THE HOLY DETECTIVE
written by
H R Swamy
Address: Nagasandra, Bengaluru 560073
Phone:6362639254
E-mail:swamygkl9@gmail.com
EXT. NIGHT BUILDING TERRACE
WIDE ANGLE SLOW MOTION ZOOM IN INCLINATION OF 45 DEGREE
24 year old girl standing leaning towards terrace compound.
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WIDE SHOT OF FACE ZOOMING OUT LIGHTING FROM STREET LIGHT
Girl's face splasterd to road, blood under the head
on the blood texts of "Priya Albert
Time:11:11 , Date:Feb4th"
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SOUND OF POLICE SIREN
EXT.STAIRS
ORTHGRAPHIC VIEW WITH MOVING LEGS WITH MOVING CAMERA HOLDING
FILE AND A LETTER WITH WORDINGS OPEN BEFORE FEB 23
Date : FEB11
JAYANNA KATIMANI (VOICE OVER)
Nodri...election timedaga, case
mugsod late aguthri, nam gothiro ob
mandi idana, avyappa case idada
andra , mugith. aadra avr mutto
hang niv madbeka .
ZOOM HAND SHOT
He will come and open the door.
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LEG SHOOT BETWEEN VINAY ROUT LEGS
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WIDE SHOT OF ARYAN WITH SMOKE EFFECT
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2.
GLITCH TO BAMPHOET SHOOT
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(Title : THE HOLY
DETECTIVE)
VINAY ROUT (VOICE OVER)
Yar adu.....?
JAYANNA KATIMANI
AvRE..Aryan kashap.....
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INT. DETECTIVE OFFICE
BOOK SHOTS , DUSTBIN, BOOKS , ZOOM IN SHOT OF GIVING LETTER,
ORTHOGRAPHIC VIEW
He will give letter and detective will see that and keep
aside
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VINAY AND ARYAN OTHOGRAPHIC WIDE FRAME STILL SHOT ZOOM OF
GIVING LETTER TO HAND.
VINAY RAWATH (VOICE OVER)
hello sir, nan hesaru Vinay, idh
ondh letter kelgade bidithu,mosty
yaru receive madilla ansuthe adke
nane tagond bande
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SEMI ANGLE ROATION OF VINAY TALKING TO ARYAN AND SHOULDER
SHOT OF VINAY'S WHILE ARYAN'S FACE WOULD BE BLURRED
VINAY RAWATH (CONT'D)
Constable Jayanna Kattimani nimna
nodadik heludru, Ee case vishya
vagi, Sir i request you to take up
this case i really want to know
what happened to her..
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3.
CLOSE UP EYE SHOT WIDE ANGLE, SAME CAM ANGLE WOULD BE
FOLLOWED TO THE HERO
He will be reading the case and looks towards vinay.he gets
up and goes towards window and lights up the cigarette.
CUT TO: SMOKE OF CIGARETTE TO SILENCER SMOKE
EXT. CRIME SCENE
WIDE ANGLE LEGS CUT TO FRONT WALKING SCENE WIDE ANGLE ,FEW
BUILDING SHOT
Date:12FEB
Aryan gets down and starts inspecting the crime spot
WIDE ANGLE SHOT FRONT VIEW , POV SHOT ,IMAGINARY SHOTS OF
GIRL BEING DEAD
CUT TO:IMAGINE INCIDENT NIGHT
SHOTS INCLUDE HIM WATCHING THE SCENE AT DIFFERENT ANGLE
CUT TO:REALITY
CAMERA FOLLOWS ARYAN
Now he starts inspecting the places and the building. Starts
observing the stairs and holds railings and walks upto the
terrace , there he will see everything would be cleaned , he
starts imagining the possibilities. From his face
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PEOPLE (GROUND FLOOR GIRL, MAID, DELIVERY BOY, VINAY)STANDING
BEHIND THE HERO AND WHILE HE IMAGINES WHO KILLED AMONG THEM.
One by one is going and trying to push her
from that TERRACE, The victim(Priya albert) looking the
detective face with little anger and sorrow, Vinay will be
looking her in sad face. after everyone's turns, Aryan turn
back start walking everyone start looking at him rotating
their face.
CUT TO:REALITY
4.
CAMERA FOLLOWS SHOT
He starts walking down, he start watching the cameras
observing everything, he meets the boyfriend at ground floor.
VINAY RAWATH
Hello sir, Good morning. Enaadru
gothaitha.
ARYAN KASHYAP
smiles)..Report Kodi(He start
reading that report and camera pans
on the report, he give back that
report) good , very good..
VINAY RAWATH
Sir, Enaithu....?
ARYAN KASHYAP
Fate is very uncertain yet very
beautiful, avl huttiid time Sathid
time,date, erdu ondhe alva
Aryan will observe a ring on his hand, when he asking file
ARYAN KASHYAP (CONT'D)
Nim kaili iro ring thumba
chennagide.
VINAY RAWATH
Ond Varsha aythu sir, idna priya na
select madidu, She was always
telling me, Nand ond ase ide, nan
huttid time ge nan birthday
celebrate madkobeku anta, that
moment would be unforgettable
While vinay is telling all this,aryan walk towards the roses
starts looking at it
VINAY ROUT
Ond preeti na kalkondaga est noovu
aguthe gotha sir...?
SHOT OF ROSE GLITCH EFFECT GIRL AND ARYAN BEHIND THAT ROSE
LOOKING
Aryan turns back and respond.
ARYAN KASHYAP
Howdu ...
5.
Vinay take off the cigarette box, will offer one cigratte to
the Aryan , ARYAN says No in the action.
ARYAN KASHYAP (CONT'D)
According to Forensic report, the
body has high amount tryptophan at
ventral tegmental area in the nerve
cell bodies. Yaradru sucide madko
bekadre ,the stress level will be
very high, but can she be happy,
when she's dieing? ed hega sucide
agoka sadya, she was murdered, who
is that murderer..?
SHOTS GOES TO HIS FACE FAST EDIT OF ALL WITNESS
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INT. DETECTIVE OFFICE
FROM CASE BOARD ZOOMS OUT DETECTIVE STANDING INFRONT OF THAT
WITH BEAR BODY
Feb12 : 2:35AM
Aryan will be standing in front of the Case board starts
threading the pictures , he will left with the same answer
but how? He will light up the cigarette and come back sit on
the table.
He will open his eyes
CLOSE SHOT OF EYES WILL OPEN
CUT TO:IMAGINE OF WITNESSES
Everyone willl be standing in front of him. Sees everyone's
face and each character starts telling their stories.
GROUND FLOOR GIRL (ANJALI)
Sir, Nan Hesaru anjali antha,
Assistant Sales executive. Avathu
kelsa muguskond late agi
bande,sumar ondh 11 gante hange nan
yarno nodid hang ayth avathu, Yar
antha kitiki alli nodidaga
gothaglilila. after wearing specs i
can make it.
(MORE)
6.
GROUND FLOOR GIRL (ANJALI) (CONT'D)
It was a delivery boy.Adagi 11:30
ga Vinay bandu bell madidru , he
was so scared i called the
ambulance imm
He walks to next witness Lights get on.
MAID (BOY)
Sir nan avathu madam terrace clean
madoke helidru, avth nan clean madi
ond 8 gantage ella kelsa mugsi ode
He walks to next witness (spotlight).
DELIVERY BOY
Sir, Nanige 11 gante hange order
bantu, adage 9-10 nimishake order
na door atra drop madi vapas hode,
adre nanigu aa case gu yav
sambhandu nu illa sir.
VINAY RAWATH
Avath avl Birthday, avl ase tara
correct timege celebrate madona
ankondre, adre gift baroke late
aithu. Bejar agthale anta cup cake
order madida. Nan gift tagond 11:30
hange bandre she was lying down
there, Avaga anjali hatra oda, then
we called ambulance.
He comes back and sits and start thinking holding cigarette
in his hand , text will be running out of his head.
Post-mortem report : Time of death 4th Feb 11:10pm. Reason:
Strong injury to head. Special mention high amount of
tryptophan.
Forensic Findings: Hair sample on the body matching with the
Delivery boy, Food delivery boy bought his hair samples
inside the body finger prints of the victim is in the boxes.
Evidences: Camera footages of the delivery boy at the time of
death.
Conclusion: Yes The killer is delivery boy.
For the above documents the eyewitness for the presence of
delivery boy is matching.
LHS = RHS.......
ARYAN KASHYAP
Nooo no but something is missing
,the theory isn't right. Somewhere
some thing what is that...?
LHS != RHS to make it equal LHS + X = RHS.
ARYAN KASHYAP (CONT'D)
Soo, What is X......?
7.
He Sees the theory of the relativity photo and gets shocked,
he discovers
CAMERA MOVE CLOSE TO EINSTEIN PICTURE ON THAT X WILL COME
FADE IN:
Date:FEB23
ARYAN IS STANDING UNDER THE SHOWER SHOWING BACK WIDE IN
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VIANY IS CLIMBING THE STAIRS FLOWER POTS HAVE NO ROSES
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ARYAN IS WEARING THE BLAZER.
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VINAY IS OPENING THE DOOR
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ARYAN SUITS UP
VINAY RAWATH
Sir ! Case kathe enaithu..
ARYAN KASHYAP
Its Solved....
VINAY RAWATH
Ohhh..yaru....! Yar adna madidu..
ARYAN KASHYAP
Banni nan Jothe Helthini...
He picks up the Boquet and start to walk down the stairs
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EXT/INT: CAR BACK SEAT
8.
CAMERA WILL BE PLACED IN SUCH WAY THAT BOTH SHOULD COME IN
FRAME.
Vinay will turn and ask
VINAY RAWATH
Sir heli, Enaithu..?
ARYAN KASHYAP
Ivaga iro Evidences prakara, let me
tell you theory of that night...
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ARYAN KASHYAP (VOICE OVER) (CONT'D)
Avathu it was Feb4th, priya albert
avru tumba kushi inda avl birthday
celebration ge wait madthidlu. At
around 11:07, the delivery boy came
with a cupcake. He saw Priya Albert
and start walking upstairs and gave
her the cupcake box. While she was
eating, he turned back and tried to
harass her. Unfortunately, she fell
from there. Ah stress alli avnige
en madodu gothagdhe. He suddenly
started running back, Next day avn
phone switch off madkond kelsake
bandilla. He is the killer. Ee
theory na correct anta prove madoke
nam hatra iro camera footages
prakara delivery boy. Strong
Evidence is his hair foilcles and
finger prints on her clothes. This
the Final verdict is THE KILLER IS
DELIVERY BOY.
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CAMERA WILL BE PLACED IN SUCH WAY THAT BOTH SHOULD COME IN
FRAME.
VINAY RAWATH
Ahhh..yake eh paristhithi. What did
she do to him. Avnige nan enadru
madbeku.
ARYAN KASHYAP
But. This story holds good until we
don't bring the time aspects. Ide
Kathe na innondh rithi nodana. What
if she died at 11:11.
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CLOSE SHOT OF OPENING HIS EYES WITH SLOW
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ARYAN KASHYAP (VOICE OVER) (CONT'D)
Assume you were there , at 11:09 ge
delivery boy barthane, He will drop
the parcel at the door, Aga nin
priya aase tarane avl hutid time ge
innu ond nimisha baki itthu, nin
avaga cake tagond baroke antha
hode,time padag time hogthaithu, .
ninu, odthiya..irodh ondh nimsha
(He runs down the stairs,
Picks up the box run back
give box to her he will
start showing that
necklace and surprise
her. By extreme happiness
she falls down )
Ah time ali you were clueless,
enadru madi idrinda tapsukbeku
ankonde, avaga nin talege bandidu
Delivery boy, alliro fingerprints
erase madide, ella clear ide anta
nodkond delivery boy na follow
madde
(He start following the delivery at
. He finds the hair follicle and
cuts the fuel wire, you also find
the his insta id ) avn gadi mela
insta id siguthe, You are brilliant
computer engineer, That's why we
don't have any footages of yours,
everything is taken out from cloud.
Amela Id itkond avniga malware link
kalsde. Adna avn click madid
takshna Phone switched off aythu,
avn gadi kuda halmaddde, so nxt day
avn kelsaku bandilla ,avn phongu
sikilla, ella mugsi normal 11:30 ge
bandh anjali hatra ambulance call
madside. I time allu timings
maintain madidala, I appreciate
your brilliance
10.
ARYAN KASHYAP (CONT'D)
Adre evidence ella delivery boy eh
killer antha helthive Your art of
thinking is elite, Ella tamper
maddde, Forensic report ond nimsha
hindk hakside, Footages tagde,
Delivery boy killer anta eyewitness
kuda nambsde, adre ond tapp madde,
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HE START LOOKING AT VINAY DOLLY ZOOM TO VINAY FROM ARYAN
WHERE IT NEED TO FOCUS ON SWEAT OF VINAY
ARYAN KASHYAP (VOICE OVER) (CONT'D)
Ond famous saying ide, enta
criminal adru enadru ond clue bitt
hogirtane, Ah tapp en andra the
parcel cover
(he get a parcel cover at
crime scene other day)
Avth box matra tagonda, but parcel
cover bitta, that caused
catastrophe effects..
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ARYAN KASHYAP (CONT'D)
Istond ella idmele, istsaku the
case is closed. Istralli eladkintha
dod tappu en andre obba sambhanda
ildiro amayakan bali pashu
madthaidda. There is still time to
go and surrender. Madiro tapige
pashayapa nadru agutha.
Aryan will bend his head, star closing his eyes. Car stops
hero walks down from the car with Bosque walks towards the
grave.
Grave revel the name says PRIYA ALBERT 04-02-1998 TO 04-02-
2024. He drops the bosque on the gave
SLOW MOTION BOSQUE FALLING
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EXT. PARK (18 MONTHS AGO)
11.
SLOW MOTION BOSQUE FALLING
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CAMERA MOVE BEHIND THE ARYAN FACE OF PRIYA WILL REVEL.
Priya will standing by folding the hands, she start speaking
PRIYA ALBERT
Sorry, niv tumba ollevnu, adra nin
jothe ast ollevl agiroka naniga
agalla. Nan jeevandalli nan tumba
kushig irbek anta asa, asa nininda
kodaka agalla, yak afford mado
standard nin atralla, I am sorry,
ning gotha Nan life heirbeku anta ,
nan hudid dina hudtid time alli,
nan birthday celebrate madkobeku,ah
kasha that moment naiga tumba
precious agirbeku, u can't give it.
Walks awaya
SHE IS WALKING AWAY FROM CAMERA AND CAMERA ZOOMING OUT.
BOSQUE FALLEN
COLSE UP SHOT OF EYES
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CLOSE UP SHOT OF EYES EMOTION LESS
He turn back, buttons up and start walking. Stand Infront of
church
BEHIND ARYAN INFRONT OF HIM CHURCH
CUT TO:INCIDENT NIGHT
BEHIND ARYAN
He lights up cigarette Vinay is running down there. Girl
standing camera goes down Aryan sitting inside the room
holding the stop watch, delivery boy comes and drop the food,
timer starts Vinay run and collect the box drops the paper
here roll the wire around his wrist.
12.
He runs and give the cake, he tuen away she start eating cake
g inside here body time ends,he shows the neklece, she will
be happy, Mat moves she falls, hero got shocked copper pipe
to heo follow up,
BEHIND ARYAN
PRIYA ALBERT (VOICE OVER)
Nan huttid dina , hutid time alii
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BEHIND ARYAN CHURCH TOMB
PRIYA ALBERT (VOICE OVER) (CONT'D)
Nan tumba kushiyagirbeku.
.............(on scene)THE HOLY(on scene).................
