SL: Fast food doesn’t make you gain weight!
PV: This does.
In a world full of people complaining about gaining weight, are you struggling to put on a
few pounds?
copywriting
“You should eat more!”
“Why don’t you lift some weights?”
Are you tired of hearing such phrases?
Struggling with their body image,
many people resort to eating unhealthy amounts of junk food in an effort to gain weight.
However,
not only will this not help you in gaining weight
it will also have many adverse effects on your health in the long run.
So
[a]
How do you gain healthy weight?
The key is to maintain a caloric surplus,
:
and eatingModifiez
nutrient-dense food,
vos documents à l'aide de
l'application Docs
[b]
Peaufinez vos diapositives, publiez des
while alsocommentaires
maintaining et partagez votre
a regular eating schedule and practising portion control, so that
présentation pour la modifier en
you meet your caloric goal in every meal.
collaboration avec d'autres personnes.
But who
NON,has the time for that?
MERCI
Lucky for you, our team has all the time in the world to prepare the perfect meal plan,
TÉLÉCHARGER
tailored specifically L'APPLICATION
for you to help you reach your goal faster and easier.
Click here to get your own personalised meal plan.
[c][d]
[a]Over all the email is fine but can be improved to a large extent
[b]Use a specific framework
and dont use imaginary clients write copy for real ones and find them by prospecting.
That way you can nail the brand voice
[c]Not convincing. Lemme remake that here.
<State doing what won't help__it must be a common task done by all>
<Then state what works and back it up by proof>
<Then give the incentive to join>
<make sure the perceived value is more than the cost of entry...basically remember the value
equation>
<CTA>
Sign off
[d]ok thankyou for the feedback it really helped
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