话题 5 学校 答案版
初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你一定有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?
假如你是李华,你校英文报以“A Letter to Myself”为题向初三学生征集稿件,请你
根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文给自己写一封信。。
给自己的一封信
感受
回忆
1.对老师表示感谢
1.在老师的帮助下取得进步
2.... 2....
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It's time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Wish you all the best , my dear self.
Yours ,
Lihua
*Step1 审好题,搭好架
①定文体: 应用文 ②定人称:第二人称 ③定时态:一般过去时
开篇:引出主 已给出: It's time to say goodbye to your junior high school
题 life.
① the help of your teachers and you should be thankful
给自己的 正文:回忆自己的 to them (陈述难忘的回忆+感受)
一封信 初中生活 ②the days you studied and played together and you will
remember it forever. (陈述难忘的回忆+感受)
结尾:祝愿 Hope you will be better and better.
*Step2 短语荟萃
1.look back at 回忆起;回首 2.teach you lots of knowledge 教你大量知识
3.with the help of teachers 在老师的帮助下 4.be thankful to 对...感激
5.a wonderful memory 一 个 很 棒 的 回 忆 6.unforgettable moments 难 忘 的 时 刻
7.better and better 越来越好 8.not only...but also... 不但...而且...
9.show my thanks to 对...表达我的感谢 10.keep in touch with 保持联络
*Step3 造好句,写准句
开篇:引出主题
1.回首过去的日子,你还记得什么?(look back at)
Looking back at the past days, what do you remember?
正文:回忆自己的初中生活
1.你们所有的老师都很善良、耐心、负责。
All of your teachers were kind, patient and responsible.
2.他们不仅教会了你很多知识,还教会了你如何在未来成为一个有用的人(not only,
but also)
They taught you not only lots of knowledge but also how to be a useful man in the
future.
3.在老师的帮助下,你变得更加自信和外向。( with the help of ...)
With the help of teachers, you become more confident and outgoing.
4.你会永远记住你生命中重要的人—你的同学和朋友。 ( the important people)
You will remember the important people in your life forever — your classmates and
friends.
5.你我永远不能忘记你们一起学习和玩耍的日子。 ( I will never forget the days...)
You will never forget the days you studied and played together.
结尾:祝愿
1.这三年将会成为很棒的回忆。(a wonderful memory)
The three years will be a wonderful memory for you.
2.所有这些难忘的时刻都会帮助你成长为一个更好的人。All of these unforgettable
moments help you grow into a better person. (用 it is .. that ... 改写句子)
It is these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
3.希望你会越来越好。(Hope...)
Hope you will be better and better.
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It's time to say goodbye to your junior high school life. Looking back
at the past days, what do you remember?
First of all, all of your teachers were kind, patient and responsible. They taught you
not only lots of knowledge but also how to be a useful man in the future. With the help
of teachers, you become more confident and outgoing. So remember to be thankful to
your teachers. Besides, you will remember the important people in your life forever—
your classmates and friends. You will never forget the days you studied and played
together.
In a word, the three years will be a wonderful memory for you. It is these
unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. Lastly, hope you will be
better and better.
Wish you all the best , my dear self.
Yours ,
Lihua
(红色字体的是写作要点,蓝色字体是补充细节,橙色字体是连贯性表达)