English Department

Subject: English Grade: 9 Writing: Review

Boys’ Section
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"The Ultimate Guide to Writing Effective Reviews"

What is a review?

A review is a written piece expressing someone’s opinion about something such as a new
product or service that is usually published in a newspaper or a magazine.

Types of Review Writing

Review writing can cover a wide range of subjects, including:

• Books, Movies, or TV Shows

• Places: Hotels, restaurants, cafés, cinemas, amusement parks, shopping centers,
museums, gyms, etc.
• Events: Concerts, festivals, exhibitions, trips, etc.
• Products or Services: Apps, games (video games, board games, etc.), websites,
courses, electronics, appliances, etc.

Purpose of a Review
• The main purpose of a review is to share your opinion about something.
• It should engage the audience from beginning to end.
• While it’s often easier to write a positive review, a negative review is also
acceptable.

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Tone and Register of a Review
• The tone can be personal and informal.
• If writing for adults, the style may be more formal than when writing for teenagers.
• For a school magazine, the register should be informal to semi-formal, avoiding
overly idiomatic or colloquial language.

Ideal Format of a Review

1. Introduction: Provide general information about what is being reviewed.
2. Body (2-3 paragraphs):
o Share your opinions and highlight interesting points.
o Focus on specific aspects (e.g., facilities of a museum, special effects in a
film, quality of food/service in a restaurant).
3. Conclusion: Give your overall opinion and recommendation.

Title
• The title should include the name of what is being reviewed.
• Examples:
o Discover Your Talent — A Course Review
o Samsung Galaxy S24 Review
o Fitness Time: The Best Gym in Riyadh?
o Book Review: The Alchemist
• Don’t overthink the title. You can simply write the name of what you’re reviewing
(e.g., “VOX Cinema”).

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Introduction

The introduction should:

1. Engage the reader with a rhetorical question or an attractive statement.

2. Provide general information about what is being reviewed (e.g., name, genre,
director, location, etc.).
3. Include a quick overall opinion to hint at whether the review is positive or
negative.

Example:
“Do you love superfast rollercoasters and other exhilarating rides that make your hair
stand on end? If so, then Sky Zone Amusement Park is a must-visit. My friends and I
visited it recently, and we were blown away!”

Body

In the body:

1. Mention relevant details about what’s being reviewed.

2. Share your personal opinion (what you liked/disliked) with evidence, reasons, or
examples.
3. Focus on key aspects rather than every detail.

Conclusion

The conclusion should:

• Provide your overall opinion and recommendation.

• State whether you recommend the subject and to whom.

Examples of Concluding Phrases:

• “In a nutshell, you should definitely read/watch/use…”

• “All in all, I strongly/highly recommend…”
• “On the whole, I wouldn’t recommend it because…”
• “Overall, it’s worth seeing/reading/using…”

Example:
“I strongly recommend Sky Zone Park to anyone who wants to have an unforgettable
experience, whether alone, with friends, or with family. It’s absolutely worth a visit!”
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Special Types of Review Writing

1. Book Review
• Paragraph 1: Introduction
Engage the reader and provide background information (title, genre, author).
• Paragraph 2: Summary of the Book
Outline the story without revealing the ending.
• Paragraph 3: What You Liked or Disliked
Share your thoughts on the plot, writing style, or how the book made you feel.
• Paragraph 4: Overall Opinion and Recommendation

Example Introduction:
“Have you ever been so inspired by a book that it completely changes your perception of
life? If not, then I suggest you read ‘The Alchemist’ by Paulo Coelho.”

Useful Phrases for Book Reviews:

• “The plot focuses on/revolves around…”

• “Set in…, this marvelous story explains…”
• “The writer skillfully combines… with…”

2. Film Review
• Paragraph 1: Introduction
Engage the reader and provide general information (title, genre, director).
• Paragraph 2: Setting and Main Plot
Describe the setting and overview of the plot.
• Paragraph 3: What You Liked or Disliked
Discuss aspects like acting, script, special effects, or how the film made you feel.
• Paragraph 4: Overall Opinion and Recommendation

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Example Introduction:
“Are you looking for an intriguing action-packed film where you can turn off your brain
and enjoy the ride? If so, then ‘London Has Fallen,’ directed by Babak Najafi, is the film
for you!”

Useful Phrases for Film Reviews:

• “The plot focuses on/revolves around…”

• “Set in…, the movie…”
• “The special effects were breathtaking/mediocre…”

3. Place Review (Restaurant/Café)

• Paragraph 1: Introduction
Engage the reader and provide general information (name, location, purpose of
visit).
• Paragraph 2: What You Liked or Disliked
Discuss aspects like food, staff, atmosphere, or cleanliness.
• Paragraph 3: What You Liked or Disliked
Highlight additional points.
• Paragraph 4: Overall Opinion and Recommendation

Example:
“Located in the heart of Riyadh, this sumptuous restaurant offers a dining experience
like no other. From the moment you step in, the ambience captivates you.”

Useful Phrases for Place Reviews:

• “The menu offers a variety of…”

• “What I particularly enjoyed was…”
• “I was disappointed by…”
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4. Event Review
• Paragraph 1: Introduction
Engage the reader and provide general information (name, location, purpose of
attendance).
• Paragraph 2: What You Liked or Disliked
Discuss aspects like the program, performance, or atmosphere.
• Paragraph 3: What You Liked or Disliked
Highlight additional points.
• Paragraph 4: Overall Opinion and Recommendation

Useful Phrases for Event Reviews:

• “The atmosphere was lively and boisterous…”

• “The performance left me mesmerized…”
• “The ticket price was reasonable/overpriced…”

5. Product Review
• Paragraph 1: Introduction
Engage the reader and provide general information (name, brand, release date).
• Paragraph 2: Positive Aspects
Highlight the product’s features and benefits.
• Paragraph 3: Negative Aspects
Discuss any drawbacks.
• Paragraph 4: Overall Opinion and Recommendation

Useful Phrases for Product Reviews:

• “The product’s core features include…”

• “One notable improvement is…”
• “The price is affordable/overpriced…”

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Points to Keep in Mind

Dos:
• Organize your review into 4-5 paragraphs.
• Use a wide range of vocabulary and cohesive devices (e.g., and, but, because, for
example).
• Include topic-related vocabulary (e.g., director, cast, special effects for film
reviews).
• Use advanced punctuation sparingly (e.g., colons, semicolons, em dashes).
• Aim for 160 words (slightly exceeding is fine).
• Spend 30 minutes on the review (5 minutes planning, 2-3 minutes checking).

Don’ts:
• Avoid very simple sentences and repetitive vocabulary.
• Avoid overly formal language (e.g., moreover, furthermore).
• Avoid abbreviations and slang (e.g., wanna, gonna).
• Avoid listing (e.g., firstly, secondly).

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 Model 1

1. Book Review: "The Alchemist" by Paulo Coelho

Title: Book Review: The Alchemist

Introduction:
Have you ever read a book that changes the way you see life? If not, then The
Alchemist by Paulo Coelho is a must-read. This modern classic, set in the deserts of
Egypt, follows the journey of Santiago, a young shepherd boy, as he pursues his dreams
and discovers the true meaning of life.

Body:
The novel revolves around Santiago’s quest to find a hidden treasure buried near the
Pyramids. Along the way, he meets fascinating characters, including a wise alchemist
who teaches him about the importance of listening to his heart. The story is both simple
and profound, blending adventure with spiritual wisdom.

What I loved most about the book was its message: “When you want something, all the
universe conspires to help you achieve it.” This idea resonated deeply with me,
especially as I’ve often doubted my own dreams. The author’s writing style is poetic and
inspiring, making it easy to connect with Santiago’s journey.

However, some parts of the book felt repetitive, particularly the recurring theme of
omens and signs. While this adds to the mystical tone, it might feel overdone to some
readers.

Conclusion:
Overall, The Alchemist is a timeless masterpiece that I would recommend to anyone
seeking inspiration or a fresh perspective on life. It’s particularly suited for dreamers and
those who enjoy philosophical tales. Don’t miss this life-changing read!

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2. Film Review: "Inception"

Title: Film Review: Inception

Introduction:
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to enter someone’s dreams? Inception,
directed by Christopher Nolan, takes you on a mind-bending journey through the layers
of the subconscious. This sci-fi thriller, starring Leonardo DiCaprio, is a visual and
intellectual masterpiece.

Body:
The film is set in a world where technology allows people to enter and manipulate
dreams. Dom Cobb (DiCaprio) is a skilled thief who specializes in stealing secrets from
within dreams. However, he is offered a chance to have his criminal record erased if he
can successfully plant an idea in someone’s mind—a process known as inception.

What I loved most about the film was its complex yet gripping plot. The concept of
dreams within dreams was brilliantly executed, and the special effects were breathtaking.
The acting was exceptional, particularly by DiCaprio, who portrayed Cobb’s emotional
struggles with depth and authenticity.

On the downside, the film’s intricate storyline might be confusing for some viewers. It
requires full attention to keep up with the multiple dream layers and timelines.

Conclusion:
Inception is a must-watch for fans of sci-fi and psychological thrillers. It’s not just a film;
it’s an experience that will leave you questioning reality. I highly recommend it to
anyone who enjoys thought-provoking cinema.
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3. Restaurant Review: "Sky Bistro"

Title: Restaurant Review: Sky Bistro

Introduction:
Are you looking for a dining experience with a view? Sky Bistro, located on the 50th
floor of the City Tower, offers not only delicious food but also a breathtaking panoramic
view of the city. I visited this restaurant last weekend with my family, and it was an
unforgettable experience.

Body:
The first thing that struck me was the elegant décor. The modern, minimalist design,
combined with floor-to-ceiling windows, created a luxurious yet cozy atmosphere. The
menu offered a variety of international dishes, and I opted for the grilled salmon, which
was cooked to perfection. The flavors were rich, and the presentation was impeccable.

The staff were friendly and attentive, making us feel welcome throughout the meal.
However, the prices were on the higher side, which might not suit everyone’s budget.
Additionally, the restaurant was quite crowded, and the noise level made it difficult to
have a conversation at times.

Conclusion:
Despite the minor drawbacks, Sky Bistro is a fantastic choice for special occasions or
romantic dinners. I highly recommend it to anyone who appreciates fine dining and
stunning views. It’s absolutely worth a visit!

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4. Event Review: "Summer Music Festival"

Title: Event Review: Summer Music Festival

Introduction:
Looking for a way to kick off your summer with a bang? The annual Summer Music
Festival, held at Riverside Park, is the perfect event for music lovers. I attended the
festival last Saturday with my friends, and it was an electrifying experience.

Body:
The festival featured a diverse lineup of artists, from indie bands to famous pop stars.
The highlight for me was the performance by The Midnight Groove, a local band that got
the entire crowd dancing with their energetic tunes. The stage lighting and sound quality
were top-notch, creating an immersive experience.

The atmosphere was lively and vibrant, with food stalls offering a variety of cuisines.
However, the event was overcrowded, and it was challenging to find a good spot to enjoy
the performances. Additionally, the ticket prices were quite high, which might deter
some people.

Conclusion:
Overall, the Summer Music Festival was a fantastic way to celebrate the start of summer.
I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys live music and a lively atmosphere. Just be
prepared for the crowds!

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5. Product Review: "Apple Watch Series 8"

Title: Product Review: Apple Watch Series 8

Introduction:
Are you considering upgrading your smartwatch? The Apple Watch Series 8 is the latest
offering from Apple, and it promises to be a game-changer. I’ve been using it for a
month now, and here’s what I think.

Body:
The Series 8 comes with several new features, including a temperature sensor and crash
detection. The design is sleek and lightweight, making it comfortable to wear all day.
The battery life has improved significantly, lasting up to 36 hours on a single charge.

One of the best features is the health tracking. The watch monitors your heart rate, blood
oxygen levels, and even detects irregular heart rhythms. It’s like having a personal health
assistant on your wrist. However, the price is steep, and some features, like the
temperature sensor, feel more like gimmicks than necessities.

Conclusion:
If you’re an Apple enthusiast or someone who values advanced health tracking, the
Apple Watch Series 8 is worth the investment. However, if you’re on a budget, you
might want to consider older models that offer similar functionality at a lower price.

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