Scribd
Upload
105 views1 page

Lo3 - James

The student received feedback on their work for LO3, which currently has a failing grade due to missing or incomplete elements that are required for a passing grade. The feedback identifies specific missing pre-production materials like a production schedule, script, and fully completed recce and budget. While some of the work shows potential for a merit grade, the missing items prevent a passing grade. The student is advised to add the missing items, improve other elements, and resubmit by the deadline of March 31st to achieve at least a merit grade.

Uploaded by

api-332753108
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
105 views1 page

Lo3 - James

The student received feedback on their work for LO3, which currently has a failing grade due to missing or incomplete elements that are required for a passing grade. The feedback identifies specific missing pre-production materials like a production schedule, script, and fully completed recce and budget. While some of the work shows potential for a merit grade, the missing items prevent a passing grade. The student is advised to add the missing items, improve other elements, and resubmit by the deadline of March 31st to achieve at least a merit grade.

Uploaded by

api-332753108
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
You are on page 1/ 1

A Block

James Ryan LO3 Feedback. 01/03/17

Current Grade for LO3: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
James, may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
there are improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
elements work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
of Pass and
Merit here. Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning
But the outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
overall any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
grade made.
currently is
a fail, due Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
to some Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
missing clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
items that are a requirement for a pass grade. Add them and improve some of
the work that is detailed below and you should achieve a merit grade for this
work.
You have developed appropriate ideas for the advertisements and then also
developed some proficient audio-visual pre production here. What you do have
is fair, and bordering on a Merit grade at times, however, you cannot pass this
learning outcome as you have missing pre production material. These are:
production schedule and script (if required). You also need to fully finish your
reccee and budget, they look incomplete, make sure you add a total to the
budget. See moodle or me for further guidance on this. Nearly there, but just a
little more attention to detail.

The resubmission deadline is: 31/03/2017

You might also like