Keats Poem
Keats Poem
Structure
4.0		   Objectives
4.1		   Introduction
4.2		   John Keats
4.3		   A note on Keats’s Odes
4.4		   Ode to a Nightingale
		      4.4.1    Text
4.4.2 Interpretation
4.5.2 Interpretation
4.0     OBJECTIVES
In this Unit, we shall discuss two odes of John Keats: Ode to Nightingale and
Ode to Autumn. After completing the study of this unit you will be able to:
•   discuss the development of Keats’ thought in the two odes
•   appreciate Keats’ sensuous imagery which is the characteristic feature of
    his poetry and his poetic craftsmanship.
4.1     INTRODUCTION
In the earlier units of this block, we have discussed Romantic poetry with
special reference to Wordsworth, Coleridge, Byron and Shelley. In this unit
which is the last in the series on romantic poets, we shall discuss Keats’ poetry
which is marked for his skills in word painting, rich sensual imagery, and verbal
coinage. We shall also discuss the development of thought in the two odes.
We would like you to first read the poem. Then you should read it again with
the help of glossary, interpretation of lines and words given in the unit. After
you have followed the interpretation, read the note on poetic devices. After
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4.4.1 Text
My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,
Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains
One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:
Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,                                          (5)
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British Romantic   O, for a draught of vintage! that hath been
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                   Cool’d a long age in the deep-delved earth,
                   Tasting of Flora an the country green,
                   Dance, and Provencal song, and sunburnt mirth!
                   O for a beaker full of the warm South,		              (15)
                   4.4.2 Interpretation
                   Lines
                   1-4     		   express the poet’s longing to lapse into a state of forgetfulness so
                                that he can give up the world and its attendant pain and fly into the
                                world of the nightingale. Can you pick up the words that stress upon
                                the impulse to seek oblivion’? “heart aches”, “drowsy numbness”,
                                “pains”, “dull opiate”, “hemlock” (poison) and “Lethe-wards had
                                sunk”—all these express the poet’s wish for a state of oblivion and
192                             thereof, for a movement into the world of the nightingale.
			       The physical sensations of aches and pains are juxtaposed with               Keats: ‘Ode On A
          the state of drowsy numbness and a drugged state. How does                  Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
                                                                                       To A Nightingale’
          the poet reconcile a state of conscious pain with that of inertness
          and insensibility? Why does he do so? Both the states—of pain
          and numbness—have a common source in the ecstatic joy of the
          nightingale. The poet’s mood is one of drugged languor and has
          been occasioned by his empathetic response to the happiness of the
          bird. The poet wishes to merge his identity with that of the bird.
          In these opening lines, the identification is not total; he is aware
          of his self (which explains his pains and aches), but gradually the
          self-consciousness fades as a drowsy numbness overtakes him and
          the possibility of total identification is on the rise as the later lines
          in the stanza explain.
Lines
5-10 		   these lines explain what had given rise to these strange, morbid
          feelings in the poet. The poet says that the feelings of depression
          in him are not due to envy of the bird’s happiness, but because
          he is “too happy” in its happiness. The poet’s earlier mood of
          despondency seems to be perverse in the context of what gives rise
          to it. The mood in the opening quatrain contradicts the latter mood
          in the sestet.
7			      “light-winged Dryad”: “light-winged” refers to the bird’s quickness
          in flight. It also refers to a spirit of light-heartedness in contrast to
          the heavy drugged feeling of the earlier lines.
			       “beechen green”: the green colour of the beech tree which carries
          associations of freshness. “shadows numberless”: “shadows”
          suggest thick foliage which caste the shadows.
			       “summer”:in England summer is associated with colour and
          warmth (Recall Shakespeare’s use of the word in his Sonnet 18)
          “full- throatedease”: is in contrast to the cares and pains of the
          world as though the bird is immune to all suffering.
0-20 		   Here the poet seeks a prolongation of his happy state by asking for
          a beaker of wine from the South (of France). But towards the end
          of the second stanza (19-20) his wish for a fate of intoxication is to
          forget his conscious self and thereafter to fade away with the bird
          into the forest.
12			     Do you recognise the alliteration here?
			       “deep-delved” almost suggests the strokes of spade digging the
          earth. It also suggests the cooling effect on the wine made out of
          grapes grown in the warm south as a result of storing it underground.
          Keats is remarkable for his attention to concrete details in this
          description of the vintage wine. He associates the wine with
          Flora (goddess of vegetation and flowers), country green, Dance,
          Provencal song (song of Provence in medieval France), the warm
          South—all associations of warmth, high spirits and excitement.
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British Romantic   16			      “Hippocrene”: a fountain in Greece, sacred to the Muses and
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                   			        To drink off the Hippocrene is to get poetic inspiration.
                   			        Can you trace the progression of thought and imagery in these
                              two stanzas? “Throat” and “summer” from the preceding stanza
                              (1-10) lead to thoughts of wine produced in the South of France.
                              The longing for the “warm south” leads him backwards in time
                              to the song of the medieval poets of Provence and still back into
                              the classical age when the poets used to drink from the fountain
                              Hippocrene to get inspired. The poet desires that wine and poetic
                              imagination together might help him escape into the world of the
                              nightingale. Ode to a Nightingale is the supreme expression in all
                              of Keats’ poetry of the impulse to imaginatively escape that flies
                              in the face of knowledge of human limitation. (Stuart M. Sperry:
                              Keats the Poet).
                   			        This impulse finds concrete expression in Stanza IV (L.31-33)
                              Keats is one of the most sensuous of the English Poets. Here in
                              this description of the vintage wine from the warm south-cool
                              and heady, bubbling and purple-coloured, Keats is at his sensuous
                              best.
                   21-30 		   (stanza III) reiterate the poet’s desire to fade far away and forget
                              the fretful fever and stir of the world. Wine is sought as an opiate to
                              support him in his desire for oblivion so as to forget all the painful
                              experiences of life which include a poignant reference to his brother
                              Tom’s death (L.26) and “where but to think is full of sorrow” (27).
                              The poet imagines the bird to be happy because it does not belong
                              to the world of the humans. To be human is to experience “the
                              weariness, fret and fever” of existence.
                   			        The poet is also aware that he is human and therefore even if he
                              were to fly away into the nightingale’s world, he cannot forever
                              stay there in happiness. His depression is thus implicit in his
                              desire for escape. Keats is seen struggling against the inevitable
                              impermanence of human beauty, youth and happiness. He is striving
                              for some enduring principle of permanence which he associates
                              with the song of the nightingale.
                   31-40      (Stanza IV) The thoughts of sickness, old age and death make him
                              seek an alternative to wine in his search for a supporting aid to
                              wing him to the happy sojourn of the nightingale. The poet turns
                              to poetic fancy to bridge the division between him and the bird.
                              The creative activity arising out of his appeal to poetic imagination
                              limits itself to a three-line ornate composition at the end of which
                              Keats is back on the ground again, far away from the nightingale’s
                              habitation. Initially, he soars high on the wings of poetic fancy to
                              the tree tops where the nightingale perches, but before long he is
                              back on earth where there is no light other than what flickers of the
                              moonlight through the branches and the leaves of the trees.
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33			       “viewless wings of poesy”: Keats speaks of the wings of poesy as            Keats: ‘Ode On A
            invisible, because the flight (of imagination) is too high for a vision    Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
                                                                                        To A Nightingale’
            of the earth to be visible. The poet expects to soar high into the far
            distant, almost ethereal world of the bird aided by poesy.
			         “poesy”: Keats uses the word rather in an affected sense to
            mean poetry. There is something of a self-conscious effort in the
            description of the moon and the stars.
34			       Human brain cannot take in the broad sweep of poetic fancy. Despite
            its retarding effect, the poet’s imagination takes him swiftly to the
            abode of the nightingale on tree tops.
38-40 		    But poetic fancy cannot last long. It is just as temporary as the effect
            of wine on him. He is grounded on earth where there is neither light
            nor darkness, other than whatever filters the moon and the stars
            through the leaves of the trees.
41-50 		    (Stanza V) Keats’ response to sensuous beauty of the physical
            world is at its best in this stanza. Despite the semi-darkness around,
            he is able to imagine the flowers and their colours through their
            sweet scent. Keats said that when the primary sense of sight is
            absent, the other senses are intensified and provide “much room
            for imagination”. In this stanza, you can recognise Keats’ olfactory
            sense, his auditory sense and his sense of taste at work even as he
            confesses that “I cannot see what flowers are at my feet”. (41) The
            sound of the buzzing flies, caught by the auditory sense is expressed
            through the employment of sibilant words like “murmurous”;
            “Flies”, “summer” and “eves”. These words give the onomatopoeic
            effect of the bees buzzing around.
			         Identify the sensuous imagery in this stanza. What are the adjectives
            Keats employs to evoke sensuous excitement? Phrases like “soft
            incense”, “dewy wine”, “ white hawthorn”, “pastoral eglantine”
            and “fast-fading violets” convey concrete physical details of the
            flowers.
Stanza VI
			         The colourful flowers, the musk-rose and dewy wine conjure up
            thoughts of luxury and inebriation which for Keats are portentous
            signals as they once again lead him towards thoughts of death. The
            line of thinking in this stanza bears a close resemblance to stanzas
            II and III. As he listens to the bird’s song in darkness, he feels that
            it is the opportune time to die, “to cease upon the midnight with no
            pain”.
			         He says that it seems rich to die at that very moment when he
            is at the heights of ecstasy, experiencing a rich and sensuous
            excitement. To descend from that state of total bliss will be only
            painful, analogous to a death-in-life state. (You can now recall his
            earlier description of a state of numbness in stanza I.) Hence the
            poet seeks an alternative life-in-death state where to be dead at
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                   Line
                   62			       “half in love”: Why does Keats say that he is only half in love with
                               death? Read through the stanza. You will discover Keats’ offer of
                               explanation in the last two lines. Keats is painfully aware that after
                               his death, he shall not be able to listen to the bird’s song which will
                               continue to be heard in the world. Who is dead will be no more
                               than a requiem.
                   “easeful death”: (1) Painless death
                   				 (2) death that releases him from pain and gives him peace
                       		 and rest.
                   At this moment of total surrender to sensuous excitement, Keats becomes aware
                   of his separateness from the immortal bird.
                   Line 		     Stanza VII
                   71-80 		    the stanza begins with an ambiguous statement when Keats
                               addresses the nightingale as the “immortal bird”. But he corrects
                               himself in line by turning attention to the voice of the bird for it
                               is the voice that had been heard in the past and shall continue to
                               be heard in the future even as it is presently heard by the poet.
                               Tracing the perennial voice of the nightingale, Keats moves from
                               the present to the past (“emperor and clown”) through the Biblical
                               times (“Ruth”) and then to remote world of fairies (‘charmed....
                               faery lands’). The generations pass, but the nightingale’s voice
                               continues.
                   76			       “The sad heart of Ruth”: Reference to the Old Testament story
                               of Ruth, the kind and devoted daughter-in-law of Naomi of Moab
                               near Jerusalem- Ruth instead of turning to her father and mother
                               after the death of her husband, accompanied her widowed mother-
                               in-law to the land of Bethlehem. She worked in the field of Bo’az
                               to earn her living and ultimately was rewarded for her devotion and
                               kindness to her mother-in-law. Keats reference here is to Ruth in
                               the fields of Bo’az where she stood gathering the sheaves of corn.
                               She is sad and lonely having moved far away from her native land
                               to work in alien fields.
                   79			       Keats opens up the world of the legends, of fairy tales—a world
                               that is in the subconscious and present in all of us.
                   80			       “forlorn”: Why does the poet describe the faery lands as “forlorn”
                               These faery lands are forlorn because they are not for men. They
                               have become inaccessible for no man can ever return to them. The
                               word “forlorn” connects this stanza to the next and the final one.
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STANZA VIII                                                                            Keats: ‘Ode On A
                                                                                      Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
81-90       With the anguished expression of being “forlorn”, he is back to            To A Nightingale’
            his state of painful awareness that the earthly and the eternal can
            never be bridged. All his efforts at identification with the bird have
            proved to be of temporary value. As the bird flies to the next valley
            and as its song fades, the illusion of oneness with the bird dissolves.
            The song that Ruth had heard reminded her of her separation from
            her home and the song that had thrilled Keats reminds him of his
            separation from the bird. As the song recedes, the poet moves
            towards his forlorn self. The poem ends with a question about the
            validity of such a heightened experience when it leaves him with a
            sense of loss and depression. Keats raises a question that operates
            on two levels. It can pertain to the genuineness of that thrilling
            experience which the song had given him. He wonders whether it
            was all a vision or a dream. He sounds sceptical thinking that the
            song had given him just an illusion of ecstasy. On another level the
            question may relate to the poet’s perception of the just idle a symbol
            of permanence. Such a conception may be just idle whimsies on his
            part.
The conflicting tendencies towards mortality as expressed in stanza VI- of
            attraction and fear are developed in the last two stanzas. Each one of
            them is given prominence separately. Stanza VII pays tributes to the
            immortality of the song and thereby stresses the poet’s fascination
            for death so that he can remain in that ecstatic moment of identity
            with the bird. Stanza VIII contradicts this desire for death as it
            registers man’s limitations that can never give him permanent joy
            as he imagines to have experienced. The poem thus maintains the
            dramatic debate between two voices of the poem. It completes a full
            circle as it begins with the experience of the heart and ends with the
            questioning of the heart. The exciting song sounds no more than a
            “plaintive anthem”, keeping in line with the earlier description of it
            as “high requiem’ (L.70).
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British Romantic       In this poem we find Keats’s skill in word painting and verbal coinage. A
Literature III         good example of this is seen in the phrase “full-throated ease” (L.10). The
                       song of the nightingale is described in visual imagery. Yet another example
                       is in the description of the wine in terms of “the blushful Hippocrene” and
                       “Purple-stained mouth”—where the taste is expressed in visual terms.
                       Other examples of his skill in verbal coinage include “leaden-eyed” (28)
                       “Viewless wings of Poesy” (33) “embalmed darkness” (43).
                   3) Alliteration: “Deep-delved”, “beaded bubbles”...”the fever and the fret”.
                   4) Diction: Stanza V is remarkable for Keats poetic diction. You can notice the
                      contrast between such homely words as “the seasonable month” and “soft
                      incense’’, “dewy win” “embalmed darkness”. Though Keats is literally
                      referring to the scent of the flowers, these words conjure up thoughts of
                      luxury and wine.
                       We can see a similar kind of contrast in stanza VII between the enchantment
                       and mystery suggested by “charm’d”, “magic”, “faery” and the emotionally
                       disturbing associations of “perilous” and “forlorn”. All these are in close
                       link with the homely word “casements”, a word that returns the poet (and
                       the reader) to reality.
                       In lines 71-72, out of 18 words that Keats employs, only two have more
                       than one syllable. The succession of monosyllables is intended to produce
                       flat, prosaic reality.
                   Check Your Progress I
                   1) Give examples of Keats’ skill in word painting and verbal coinage with
                      reference to Ode to Nightingale. (50 words)
                   2) Discuss the development of thought in Ode to Nightingale?
4.5.1 Text
Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness!
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
Conspiring with him how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eaves run;
To bend with apples the moss’d cottage-trees,
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
To swell the gourd, and plump the bazel shells
                   4.5.2 Interpretation
                   Lines 1-6		    The first line recalls the cold of the mists and briskly leads to a
                                  description of fruit, the flowers and the bees constituting a lush
                                  and colourful picture of Autumn. Sense of ripeness, growth is
                                  suggested by “maturing sun” reaching its climax as the strain
                                  of the weighty fruit bends the apple trees and loads the vines.
                                  “Bless”further states the richness and fertility with a properly
                                  religious implication. Thereafter Keats moves to the landscape.
                                  The soft ‘f’s’ and ‘r’s’ of—“And fill all fruit with ripeness to
                                  the core” make the images bulge softly in the language like the
                                  fruit itself.
                   Lines 6-11		   Line 6 curves the lushness of “swell and gourd”. “Plump” is a
                                  verb solid enough to touch and puts a restraint on any excess
                                  that Keats might have committed after “swell the gourd”.
                   				           The autumn of first stanza is description of a process and an
                                  agricultural conspirer, plotting secretly with the sun to bring
                                  ripeness to a state of saturation. Can you pointout words that
                                  suggest this process?
                   				           As process autumn loads, blesses, bends, fills, swells, plumps
                                  and sets budding.
                   Line 9-11		    The only receptive consciousness of all this activity is that of
                                  the bees who sip their aching pleasure to such a glut that they
                                  think “warm days will never cease”, for the honey of harvest
                                  pleasure has “over brimmed” their natural store houses. The
                                  fullness of nature’s own grace, her free and overwhelming gift
                                  of herself is the burden of this stanza. The low sibilants and
                                  thrice repeated ‘mm’ of the last line bring activity into play.
                                  Though the sound of bees is drowsy, their work is not.
                   				           If you read the final three lines of the first stanza, you notice
                                  implications about the passage of time. Can you figure out
                                  the words? You must have noticed that the flowers are called
                                  “later”, the bees are assumed to think that “warm days will
                                  never cease” and there is a reference to the summer which has
                                  already passed.
                   Lines 12-22    The second stanza is a sensuous observation of the consequences
                                  of the process initiated in the first stanza. Autumn is now seen
                                  not as setting the flowers to budding but as a woman amid her
                                  store taking care of the over abundance of harvest. Autumn
                                  is no longer an active process, but a female overcome by the
202                               fragrance and soft exhaustion of her own labour. She is “sitting
                 careless”, “hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind”. She is a         Keats: ‘Ode On A
                 passive embodiment of the earthly paradise, a place of repose        Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
                                                                                       To A Nightingale’
                 after the sexual and productive activity hinted at by her having
                 been “close bosom-friend of the maturing sun”. But she is also
                 the peasant girl drunk with the odours and efforts of gathering,
                 winnowing, reaping and gleaning. The final four lines of the
                 stanza take us to the very end of the harvest, the gleaner bearing
                 her laden head so steadily as to suggest motionlessness even as
                 she moves. The language catches the gestures and enacts them.
                 The faint breeze ruffles hair in the soft ‘‘Ts’’ of the line and
                 sounds in the repeated syllables of “winnowing wind”. The
                 first seven lines are replete with extended vowels—“drows’d”,
                 “sound”, “fume” and there are no heavy stresses so that leisurely
                 movement is suggested.
				             The final image, autumn as lingering and passing is suggested
                 in “patient look” with which she watches the last oozing hours
                 by hours. “Oozing”, or a steady dripping, is, of course, not
                 unfamiliar as a symbol of the passage of time.
Lines23-33		     We have post-harvest sounds, heralding the coming on the
                 winter. The poet’s attitude towards transience and passing
                 beauty is implicit in “Where are the songs of Spring” but is
                 immediately abandoned in “Think not of them, thou hat thy
                 music too”. The late flowers and poppies of stanzas 1 &2 are
                 replaced by the barred clouds that bloom the twilight and touch
                 the stubble-plains with rosy hue. And though the small gnats
                 mourn in a wail-filled choir, the sound of their mourning is
                 musically varied by the caprice of light and wind. The poet’s
                 rendering of the wail is light. The “full grown lambs” are now
                 ready for their harvest having completed the cycle. The voice
                 of their bleat comes from a distance “hilly bourne”. So also
                 the hedge crickets are heard across the exhausted landscape,
                 the winter singer, the red breast adds his soft treble and the
                 departing birds close the poem. This is acceptance of process
                 beyond the possibility of grief. The last stanza looks back to
                 the concluding lines of Coleridge’s Frost at Midnight, where
                 we hear: “The red breast sit and sing Betwixt the tufts of snow
                 on the bare branch Of mossy apple-tree, while the high thatch
                 Smokes in the sun-thaw.”
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Keats’ poetic diction is marked for precision like a molten ore sublimed by           Keats: ‘Ode On A
enormous pressure. “Barred cloud” stubble-plains, “rosy hue”, “wailful choir”,       Grecian Urn’, ‘Ode
                                                                                      To A Nightingale’
“full-grown, lambs”, “gathering swallows” in the third stanza are concrete
images of life unaffected by any thought of death. The mind is free to associate
with the “wailful” mourning of the gnats with a funeral dirge or the swallows
gathering for immigration, but these sounds are more confined to autumn than
to any lament on death. The diction in Keats retains a restraint on thought.
And yet there is no dissociation between senses and the intellect. It is a perfect
integration. His nerve ends maintain contact with the intellect, the thinking goes
on through these images and receives its precise definition and qualification
from images and yet retains a classical restraint on Keats. His Ode to Autumn
does not carry a palpable design on us. The poet is himself completely absent,
there is no “I”, no suggestion of the discursive language in this ode. The power
of self absorption, wonderful sympathy, identification with things he called
“negative capability” he saw as essential to creation of poetry.
Check Your Progress II
1. The ode is objective and descriptive. Comment in not more than 150
   words.
2. In this ode, Keats’ pictorial power finds its fullest expression. Comment in
   not more than 150 words. )
3. Comment on Keats’ “negative capability”—(50 words)
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                   In this Unit we have discussed two odes of John Keats—To Nightingale and To
                   Autumn with a view of familiarising you with
                   •   the development of thought in the two odes
                   •   the comprehensive and sensuous imagery which is the hall mark of Keats’
                       poetry and
                   •   features of Keat’s poetic craftsmanship particularly his negative
                       capability,
                   •   varied allusions, myth making, verbal coinage, and alliteration and
                       assonance.
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