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✍️IELTS Essay Introduction Writing

Worksheet
Goal: Write a strong introduction with 2 key sentences

🔹 Step 1: Understand the Task Prompt

Example Task:

Many people believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s lives. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?

🔹 Step 2: Sentence 1 – General Statement (Paraphrased


Prompt)

Paraphrase the question using synonyms and different grammar structures.

Original Paraphrased
Many people believe It is widely thought
social media online networking platforms
has a negative impact can harm / adversely affect
young people’s lives the lives of the younger generation

Practice 1A

Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.
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Practice 1B

Prompt: Many believe that governments should invest more in public services than in the arts.

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Practice 1C

Prompt: In some countries, a growing number of people are choosing to live alone.

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Practice 1D

Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.

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Practice 1E

Prompt: Some argue that watching TV causes children to be less creative.

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🔹 Step 3: Sentence 2 – Thesis Statement

Give a clear answer to the question. You can:

✅ Agree ✅ Disagree ✅ Partially agree (balanced view)

Examples:

 I completely agree with this opinion and will explain my reasons in this essay.
 While some people support this idea, I believe there are more effective solutions to tackle
crime.
 This essay will argue that although social media has drawbacks, it can also bring benefits
to young users.

Practice 2A

Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

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Practice 2B

Prompt: Many believe that governments should invest more in public services than in the arts.

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Practice 2C

Prompt: In some countries, a growing number of people are choosing to live alone.
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Practice 2D

Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.

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Practice 2E

Prompt: Some argue that watching TV causes children to be less creative.

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🔹 Step 4: Full Introduction (2 Sentences)

Now combine your paraphrased sentence and thesis into one introduction.

Practice 3A

Prompt: Some people think that students should learn practical skills at school, while others
believe that academic subjects are more important.

General statement: .............................................................................................

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Thesis statement: .............................................................................................


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Practice 3B

Prompt: Many people believe that advertising encourages people to buy unnecessary things.

General statement: .............................................................................................

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Thesis statement: .............................................................................................

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Practice 3C

Prompt: Some people think that the government should make university education free for
everyone.

General statement: .............................................................................................

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Thesis statement: .............................................................................................

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✅ Answer Key – Suggested Responses


General Statements (Paraphrased)

1A: It is often argued that extending prison terms is the most effective way to lower crime rates.
1B: Many argue that public funding should be allocated more to essential services than to artistic
activities.

1C: A rising trend in some nations is that more individuals prefer living independently.

1D: Some suggest that financial literacy should be included in the school curriculum.

1E: There is a belief that television viewing diminishes creativity in young people.

Thesis Statements

2A: This essay agrees that longer prison sentences can help reduce crime but suggests alternative
measures may be more effective.

2B: I believe that while the arts are important, public services deserve a higher share of
government funding.

2C: This essay will argue that the trend of living alone is influenced by personal freedom and
changing social values.

2D: I strongly agree that financial management skills should be taught in schools as they are
crucial for adult life.

2E: This essay supports the view that excessive TV watching can hinder children's creative
development.

Full Introductions

3A: As education systems evolve, there is ongoing debate about whether students should focus
on practical abilities or traditional academics. This essay will argue that both types of learning
are important, but practical skills have greater relevance in today’s job market.

3B: It is widely believed that advertising leads consumers to purchase items they do not truly
need. This essay agrees with this view and will discuss how persuasive marketing can affect
consumer habits.
3C: Some individuals argue that higher education should be accessible to everyone through
government funding. This essay supports the idea of free university education to promote equal
opportunities for all.
✍️IELTS Essay Conclusion Writing
Worksheet
Goal: Write a strong conclusion with 2 key elements:

1. Restate your thesis (paraphrase your opinion)


2. Final thought (a summary, suggestion, prediction, or broader implication)

🔹 Step 1: Understand the Role of the Conclusion

A conclusion is the last paragraph of your IELTS essay. It:

 Clearly summarizes your opinion or main idea


 Does not introduce new points
 Leaves the reader with a final impression

🔹 Step 2: Sentence 1 – Restate Your Thesis

Restate your opinion using different words.

Original Thesis:

I believe that while the arts are important, public services deserve a higher share of government
funding.

Restated Thesis:
In conclusion, although artistic fields have their merits, it is more crucial for authorities to
prioritize spending on public services.

Practice 1A

Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

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Practice 1B

Prompt: In some countries, a growing number of people are choosing to live alone.

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Practice 1C

Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.

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Practice 1D

Prompt: Some argue that watching TV causes children to be less creative.

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Practice 1E
Prompt: Many people believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s lives.

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🔹 Step 3: Sentence 2 – Final Thought

This can be:

 A summary of your key point


 A suggestion or recommendation
 A prediction about the future
 A general thought about the topic

Examples:

 It is therefore recommended that alternative measures be considered to tackle crime more


effectively.
 If this trend continues, it could lead to significant social changes in the near future.
 Educating children about finances could greatly improve their independence and
decision-making later in life.

Practice 2A

Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

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Practice 2B
Prompt: In some countries, a growing number of people are choosing to live alone.

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Practice 2C

Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.

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Practice 2D

Prompt: Some argue that watching TV causes children to be less creative.

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Practice 2E

Prompt: Many people believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s lives.

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✅ Example Conclusions
Example 1
Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

 In conclusion, although lengthy prison terms may reduce crime temporarily, other
preventive measures are likely to have a longer-lasting impact.
 Therefore, governments should also focus on education and rehabilitation to address the
root causes of criminal behavior.

Example 2

Prompt: Many people believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s lives.

 In conclusion, while online platforms can offer educational and social benefits, their
overuse can significantly harm the younger generation.
 Parents and educators should work together to promote balanced and responsible use of
social media.

Example 3

Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.

 In conclusion, financial literacy is an essential life skill that should be taught from an
early age.
 By incorporating money management into the school curriculum, we can better prepare
children for adult responsibilities.
📝 IELTS Essay Body Paragraph Writing
Worksheet
Goal: Write two strong body paragraphs with clear topic sentences, explanations, and examples.

🔹 Step 1: Understand the Structure of a Body Paragraph

Each paragraph should include:

1. Topic Sentence – introduces the main idea


2. Explanation – explains why or how (4 sentences)
3. Example – gives a real or realistic example to support your point
4. Linking/Result Sentence – shows the result or leads to the next point

Example Structure (Extended):

Topic Sentence: One major reason why some support longer prison sentences is that they act as
a deterrent to criminal behavior.
Explanation: When individuals understand that committing a crime could result in a lengthy
punishment, they may hesitate or avoid unlawful activities. This fear of serious consequences
often discourages illegal behavior. Longer sentences send a strong message that society does not
tolerate harmful actions. Additionally, the time spent away from society may also provide an
opportunity for reflection and rehabilitation.
Example: For example, countries with strict sentencing policies such as Singapore often report
significantly lower rates of certain crimes compared to nations with more lenient laws.
Result/Link: Therefore, tougher sentences may contribute to a more orderly and secure society
by deterring potential criminals from committing offenses.
🔹 Step 2: Practice Writing Body Paragraphs

Practice 1

Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

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Practice 2

Prompt: Many people believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s lives.

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Practice 3

Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.

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🔹 Practice 1
Prompt: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

Paragraph 1:
One major reason people support longer prison sentences is that they act as a powerful deterrent
to criminal behavior. When individuals are aware that committing a crime could result in many
years behind bars, they are more likely to think twice before breaking the law. The fear of losing
their freedom for a significant period often discourages impulsive or intentional criminal acts.
Longer sentences also reflect society’s firm stance against wrongdoing. For instance, countries
like Singapore, which impose tough penalties on drug trafficking and vandalism, tend to have
much lower crime rates than countries with more lenient sentencing policies. Therefore, harsher
prison terms may contribute to a safer society by preventing potential offenders from acting on
criminal impulses.

Paragraph 2:
However, others argue that longer prison sentences do not address the root causes of crime and
may even worsen the situation. Many people commit crimes due to poverty, lack of education, or
unemployment. Simply locking them away for longer periods does not solve these underlying
problems. In fact, time in prison may expose individuals to more hardened criminals and reduce
their chances of successful reintegration into society. For example, a study in the UK found that
prisoners who served long sentences were more likely to reoffend after release, compared to
those who received shorter terms combined with rehabilitation programs. Thus, focusing solely
on punishment without rehabilitation may not be the most effective way to reduce crime in the
long term.

🔹 Practice 2
Prompt: Many people believe that social media has a negative impact on young people’s lives.

Paragraph 1:
One major concern about social media is its contribution to mental health issues among young
people. Constant exposure to unrealistic images and lifestyles on platforms like Instagram or
TikTok can lead to feelings of inadequacy and low self-esteem. Young users may compare
themselves to influencers and feel pressure to meet unattainable beauty or lifestyle standards.
Over time, this can result in anxiety, depression, or body image disorders. For example, a 2023
survey by a mental health organization revealed that over 40% of teenagers felt worse about
themselves after using social media for more than two hours a day. Consequently, excessive
social media use can damage the mental well-being of young individuals.

Paragraph 2:
Another negative impact is that social media can reduce the amount of meaningful face-to-face
communication young people experience. Instead of building real-life social skills, many young
users spend hours chatting or scrolling online, which may lead to isolation. The lack of real-
world interaction can hinder their ability to form strong relationships and develop empathy. For
instance, some teachers report that students are less willing to participate in class discussions or
group work because they are more comfortable communicating behind screens. Therefore, heavy
reliance on social media may affect not only academic performance but also emotional
intelligence and interpersonal development.

🔹 Practice 3
Prompt: Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money in school.
Paragraph 1:
Teaching financial literacy in schools can help children develop important life skills from an
early age. By learning how to budget, save, and understand basic financial concepts, students
become more responsible with their spending. These lessons prepare them for real-life decisions,
such as managing pocket money or planning for future purchases. For instance, a school program
in Japan that taught children how to track their expenses showed that students became more
mindful of their spending habits within just a few months. As a result, financial education can
empower young people to make smarter choices and avoid financial problems in adulthood.

Paragraph 2:
Moreover, early financial education can help reduce economic inequality in the long run.
Children from low-income families may not receive money management guidance at home,
putting them at a disadvantage later in life. Schools can bridge this gap by providing equal access
to financial knowledge for all students, regardless of their background. For example, a pilot
program in Canada targeted underprivileged schools and found that students who received
financial education were more likely to save money and understand the importance of financial
planning. Therefore, incorporating money management into the school curriculum can create a
more financially responsible and equitable society.

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