List of character flaws
The almost-good 🤷🏻♀️
Most of these character flaws are
more annoying than harmful;
some are even a little endearing.
Others do have the potential to
harm, but rarely evolve to that
extent. If you’re looking for a
minor flaw to round out your
likable protagonist, this section is
for you!
1. Awkward – socially uneasy and
uncomfortable. Example: Cath
Avery in Fangirl.
2. Boring – dull, tedious,
uninteresting (not to be confused
with a flat character, who’s not
even developed enough to be
boring). Example: Mary Bennet
in Pride and Prejudice.
3. Capricious – given to flights of
fancy and impulsive
behaviors. Example: Lily Bart
in The House of Mirth.
4. Childish – silly, immature, or
innocent. Example: Peter in Peter
Pan.
5. Clumsy – uncoordinated and
fumbling; often accident-
prone. Example: Bella Swan
in Twilight.
6. Foolish – lacking good
judgment or common
sense. Example: Bertie Wooster
in Jeeves and Wooster.
7. Gossipy – inclined to spread
rumors or talk about others
behind their backs. Example: Mrs.
Jennings in Sense and Sensibility.
8. Gullible – easily fooled or
persuaded to believe
something. Example: Valentine
Michael Smith in Stranger in a
Strange Land.
9. Humorless – having no sense
of humor;
solemn. Example: Percy Weasley
in Harry Potter.
10. Lazy – unwilling to work;
slothful. Example: Gervaise
Macquart in L'Assommoir.
11. Meek – overly gentle and
submissive. Example: Charlie
Kelmeckis in The Perks of Being a
Wallflower.
12. Mischievous – playfully
troublesome; rascally or
roguish. Example: Tom Sawyer
in The Adventures of Tom Sawyer.
13. Naïve – childlike, trusting,
unworldly. Example: Wilbur
in Charlotte’s Web.
14. Obnoxious – highly irritating
and unpleasant. Example: Eustace
Scrubb in Voyage of the Dawn
Treader.
15. Prideful – having a lofty
opinion of oneself and rarely
admitting to being
wrong. Example: Mr. Darcy
in Pride and Prejudice.
16. Shallow – having few
profound thoughts and caring
only for insignificant
things. Example: Daisy Buchanan
in The Great Gatsby.
17. Skeptical – doubtful or
disbelieving. Example: Lucy’s
siblings (at first) in The Lion, The
Witch, and the Wardrobe.
18. Spacey – having one’s head in
the clouds; absent-
minded. Example: Luna Lovegood
in Harry Potter.
19. Spoiled – bratty and self-
centered as a result of
overindulgence. Example: Mary
Lennox (at first) in The Secret
Garden.
20. Stubborn – willful and
headstrong; refusing to give
up. Example: Anne Shirley
in Anne of Green Gables.
21. Tactless – not very nuanced or
sensitive in dealings with
others. Example: Hermes in Circe.
22. Vain – preoccupied with one’s
physical
appearance. Example: Amy March
in Little Women.
Do even these “mild” character flaws
seem too extreme to you? Then maybe
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The bad 😬
These character flaws should be
taken more seriously: they can
impact a character’s life quite
heavily, as well as the lives of
those around them. From
adultery to greed to pure
stupidity, if you choose one of
these flaws for your character,
make sure you’ve carefully
considered how it will shape their
story — and indeed, whether that
journey will end with them
overcoming their limitations or
atoning for their sins.
23. Adulterous – cheating on
one’s partner or
spouse. Example: John Proctor
in The Crucible.
24. Anxious – experiencing
frequent nerves or
apprehension. Example: Craig
Gilner in It’s Kind of a Funny
Story.
25. Apathetic – having little
interest in or enthusiasm for
life. Example: The narrator
in Fight Club.
26. Arrogant – haughty,
conceited, exaggeratedly self-
important. Example: Draco
Malfoy in Harry Potter.
27. Belligerent – hostile and
aggressive, even when
unprovoked. Example: Curley
in Of Mice and Men.
28. Bitter – resentful and
unpleasant because of a past
experience. Example: Miss
Havisham in Great Expectations.
29. Cowardly – lacking the
courage to stand up for what’s
right. Example: Arthur
Dimmesdale in The Scarlet Letter.
30. Dishonest – lying or behaving
in a deceitful manner, usually to
take advantage of
others. Example: George
Wickham in Pride and Prejudice.
31. Envious – wanting to possess
what another has (may be a
physical object or a character
trait). Example: Gene Forrester
in A Separate Peace.
32. Greedy – always desiring
more (food, wealth, attention,
etc.), even to their own
detriment. Example: Augustus
Gloop in Charlie and the
Chocolate Factory.
33. Hedonistic – indulging
completely in the pursuit of
pleasure. Example: Dorian Gray
in The Picture of Dorian Gray.
34. Hubristic – excessively self-
confident in one’s ideas or
abilities. Example: Icarus in
the Metamorphoses.
35. Hypocritical – acting in
opposition to one’s beliefs or
proclamations about others,
typically because one believes
they are “above”
them. Example: Mr. Brocklehurst
in Jane Eyre.
36. Ignorant – possessing little
practical knowledge or awareness
of the world. Example: Effie
Trinket in The Hunger Games.
37. Incompetent – unable to
perform basic tasks. Example: Mr.
Poe in A Series of Unfortunate
Events.
38. Inconsiderate – caring little
for the feelings of
others. Example: Sherlock
Holmes in Sherlock Holmes.
39. Judgmental – critical and
disapproving, often in an
outspoken way. Example: Holden
Caulfield in The Catcher in the
Rye.
40. Lustful – overwhelmed with
sexual desire. Example: Humbert
Humbert in Lolita.
41. Morally gray – neither good
nor evil in a conventional sense;
characterized by moral
ambiguity. Example: Kaz Brekker
in Six of Crows.
42. Obsequious – so deferential
and flattering as to be
unsettling. Example: Uriah Heep
in David Copperfield.
43. Possessive – overprotective
and controlling. Example: Edward
Cullen in Twilight.
44. Quixotic – overly idealistic
and hindered by their own
expectations. Example: Emma
Bovary in Madame Bovary.
45. Rigid – utterly inflexible in
one’s principles, even when
presented with reason to
change. Example: Javert in Les
Misérables.
46. Selfish – being solely
concerned with one’s own needs
and desires. Example: Scarlett
O’Hara (at first) in Gone With the
Wind.
47. Short-tempered – quick to
anger. Example: Jack Torrance
in The Shining.
48. Spiteful – bitter and
malicious. Example: Severus
Snape in Harry Potter.
49. Stingy – mean and
ungenerous. Example: Ebenezer
Scrooge in A Christmas Carol.
50. Stupid – showing little
intelligence in one’s decisions or
actions. Example: Joffrey
Baratheon in A Song of Ice and
Fire.
51. Vengeful – seeking
ramifications for others as a form
of revenge. Example: Edmond
Dantès in The Count of Monte
Cristo (though to be fair, he’s
pretty justified).
52. Weak-willed – timid and
spineless. Example: Peter
Pettigrew in Harry Potter.
The ugly ☠️
Now for the character flaws you’ll
most often see in outright villains:
cruelty, treachery, a total lack of
remorse, and so on. While it’s
certainly fascinating to think
about how such deep-seated
flaws can be effectively balanced
with other traits, take caution!
Some readers may be unable to
forgive protagonists who
demonstrate these flaws, even
over the course of multi-
book character arcs to show
they’ve changed.
That said, if you’re looking for a
challenge (or aiming to create
that once-in-a-blue
moon egregious
antihero who’s just sympathetic
enough to work), have at it. But
don’t say we didn’t warn you —
and consider getting a sensitivity
reader if you’re working with a
flaw that involves a delicate issue,
like bigotry or abuse.
53. Abusive – engaging in habitual
and extreme cruelty or
violence. Example: Alphonso
in The Color Purple.
54. Bigoted – harboring fierce,
immovable prejudices about a
certain group. Example: Dolores
Umbridge in Harry Potter.
55. Cruel – willfully causing pain
and suffering to
others. Example: Heathcliff
in Wuthering Heights.
56. Disloyal – failing to remain
true to the person/entity to
whom one has pledged their
allegiance. Example: Brutus
in Julius Caesar.
57. Fanatical – extremely zealous
to the point of
delusion. Example: Annie Wilkes
in Misery.
58. Intolerant – narrow-minded
and unaccepting of others,
sometimes to the point of
violence. Example: Bob Ewell
in To Kill a Mockingbird.
59. Machiavellian – cunning,
manipulative, and unscrupulous
in one’s schemes. Example: Tom
Ripley in The Talented Mr. Ripley.
60. Manipulative – conniving and
controlling others to get what
one wants. Example: Amy Dunne
in Gone Girl.
61. Murderous – desiring to kill;
homicidal. Example: Hannibal
Lecter in Silence of the Lambs.
62. Neglectful – failing to give
proper care or attention to
someone or
something. Example: Paul
Dombey in Dombey and Son.
63. Obsessive – so consumed by a
single subject that one cannot
function
normally. Example: Captain Ahab
in Moby-Dick.
64. Oppressive – brutally
authoritarian toward a group of
people considered
“lesser.” Example: The
Commanders of Gilead in The
Handmaid’s Tale.
65. Paranoid – unusually
suspicious, mistrustful, or
nervous that something bad will
happen to
them. Example: Raskolnikov
in Crime and Punishment.
66. Remorseless – feeling no
shame, regret, or sympathy when
they’ve done something
wrong. Example: Anthony James
Marston in And Then There Were
None.
67. Sadistic – taking pleasure in
inflicting pain or humiliation
upon others. Example: Nurse
Ratched in One Flew Over the
Cuckoo’s Nest.
68. Self-destructive – acting in
such a way as to destroy one’s
own health and/or
happiness. Example: Anna
in Anna Karenina.
69. Treacherous – deeply disloyal
and traitorous, usually for
personal gain. Example: Iago
in Othello.
70. Violent – viciously, physically
harmful to
others. Example: Patrick Bateman
in American Psycho.