Don't Run
Don't Run
Written by
Malcolm Badewitz
206-458-0278
malkolm789@gmail.com
OVER BLACK:
HARRY
I hate the dark.
FRANK
You picked the wrong gig, my friend.
FRANK (cont'd)
Just get the lights up. We'll let the
next shift do the heavy lifting.
Harry nods. Looks down past his feet at the void stretching
beneath him. His headlamp barely penetrates the dark.
INT. PIT
FRANK
(O.S.)
End of the line.
(CONTINUED)
2.
CONTINUED:
FRANK (cont'd)
(O.S.)
Lunchtime, Harry. Move it.
HARRY
Hey, Frank!
HARRY
(O.S.)
Frank!
INT. PIT
FRANK
Come on, Harry. What are you -
The lift rises into view. Empty. Frank kneels over the pit.
FRANK (cont'd)
Harry?
No response.
A pale hand SHOOTS up from the pit. SEIZES Frank's face. And
YANKS him screaming into the dark.
3.
BEN
(yawning)
Welcome home!
On the bench seat beside him, his daughter GRETA (10). Short
blonde hair, t-shirt and faded jeans. She rubs the sleep
from her eyes and peeks out the passenger side window. The
woods cast an unwelcoming shadow.
BEN (cont'd)
What do you think?
GRETA
(lying)
Very cool, dad.
HENRY
Awesome!
BEN
Glad one of you likes it.
JAMES
Welcome to the neighborhood!
GRETA
We can't live here.
BEN
Go say hello.
(CONTINUED)
4.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
(mocking)
Looks like you've already made a
friend.
Ben and Henry exit, leaving Greta alone with James' smiling
face pressed against the window.
Henry steps out from the back of the truck, handing a box to
TESS (13), his new tomboy neighbor. An outdoors kid. Short
hair tucked under her baseball cap.
HENRY
What do you do for fun around here?
TESS
Jack shit.
HENRY
Great.
TESS
I'm kidding.
TESS (cont'd)
You'll get used to how quiet it is,
but I can't wait for school to start
up next week.
HENRY
How long have you lived here?
TESS
Few months. Dad travels a lot for
work. So don't get attached.
TESS (cont'd)
How about you?
(CONTINUED)
5.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Never been out of New York.
TESS
So what brings y'all to Oregon?
HENRY
Fresh start. It was our dad's idea.
TESS
Your mom still up there?
TESS (cont'd)
What happened?
HENRY
Accident.
TESS
I shouldn't have asked.
HENRY
It's okay. Everyone does.
Henry smiles, letting her off the hook. Something behind her
catches Henry's eye. Across the street, two boys perched on
bicycles watch them work.
HENRY (cont'd)
Who're they?
TESS
Those weirdos are Martin and... I
forget the little one's name.
TESS (cont'd)
(calling out)
We could use a hand!
The large boy punches his cohort's arm signaling it's time
to go. They pedal away into the trees.
HENRY
They seem nice.
Tess laughs.
(CONTINUED)
6.
CONTINUED: (2)
Ben grabs a table from the pile, helped by RICH (40) and
JULIA (40). A portly couple, straight out of a suburban
living catalog.
RICH
I'll get Tessie and James to help us
with this one.
BEN
Come on, we can do it. On three. One.
Two. Three...
RICH
(winded)
You're going to love it out here.
BEN
I'm not the one who needs convincing.
JULIA
The missus isn't sold on it yet, eh?
Well truth be told, neither was I at
first.
BEN
She's not around. That's why we're
here, actually, to get a fresh start.
JULIA
Oh I'm so sorry. Divorce can be so
hard on a family.
BEN
Not divorced.
BEN (cont'd)
She passed away last month.
JULIA
I'm so sorry for your loss.
BEN
It's okay, really.
RICH
Was she sick?
(CONTINUED)
7.
CONTINUED: (3)
BEN
Kids and I were out. She was home
alone. She had gone into the
basement. We came home, and that was
that.
Rich and Julia are more shaken by the story than Ben.
RICH
Who found her?
JULIA
Poor thing. How's she handling it?
GRETA
Just set that wherever.
JAMES
You okay?
(CONTINUED)
8.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
Yeah. Right there's fine.
JAMES
Nice room.
GRETA
You want it?
JAMES
It's bigger than mine, but who wants
to stay cooped up indoors anyway.
GRETA
You like it out here?
JAMES
We've lived a lot of places, but
never anywhere like this.
GRETA
Me neither.
JAMES
All kinds of famous explorers used to
live out here.
GRETA
Very cool.
JAMES
They lived in the mountains hunting,
trapping, living on the land. There
was Kit Carson, John Adams...
GRETA
Sounds exciting.
JAMES
"Liver Eating Johnson" was the
coolest. I've got a whole book about
him if you want to come over!
GRETA
(grossed out)
Maybe after dinner.
(CONTINUED)
9.
CONTINUED: (2)
James nods.
GRETA (cont'd)
Thanks again...
JAMES
James.
GRETA
Right. Thanks James.
JAMES
No problem.
JAMES (cont'd)
I'm going to add a page to my photo
album tonight if you and your brother
want to come along. Safety in
numbers, you know?
JAMES (cont'd)
There's all kinds of cool stuff out
there. But the best stuff comes out
at night.
GRETA
Knock yourself out.
GRETA (cont'd)
Will you show me your pictures when
you get back?
JAMES
Will do!
TESS
(O.S.)
Come on, squirt. Dad said we can stop
helping now.
TESS (cont'd)
(to Greta)
No offense.
(CONTINUED)
10.
CONTINUED: (3)
GRETA
None taken.
JAMES
Bye, Greta.
GRETA
Bye, James. Be careful out there.
He nods.
TESS
(exiting)
Welcome to the neighborhood.
HENRY
Later.
HENRY (cont'd)
They seem cool.
Greta watches from her window as James hops onto his bicycle
and pedals into the distance, disappearing into the trees.
TESS
(outside)
Twenty minutes! Don't make me come
out looking for you!
BEN
I don't know about you two, but I'm
starving. What's for dinner?
(CONTINUED)
11.
CONTINUED:
The camera spits a photo. James checks it. Shakes his head.
From the foot of her bed, Greta watches the woods where she
last saw James.
HENRY
(O.S.)
Are you okay?
HENRY (cont'd)
(smiling)
Liar. Something outside?
HENRY (cont'd)
(mutters)
Please don't be the weird kid with
the camera.
HENRY (cont'd)
Looks good to me-
HENRY (cont'd)
Thanks a lot. What if something
really tried to grab me?
(CONTINUED)
13.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
Get out of my room.
HENRY
Sorry.
HENRY (cont'd)
There's nothing out there.
GRETA
What makes you so sure?
HENRY
We've been here all day, and I
haven't seen anything.
GRETA
A whole day.
BEN
Expecting someone?
Greta and Henry creep down the Hall. Staying hidden, they
peek around the corner -
RICH
We could use all the help we can get.
BEN
Yeah, of course. Let me grab my coat.
GRETA
(mutters)
James.
(CONTINUED)
14.
CONTINUED:
BEN
Either of you know where James ran
off to? Did he tell you anything?
BEN (cont'd)
Back to bed. I'll be home soon.
GRETA
You think it's serious?
HENRY
I'm sure it's nothing.
GRETA
What's that for?
HENRY
Better safe than sorry. Night.
GRETA
Leave them on!
HENRY
Sorry. Night, Greta.
(CONTINUED)
15.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Better let me.
GRETA
I've got it.
HENRY
You have the gas turned up too high.
HENRY (cont'd)
We don't need that.
GRETA
Sure we do.
HENRY
For bacon?
GRETA
Dad likes butter.
HENRY
Yeah. On toast.
GRETA
Just worry about what you're doing.
HENRY
You're going to give him a heart
attack.
GRETA
I've got it under control.
HENRY
Whoa!
(CONTINUED)
16.
CONTINUED: (2)
She grips it. A searing pain shoots through her hand. The
pan clangs to the floor.
GRETA
It doesn't hurt.
GRETA (cont'd)
Get the coffee started.
BEN
(groans)
I'm going to explode.
BEN (cont'd)
But if that's my last meal, that's
fine by me.
BEN (cont'd)
Your mother herself couldn't have
done better.
(catching himself)
You know what I mean.
BEN (cont'd)
No reason we can't talk about it.
HENRY
We know, dad.
BEN
I know we haven't had much time, with
the move and all.
HENRY
Wasn't that the point?
(CONTINUED)
17.
CONTINUED:
BEN
Henry.
HENRY
Sorry, dad.
GRETA
Nothing to talk about. She's gone.
BEN
It was an accident.
GRETA
And we weren't there to stop it.
HENRY
Any luck last night?
BEN
Still looking.
HENRY
Need any help?
BEN
That's nice, Henry, but the last
thing I need is you wandering off
too.
Ben pulls on his work boots. Greta hands him the Thermos.
BEN (cont'd)
What would I do without you?
BEN (cont'd)
I know it's going to be pretty boring
around here until school starts, but
can you two promise me something?
Stick around the house today, just
until I get home.
GRETA
We will, dad.
(CONTINUED)
18.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY
But we just got here. If you keep us
cooped up, the neighbors will think
we're weird creeps that live in the
cellar eating rats.
BEN
You done?
BEN (cont'd)
There's chicken in the fridge. You
can make sandwiches or something.
BEN (cont'd)
Maybe, if I get off work in time, I
can grab a pizza on the way home.
BEN (cont'd)
Until then, no junk food, deal?
HENRY
Deal.
GRETA
Deal.
Ben exits.
Behind ice trays and frozen peas, hides a pint of ICE CREAM.
Henry and Greta work together to free it from its icy tomb.
HENRY
Well done.
GRETA
Tough luck.
(CONTINUED)
19.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
There's more in the basement.
GRETA
Nope.
HENRY
It's just a basement.
GRETA
So?
HENRY
So it's part of the house. You'll
have to face it eventually.
HENRY (cont'd)
Alright. I'll scope it out.
Henry reappears.
HENRY (cont'd)
All clear.
HENRY
What did I tell you? Dad's been
holding out on us.
GRETA
Let's just get out of here. It smells
like something died.
(CONTINUED)
20.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Help me out.
Greta leans in. Together, they pull the tub free with a
stubborn CRACK.
HENRY (cont'd)
Bingo.
HENRY (cont'd)
Gross.
He hands it to her.
GRETA
What do you mean gross? It's three
different flavors!
HENRY
Not when they melt together.
GRETA
Of all the houses we could've moved
to, Dad had to pick the one with the
creepy cellar.
HENRY
They probably all have them out here.
GRETA
Henry?
GRETA (cont'd)
(mutters)
If it's going to be a creepy
basement, it may as well go all out.
(CONTINUED)
21.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY
It's okay! Just me. Sorry.
HENRY (cont'd)
Check this out.
HENRY (cont'd)
Is this cool or what? I wonder if it
still works.
GRETA
Who knows.
ON THE COUCH
HENRY
Hey Tess. Everything cool?
HENRY (cont'd)
I'm sorry.
TESS
I'm going out to find him.
HENRY
Dad told us to stay inside.
TESS
Mine did too.
(CONTINUED)
22.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Be right back.
GRETA
Dad's gonna kill us.
HENRY
You don't have to come.
He smiles.
HENRY (cont'd)
Really.
GRETA
Good luck.
HENRY
Cover for me if dad calls?
Greta nods. Henry gives her a hug, and exits with Tess.
HENRY (cont'd)
(O.S.)
Be back soon.
Greta's eyes go wide. She throws open the door and runs out.
(CONTINUED)
23.
CONTINUED:
TESS
He comes out here to take pictures.
HENRY
Of what?
TESS
Everything.
THE CREEK
HENRY
You think he's down there?
TESS
God I hope not.
GRETA
What if he... you know.
MARTIN
(O.S.)
What, drowned? You couldn't drown a
baby in there.
MARTIN (cont'd)
What? That's a good thing.
GLEN
We heard about your brother.
MARTIN
(to Henry)
What are you supposed to be, Davy
Crockett?
HENRY
Name's Henry. We just moved here.
MARTIN
Martin.
(CONTINUED)
24.
CONTINUED: (2)
GLEN
I'm G-
MARTIN
(steps on him)
This here's Glen.
GRETA
Greta.
GLEN
Cool name.
TESS
So you haven't seen anything?
MARTIN
Haven't looked.
HENRY
We could use your help.
MARTIN
After that search and rescue mission
last night? If we get caught out
here, we're screwed.
GLEN
I can lend a hand.
GLEN (cont'd)
We shouldn't get caught outside.
GRETA
He has a point.
HENRY
Let's make this quick then.
TESS
I'm not going back without James.
Henry nods.
(CONTINUED)
25.
CONTINUED: (3)
HENRY
Stay close, and shout if you find
anything.
He turns to Greta -
HENRY (cont'd)
Don't go far.
GRETA
I'll be fine.
HENRY
I mean it.
She nods, and makes her way down the embankment into...
Behind her, the creek runs its course, winding through the
trees, disappearing into dark woods.
GRETA
Henry! Tess!
GRETA (cont'd)
James?
GRETA (cont'd)
HEN -
(CONTINUED)
26.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
GRETA!
TESS
Find anything?
HENRY
Through there!
Greta leaps off the top of the fence. She hits the dirt,
scrambles to her feet, and flees deeper into the woods.
GLEN
Hey!
MARTIN
Where's she off to?
(CONTINUED)
27.
CONTINUED:
GLEN
She looks like she saw a ghost.
MARTIN
Or that dead kid.
GLEN
We should follow her.
MARTIN
No way I'm climbing that.
MARTIN (cont'd)
You want to go after her?
MARTIN (cont'd)
Alright, Romeo. Maybe there's a way
around.
GLEN
You okay?
(CONTINUED)
28.
CONTINUED:
MARTIN
God damn you're fast.
Glen helps her up. Greta brushes the mud from her jacket.
GRETA
I'm fine.
GLEN
You were really hauling.
GRETA
There's something back there.
GLEN
Like what?
GRETA
I don't know...
MARTIN
Glen, quit playing with your
girlfriend and check this out.
MARTIN (cont'd)
You've lived here longest. You ever
seen this before?
HENRY
(whispering)
You alright?
HENRY (cont'd)
What happened back there? Is this
your idea of staying close?
GRETA
There was something in the creek.
(CONTINUED)
29.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY
What?
GRETA
It came out of the trees. It was
hairy, and...
HENRY
A person?
TESS
James?
HENRY
Where did it go?
GRETA
I don't know. It was big. It had long
arms, and...
MARTIN
And great big teeth, all the better
to eat you with.
MARTIN (cont'd)
(mockingly)
Beware...
HENRY
Cut it out.
MARTIN
The big... bad... CREEP!
HENRY
I mean it.
MARTIN
Lighten up. I'm only kidding.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Let me see that. I'm going in.
(CONTINUED)
30.
CONTINUED: (3)
HENRY
What for?
MARTIN
I don't know what's in there. What if
it's the big bad creep?
MARTIN (cont'd)
(to Henry)
Come on. I'll give it right back.
MARTIN (cont'd)
(under his breath)
Fine.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Bet you can't get farther than ten
feet in.
GLEN
Try me.
HENRY
(to Greta)
What's this?
TESS
James.
HENRY
Greta found that in the creek.
GLEN
(O.S.)
Guys...
They turn. Martin and Glen have disappeared into the drain.
(CONTINUED)
31.
CONTINUED: (4)
GLEN (cont'd)
(O.S.)
There's something in here.
Tess runs into the drain. Henry follows. Greta stays back.
Henry stops, and turns to her. He extends a hand -
HENRY
You want to stay out here?
INT. DRAIN
MARTIN
Over there.
HENRY
Is that...
TESS
James!
TESS (cont'd)
JAMES! JAMES ARE YOU IN THERE?!
MARTIN
How could he have gotten through?
HENRY
Give us a hand.
(CONTINUED)
32.
CONTINUED:
HENRY (cont'd)
All together. One. Two. Three...
MARTIN
Christ this thing's heavy.
Greta slips through them with the pipe. Fits it snugly under
the grate. Propping it open.
GRETA
You can let go.
TESS
Good thinking.
They take another step forward. And another. The drain goes
silent...
MARTIN
AAAAH!
They spin.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Couldn't resist.
His scream echoes back down the corridor. The walls shake.
The pipe holding the grate open SLIPS free. The grate SLAMS
shut behind them.
HENRY
Good going.
Martin and Glen run back to the grate and wrap their hands
around it. They pull with all their might. But it won't
budge. Henry and Greta join in.
HENRY (cont'd)
All together now. One. Two. Three...
(CONTINUED)
33.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY (cont'd)
Don't panic. There are probably a
hundred ways out of here.
TESS
(mutters)
James.
Tess grips the door handle. Turns it. Pulls the door open
with a long, metallic groan.
HENRY
He got in here somehow. Maybe he
knows another way out.
MARTIN
Not going back through here. Looks
like we're following your girlfriend.
HENRY
Reminds me of the subway.
GRETA
I hated the subway.
(CONTINUED)
34.
CONTINUED:
TESS
What's it like?
HENRY
Dirty. Claustrophobic. Dark. Right up
Greta's alley.
TESS
(to Greta)
Afraid of the dark?
GRETA
Not the dark. What you find in it.
TESS
Why don't you hold onto that.
Consider it a gift.
GRETA
Thanks.
GRETA (cont'd)
I can't wait to tell her what you're
scared of.
HENRY
(chuckling)
What's that?
GRETA
Girls.
TESS
(O.S.)
Henry! Greta!
(CONTINUED)
35.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY
How deep do you think it goes?
GRETA
Deep.
GRETA (cont'd)
Maybe he fell in.
GRETA (cont'd)
Can he swim?
TESS
Yeah.
HENRY
Then maybe he got across somehow.
GRETA
You want to go further?
HENRY
He could be hurt.
GRETA
Then let's get dad.
HENRY
He might need our help now.
HENRY (cont'd)
I'll be right there with you.
Tess drags another pallet over. Using some old wire, she
lashes them together with some old plastic drums, forming a
makeshift RAFT.
(CONTINUED)
36.
CONTINUED: (3)
Henry and Tess push the raft over the lip of the chasm - the
heavy wood bounces easily along the water.
HENRY (cont'd)
All aboard.
MARTIN
(O.S.)
Ahoy!
GLEN
Room for two more?
MARTIN
Thirsty?
MARTIN (cont'd)
Looks deep. I'll bet anything could
live down there.
MARTIN (cont'd)
I used to be scared of the water. We
had this big lake out behind our
house. One day, my dad picked me up.
Threw me right in.
TESS
Cut it out.
(CONTINUED)
37.
CONTINUED:
MARTIN
No joke.
GRETA
Could you swim?
MARTIN
Of course. But it wasn't drowning
that I was scared of. I was worried
something would pull me down.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Now the lake's my favorite place in
the world. All it took was a little
push.
HENRY
Give it a rest.
MARTIN
Aye aye, captain.
HENRY
It's our only way back, so whatever
happens, we go back together.
MARTIN
If that kid really did wander all
this way by himself, I'd be
impressed. Still have to slug him for
putting us through all this trouble.
TESS
No one asked you to come along.
MARTIN
I'm kidding. Lighten up.
GRETA
Henry?
(CONTINUED)
38.
CONTINUED: (2)
GLEN
Someone followed us.
MARTIN
Hey!
TESS
James?!
GRETA
Stop.
MARTIN
You're right. What if it's the big
bad -
GRETA
Don't say it.
HENRY
Probably just a rat.
TESS
Great.
MARTIN
What's the matter?
TESS
Nothing.
MARTIN
Scared of rats?
MARTIN (cont'd)
(threatening)
Lighten up.
HENRY
Let's keep moving.
39.
INT. CORRIDOR
Henry leads the way - air rifle in one hand, Greta's hand in
the other, followed closely by Tess, Martin, and Glen.
MARTIN
No hard feelings.
TESS
Let's just find James and get out of
here.
MARTIN
You know, I used to be scared of rats
too.
TESS
First the lake. Now rats. You used to
be scared of lots of things.
MARTIN
Used to.
TESS
Then what happened? Your dad throw
you into a pit full of them?
MARTIN
No. My cousin got one for a pet. Bit
the hell out of me. I thought I was
gonna die of rabies.
TESS
(smiling)
Maybe they're not so bad.
HENRY
What's that?
GRETA
Don't.
TESS
Maybe there's a lost dog down here.
(CONTINUED)
40.
CONTINUED:
GLEN
Then there's another way out!
TESS
Poor thing. Maybe it's hurt.
TESS (cont'd)
What's that for?
MARTIN
Better be friendly. For its own sake.
MARTIN (cont'd)
(sarcastically)
Did you want to adopt it?
TESS
You had a rough childhood, didn't
you?
MARTIN
Not really. Rough as anyone else.
TESS
I take it your parents never taught
you to live and let live.
MARTIN
I'd be more than happy to let it
live. I'm more worried about us.
HENRY
He's not wrong.
HENRY (cont'd)
If there is something down here, we
should be prepared.
MARTIN
(mocking)
Thanks, captain.
GLEN
Just so you know, this isn't normal.
(CONTINUED)
41.
CONTINUED: (2)
GRETA
(smiling)
Oh no?
GLEN
I mean, this isn't what we typically
do for fun.
GRETA
Got it.
GLEN
You're new here, right?
GRETA
Yeah.
GLEN
How do you like it?
TESS
What was that?
GLEN
I didn't hear anything.
MARTIN
Found your dog.
The howl twists into a demonic scream. The group goes white.
TESS
What should we-
MARTIN
There!
(CONTINUED)
42.
CONTINUED: (3)
GRETA
Give it here!
MARTIN
(sarcastically)
Good thinking.
Glen joins in, throwing his weight into the makeshift lever.
Greta tries to push Glen inside - but Martin forces his way
between them, awkwardly throwing himself through first.
Greta jumps to her feet, throwing her back against the door.
Glen, Greta, Henry, and Tess shove back against the door.
GLEN
Get it off me!
(CONTINUED)
43.
CONTINUED:
The steel door to SLAM shut. Henry PUSHES the re-bar through
the door. A makeshift dead bolt.
Muted screams ring out from behind the door as the monster
thrashes against it.
The group backs away from the quaking door. The dead bolt
groans. The scream on the other side twists into a pained
cry. Then, finally... Silence. The group huddles together,
petrified.
MARTIN
(to Tess)
Still want to adopt it?
MARTIN (cont'd)
What?
HENRY
Guess we're not going back that way.
TESS
We need to get out of here before
whatever is out there finds a way in.
GRETA
Nice find, Martin.
HENRY
Hold the light there.
She does.
Henry plants one foot on the ladder's top rung and leans
forward, testing it...
(CONTINUED)
44.
CONTINUED: (2)
MARTIN
You're going to break your neck. This
place could be a hundred years old.
MARTIN (cont'd)
There has to be another way out.
GLEN
Won't know until we look.
MARTIN
We wouldn't even be here if you
didn't want to impress your
girlfriend.
HENRY
He's down here, alright.
GLEN
If that's his, then how'd it get all
the way down here?
HENRY
He must've left it for us.
GRETA
What's the plan?
MARTIN
If that's all that's left of him,
then the plan ought to be we get out
while we can.
HENRY
Agreed.
MARTIN
That's the plan? Venture deeper into
the literal shit-hole.
HENRY
You want to take your chance with
that thing back there?
(CONTINUED)
45.
CONTINUED: (3)
MARTIN
Rather that than die at the bottom of
some pit.
GLEN
We can't leave him down here.
MARTIN
(mocking)
Well look at you.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Even if we do find him, we'll be no
use to anyone if we're lost.
HENRY
What do you say?
HENRY (cont'd)
I'll be right there with you.
Greta nods.
MARTIN
(to Glen)
What about you, Mr. Brave Knight?
TESS
No time like the present.
HENRY
We should go one at a time. There's
no telling how old this thing is.
Henry slings his air rifle over his back, and descends.
MARTIN
Let them go.
GLEN
You just want to sit around?
(CONTINUED)
46.
CONTINUED: (4)
MARTIN
I say we stand guard.
Greta moves for the ladder. Glen stops her. Turns around so
Martin can't see him putting the lighter in her hand -
GLEN
Just in case.
GRETA
I've got a flashlight.
GLEN
You never know. Just don't lose it.
It's my dad's.
MARTIN
You want to get lost in a hundred-
year old jungle gym, be my guest, but
I'm not breaking my neck on that
thing.
Glen turns.
MARTIN (cont'd)
We'll guard the exit.
GLEN
You mean we'll sit here.
MARTIN
Yeah.
(CONTINUED)
47.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
What's this?
HENRY
Looks like the brave explorers have
stumbled upon Tut's tomb.
TESS
Not now.
HENRY
Laughter helps me deal with stress.
TESS
Then try being funny.
Henry sinks.
GRETA
This place is starting to make me
miss the subway.
As they make their way forward, the tunnel grows darker. The
group crowds around Greta's light.
HENRY
When you were little you wouldn't go
into the basement alone without Mom
holding your hand.
GRETA
Mom's not here.
HENRY
(softly)
I know.
TESS
Get down!
GRETA
That's it...
(CONTINUED)
48.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY
What?
GRETA
The thing from the creek.
HENRY
The Creep.
TESS
(whispering)
It doesn't see us.
Greta leans in -
GRETA
(whispering)
You'll only piss it off.
Henry POPS the lever action. The sound echoes down the
corridor -
HENRY
(mutters)
What the fuck.
The Creep's eyeless face locks on Henry. Its ears perk. Lips
curl over yellow teeth. Pale arms rise - claws pointing.
TESS
I think it heard you...
(CONTINUED)
49.
CONTINUED: (3)
GRETA
(realizing)
It can't see.
The Creep's ears perk. It twists, and runs right past them,
following the rattling pellets down an adjacent corridor.
HENRY
Not bad.
TESS
Come on. Quietly.
Martin presses his ear against the door. Glen keeps his eye
fixed on the ladder. Waiting for a sign of their return.
MARTIN
You hear that?
GLEN
What?
MARTIN
Exactly.
GLEN
We said we'd wait.
MARTIN
We may not get another chance.
(CONTINUED)
50.
CONTINUED:
GLEN
What are you doing?
Martin cracks the door open. He peeks into the hall. No sign
of the monster - no sign of anything.
MARTIN
Coast is clear.
MARTIN (cont'd)
I'm not waiting for that thing to
come back. You're welcome to come
with, or you can stay here.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Last chance.
TESS
What the Hell was that thing?
HENRY
How should I know?
TESS
Was that a person?
HENRY
Maybe it used to be.
TESS
(Greta)
Was that really the thing from the
creek?
GRETA
I don't know. It looked... Smaller.
TESS
Smaller? Like there's more than one?
HENRY
This place could be a thousand years
old, who knows.
(CONTINUED)
51.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
Whatever it was, it couldn't see, but
it could hear, so maybe we should
keep our voices down.
TESS
What now?
HENRY
Eenie, meenie, miney...
TESS
You're joking.
HENRY
You have a better idea?
She shakes her head. They take off down the middle corridor.
MARTIN
Shouldn't be too much farther.
GLEN
What?
MARTIN
Lighter.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Where did it go?
GLEN
(lying)
Must've dropped it.
(CONTINUED)
52.
CONTINUED:
MARTIN
Way to go.
GLEN
What's the plan when we get back?
GLEN (cont'd)
Hey, Mom. Dad. I know we weren't
supposed to leave the house today,
but -
MARTIN
You're afraid of getting grounded?
GLEN
If they don't come back, someone's
going to have to answer for it.
MARTIN
I'm not answering for shit. They got
themselves into this.
GLEN
I didn't mean it like that.
MARTIN
Look again.
GLEN
I don't have it.
MARTIN
You've never lost it before.
GLEN
I gave it to Greta.
MARTIN
(mockingly)
How romantic.
MARTIN (cont'd)
Your dad's going to be pissed. My old
man can get rough sometimes, but
yours...
(CONTINUED)
53.
CONTINUED: (2)
MARTIN (cont'd)
I'd be more worried about him than
anything we find down here.
Glen nods.
MARTIN (cont'd)
If he ever treated me the way he
treats you, I'd fuck him up.
MARTIN (cont'd)
This looks familiar.
HENRY
How big can this place be?
GRETA
Keep your voices down.
TESS
Maybe there's a hundred of them.
HENRY
Over there.
TESS
James. He's close.
(CONTINUED)
54.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
What do we do now?
TESS
We get him, and get out of here.
GRETA
Who's stupid enough to go in there?
TESS
We have to get him out.
TESS (cont'd)
Greta, can you have a look?
HENRY
No way.
HENRY (cont'd)
James, you in there?
GRETA
Don't call attention.
HENRY
You sure you can handle it?
GRETA
(faking calm)
I got this.
INT. VENT
(CONTINUED)
55.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
(mutters)
See. They're right behind you.
Everything's okay... Everything's -
GRETA (cont'd)
No, please, no.
GRETA (cont'd)
(whispering)
Anyone there?
GRETA
James.
GRETA (cont'd)
Are you alright?
JAMES
Greta?
JAMES (cont'd)
You came.
GRETA
Easy. It's alright.
(CONTINUED)
56.
CONTINUED:
GRETA (cont'd)
It's okay.
GRETA (cont'd)
How long have you been in here?
JAMES
I don't know. Last I remember I was
in a dark room. I couldn't see
anything.
GRETA
How did you get away?
JAMES
I just kept walking. Stayed quiet. Is
Tessie with you?
GRETA
She can't wait to see you. Come on.
JAMES
We can't go out there. There's plenty
of room here. If we just keep
quiet...
GRETA
That's not going to work, James.
JAMES
It's safe here.
GRETA
I know you're scared. I am too.
(smiles)
But you promised you'd show me your
pictures when you got back.
Silence.
GRETA (cont'd)
I'll be right behind you.
(CONTINUED)
57.
CONTINUED: (2)
MARTIN
All aboard.
MARTIN (cont'd)
I'm not asking you again.
GLEN
No.
MARTIN
What did you say?
GLEN
We can't leave them in here.
MARTIN
You chickenshit-
A slow wave rolls under the raft. Martin loses his footing.
(CONTINUED)
58.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
How long has she been in there?
TESS
James!
Tess reaches in, pulling James from the vent. He wraps his
arms around her. Buries his face in her shoulder.
TESS (cont'd)
(smiling)
That was longer than 20 minutes,
squirt.
GRETA
Can we go home now?
TESS
I like that idea.
JAMES
Which way?
Greta gestures down the path with her flashlight, and the
group starts walking back the way they came.
HENRY
(to Greta)
Good work.
HENRY (cont'd)
That was brave.
GRETA
I had to.
(CONTINUED)
59.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
No, you didn't.
GRETA
Now's not the time.
HENRY
Still. Pretty bad-ass.
GRETA
(mocking him)
Pretty bad-ass.
HENRY
Mom would have thought so.
GRETA
Doesn't matter what Mom would think.
HENRY
I got it.
GLEN
(O.S.)
OW! Son of a bitch.
GLEN (cont'd)
Henry? What the Hell?
HENRY
Keep your voice down.
JAMES
Who's that?
(CONTINUED)
60.
CONTINUED: (2)
GLEN
(to Tess)
You found him?
HENRY
Shut up.
HENRY (cont'd)
You're going to lead it right to us.
GRETA
I think he gets the point.
HENRY
Sorry.
HENRY (cont'd)
Where's your friend?
GLEN
Martin tried. We tried, to...
GLEN (cont'd)
We can't go back. Unless you want to
try swimming.
JAMES
What?
GLEN
The raft's gone.
HENRY
How'd that happen?
GLEN
We tried to go back.
TESS
Without us, you mean.
(CONTINUED)
61.
CONTINUED: (3)
GRETA
"Tried?"
GLEN
Martin...
GRETA
What?
GLEN
He's... dead.
GRETA
Dead?
TESS
What do you mean dead?
Glen looks into her eyes. His silence says it all- dead.
GRETA
(to Henry)
What are we going to tell dad now?
HENRY
Nothing if we don't find a way out of
here.
TESS
So what do we do?
HENRY
We go home.
GLEN
I just said you can't go that way.
HENRY
What do you mean?
GLEN
Something destroyed the raft.
TESS
So we're screwed.
GRETA
James, you must have gotten away
somehow. Is there another way out?
(CONTINUED)
62.
CONTINUED: (4)
JAMES
There's a way.
GRETA
It's all we got.
JAMES
It's no use.
GRETA
Show us.
JAMES
Okay.
HENRY
If that's our only shot, I say we
take it. Seeing as how we can't go
back the way we came.
GLEN
I'm sorry.
JAMES
Keep your voices down.
GRETA
Please, no...
HENRY
Give it here.
JAMES
Help!
TESS
James, take my hand.
TESS (cont'd)
Hold still.
(CONTINUED)
63.
CONTINUED: (5)
JAMES
I am!
GRETA
Hold on.
TESS
James? I'm here.
GRETA
Henry?
GRETA (cont'd)
Henry?
GRETA (cont'd)
Henry?
JAMES
Henry?!
GLEN
Henry?!
TESS
Henry, where are you?
(CONTINUED)
64.
CONTINUED: (6)
GRETA
Henry!
GRETA
Henry!
GRETA (cont'd)
Where are they taking him?
TESS
We need to find a way out of here.
TESS (cont'd)
That should buy us some time to find
a way out of here.
TESS (cont'd)
What are you doing?
GRETA
He's alive.
(CONTINUED)
65.
CONTINUED:
TESS
Greta.
GRETA
They took James alive. That's why
we're here, isn't it? So why not
Henry?
GRETA (cont'd)
(to James)
James. Where did they take you?
JAMES
I don't know. It was too dark.
Greta tears a sleeve from her coat. Wraps it around the bent
barrel of the air rifle.
She flicks the Zippo. Lights the sleeve wrapped around the
barrel, creating a makeshift torch. Its flame illuminates
the area - an abandoned construction site.
JAMES (cont'd)
Whoa.
GLEN
They must have brought stuff through
here when they first built the place.
TESS
Who's they?
He shrugs.
GLEN
Whoever built it.
GLEN (cont'd)
Look!
(CONTINUED)
66.
CONTINUED: (2)
TESS
There's no use going any further.
GLEN
Careful.
She pushes, but the crank won't budge. Glen joins her,
throwing his weight into it. The lever gives. Gears turn.
Dust falls from the rafters.
TESS
If he is down there, they're not
going to just let you walk in and
take him away.
GRETA
Not counting on it.
TESS
When you're ready to come up, just
let us know.
GLEN
I'm coming with you.
GLEN (cont'd)
If anything happens to that lighter,
my dad will kill me. If anything
happens to you, I need to make sure I
get it back.
Greta smiles.
GRETA
We'll go one at a time.
TESS
Good luck.
(CONTINUED)
67.
CONTINUED: (3)
JAMES
(whispers)
Whatever happens. Stay quiet.
She nods.
INT. PIT
JAMES
(O.S.)
Sorry!
TESS
(O.S.)
That's it! It won't go any farther.
GLEN
(O.S.)
See anything?
GRETA
Just a little farther.
TESS
(O.S.)
What do you see?
GRETA
It's just a short drop!
(mutters)
I hope.
(CONTINUED)
68.
CONTINUED:
TESS
You okay?
GRETA
I'm fine!
GLEN
Be back soon.
TESS
Good luck.
JAMES
We won't leave you stranded.
INT. PIT
GRETA
Just a little farther.
INT. PIT
GLEN
What's going on up there?
69.
The door bends in its frame. Tess calls down into the pit -
TESS
We have to hide!
Tess and James push another crate onto the barricade. Behind
it, the steel door cracks.
INT. PIT
GRETA
You have to jump.
GLEN
It's too far.
GRETA
No time to argue!
Glen eases himself over the edge of the lift. The lift
angles awkwardly under his weight.
GRETA (cont'd)
On three. One...
GRETA (cont'd)
Two... Three!
INT. PIT
INT. PIT
GRETA
(whispers)
Don't. Move.
A fat, red-eyed RAT crawls over her shoe. She draws a sharp
BREATH. The Creep twists. Tess freezes.
INT. PIT
The Creep twists back toward the pit - baring its teeth.
The rat makes its way over her shoe. And up her calf.
(CONTINUED)
71.
CONTINUED:
...and SHOVES!
INT. PIT
Tess shakes the rat from her leg and scrambles to her feet.
INT. PIT
GRETA
That was a stupid plan!
JAMES
(to Tess)
It worked, didn't it?
Greta plants her boot on its neck and pushes. It's dead.
GRETA
How bad is it?
GLEN
Just a bruise.
(CONTINUED)
72.
CONTINUED:
GLEN (cont'd)
Keep the torch off the ground.
GRETA
What is it?
GLEN
Smells like the stuff in my dad's
lighter. If this stuff catches, we're
screwed.
Greta nods.
TESS
(O.S.)
You guys alright down there?
GRETA
We're fine. Keep your voices down.
GRETA (cont'd)
You okay?
GLEN
Right behind you.
GLEN
This place gets weirder by the
minute.
(CONTINUED)
73.
CONTINUED:
GLEN (cont'd)
Think your brother's in there?
GRETA
I'm going to find out.
GLEN
Smells just like the time our fridge
broke.
INT. LAIR
GLEN
What's the matter?
GRETA
You think those things were people?
GLEN
Like when?
GLEN (cont'd)
(joking)
Maybe they lost count after a few
hundred years.
GRETA
Careful.
(CONTINUED)
74.
CONTINUED:
GLEN
There's no way this junk still works.
GRETA
I think you'd better stay back.
GLEN
You want me to stand guard?
GRETA
(smiling)
Sure.
GRETA (cont'd)
In case I don't come back. But if I
do, be ready to run.
GLEN
Or at least... crawl.
Greta disembarks from the last step. Her boot lands with a
splash. She holds her torch low, illuminating a puddle of
murky, crimson water. She inches forward...
(CONTINUED)
75.
CONTINUED:
A hand rises behind her. GRABS her shoulder. PULLS her flat
against the decaying mountain.
She pulls him close. Bones and viscera slide over their
faces, concealing them.
A shape cuts through them. Pale as the rest, but twice their
size. Crudely stitched hair on its pelt. Pale snout. Greta
recognizes it. The monster from the creek. The leader of the
pack - the ALPHA.
INT. LAIR
(CONTINUED)
76.
CONTINUED:
GLEN
About time!
GLEN (cont'd)
Henry!
GRETA
Move!
HENRY
All at once! One...
HENRY (cont'd)
Two...
HENRY (cont'd)
Three!
GLEN
That should hold them.
GRETA
Not for long.
Greta grabs Henry and Glen. She pulls them forward into...
INT. PIT
(CONTINUED)
77.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
TESS!
TESS
Greta! Henry! You're alive!
GRETA
Bring us up!
INT. PIT
GRETA
Up there.
Henry rises, pushing Glen up. Glen reaches for the lift...
HENRY
Come on, man.
Glen winces.
GLEN
Greta. You go first.
GRETA
Hurry up.
(CONTINUED)
78.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Alright. Come on, big guy.
HENRY (cont'd)
Help me out here.
GLEN
I can't.
HENRY
You have to
GRETA
Come on!
GLEN
Sorry, guys.
HENRY
On your feet.
GRETA
You can do it.
Henry lifts Glen onto his shoulders, and pushes him upward
into Greta's arms. She pulls him up the swing. Glen begins
to climb the support line.
GRETA (cont'd)
Pull us up!
INT. PIT
(CONTINUED)
79.
CONTINUED:
GRETA
Keep going! You can do it!
HENRY
Just a little farther!
HENRY (cont'd)
They're following us!
GLEN
We're too heavy.
GRETA
Just keep moving!
GLEN
I can't.
GRETA
Keep climbing.
(CONTINUED)
80.
CONTINUED: (2)
GRETA (cont'd)
Glen. Don't.
GRETA (cont'd)
NO!
TESS
Where's Glen?
INT. PIT
Overhead, the lift screams one last time. Wires snap. Bolts
pop as the lift breaks from its foundation, and crumbles.
Tess pulls Henry from the pit. They sprawl onto the floor.
The room goes silent. The seams in the floor glow red. A
light illuminates below, rising, growing, finally -
(CONTINUED)
81.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
He's gone.
GRETA
He could've made it.
HENRY
There was nothing we could do.
JAMES
(petrified)
You gotta be kidding.
TESS
MOVE IT!
TESS
Through there.
(CONTINUED)
82.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
After you.
GRETA
You can do it.
GRETA (cont'd)
Faster!
James reaches the top of the ladder. Pulls himself onto the
platform. He helps Greta from the ladder. They turn to help
Henry. Finally, as Tess pulls herself up -
A clawed hand SEIZES her ankle. YANKS her back. She screams.
Henry and James run to her. Greta backs against the wall.
Alpha PULLS Tess. Henry and James pull back. A game of tug
o' war. And they're losing. James looks over his shoulder -
JAMES
GRETA! HELP!
Henry pulls Tess onto the platform. The ladder breaks off,
plunging into the darkness below. Taking Alpha with it.
TESS
I'll thank you later.
JAMES
Is it dead?
(CONTINUED)
83.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Who cares!
HENRY (cont'd)
This whole place is coming down!
INT. CORRIDOR
JAMES
End of the line.
TESS
There's another way. There has to be.
GRETA
Through here.
JAMES
What are you doing?
GRETA
Follow me.
(CONTINUED)
84.
CONTINUED:
HENRY
Thank you.
GRETA
Shut up.
Her stoic resolve melts away. She buries her face into
Henry's shoulder.
HENRY
How do you feel?
TESS
We're going to have some serious
explaining to do.
HENRY
No one's going to believe us.
Henry and Tess lock eyes as a wisp of hair falls loose from
her cap. Tess smiles. Henry braces, musters the courage and
leans in for a kiss...
JAMES
I've got all the proof we need right
here.
TESS
What is it?
JAMES
I didn't have much light to work
with.
(CONTINUED)
85.
CONTINUED: (2)
BEN
(O.S.)
GRETA! HENRY!
Greta turns. Ben scoops her into his arms. Behind him, a
flock of adults convene, a search party armed with
flashlights and rifles.
BEN (cont'd)
Thank God you're okay.
JULIA
(O.S.)
TESSIE!
TESS
Mom!
RICH
(O.S.)
JAMES!
JAMES
Dad!
JULIA
I was worried sick. I thought I'd
lost you both.
JAMES
We're fine, mom.
BEN
You promised you wouldn't leave the
house.
HENRY
Sorry, dad.
HENRY (cont'd)
Watch out.
(CONTINUED)
86.
CONTINUED: (3)
RICH
What the Hell's down there?
James hands him the photograph. Rich studies it. Julia leans
over his shoulder.
JULIA
What kind of animal is that?
JAMES
I didn't have much light to work
with.
TESS
We'll explain at home.
The front door opens. Warm sunlight floods the house. Ben
leads Henry to the sofa. Greta enters after them.
BEN
Ice pack must be downstairs.
GRETA
I got it.
BEN
You sure?
GRETA
You should make coffee. Got a long
story ahead of you.
(CONTINUED)
87.
CONTINUED:
BEN
What are those for?
GRETA
I don't trust flashlights.
THE FREEZER hangs open. Dripping. She digs inside, finds the
ICE PACK. Melted. She sighs. Turns to leave -
(CONTINUED)
88.
CONTINUED:
BEN
(O.S.)
You find the ice pack?
Greta goes pale. She thinks fast. Rounds the furnace, and
grabs the wrought iron grate...
The grate goes still. A warm glow washes over the cellar.
(CONTINUED)
89.
CONTINUED: (2)
BEN (cont'd)
(O.S.)
Greta...
Greta looks to her side. Ben emerges from the dark. His face
frozen in disbelief -
BEN (cont'd)
What the Hell was that?
HENRY
(O.S.)
But we just got here.
BEN
I called the moving company last
night. They'll be here tomorrow.
BEN (cont'd)
Do you realize what you two put me
through?
HENRY
Dad.
BEN
You could have died.
HENRY
I'm sorry.
BEN
We've all been through a lot.
GRETA
And moving again isn't going to fix
that.
(CONTINUED)
90.
CONTINUED:
Ben hangs his head. Greta hugs him. She gestures to Henry.
He gets up, and joins them.
BEN
We'll talk tonight, okay?
BEN (cont'd)
What would I do without you?
BEN (cont'd)
In the meantime, don't run off
getting lost with...
BEN (cont'd)
(to Greta and Henry)
Just stay out of trouble, please?
TESS
What's with the sign?
GRETA
Another "fresh start."
TESS
Already?
HENRY
Dad's idea.
TESS
(joking)
What changed his mind?
JAMES
You guys can't leave. There's still
all kinds of stuff to find out there.
Greta stands.
GRETA
Then we better make the most of it.
(CONTINUED)
91.
CONTINUED: (2)
HENRY
You sure?
She smiles.
GRETA
Safety in numbers.
Greta leads Henry, Tess, and James across the lawn. She
stops. Grabs the "FOR SALE" sign...
HENRY
What are you doing?
She takes Henry's hand and runs across the lawn. Tess and
James follow. Together, they run into the trees.
FADE OUT