Annotated Notes on “London” by William Blake

Stanza 1

“I wander through each chartered street, / Near where the chartered Thames does flow,”

​ •​ “Chartered”: Repetition highlights control and oppression. “Chartered” refers

to government ownership and privatisation of land, showing how even nature (the Thames)
is subject to human control.

​ •​ Juxtaposition of “chartered” and “flow”: Water should be free and fluid, yet it is
described as controlled—suggesting the unnatural constraints of power and capitalism.

​ •​ Personal pronoun “I”: Establishes a first-person perspective, making the

suffering in the poem more personal and immediate.

“And mark in every face I meet / Marks of weakness, marks of woe.”

​ •​ Repetition of “mark”: Could suggest both observation and permanent

branding, linking to oppression and suffering being ingrained in society.

​ •​ Alliteration (“weakness, woe”): Emphasises the emotional and physical toll on

London’s citizens.

​ •​ Break in iambic tetrameter (7 syllables instead of 8): This disruption in rhythm

could reflect the disruption of people’s lives by suffering.

Stanza 2

“In every cry of every man, / In every infant’s cry of fear,”

​ •​ Anaphora (“in every”): Emphasises the widespread suffering—no one is

exempt.

​ •​ “Infant’s cry of fear”: Innocence should be protected, yet children are born into
suffering.

“In every voice, in every ban, / The mind-forged manacles I hear:”

​ •​ “Ban”: Could refer to legal restrictions, societal oppression, or even

censorship.

​ •​ “Mind-forged manacles”: A powerful metaphor implying that the people are

not just physically oppressed but psychologically enslaved by their own acceptance of
oppression.

​ •​ Auditory imagery (“hear”): Suffering is not just visible but inescapable,

reinforcing the oppressive atmosphere.

Stanza 3
“How the chimney-sweeper’s cry / Every black’ning church appalls,”

​ •​ “Chimney-sweeper”: Represents child labour, exploitation, and innocence

lost.

​ •​ “Black’ning church”: Could be literal (covered in industrial soot) or

metaphorical (corruption and moral decay of organised religion).

​ •​ “Appalls”: Double meaning—horrifies, but also suggests the church itself is

darkening (both physically and morally).

“And the hapless soldier’s sigh / Runs in blood down palace walls.”

​ •​ “Hapless”: Suggests the soldier is a victim of war and power.

​ •​ “Runs in blood down palace walls”: Graphic imagery, possibly alluding to the
French Revolution, where monarchy was overthrown violently. Also suggests that the
monarchy is responsible for the suffering of soldiers.

Stanza 4

“But most through midnight streets I hear / How the youthful harlot’s curse”

​ •​ “Midnight”: Connotations of darkness, secrecy, and moral decay.

​ •​ “Youthful harlot”: Juxtaposition—innocence (“youthful”) corrupted by necessity

(“harlot”).

​ •​ “Curse”: Could refer to swearing, disease (syphilis), or societal condemnation.

“Blasts the new-born infant’s tear, / And blights with plagues the marriage hearse.”

​ •​ “Blasts” and “blights”: Violent, destructive verbs show the damaging effects of
societal decay.

​ •​ “New-born infant’s tear”: Suggests that suffering is inherited—children are

born into misery.

​ •​ “Marriage hearse”: Oxymoron linking marriage (a supposed new beginning)

with death, possibly criticising the institution of marriage as oppressive.

Context

​ •​ Blake’s radical views: Anti-monarchy, anti-industrialisation, and critical of

organised religion.

​ •​ French Revolution: A warning or a hope? Blake admired the revolutionary

ideals but also recognised the violence.

​ •​ Industrial Revolution: Caused urban overcrowding, pollution, and exploitation.

Form and Structure

​ •​ Dramatic monologue: Personal, passionate critique of London’s suffering.

​ •​ Cyclical structure: The suffering in stanza 1 returns in stanza 4, reinforcing the

idea that misery is inescapable.

​ •​ Iambic tetrameter: Creates a controlled, relentless rhythm—mirroring

oppression.

​ •​ ABAB rhyme scheme: Reflects the rigid structure of London’s society.

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incorporating language, form, and structure to explore how Blake presents these themes.

Theme: Individual Experiences

Thesis 1: Blake presents individual suffering as universal by stripping people of their

identities, reducing them to mere expressions of misery. He emphasises how suffering is not
personal but imposed by a broken society.

​ •​ “Marks of weakness, marks of woe” → The repetition of “marks” dehumanises

individuals, as if they are permanently branded with suffering, much like cattle.

​ •​ Form: The line breaks the iambic tetrameter (7 syllables instead of 8),
mirroring physical and emotional weakness.

​ •​ Structure: The first stanza sets the stage for individual suffering, but the shift
to collective oppression (stanza 2) suggests that no individual can escape this fate.

Thesis 2: Blake presents individual experiences as being dictated by systemic control,

removing personal agency and forcing people into suffering.

​ •​ “Chartered Thames does flow” → Juxtaposes nature’s freedom (“flow”) with

man-made restrictions (“chartered”), implying that even nature is trapped by human greed.

​ •​ Form: The poem’s rigid ABAB rhyme scheme reinforces this sense of
restriction, as if even the form of the poem is entrapped by societal rules.

​ •​ Structure: The speaker wanders freely but sees only suffering—suggesting

that movement does not equate to freedom.

Thesis 3: Blake suggests that individual experiences are shaped by an oppressive

psychological state, trapping people in their own suffering.

​ •​ “The mind-forged manacles I hear” → The alliteration of “mind-forged” creates

a sense of entrapment, suggesting that people are mentally conditioned to accept
oppression.
​ •​ Sound: The harsh “m” sounds mimic the clanking of real chains, reinforcing
the metaphor.

​ •​ Structure: The placement of this phrase at the end of the stanza is

significant—by delaying it, Blake makes the reader feel the weight of oppression build up,
culminating in the realisation that it is inescapable.

Theme: Anger

Thesis 1: Blake presents anger as being directed at institutions that should provide care but
instead facilitate suffering, leading to a deep sense of betrayal.

​ •​ “Every black’ning church appalls” → The adjective “black’ning” carries dual

meaning: literal pollution from industrial smog and moral corruption.

​ •​ Form: The placement of this phrase mid-line mirrors how suffering is

embedded within the structure of society.

​ •​ Sound: The hard “k” sounds in “black’ning” and “appalls” create a jarring,
aggressive tone, mimicking Blake’s own outrage.

Thesis 2: Blake channels his anger into exposing the hypocrisy of those in power, showing
how their actions lead to bloodshed and despair.

​ •​ “Runs in blood down palace walls” → The dynamic verb “runs” suggests
ongoing violence, while “palace walls” implies monarchical guilt.

​ •​ Form: The enjambment mirrors the uncontrollable spread of blood and

suffering—it cannot be contained, just as Blake’s anger spills over.

​ •​ Structure: The mention of soldiers’ suffering is isolated within the stanza, just
as they are isolated from society when used as pawns in war.

Thesis 3: Blake presents anger as being cyclical and futile, reinforcing the idea that suffering
will continue unless people take action.

​ •​ “Blights with plagues the marriage hearse” → The oxymoron of “marriage

hearse” suggests that every new beginning is already doomed.

​ •​ Form: The final line is the most shocking—Blake builds up his anger
throughout the poem, ending on a note of irreversible decay.

​ •​ Structure: The cyclical structure reflects the never-ending nature of

oppression, implying that without rebellion, anger is useless.

Theme: Loss and Absence

Thesis 1: Blake presents loss as a fundamental part of life in London, where even the most
innocent (children) are born into suffering.
​ •​ “In every infant’s cry of fear” → The noun “fear” suggests that children, rather
than being born into joy, are born into suffering.

​ •​ Form: The anaphora “in every” overwhelms the reader, reinforcing the
pervasiveness of loss.

​ •​ Structure: Infants are mentioned early, yet by the final stanza, they are linked
to death and disease—suggesting that childhood itself has been lost.

Thesis 2: Blake presents loss through the decay of moral and religious values, showing how
institutions that should offer hope have abandoned the people.

​ •​ “Every black’ning church appalls” → The juxtaposition of the sacred (church)

with pollution and corruption highlights the loss of faith.

​ •​ Sound: The elongated vowels in “appalls” slow the pace of the line, almost as
if the speaker is sighing in disappointment.

​ •​ Structure: The church is placed between suffering figures (chimney-sweeper,

soldier), showing that rather than protecting them, it contributes to their misery.

Thesis 3: Blake presents loss as being inescapable, as even love and marriage are tainted
by suffering and death.

​ •​ “Blights with plagues the marriage hearse” → Plague imagery suggests that
disease, suffering, and death are intertwined with love itself.

​ •​ Form: The final line acts as a punchline of despair, leaving the reader with a
sense of doom.

​ •​ Structure: By placing marriage and death side by side, Blake suggests that
hope and loss are inseparable in London.

Theme: Power of Humans

Thesis 1: Blake presents human power as oppressive, showing how the city itself has been
turned into a prison through capitalism and control.

​ •​ “Each chartered street… the chartered Thames” → The repetition of

“chartered” creates a claustrophobic feeling, as if London is entirely owned by the elite.

​ •​ Juxtaposition: “Thames” should be free-flowing, yet it is

controlled—suggesting that power extends even over nature.

​ •​ Structure: The consistent quatrains and strict rhyme scheme mirror the rigid,
oppressive society Blake critiques.

Thesis 2: Blake presents human power as being sustained through psychological control,
rather than just physical oppression.
​ •​ “The mind-forged manacles I hear” → Metaphor suggests that power is
effective because people accept it as natural.

​ •​ Sound: The phrase “mind-forged” is almost mechanical in sound, reinforcing

the idea of people as prisoners within their own thoughts.

​ •​ Structure: By placing this line at the end of the stanza, Blake makes it the
culmination of all suffering described before it, implying that mental oppression is the final,
most powerful form of control.

Thesis 3: Blake presents power as corrupting, showing that those who wield it—whether the
monarchy, church, or government—use it to exploit others.

​ •​ “Runs in blood down palace walls” → The juxtaposition of luxury (“palace”)

and suffering (“blood”) highlights the detachment of the elite from the suffering they cause.

​ •​ Structure: This is the only instance where an institution is directly connected

to violence—Blake suggests that monarchical power is fundamentally built on bloodshed.

​ •​ Form: The use of enjambment here reinforces the idea that this suffering is
ongoing, uncontrollable, and will continue unless challenged.

Final Thoughts

These refined statements deepen the analysis by incorporating Blake’s language, form, and
structure into how he presents each theme. They also include highly perceptive ideas about
how suffering is ingrained in society, how psychological oppression is the strongest form of
control, and how the very structure of the poem reflects the themes of entrapment and
power.

Perceptive and Slightly Far-Fetched Ideas

​ 1.​ The poem could be a prophecy: Blake warns that London’s suffering will lead
to rebellion (like the French Revolution).

​ 2.​ The “mind-forged manacles” suggest self-imposed slavery: The citizens are
so conditioned by oppression that they do not seek freedom.

​ 3.​ The structure mirrors a prison: The rigid ABAB rhyme scheme and quatrains
could represent the inescapable nature of suffering in the city.