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1. I would like to remember everyone that Mr. Lewis, a
prospective client, will be visiting the office next Tuesday.
He’ll be in the office since 9 a.m. until about noon. I will
appreciate it if everyone could dress in business professional
attire during his visit. We want to make sure everyone make
a good impression.
1. I would like
to remember remind everyone that Mr.
Lewis, a prospective client, will be
visiting the office next Tuesday. He’ll be
in the office since from 9 a.m. until
about noon. I will would (I’d) appreciate
it if everyone could dress in business
professional attire during his visit. We
want to make sure everyone makes a
good impression.
2. I called to Sandra’s office and talked to her secretary. She
said me that Sandra wasn’t in the office, but that she would
be back at 3 p.m. in the afternoon. Do you wish me to call
her again this afternoon to discuss about the new proposal?
2. I called to Sandra’s office and talked
to her secretary. She said told me
(or said (that)…) that Sandra wasn’t in
the office, but that she would be back at
3 p.m. in the afternoon. Do
you wish want me to call her again this
afternoon to discuss about the new
proposal?
Tell him that/to do something
Say “ “
3. Thanks for inviting me to the event. Would you mind to
send me the address so I can get directions? Thanks – I’m
looking forward to see you.
3. Thanks for inviting me to the event.
Would you mind to send sending me the
address so I can get directions? Thanks
– I’m looking forward to seeing you.
4. Thanks for send me the potential travel itineraries. It
doesn’t mind to me which flight I take. Regards hotels, let’s
choose the hotel in the city center. I’ll like to be close to
where the convention is being held.
4. Thanks for sending me the potential
travel itineraries. It
doesn’t mind matter to me which flight I
take (or I don’t mind which flight I
take). Regards Regarding hotels, let’s
choose the hotel in the city center. I’ll I’d
(I would) like to be close to where the
convention is being held.
5. I am writing regarding to order number CS4789. It seems
that the amount due is unusual high. Please see the attach
copy of the invoice. Could you please to review it and ensure
the amount is correct?
5. I am writing regarding to order
number CS4789. It seems that the
amount due is unusually high. Please
see the attached copy of the invoice.
Could you please to review it and
ensure the amount is correct?
6. Have everyone had the chance to review all the
informations in the employee handbook? If you need
anything clarified, please contact to your manager.
6. Have Has everyone had the chance
to review all the informations in the
employee handbook? If you need
anything clarified, please contact to your
manager.
8. We are pleased to inform that we have started making
business with a new client. Starting on February, we’ll be
handling customer service calls for a cable company in
United States. We’re very pleased that our company is
continuing to grow up.
8. We are pleased to inform you (or We
are pleased to announce) that we have
started making doing business with a
new client. Starting on in February, we’ll
be handling customer service calls for a
cable company in the United States.
We’re very pleased that our company is
continuing to grow up.
9. Do you think you would send me some information about
shipping options? I’m wondering how can we insure the
products arrive soon. We need these items until the end of
the month at the latest.
9. Do you think you would could send
me some information about shipping
options? I’m wondering how can we we
can insure ensure the products arrive
soon. We need these items until by the
end of the month at the latest.
10. Jerry, I’m forwarding you a question from one of our
customers. Could you respond answer him (or respond to
him) as soon as possible?
10. Jerry, I’m forwarding you a question
from one of our customers. Could
you respond answer him (or respond to
him) as soon as possible?
