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LO2 Feedback and Improvement Guide

Jacob Storer received feedback on his work for LO2. [1] The current grade is a fail due to missing or incomplete sections. [2] Jacob is encouraged to improve the work and seek help if needed before resubmitting. [3] All resubmitted work must be clearly labelled and uploaded to the blog by the deadline of December 13th, 2017.

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LO2 Feedback and Improvement Guide

Jacob Storer received feedback on his work for LO2. [1] The current grade is a fail due to missing or incomplete sections. [2] Jacob is encouraged to improve the work and seek help if needed before resubmitting. [3] All resubmitted work must be clearly labelled and uploaded to the blog by the deadline of December 13th, 2017.

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Jacob Storer LO2 Feedback.

23/11/17

Current Grade for LO2: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.


Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Make sure colour coded work has a key at the top – so the examiner can identify who has
contributed to the work

LO2 Part A. Initial Ideas

Note: This work is technically for LO3 (as it is in the LO3 criteria) However, you cannot do the
subsequent work without this document. Hence why it has been moved.

Make sure that you expand on some elements such as mise en scene, sound (diegetic and non
diegetic). Also add what additional campaign content you would include? Would you use posters,
social media? Billboards? Radio adverts? Re-visit this.

LO2 Part B. Treatment Proposal

This is a good treatment, a few things to add.

Please add in some detail on the other elements of the campaign you would develop (print adverts
etc) and when explaining the audience, make sure you use the terminology (demographics,
psychographics, socio-economic groups).

LO2 Part C. Campaign Schedule

This is not on your blog, so currently this learning outcome cannot pass.

The resubmission deadline is: 13/12/17

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