafting parlance the distinct and numbered divisions of an
 Act are retercd to as scctions and the sub-divisions of a section which are
 numbered in round brackets are referred to as sub-sections, and cach section as
 also apart of a section of an Act is considered a separate enactment. The word
 'enactment' does not mcan the same thing as Act'. 'Act' means the whole Act,
 whereas ascction or part of a scction may be an enactment. But while referring
 to aprovision and numbered sub-division of the provision of an Ordinance the
 words clause' and sub-clause' are generally used. In viewv of Section 30 read
 with Section 3(54) of the General Clauses Act, 1897 as also the corresponding
 Section 30 read with Section 4(40) and (43) of the U.P. General Clauses Act, it
 would not be wrong phraseology. though it may sound inelegant, to refer to a
 provision of an Ordinance as 'section' and to a sub-division of such a provision,
 numbered in round brackets, as sub-section'.12
     The only other natters to which the draftsman should pay attention are the
following:
    (1) In many modern statutes, there is provision for the constitution of
administrative tribunals. It isalways necessary that the Chairman of the Tribunal
should be a lawyer, though this is not so in practice. The procedure of the
tribunal should be such that rules of natural justice are not violated.
     (2) There are many statutes dealing with statutory corporations. The powers
of such corporations must be very carefully and clearly set out, because, being
creatures of statutes, they can only exercise those powers which are given to
them by the statutes.
    (3) Every statute provides for the making of rules by the Government. There
must be provision for placing these rules before the legislature and provision
should also be made that the rules should be subject to any resolution that may
be passed by the legislature. This way, legislative control over the rules would
be effectively established. Further, the rule-making power should also be
carefully defined because there should not be any excessive delegation.
     (4) In the case of statutes relating to laxation the charging sections should
be worded very carefully from the point of view of the assessee as wvell as the
Revenue.
     (5) One of the main points of confusion which anses in the interpretation of
statutes is whether a particular provision is mandatory or directory. Very often a
provision couched in mandatory language is interpreted by couts as directory
 ) (J875) LR 7 HL 481.
12. Prabodh Verma v. State f UP4S3'*4 SCC 2S1: 1984 SCC(L&S) 704.
        and cqually the other wvay. The
                                            draftsman should (ake care to see that if the
        provision is intended to be mandatory          there should not be any doubt or
        ambiguity left. It is better to havc a definition       that 'shall' signifies that the
         provision is mandatory. In this context the
        noticed. In State of U.P. v.                     following serious anomaly may be
        held thc phrase 'shall be        Manbodhan Lal Srivastaval),       the Suprene Court
                                    consulted'
       directory. But in Union of lndia v.     in Article 320(3) of the
                                                                            Constitution, to be
        samc phrase in he first proviso to Sankalchand4, 'Chandrachud, J.', held the
       the sanme case, it was held that Article 124(2) to be mandatory. Further, in
       Justice of India' in Article 222(1),thewere
                                                words 'after consultation with the
       consult the Chief Justice.                   mandatory; that is, the President Chief
                                                                                          must
            (6) In Some cases
                               offences are created evern without mens rea and
      liability is fastencd upon    the master for the
                                                          illegal acts  of
                                                                                     vicarious
      provisions   must  be absolutely clear so                             his
                                                  that the citizen can take all servant. Such
      steps to avoid any penal   liability.                                        reasonable
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