GR 10 Eng FALW8
GR 10 Eng FALW8
ACTIVITIES/ASSESSMENT
                        Introduction:
                         Solitaire/pair/share (let learners write ONE FULL sentence for each question / then ‘pair’ to discuss with peers / then
                        ‘share’ with class and teacher – class discussion). There are no correct answers -
                             1. Discuss ‘love’. A definition. In ONE sentence write down your definition of ‘what is love’.
                             2. Are there different levels / types of love?
                             3. What qualities do you look for in a girl/boyfriend?
                             4. What values are non-negotiable?
                             5. How much will you sacrifice for a loved one?
                             6. Does money/finances play a role in a happy marriage/union?
                             7. What are the 3 most important values in a successful union?
                             8. What is ‘true love’? Can it last forever?
                             9. Can you change someone to fit into your view of ideal love?
READ THE POEM and the study the comments.
Remember to READ with a PENCIL – underlining difficult vocabulary and concepts.
Grade 10 - How Do I Love Thee? (Sonnet 43) - Elizabeth Barrett Browning - 1806-1861
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This is a Petrarchan Sonnet: 14 lines of 10 syllables. It consists of an octave and a sestet. The rhythm is
iambic pentameter – soft/hard rhythm (5 sets)
Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806 – 1861) was an English poet of the Victorian era.
Born in County Durham, the eldest of 12 children, Elizabeth Barrett wrote poetry from about the age of six. At
15 she became ill, suffering intense head and spinal pain for the rest of her life. Later in life she also
developed lung problems, possibly tuberculosis.
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.        Expresses her desire to “count the ways” she loves
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height   her husband-to-be, Robert Browning. So intense is her
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight      love for him, she says, that it rises to the spiritual level
                                                  (lines 3 and 4). She loves him freely, without coercion;
For the ends of being and ideal grace.            she loves him purely, without expectation of personal
                                                  gain.
                                                  Even when she cannot touch him with her hand or any
                                                  part of her body, her soul will still reach him.
                                                  The first line is unusual because it is a question asked in
                                                  an almost conversational manner - the poet has
                                                  challenged herself to compile reasons for her love, to
                                                  define her intense feelings, the ways in which her love
                                                  can be expressed.
                                                  The second, third and fourth lines suggest that her love
                                                  is all encompassing, stretching to the limits, even when
                                                  she feels that her existence - Being - and God's divine
                                                  help - Grace - might end, it's the love she has for her
                                                  husband Robert that will sustain.
                                                      She suggests that this love has now returned and will be
                                                      given to her husband. So stirred up is she with these
                                                      innermost feelings she goes on to say in line twelve, that
                                                      this returned love, is her very breath. Not only that, but
                                                      the good and the bad times she's had, is having, will
                                                      have - this is what the love she has is like. It is all
                                                      enveloping.
Barrett Browning composed “Sonnet 43” in the form of a Petrarchan Sonnet. A sonnet is a fourteen line poem
in iambic pentameter, the most common types of which are the Petrarchan sonnet and the Shakespearean
sonnet.
Assonance: Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds in the same line such as the sound of /ee/ and /i/ in
“I love thee freely, as men strive for right;” and the sound of /e/ in “I love thee to the depth and breadth and
height.”
Browning also uses personification in the second and third lines. She says "I love thee to the depth and
breadth and height/My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight". Browning is saying that even when she
cannot touch him with her hand or any part of her body, her soul will still reach him.
This poem was a dramatic monologue; that extrovert form that Browning was to make striki Sonnet 43 is
written in iambic pentameter. Lines 1-8 have the rhyme scheme ABBA, ABBA but lines 9-14 have the scheme
ABAB, ABAB. This change half way through may increase the pace of the poem once again reflecting the
intensity of her lovingly his own.
The end of the octet is called the volta, meaning the turning point.
In the octet the poem’s speaker lists the depth of her love through hyperbole, or exaggeration, a fitting poetic
device for a love poem. The sestet discusses a more mature love, a love that transcends all, including death.
Repetition – The repetition of “How do I Love Thee” emphasizes the intensity of the speaker’s love.
Theme – The poem’s theme can be found in the final six lines: True love overcomes all and is eternal in
nature.
Elizabeth Barret Browning in “How do I Love Thee” expresses the eternal nature of love and its power to
overcome everything, including death. Line 1 serves as the poem’s introduction and captures the reader’s
attention with a simple question, “How do I Love Thee?” The remainder of the poem serves as an answer as
the poem’s speaker counts the ways. The repetition of “I love thee” serves as a constant reminder, but it is the
depth of love, not the quantity of love, that gives the poem its power: She loves. for example, “the depth and
breadth and height / My soul can reach,” and “To the level of every day’s / Most quiet need.” The ultimate
expression of her enduring love occurs in the last line which states her love will be stronger “after death.”
Summary : How much do I love you? I'll count all the ways I do. I love you to the edges of my soul, when it
reaches out for the unseen goals of eternity and oneness with God. I love you as you need to be loved every
day, whether during the day or the evening. I love you by my free choice, like those who choose to do the right
thing. I love you without self-regard, like those who don’t brag about their own accomplishments. I love you
with the passion I used to feel for my old sufferings, and for the religion of my childhood. I love you with a love
I thought I had lost when I lost faith in my saints. I love you with my every breath, smile, and tear, and I will for
the rest of my life. And if God brings us to heaven, I’ll love you even more in the afterlife.
                        Study the following advertisement and answer the questions that follow.
   1. Name the product being advertised. (1)
   2. Refer to the headline.
      Why is the word, ‘Spray’ written in a larger font? (1)
   3. Refer to the visual of a throat.
      What does the thorny stem represent? (1)
   4. Quote TWO consecutive words to prove that the product is safe to use. (1)
   5. Why would it be important to know that A.Vogel has been in business since 1923? (1)
   6. What view of the company does the word ‘Pioneer’ give to the reader? (1)
   7. Why do you think the advertiser included the company’s telephone number in the advertisement? (1)
   8. Why do you think the advertiser included the image of the packaging of the product in the advertisement? (1)
   9. Discuss whether the advertisement would convince you to buy the product? (2)
Suggested answers:
   1. A. Vogel sore throat spray.
   2. It is used for emphasis. / To grab the reader’s attention.
   3. The thorny stem represents the pain experienced in the throat.
   4. ‘Clinically proven’
   5. It shows that A.Vogel is trustworthy.
   6. The company is good./ The company is one of the first of its kind.
   7. The advertiser included the telephone number for consumers to get more information/
      to lodge a complaint.
   8. The packaging is included for easy identification of the product./ So that consumers
      don’t by an imitation of the product.
   9. Yes. The advertisement is convincing because it is about a product manufactured by a
      well-established brand (since 1923). The product promises to provide fast relief.
                                        OR
      No. It is not effective because the information is not conclusive enough/ There are no
      testimonias from consumers that proves that the product is effective.
Activity 2:
Study the following advertisement and answer the questions that follow.
                        Section 2
                        CONJUNCTION Test
Complete each sentence using the subordinating conjunction from the parenthesis:
   1. I visit the Grand Canyon _________ I go to Arizona. (once, whenever, wherever)
   2. This is the place _________ we stayed last time we visited. (where, when, how)
   3. ______ you win first place, you will receive a prize. (wherever, if, unless)
   4. You won’t pass the test _________ you study. (when, if, unless)
   5. I could not get a seat, _________ I came early. (as, though, when)
   6. We are leaving Wednesday _________ or not it rains. (if, whether, though)
   7. Pay attention to your work _________ you will not make mistakes. (so that, unless, or)
   8. The musicians delivered a rousing performance _________ they had rehearsed often. (though, as, once)
   9. She’s honest _________ everyone trusts her. (if, so, when)
   10. Write this down _________ you forget. (or, when, lest)
Complete each sentence using the correct correlative conjunction pair from the parenthesis:
       1.   I plan to take my vacation _________ in June _________ in July. (whether / or, either / or, as / if)
       2.   _________ I’m feeling happy _________ sad, I try to keep a positive attitude. (either / or, whether / or,
            when / I’m)
       3. _________ had I taken my shoes off _________ I found out we had to leave again. (no sooner / than, rather
            / than, whether / or)
       4. _________ only is dark chocolate delicious, _________ it can be healthy. (whether / or, not / but, just as /
            so)
       5. _________ I have salad for dinner, _____________________I can have ice cream for dessert. (if /then,
            when / than, whether / or)
       6. _________ flowers _________ trees grow during warm weather. (not only / or, both / and, not / but)
       7._________ do we enjoy summer vacation, _________ we _________ enjoy winter break. (whether / or, not
       only / but also, either / or)
       8. Calculus is _________ easy _________ difficult (not / but, both / and, either / or)
       9. It’s _________ going to rain _________ snow tonight. (as / if, either / or, as / as)
       10. Savoury flavours are _________ sweet _________ sour. (often / and, neither / nor, both / and)
CONSOLIDATION   Section 1
                    7. Rewrite the following sentence in the passive voice starting with the given word:
                The 18-year-old had developed an illness causing paralysis.
                Start with: An illness causing paralysis had been developed by the 18-year-old.                            (2)
                    8. Give the correct form of the words in brackets:
                After a risky (proceed = procedure ) to filter his blood, he showed (improve =– improvement).              (2)
                    9. Combine the following sentences into a single sentence starting with the word
                'When':
                When I saw Mark again after his graduation, he was feeling great.                (1)
                    10. Rewrite the following sentence in the present tense:
                I wanted to say I was in awe of him. = I want to say I am ….                     (2)
                    11. Fill in the missing word to complete the following sentence:
                His parents were the most amazing people I had ever met.                         (1)
                    12. Rewrite the following sentence in reported speech:
                He wanted to say, ''I will never forget you or your parents and the sacrifices
                you have made." = He wanted to say that he would never forget you/him/.. or your/his/.. parents and the sacrifices
                you had made.                                                                    (3)
                Section 2
                CONJUNCTION Test
                Complete each sentence using the subordinating conjunction from the parenthesis:
                    11. I visit the Grand Canyon _________ I go to Arizona. (once, whenever, wherever)
                    12. This is the place _________ we stayed last time we visited. (where, when, how)
                    13. ______ you win first place, you will receive a prize. (wherever, if, unless)
                    14. You won’t pass the test _________ you study. (when, if, unless)
                    15. I could not get a seat, _________ I came early. (as, though, when)
                    16. We are leaving Wednesday _________ or not it rains. (if, whether, though)
                    17. Pay attention to your work _________ you will not make mistakes. (so that, unless, or)
                    18. The musicians delivered a rousing performance _________ they had rehearsed often. (though, as, once)
                    19. She’s honest _________ everyone trusts her. (if, so, when)
                    20. Write this down _________ you forget. (or, when, lest)
                        Answers: 1 – whenever, 2 – where, 3 – if, 4 – unless, 5 – though, 6 – whether, 7- so that, 8 – as, 9 – so, 10 – lest
                Complete each sentence using the correct correlative conjunction pair from the parenthesis:
                7.   I plan to take my vacation _________ in June _________ in July. (whether / or, either / or, as / if)
                8.   _________ I’m feeling happy _________ sad, I try to keep a positive attitude. (either / or, whether / or,
                     when / I’m)
                9. _________ had I taken my shoes off _________ I found out we had to leave again. (no sooner / than, rather
                     / than, whether / or)
                10. _________ only is dark chocolate delicious, _________ it can be healthy. (whether / or, not / but, just as /
                     so)
                11. _________ I have salad for dinner, _____________________I can have ice cream for dessert. (if /then,
                     when / than, whether / or)
                12. _________ flowers _________ trees grow during warm weather. (not only / or, both / and, not / but)
                7._________ do we enjoy summer vacation, _________ we _________ enjoy winter break. (whether / or, not
                only / but also, either / or)
                8. Calculus is _________ easy _________ difficult (not / but, both / and, either / or)
                9. It’s _________ going to rain _________ snow tonight. (as / if, either / or, as / as)
                10. Savoury flavours are _________ sweet _________ sour. (often / and, neither / nor, both / and)
                Answers: 1 – either / or, 2 – whether / or, 3 – no sooner / than, 4 – not / but, 5 – if /then, 6 – both / and, 7 –
                not only / but also, 8 – not / but, 9 – either / or, 10 – neither / nor
VALUES   A better understanding of grammar will enhance your language knowledge and ability. It will influence your basic
         writing and reading skills.
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1.3   Open answer. Award two marks for a well-substantiated answer regarding the
      recycling process for paper✓✓. Suggested answer:
      Yes, I recycle paper products myself. Informal collectors are very visible and
      collect paper products every day. Big companies have Sappi bins on their
      premises, reminding people to recycle. In our classroom there are recycling
      bins for paper. We also move to a paper-free environment, as many textbooks
      are now available electronically.
      No, more can be done. There should be a law forcing every citizen to recycle
      paper. People discard empty containers very easily into an ordinary bin. When
      driving around town, many papers can be seen lying around. South Africa is
      far behind when compared to recycling processes in other countries.        (2)
                                                              TOTAL SECTION B: 6
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3.1 They are used to receiving such news/ they know what to expect. ✓ (1)
3.3 She will not be able to watch her soap operas/ watch television. ✓ (1)
3.6   Eve says they have a slight conflict of interest BUT they actually disagree
      totally. The grandmother is upset while Eve is very happy about the load
      shedding. ✓✓                                                                (2)
                                                          TOTAL QUESTION 3: 10
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4.1   Consumers buying food/ mothers/ housewives/ all people responsible for
      buying their own food/ restaurant owners/ …✓                                    (1)
4.2   The lettuce is arranged in a heart shape. ✓
      The o in the word love in the slogan, Keep what you love fresh, is also in the
      shape of a heart. ✓                                                          (2)
4.3   The consumer sees the 3X immediately as it is placed in the middle of the
      curved heading. The consumer might think that products stay fresh 3x longer
      than usual when GLAD wrap is used. ✓
      But the 3X is preceded by the words UP TO, which shows that it might not
      stay fresh for that long. The 3X is thus misleading. ✓                   (2)
4.4   It refers to the footnote that states that the covered food was compared to
      food which had no protection at all. ✓                                      (1)
4.5   The product is not new, it is just an improvement on the previous one. This
      product has a 50% improvement on how it seals.                              (1)
4.6   Registered trademark, it means that the name may not be copied or used for
      any other product.                                                       (1)
4.7   Open answer. Give credit to a well-substantiated answer. ✓✓
      Yes, the visual is appealing The curved heading (Keep lettuce fresh) in big
      block letters attracts my attention. The name of the product GLAD Cling wrap
      is very clear. The lettuce in a heart shape suggests that the company cares
      about the consumer. There is a facebook page and website available for more
      information.
      No, I don’t eat lettuce so it won’t interest me. I cannot see properly that the
      lettuce is wrapped. The information at the bottom is too small, I cannot read it.
      The promise at the top, keeping food fresh 3X longer, is probably not true.
      Cling wrap is harmful to the environment as it cannot be recycled.              (2)
                                                             TOTAL QUESTION 4: 10
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 Date: ____________________________
                                        LEARNER WORKBOOK
                                                      Adjectives:
 They are words which give us more information about nouns and pronouns and make their meaning clearer.
     • An adjective is placed immediately before or just after the noun or pronoun it refers to:
         A responsible adult displays healthy habits.
         Sipho is a strong boy, but Themba is stronger and Enoch is the strongest of the three.
     • When an adjective is placed before the noun it refers to, it is called an attributive adjectives:
         She is a beautiful child.
         Sipho is a disciplined person.
         She gave me a vague answer.
         The builders laid a concrete slab under the awning.
     • When an adjective is placed after the noun it describe, it is a predicative adjective:
         The man became angry.
         Your decision was wise.
         His behaviour appears to be disciplined.
     • An adjective can often be identified by its (ending). these are some common nouns:
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NOTE WELL: VERBS ARE PARTS OF SPEECH WE HAVE ALREADY DEALT WITH THEM
Adverbs
They give us more information about verbs, adjectives or other adverbs and make their meaning
more exact. An adverb is usually as near to its verb as possible and in front of its adjective or adverb:
     1. Types of adverbs
        Adverbs may be identified by their functions:
           a. Manner (how?)
               Quickly hungrily imaginatively fast well (usually end in -ly)
           b. Place (where?)
               Here, there, nowhere, up, down, home, far, near
           c. Time (when?)
               Today, tomorrow, yesterday, now, then, soon, immediately
           d. Degree (to what extend)
               Very, quite, rather, so, almost, fairly, radical, hardly, extremely, well, really, j just,
               too, nearly
           e. Frequency (how often?)
               Always, never, often, seldom, once, usually, occasionally, frequently
     2. Sentence modifiers
        The insertion of these words changes the nature of the sentences and usually expresses the
        speaker’s opinion:
        Actually, certainly, definitely, fortunately, honestly, luckily, naturally, obviously, perhaps,
        surely, unfortunately
     • They are usually placed at the beginning of the sentence:
        Naturally, nobody owned up to the deed.
     3. Comparative adverbs
        As with adjectives, adverbs have a degree of comparison.
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Check the spellings in your dictionary then choose any three and use the adjectives in the sentence
of your own.
    a. virt- (virtuous)      g. danger-             m. court-
    b. spontan-              h. ambig-              n. tremend-
    c. simult-                i. var-               o. outrag-
    d. enorm-                 j. superst-           p. ard-
    e. jeal-                 k. ambit-              q. ridic-
    f. stren-                 l. obv-                r. miscellany-
Activity 2
Adapt each adjective in brackets to suit the sentence.
E.g. if you were (tidy) and (well-organised) than you are, you would not keep losing things.
     If you were tidier and better organised than you are, you would not keep losing things.
Activity 3
Which adverb in column B fits best with verb in column A? (Some may already match!)
E.g. explain concisely/explain briefly.
                     Column A                                       Column B
      a. explain                                    Angrily
      b. mutter                                     Thoroughly
      c. sing                                       Sweetly
      d. feel                                       Heavily
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      e.    shine                                         Spontaneously
      f.    react                                         Deeply
      g.    breath                                        Brightly
      h.    climb                                         Concisely/briefly
      i.    investigate                                   steadily
Activity 5
Adjectives formed from pronouns.
Use my, you’re his, her, our, their or the definite article in the following sentences:
     a. He had______ hat pulled well down over_____ eyes, and______ left hand was thrust deep
        into_________ pocket.
     b. I looked her straight in_____ eye and told her to take to take_____ hands off me.
     c. Phumla shook me warmly by________ hand and put______ arm around_____ my shoulders.
     d. I was severely bruised_______ legs, but______ face was unmarked.
     e. ‘We were stabbed in______ back’ means ‘we were betrayed by_______ own people.’
        At the beach they lay on_________ backs and closed______ eyes.          [15x1=15]
Activity 6
Insert a suitable adverb in the sentences- from the following words: the first one has been done for
you.
Occasionally; loosely; absolutely; punctually; extremely
E.g. Most joys of country life cost_________ nothing.
     Most joys of country life cost absolutely nothing.
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Activity 7
Which adverb in column B fits with each verb in column A?
(Some may already match!)The first answer would be: eat greedily.
                   Column A                                              Column B
    a. eat                                         1.quickly
    b. think                                       2. greedily
    c. whisper                                     3. peacefully
    d. speak                                       4. stupidly
    e. breathe                                     5. carefully
    f. behave                                      6.fluently
    g. run                                         7. softly
    h. sleep                                       8. deeply
    i. argue                                       9. forcefully
                                                                                               [8x1=8]
Learner activity: homework
Activity 8
Complete the table by giving the degrees of comparisons
Activity 9
Change the verbs in the box below into adjectives (-ing) and then complete the sentences.
Activity 10
Complete the passage by filling in the gaps with these adverbs:
Careful; gently; hungrily; quietly; sometimes; quickly; peacefully; early; strongly; tightly
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Nina was a young girl who lived more than 5000 years ago. She and her family were hunter-gathers
who lived_______ on the land. One morning she woke up_______ and crawled ______out of the
cave. It was her job to cut the grass before the wind started to blow. She worked______, cutting the
grass and rubbing it_______ between her hands so that the seeds separated from the stem. It was
hard work and soon her hands were tired. She gathered the seeds______ into a bowl and covered
the bowl_______ with a cloth. When she returned to the cave, her mother ground the seeds______
with a stone in order to make soft porridge for the family. When the porridge was cooked, the whole
family sat around the fire and ate_____, ________ Nina gathered enough seeds for the family to eat
well for many days.
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TOPIC: ADVERTISEMENTS
NOTES:
   1. Target Market
This is the group of people that an advertisement is trying to reach.
It may be divided into age, gender, social status and activities.
Advertisers use the fact that buyers classify themselves in order to create adverts to appeal to
those classified groups.
E.g.: teens, computer geeks, stay-at-home mothers, jetsetters, corporates, etc.
   2. Attention
It is vital that the advertiser grabs the attention of the consumer.
Attention can be attracted by:
     • An eye-catching image
     • Clever use of language
     • Attractive layout
     • Posing a question
     • Font (type of lettering)
     • Catchy headlines
   3. Interest
Once the consumer’s attention has been attracted, the advert must sustain his/her interest.
Then the consumer must feel compelled to read on.
       •   Visual Techniques
              • Cartoons
              • Graphs
              • Colourful, attractive photographs
              • Outline diagrams
              • Statistics
              • Unusual layouts
       •   Linguistic Techniques
              • Punchy headlines / captions
              • Rhetorical questions
              • Puns, Alliteration
              • Slogans, Clichés
              • Repetition, Exaggeration
              • Unusual trade names
              • Emotive language
              • Opinions stated as facts
              • Jingles, catchy songs
              • Jargon
   4. Desire
Advertisers also appeal to basic human desires or needs and hint that desires/needs will be
met if their product is purchased.
   5. Action
Not only must advertisers get the attention of the consumer but they also need to ensure that
the consumer acts in response to the advert.
       Gimmicks used …
       • Buy one get one free’
       • Limited stocks
       • Limited term offers
       • Money back guarantees
       • Easy payment plans
       • Discounts
       • Free gifts
       • ‘Bargain of the century’
       • Clearance sales
       • Reduced prices
       • Order immediately and ….
       Informal Language
       • Everyday speech
       • Vocab less sophisticated
       • Simple sentences
       • Informal grammar
       • Colloquialisms & slang
       Emotive Language
       • Appeals to emotions rather than to intellect
       • It is persuasive
       • Advertisers make use of fact & opinion, propaganda, sensationalism and
         bias.
       Informative Language
       • Informs viewer of the product / service
       • Language that aids the selling of the product
       • Jargon
   8. The Logo:
       Picture / graphic used as an identifying symbol
       Acts as signature for a brand
   9. Slogan
       Short, memorable phrase that is immediately associated with a brand
   13. Motivation (how the advert tries to persuade the target audience):
       How is the advert trying to sell to the target audience? Consider persuasive
       techniques (e.g. use of colour, typography [type size, type style, font], use of
       space, graphic devices, photography [framing, lighting, focus, angle, effects,
       etc.], beautiful people, star/personality, facts and figures, figures of speech
       [puns, personification, alliteration, etc.], expert witnesses, scientific jargon,
       conscience [emotional blackmail, lifestyle commitments], advantageous
       promises [freebies, coupons, etc.], promises of pleasure, gaining attention
       [humour, shock, surprise], language [brand names, key words, slogans,
       captions], logos, caricatures, animals, repetition of product name, cartoon, use
       of children.)
Activity 1
1.2 Consider the caption 'WILDLIFE IS WAITING FOR YOU' before answering the questions
    below:
    Select the correct option by only writing down the question number and corresponding letter,
    e.g. 1.2 A. The caption above is an example of
                                           A an oxymoron
                                           B irony
                                           C pun
                                           D satire                                                (1)
1.4 In your opinion, is the choice of the image effective in supporting the message of the
    advertisement? Discuss fully.                                                                  (2)
1.2   B/ irony
                                              Irony: the expression of one's meaning by using
         The caption is ironical: The         language that normally signifies the opposite, typically for
         wildlife is waiting for you –        humorous or emphatic effect.
         so that they can eat you!                                                                           (1)
1.3 Positive if you consider that it          Emotive words are often used. In this case the reader
    would be an exciting holiday.             will have explain the connotation of the word in context.
    OR
    Negative if you consider that the
    waiting could be the
    customer/tourist/ traveller being
    eaten.
                                                                     No marks are given
      1 mark for positive/negative and 1                             for YES or NO
      mark for an appropriate
      explanation. Nothing is awarded if
      the explanation is not valid. (2)
1.4 Open-ended. Accept a response             This is an evaluation question. Answer YES or NO and
    which shows knowledge and                 give an appropriate reason.
    understanding of, among others:
      YES                                     Explain how the image fits with the message. Use the
      - The cheetah seems to be waiting       PEEL method:
      … demonstrated by it lying and          P: POINT – cheetah is waiting.
      waiting patiently, possibly             E: EXAMPLE – he is lying patiently on a rock.
      indicating the joy that might be        E: EXPLAIN – The cheetah is waiting for tourists to
      experienced by visiting and doing       arrive so that he can eat them.
      a game drive.                           L: LINK – The image and the message fits together that
      - The cheetah has been dressed          the wildlife is waiting for tourists.
      with a bib – which implies and is
      symbolic for eating, thus the
      implication of waiting for the
      tourists so they can eat them
      OR
      NO                                      WARNING: Be careful when deciding to use this option.
      The message is not a true               Make sure your answers are VALID and RELEVANT.
      reflection of wildlife. Wildlife will
      not wait for tourists so that they
      can eat them. Wildlife will only                                                                       (2)
      attack when they feel threatened.
      People might feel too scared to
      travel to a place where there is
      wildlife.
1.5 humorous / joking/ sarcastic /      Tone: a quality, feeling, or attitude expressed by the   (1)
    ironic                              words that someone uses in speaking or writing.
Activity 2
    Be Stupid
    Diesel
    Are you stupid? Are you doing something particularly stupid right now…like starting a
    band, building a tree house or creating an art installation?
    Well, if so, we want you to be part of our new music video. It’s going to feature 100
    creative individuals from all over the world, and will actually double up as Diesel’s
    2010 clothing catalogue.
    However, this unique video will not only exhibit the new collection, it will also expose
    you and your creative cause by directing people to your personal website and social
    networks. This is a great opportunity to demonstrate your stupidity to the world.
    So, if you want the chance to get yourself out there, just watch the stupid video below
    and upload a video of yourself doing something that you deem to be ‘stupid’.
    Go to Diesel.com
2.1 Explain how the visual elements of the advertisement attract attention. (2)
2.2 Discuss the connotations of ‘stupid’ and ‘smart’ in the context of the advertisement. (2)
    (b) Critically discuss how the written text (on the black background) is meant to          (2)
    influence the target audience.
Activity 3
    [Text: Every 48 seconds, a drunk driver makes another person eligible to park here].
3.1 Give a synonym for the word ‘eligible’.                                                     (1)
3.2 Why would the being able to park in this parking lot, not be shown as positive? (2)
3.3 Why is the reference to the 48 seconds important to the message of the advertisement? (2)
3.5 Discuss critically whether the message of the advertisement is clearly shown. (2)
      Cartoons
      Cartoons are powerful teaching tools and can:
Other techniques:
   • Characters: Are they stereotypes or caricatures?
   • Background & Setting: Where & when is the scene taking place?
   • Language: Is formal /informal register used? How are the sentences structured?
   • Punctuation: Used to portray emotions.
   • Actions: Look at facial expressions and symbols or lines used to portray
       movement/emotion.
   • Stereotype: This is a fixed, exaggerated and preconceived description of a specific
       type of person, group or nation. For example, the Italians are said to be emotional
       and the British cold.
Commenting on Cartoons
Terminology in Cartoons:
 Action lines                        These are the lines or stripes that represent the
                                     movement of the character or objects.
Actions:
Characters:
Language:
Setting:
Stereotypes / Symbols:
Activity 1
1.1   Refer to frame 1. How does the cartoonist use visual clues to show that the mother is
      overreacting?
1.2   Why are the words gasp written between brackets?
1.3   What is the connection between the word ‘gasp’ an oh my gosh?
1.4   Is it justifiable for the mother to enter while the son is in the bathroom?
1.5   What indication is there that the boy is busy?
      Frame 2
1.6   What does the mother’s words imply?
1.7   How has the mother’s body language changed?
     Frame 3
1.8  Explain the profession: dermatologist.
1.9  Explain the function of the elipses.
1.10 Show the contrast in the actions of the mother and the son.
     Frame 4
1.11 How is suspense created?
1.12 How are teenagers stereotyped?
     Frame 5
1.13 In your opinion, is the mother’s behaviour convincing?
1.14 Do you think he is justified in calling his mother’s action ‘hysteria’?
      Activity 2
1.1   Explain how Jon Stewart’s (the man on the left) facial expression in the cartoon helps the
      reader to understand his emotion.                                                            (2)
1.3 Do you think the cartoonist succeeds in creating humour? Substantiate your response. (3)
 Date: ____________________________
                                   LEARNER WORKBOOK
                                    Notes on parts of speech
 In order to construct good sentences, you need to know the different parts of speech so that you will
 know how to use them effectively. Verbs were dealt with in week 8.read about other parts of speech.
 Nouns
 Nouns are words that name persons, places, things, groups, qualities and ideas. A noun can function
 as a subject or object of a verb.
          Use many: I had too many sweets, now I         Use much: I had too much food, now I’m
          feel sick.                                     full.
          Use a few: there were only a few people        Use a little: only a little rain fell.
          out in the rain.
 Pronouns:
     •   A pronoun is the word that can be used to replace a noun in a sentence. Pronouns include
         words such as:
         I, you, he, she, it, we, they, who, which, that, whose, what, this, these, mine, yours, ours,
    theirs, herself, himself, anyone, some, none.
• A pronoun must agree with the noun it is replacing in number, gender and case (subject,
   object or possessive).
1. Personal pronouns:
   They refer to people or things.
• Personal pronouns are always twinned with possessive adjectives:
   I do my work. You do your work. She does her work. He does his work. They do their work.
2. Possessive pronouns:
   They indicate ownership.
   This is hers, not yours.
   This house was mine, but now it is ours.
3. Reflective pronouns:
   They reflect back to the noun or the pronoun.
• They usually end in self or selves.
   Mary (she) sees herself in the mirror.
   Jack (he) cut himself with the razor.
4. Interrogative pronouns:
   They interrogate or ask questions.
• Who (which person) came to tea?
• Whose (which person’s) does this belong?
• To whom (to which person) does this belong?
• What (action) are you doing?
• Which (one) is the hotel that you recommend?
5. Demonstrative pronouns:
   They point out a specific thing or person.
      • They are indicated by words this, that, these, or those.
          This is not the way we do things.
          That has to go!
          If a demonstrative pronoun is followed by a noun, it becomes an adjective.
               o That picture has to go! (That is an adjective- it describe the picture.)
6. Indefinite pronouns:
   They refer to people or things in a general way, rather than specifically.
       • they are indefinite in number: you, one, they, someone, anyone, no-one, everyone
           One must remember to apply sunscreen.
           Everyone came to the party.
7. Relative pronouns:
   They perform the functions of conjunctions by joining or connecting one part of a sentence to
   another.
       a) The six relative pronouns in common usage:
           Who, whom, whose- refer to people
           That, which, what- refer to animals or inanimate objects
       b) They usually replace nouns or pronouns.
           This is my sister. She is visiting today.
           This is my sister who is visiting today.
           (N.B She has been dropped.)
        c) They are placed close to the nouns to which they refer.
                If not, the sense of what is written or said is lost.
                 I have a ring in my jewellery box that sparkles. Incorrect (what sparkles- the ring or the box?)
                 I have a ring that sparkles in my jewellery box. Correct.
             d) When using a relative pronoun which, a preposition very often had to precede it.
                This is done to avoid ending a sentence in a preposition.
                This is the house I was born in. Incorrect.
                This is the house in which I was born. Correct
Activity 1
    1.    A ___________ of events.
    2.    A ___________of friend.
    3.    A __________ of chickens.
    4.    A __________ of birds.
    5.    A__________ of cars/trucks.
    6.    A__________ of kittens.
    7.    A__________ of rules.
    8.    An ________ of diplomats.
    9.    A _________ of workers.
    10.   A _________ of antiques.
Activity 2
Use one of these pronouns to complete these sentences: something/anything; somebody/ anybody;
somewhere/anywhere.
E.g. I don’t like the look of this area. Can’t we go_________ else?
     I don’t like the look of this area. Can’t we go somewhere else?
Activity 1
Complete the sentences below with the word from the box
Cast; press; army; data; audience; herd; staff; crew; pod; bacteria
Activity 2
Complete these sentences using one of the following: somebody/anybody; somewhere/anywhere;
E.g. I have hardly ________ thing to eat since early in the morning.
      I have hardly anything to eat since early in the morning.
[6x1=6]
Activity 3
Choose the correct words from within brackets:
E.g. Teboho and Thabo are very fond of (themselves/each other).
     Teboho and Thabo are very fond of each other.
    a) I am going to the concert as soon as I have (had a wash/washed myself) and (got
       dressed/dressed myself).
    b) As for (me/myself) I prefer them to make up (their own/each other’s/one another’s mind)
       mind.
    c) Please (you/yourself). It is entirely up to (you or yourself).
    d) He has a ridiculous high opinion of (him/himself) but I don’t think he’s better than other
       people.
             Activity
Activity 1
Use the following pronouns to complete the sentences: nobody; anybody; everybody; somebody
[6x1=6]
Activity 2
Choose the correct words from the brackets:
   a) They had only twenty rands between (them/themselves), so they bought some food and
      shared it equally between (them/each other/themselves).
   b) They are in love- they only have eyes for (themselves/each other).
   c) She gave Ben the newspaper and kept the magazine for (her/herself).
   d) Put (you/yourself) in my position. Would you blame (you/yourself) if you were
      (I/me/myself)?
                                                                                    [7x1=7]
Activity 3
Complete the following sentences with either whose or who:
   ENGLISH FAL
CATCH UP PROGRAM
COMPREHENSION TEST
TEXT B
1.1
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Grade/Subject/Paper
                                                                                  Month/2020
          1.1.2       According to this visual, 150 000 people are employed in the
                      paper industry in South Africa. Do you think this is the exact
                      number of people employed in this industry?
                      Motivate your answer.                                               (2)
          1.1.3       Do you think South Africans are serious about recycling
                      paper? Give reasons for your answer.                                (2)
                                                                                          (2 x 3)   (6)
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Grade/Subject/Paper
                                                                               Month/2020
TEXT
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Grade/Subject/Paper
                                                                          Month/2020
                                                                                     (1)
         4.7          Would this advertisement persuade you to buy GLAD cling
                      wrap? Give a reason for your answer.                           (2)
                                                                                           (10)
by Belinda Petho
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Grade/Subject/Paper
                                                                           Month/2020
2      Aadil Davis, who lives four houses down, didn’t see the post. So, when he
       stumbled across Munchie curled up in his back garden on Tuesday he was,
       understandably, shaken. He beat a hasty retreat and phoned snake catcher
       Steve Ellis. Munchie was quickly bagged and tagged, but the drama didn’t
       end their.
3      Davis’s wife, Raz, posted his discovery on facebook and the news that his
       beloved reptile had been found, quickly reached Erasmus. But when an
       overjoyed Erasmus contacted Ellis, he refused to hand over the slippery
       serpent, concerned that Erasmus had been negligent by not securing the
       python. It was only after Erasmus had called on the Honeydew police to
       assist that Munchie was finally reunited with his main squeeze.
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Grade/Subject/Paper
                                                                           Month/2020
        5.1.3         Doors and windows were firmly shut in case the giant reptile (1)
                      slithered in for a suprise visit.
        5.2           Refer to paragraph 1. Write out 3m in words.                 (1)
WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF BRITAIN’S ANNUAL RAINFALL FELL IN ONE GIANT DROP?
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Grade/Subject/Paper
                                                                              Month/2020
Britain receives 1 200mm of rain per           As the drops hits the ground and the
year. If you could form it into one single     water falls downwards, it will be forced
drop, it would be 8km across. From a           sideways to form a supersonic tidal
typical cloud height of 2000m, the             wave over a kilometre high. Every tree
raindrop would take 30 seconds to fall         and building in the whole of England will
and would be travelling at 300km per           be flooded.
hour when it hit the ground.
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                                        ENG                                                    LANGUAGE: PARTS
 GRADE 10                SUBJECT        FAL          WEEK           Lesson TOPIC               OF SPEECH
                                                                      9                        VERBS
   Date: ____________________________
                                       LEARNER WORKBOOK
   Notes on verbs
   A verb is a ‘doing’ word or an’ action’ in the sentence.
Irregular verbs do not follow this pattern. their past tense is different.
                                                     Irregular verbs
                               Irregular verbs do not follow the usual patterns.
PRESENT        PAST          PAST       PRESENT         PAST          PAST       PRESENT           PAST            PAST
                          PARTICIP                                 PARTICIP                                     PARTICIP
                              LE                                       LE                                           LE
 Today       Yesterday     I have…        Today      Yesterday      I have…        Today         Yesterday       I have…
  I…            I…                         I…           I…                          I…              I…
  am                                      steal                                       lie
                                                                                  (down)
awake                                    swim                                        lay
                                                                                   (table,
                                                                                    egg)
 bear                                     take                                    lie (tell)
 begin                                    tear                                      hang
                                                                                 (people)
 bite                                    throw                                      hang
                                                                                 (things)
 blow                                     wear                                      flow
                                                                                   (river)
 break                                    write                                  fly (bird)
 drink                                   freeze                                      flee
                                                                                 (prisone
                                                                                       r)
 forget                                 spring                                    speak
  give                                  forgive
choose                                     do
  draw                                    ride
   eat                                    see
   go                                    shake
 know                                     sing
        b. FINITE VERBS:
   A finite verb can stand on its own and does not need an auxiliary (helping) verb.
   A finite verb must have a subject, number (singular or plural) and tense.
        ❖ together with the subject, it makes a complete sentence:
            She plays. They argue.
        ❖ it indicates number:
            The girl (one) plays netball. The girls (many) play netball.
        ❖ it has tense :
            Today I play. Yesterday I played. Tomorrow I shall play.
       c. THE INFINITE:
   When a verb is preceded by a to, it is known as the infinite:
   To play to argue to study to discuss
               I and we - SHALL
               Everybody else-WILL
                                   PAST                            PRESENT                          FUTURE
                     Yesterday, - ago, last - , the       Always, usually, often, ever,   Tomorrow, next- , soon,
             Time    previous - , once upon a time, an    never, sometimes, once a        presently, in a month’s time,
                     hour ago                             day, every year                 in future, shortly.
                     2nd column – all persons             1st column+ s (he/she/it)       Will/shall + 1st column
                     e.g We sang songs                    I always do my work.            We shall sing songs.
             Form
                         She won a race.                  She always wins the race.       She will run a race.
INDEFINITE
                     Did we sing songs?                   Does she always win the         Will she run a race?
                     Did she win a race?                  race?
                     Add not after did + 1st              Add not after do/does+1st       Add not after will/shall
                     We didn’t sing songs                 I don’t always so my work.      We shall not sing songs.
             Neg
                     She didn’t win a race.               She doesn’t always win.         She won’t run a race.
                     We sang songs, didn’t we?            I do my work, don’t I?          We shall sing songs, shan’t
                     She didn’t win, did she?             She doesn’t win, does she?      we?
             Tag
                                                                                          winning.
                     Were we singing?                     Am I writing?                   Will she be winning…?
             Quest
                     Add not after was/were               Add not after is/are.           Add not after will/shall.
                     We weren’t singing.                  I am not writing.               They will not be running.
             Neg
                                                                                          she?
                     By a certain time in the past,       Just, already, after, when      By a certain time in the
                     After, when. Before (in past)        before, since                   future. By ten tonight, by
             Time
                                                                                          seven tomorrow.
                     HAD + 3rd column                     Has/ have +3rd column           Shall/will+ have + 3rd
                     By ten last night he had written a   You have just eaten an          By tomorrow they will have
                     letter.                              apple.                          eaten.
             Form
                                                          book.
                     Had he written a letter…?            Have you eaten an …?            Will they have eaten …?
             Quest
                     He hadn’t written a letter.          He hasn’t bought the book       They won’t have eaten.
             Neg
                     He had written a letter, hadn’t      He hasn’t bought, has he?       I shall have eaten, shan’t I?
                     he? They hadn’t done it, had         They have eaten, haven’t        They will have eaten, won’t
             Tag
            Activity 1
Provide the correct form of the verb in bracket:
On that day, Botshelo had been (walk) home with George when George (start) talking
about inappropriate things. Botshelo had been (feel) uncomfortable for a while, but (to
be) reluctant to say anything. She (do) not want to seem rude or silly. Botshelo’s
silence caused George to think that she (may) be interested in him. He (want) to touch
her, but she decided to listen to the warning of her inner voice. Botshelo’s
independence (help) her to take a stand- she (tell) George that she was not interested
in him and that he (has) to leave her alone.
                                                                               [10]
Good afternoon, listeners. I (speak) to you form the Potchefstroom Stadium where
some of the overseas competitors are preparing for next week’s games. At this
moment Caster Semenya (run) at top speed. Two her teammates (dart) over some
hurdles. Close to the popular stand an athlete (hurl) the javelin and a long jumper
(work) hard to improve her strides.
I must say, ladies and gentleman, when I paid the track a visit last week I never
(think) that the Games (will take) place here. Gardeners (still plant) the lawn and
builders (erect) temporary seats. They expect (test) the electronic timing apparatus.
In short, everything (be) in confusion.
The situation (change) a great deal since then. When I broadcast to you next week
thousands of spectators (watch) a number of great athletes who (try) very hard
indeed. Thousands of people (sit) in front of their television sets, (watch) live
broadcast. I hope most of you (hold) thumbs for our own athletes.
                                                                          [TOTAL: 17]
SUBJECT and GRADE              English FAL Grade 10
TERM 2                         Indicate the week(s) e.g. Week 1 (2-3 periods)
TOPIC                          Poetry – reading/listening/writing
AIMS OF LESSON                 Understanding and analyzing poetry – literature study
RESOURCES                      Paper based resources - HANDOUT                              Digital resources
(Indicate what will be used    Refer learners to specific Sections / Topics/ Pages in the Refer to the relevant digital resources e.g. links on the WCED
in the lesson e.g. textbook,   textbook / resources that learners will have on hand          ePortal
Mind the Gap, etc)             (e.g. Mind the Gap)
INTRODUCTION                       • Have knowledge of the genre – poetry.
                                   • Purpose of lesson (further learning and/or functioning in the world) – understanding the aesthetics of
                                       literature – the reasons for the writing of specific poems. Understand the themes.
CONCEPTS AND SKILLS                • Need to be able to read poetry correctly – according to              CAN YOU?
                                       punctuation.                                                       Need to understand the background leading to
                                   • Need to understand the vocabulary used.                              the writing of literature. – see notes in activities.
                                                                                                          This is a form of informal assessment
ACTIVITIES/ASSESSMENT          Do activity on worksheet provided or in writing book.
                               Poetry lesson could include ‘solitaire’ – self study, ‘pair’ – work with peer, ‘share’ – work with teacher and class.
READ THE POEM – use pencil to underline words / sections that you do not understand.
POEM - Handcuffs Mbuyiseni Oswald Mtshali
1.   Handcuffs
2.   have steel fangs
3.   whose bite is more painful
4.   than a whole battalion
5.   of fleas.
9. How can I?
10. my wrists
11. are manacled.
12. My mind
13. is caged.
14. My soul
15. is shackled.
Enjambment – run-on lines used show desperation and anxiety. Read lines according to the punctuation
marks. The short lines make the massage more direct.
1. Handcuffs                                    Handcuffs – metaphor: Compared to wild animal /
2. have steel fangs                             dangerous. Even more extreme – these teeth are made of
3. whose bite is more painful                   steel. Connotation of unbending, unyielding, man-made
4. than a whole battalion                       device.
5. of fleas.                                    Handcuffs - personification: ‘bite’ – inflicting pain.
                                                Metaphor – extended to ‘battalion of fleas’. This describes
                                                the intense irritation and suffering of being constrained by
                                                handcuffs. The number is compared to a battalion – this
                                                suggest an army in numbers and implies that the pain
                                                seemed to be applied with military precision and
                                                determination.
                                                The handcuffs hurt him and ‘bites’ into the skin of his wrists
                                                as if an army of fleas were attacking (biting) him.
6. Though the itch in my heart                  Feeling of unrest/sadness/anxiety gets worse.
7. grows deeper and deeper                      Metaphor – FLEAS are PEOPLE’S SUFFERING (‘I cannot
8. I cannot scratch.                            scratch’). He is powerless/can’t do anything to relieve the
                                                situation of his time. (Apartheid).
                                                Sense of helplessness – even hopelessness.
9. How can I?                                     Rhetorical question: emphasizing helplessness.
10. my wrists                                     Manacled - Metaphor: chained/confined – Apartheid does
11. are manacled.                                 not allow him to think/speak freely.
                                                  Feeling of hopelessness: Handcuffs are hurting, hands bound
                                                  – can’t do anything about it.
12. My mind                                       Moves from wrists (physical) to his mind (mental). His mind
13. is caged.                                     is also prevented from being free – Metaphor: caged /
                                                  locked up like an animal. Controlled.
14. My soul                                       Even his spirit is restricted and controlled. No freedom of
15. is shackled.                                  expressing own wishes, desires, feelings.
                                                  Alliteration: soul is shackled - a sorrowful/ mournful ‘s’
                                                  sound.
16.   I can only grimace at the ethereal cloud,   Last sentence ironically introduces a glimmer of hope. He
17.   a banner billowing in the sky, emblazoned   frowns as he observes the ghostly, unreal clouds inscribed
18.   ‘Have hope, brother,                        with a message of hope – a silver lining. The message if
19.   despair is for the defeated.’               hope is presented to counteract the feeling of despair. The
                                                  encouragement is to not despair, but to continue the battle
                                                  for freedom, because by showing despair, you show defeat.
                                                  “Brother” indicates the closeness and support for the
        ‘Have hope, brother,                      situation that he finds himself in at this stage.
                                                  The use of alliteration as internal rhythm indicates that the
 despair is for the defeated.’                    poet is back on track – things are becoming more orderly.
                                                  He knows what to do.
                                                  Alliteration : the harsher ‘b’ sound showing determination -
                                                  banner billowing in the sky, emblazoned …
                                                       • Have hope
                                                       • despair is for the defeated.’ (hard ‘d’ sound)
MORE NOTES ON THE POEM
SUMMARY
The poem describes the physical and mental suffering of someone during Apartheid. It could be a protestor who has
actually been put in handcuffs by the police, or it could be anyone who feels emotionally trapped and helpless.
Literal: the handcuffs feel painful because they were put on too tightly.
Figurative: the pain described is also emotional suffering. The handcuffs are a symbol (a physical thing that stands for an
idea) of the lack of political freedom for black people in South Africa before 1994.
The poem details the intense frustration of the speaker because he has no freedom. It ends with the person trying to
inspire himself not to give up his struggle for liberation (freedom).
SETTING
The poem was written in the 1970s, a time when people of colour in South Africa were suffering under Apartheid, and
liberation (freedom) seemed a long way off. People had to encourage one another through protesting, marches, theatre
and poetry. Mtshali wrote his protest poetry to help other activists (fighters against Apartheid) remember that they
were fighting for everyone’s freedom, and to not give up hope for change.
This is a protest poem written in free verse.
CHARACTERISTICS
The poem has many short lines. This helps to make its message more blatant (direct) and powerful.
WORD BASIC DEFINITION
     • battalion (n.) A battalion is an organised group of soldiers, ready for battle. In the poem, the poet compares his
          handcuffs to a whole battalion of fleas.
     • to billow (v.) When something billows, it moves and swells like a wave or a cloud. The poet means that he sees
          a banner moving in the sky. He is probably imaging it, but people did use banners like these to speak out
          against Apartheid.
     • emblazoned (adj.) Emblazoned means decorated or written. The poet sees (possibly imagines) a banner with a
          motto (saying) written on it, reminding him to have hope.
     • ethereal (adj.) Ethereal means airy or ghostly, without form. Mtshali imagines the cloud above him floating and
          changing shape.
     • fangs (n.) Fangs are sharp animal teeth. The poet means that the handcuffs around his wrist feel like an
          animal’s teeth, biting him.
     • to grimace (v.) A grimace is when you frown or pull an ugly face. Often when people are lifting something
          heavy, the effort makes them grimace. The poet is trying to show that he is suffering. It is affecting him, but he
          is trying to bear it.
    •    manacled (v.) Manacles are iron handcuffs for prisoners’ wrists. Mtshali’s wrists are trapped (manacled) inside
         the handcuffs. He feels manacled in other ways too – he feels trapped without real freedom.
    •    shackled (v.) Shackles are thick iron rings for prisoners’ ankles (like handcuffs for the feet). The poet feels
         completely trapped as his soul is shackled.
VOICE: The tone of the speaker’s voice is angry but determined. He has hope that one day he will find freedom. He is
challenging the oppressors with the pain they are causing, and also sharing his pain with the fellow protestors. In trying
to inspire himself, he is also trying to inspire others like him, who are suffering and fighting.
THEMES AND EVIDENCE OF THEMES IN TEXT
SYMBOLS OF OPPRESSION (THINGS THAT REPRESENT OPPRESSION) Mtshali uses an extended (long) metaphor to talk
about physical and emotional / spiritual suffering. The poet uses handcuffs as a physical symbol of oppression.
Hundreds of years ago slaves literally wore manacles and shackles, so they would not escape. The speaker might go to
jail, but he also feels as if he is trapped in his life because he is treated badly. He is in a figurative (spiritual or emotional)
prison too. Under Apartheid, black people had no civil rights, and were disrespected. His liberty (freedom) has been
taken away by the white government.
EVIDENCE OF THEME IN TEXT The speaker in the poem is a black man who has been arrested by the Apartheid police for
protesting. This is why he is wearing handcuffs. ‘my wrists / are manacled’ (lines 10–11) tells us that the speaker feels
that he is helpless. He cannot do anything to help himself because he is wearing handcuffs. ‘My mind / is caged’ (lines
12–13) tells us that Apartheid is not only physically (of the body) damaging, but oppression affects people mentally too.
The speaker has no freedom to do with his education, his work, his friends, or where he lives, nor is he able to speak out
about his situation. This injustice and constant oppression causes people to feel despair and hopelessness. ‘My soul / is
shackled’ (lines 14–15) also tells us that people felt emotionally damaged by Apartheid. They are unable to think of a
way to respect themselves or get their rights back. He is feeling great despair. When the speaker says ‘the itch in my
heart / grows deeper and deeper’ (lines 6–7), it tells us that the speaker is frustrated. It is very hard not to scratch an
itch. His frustration at his situation grows worse every day. Although he is fighting against the unjust system, change still
seems far away: he feels like there is nothing he can do.
THEME 2 - HOPE AND COURAGE (BRAVERY) Even though his life is very difficult, the speaker keeps thinking about how
to resist (stand up to) and change his situation. He is brave (courageous) because he suffers physically in the handcuffs:
the metal cuts into his wrists. The speaker shows courage because he thinks of the other activists who are also suffering.
He writes the poem to encourage them not to give up the fight for equal rights. He is brave because even though he is
just one person, he criticises (speaks against) the Apartheid government, despite it having the power to jail him. His
attitude is determined and passionate. He will not give up the fight for justice and what he believes in.
DICTION / FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
1 METAPHOR: A metaphor directly compares two things. There are usually two meanings – one literal, physical
meaning, and one figurative or deeper meaning.
    • ‘steel fangs’ (line 2) compares the handcuffs to the teeth of an animal / snake. The handcuffs are tight around
         his wrists: the metal of the handcuffs is breaking his skin. The image helps us to imagine how vicious and sore
         the handcuffs are, like an animal’s bite.
    • ‘the itch in my heart’ (line 6): This metaphor is a figurative, emotional ‘itch’ (irritation / frustration / desire). It is
         compared to the literal, physical itch felt from a flea bite. Fleas were mentioned in the stanza before. This is an
         extended metaphor, as it carries over more than one line.
    • ‘My mind / is caged’ (lines 12–13) uses the image of captivity. Animals are usually put in cages, to keep them
         from attacking humans. The speaker is saying that his ideas of equality are dangerous to the Apartheid system.
         The government is trying to keep the speaker from spreading his ideas of equality, because then it would lose
         power. But the speaker is also saying that he feels trapped and helpless. He is thinking the same angry thoughts
         about injustice over and over again, like an animal pacing inside a cage.
    • ‘a banner billowing in the sky’ (line 17) compares a cloud to a banner (a message painted onto cloth or
         cardboard). Protestors on a march usually hold banners to get their message across to the people watching. The
         speaker imagines the message or slogan over his head, like a cloud. It is probably not really there, but the idea
         helps to inspire him to have hope that things will change.
2 ALLITERATION: Alliteration is the repetition of consonant sounds (usually at the beginning of words).
     • ‘despair is for the defeated’ (line 19): The repetition of the hard / d / sound helps to reinforce the tough,
          persevering attitude of the speaker.
     • ‘a banner billowing in the sky, emblazoned’ (line 17): The repeated / b / sound helps the reader to imagine the
          strong movement of the cloud. A cloud is not dangerous by itself, but it appears before a storm to tell you that
          a storm is coming. The hidden metaphor here is that a change in government is coming, like a cloud before a
          storm.
3 RHETORICAL QUESTION: A rhetorical question is not a real question but a literary device. It is a question which does
not expect or need an answer. The poet asks a question but then answers it himself. In the line, ‘How can I?’ (line 9), the
speaker asks himself how he can scratch ‘the itch in his heart’ (line 6). He then goes on to say that he cannot give
himself relief, because his hands are manacled (handcuffed). The speaker is pointing out how trapped and helpless he
feels. Both his mind (his personality and ideas) and his body have been damaged by the systems of oppression under
Apartheid.
                NOW DO THE FOLLOWING SAMPLE EXAM QUESTIONS
                Read the poem and answer the questions that follow it: Handcuffs Mbuyiseni Oswald Mtshali
                    1. Refer to the whole poem:
                1.1 In your own words, describe why the speaker is suffering physically (in his body).              [2]
                1.2 Quote one word from the first stanza that supports the idea that he is suffering physically.    [1]
                    2. Refer to stanza 1:
                2.1 Explain the literal and figurative meanings of ‘Handcuffs / have steel fangs’.                  [3]
                2.2 In your opinion, is this an effective comparison? Provide reasons for your answer.              [3]
                    3. Explain why the speaker feels that the ‘itch’ is growing ‘deeper and deeper’?                [2]
                (extra questions: - comment on structure of poem / comment on the use of the extended
                metaphor / comment on the use of alliteration / etc.)
CONSOLIDATION       •   Link to lesson aims – broader understanding of the poem – protest poetry.
                    •   Understanding
                    •   Indicate how this will prepare for next lesson(s) OR how this lesson consolidates a topic
                    •   Thank learner and/or motivate him or her
                        HANDOUT -TASK
                        Method:
                        •       Identify facts answering the actual question.
                        •       Underline in pencil/pen.
                        •       Keep re-reading the purpose/question after each point.
                        •       In good writing – ONE main point per paragraph.
                        Instructions for summary:
                        List SEVEN reasons that can be used to advertise Zwelihle to people wanting to move to the Cape.
                        1. Your summary must be written in point form.
                        2. List your SEVEN 7 points in full sentences, using no more than 70 words.
                        3. Number your sentences - 1 to 7.
                        4. Write only one point per sentence.
                        5. Use your OWN words as far as possible.
                        6. Indicate the number of words used in brackets at the end of your summary.
TEXT to summarise
If you are looking for a delightful place to raise a family, then it is sometimes important to research the area before
considering a move. There is one option that could be considered, viz. the Overberg region which is situated in the
Western Cape. One place to consider could be Zwelihle.
Zwelihle is next to the sea. That is the beauty of it. The Atlantic Ocean is right on the doorstep of Zwelihle. Here people
can stroll next to the sea or catch fish.
Although the town developed rather quickly, it is also close to all the necessary shopping centres. This is a huge
advantage because all essential shops are within walking distance. On weekends the shops at Gate Way and the Whale
Coast Mall are crowded with people doing their grocery shopping.
Education is important. Zwelihle PS and Qhayiya SS are just two of the schools that serve the growing need for basic
education. Qhayiya SS is an oversubscribed school and the classes service many learners. However, dedicated
teachers, such as Ms Mdoda, are concerned and motivated to the task of educating the learners. Qhayiya SS is proud to
report that in 2017 there was a pass rate in Grade 12 of over 83%.
As you approach Zwelihle, you notice the soccer fields which form part of the Zwelihle recreational facilities. Here
there are important matches played during weekends and sometimes during weekday afternoons. There are other
recreation features in the area such as swimming, surfing, diving and hiking (Hoy’s Koppie). Such activities keep you fit
and healthy.
An aspect that is often taken for granted is that of infrastructure and service provision, such as roads, electricity, water
and waste removal. Zwelihle forms part of the Overstrand Municipality which has to ensure that these services are
available. The stability of such services makes the area secure to live in. Unfortunately, there is a housing crisis which
will hopefully be resolved.
The Zwelihle residents have the reputation of being exceptionally friendly. The friendliness can be seen by the positive
attitude of the residents and their willingness to assist wherever they can. A Zwelihle smile is famous in the Hermanus
region.
                The mountains play a role in making the climate of this area unique. The climate is ideal for residents of the Zwelihle-
                Hermanus region. It plays a critical role in ensuring that the people of this region are amongst the healthiest in the
                world.              (403 words)
Once completed – recheck your seven points – see marking guideline below:
                Marking Guideline
                Quote                                own words
                Mark allocation:
                - 7 marks for 7 points (1 mark per point)
                - 3 marks for language.
                - Total marks: 10
                Distribution of language marks when candidate has not quoted verbatim:
                - 1-3 points correct award 1 mark
         - 4-5 points correct award 2 marks
         - 6-7 points correct award 3 marks
         Distribution of language marks when candidate has quoted verbatim:
         - 6-7 quotes : award no language mark.
         - 1-5 quotes : award 1 language mark.
VALUES   Need to continuously practise this skill – when reading a newspaper, magazine, short story, etc. – write down in ONE
         sentence the main point of the text.