ludrol
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Nice! Your art got better and more consistent. one nit-pick would be that on bottom panel of page 12 I would put some background. a tent or some mountains would fill up the blank space and better place the characters in the camp.
Kneecap scene has induced in me various emotions. So good job doing that.
I don’t know why I had hard time keeping up with the story. Maybe I was reading right to left, maybe there was too many characters or just my attention span was too short. Probably just a skill issue on my part.
I really like Asa had watered her desert and made oasis to welcome others.
“I witnessed you” - it’s acknowledgment that asa has stood out but on her own terms this time, and maybe that she reach out.
Couple of weird choices regarding the adaptation. English translation of “princess”, in LN Quof translated as just “my lady”, and how ferdinand cast the spell in full view.
I kinda like how fake and stiff Rozmyne persona feels. The coldness of nobility is not something I felt as much in the Light Novel.
Also Chekhov stockpiles his heap of guns.
From the crowd I spotted few familiar faces, Ottilie Bonifatus and Rihyarda. The music is using some similar instrument to harspiels but still it’s different to the real life counter part of bandura.
In this episode there is no epiphany, a lot of time has passed but the changes are very subtle. I like that it’s not explicitly said what epiphany makio’s friend had.
Asa has a conflict where she cannot express her internal state in words. as Maikio put it, she lacks vocabulary.
<Goodbye, Horrible Fiancé, Hello, Fun Magic School Life!> vol 1 - The Protagonist has so much plot armor that plot gave up and stopped trying to throw a spanner in the works. The are no stakes here. Even slice of life has more inconsequential stakes than this novel. I don’t recommend it.
On th other hand <Altina the Sword Princess> vol1 is great. Protagonist is a bottom rung officer that is sent to remote fortress to work there, where he meets Titular Princess. The only bit of magic is how she can wield comically large sword. In the oversaturation of isekai it’s quite refreshing read. The romantic duo isn’t anything new but they are written well enough. I would label this as adventure - romcom and as I like all adventures I like this.
As I remember, the science of the 7 day lifecycle is handwaved, but the cause of cycle is plot relevant.
Only 5 chapters so far but it has already some great moments: Days Off In The Dragon’s Stomach
Got that nausicaa or sabicui bisco vibe
I can recommend Ascendance of a Bookworm by Miya Kazuki
Would be cool if you added link to your comic to the post next time.
The quality is swinging widely. Some panels are amazing, and some are just quick sketches. It could work as storytelling device, but I don’t have a feeling of purpose in those swings.
This one is great!
This is one of the most degenerate manga I have come across. Gambling on the stock market isn’t my thing.
I like that it’s metal.
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hmmm…
Ferdinand by コウサク Part 3
souce: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/127755156
Big Vocaloider
Nice! Your art got better and more consistent. one nit-pick would be that on bottom panel of page 12 I would put some background. a tent or some mountains would fill up the blank space and better place the characters in the camp.
Kneecap scene has induced in me various emotions. So good job doing that.
I don’t know why I had hard time keeping up with the story. Maybe I was reading right to left, maybe there was too many characters or just my attention span was too short. Probably just a skill issue on my part.
Triple Teto
[Disc] Maison and the Man-Eating Apartment · Ch.33 (comix.to) Chapter Discussion
BIRDBRAIN is in Wikimedia Commons
[Disc] Hitoner - chapter 3 (mangaplus.shueisha.co.jp)
[Chapter] Chapter 11 - Days Off In The Dragon's Stomach (comix.to)
Suddenly there’s plot in this slice of life
I really like Asa had watered her desert and made oasis to welcome others.
“I witnessed you” - it’s acknowledgment that asa has stood out but on her own terms this time, and maybe that she reach out.
Hitoner begins serialisation. 2nd Chapter behind the link (mangaplus.shueisha.co.jp)
The oneshot gets continuation
Couple of weird choices regarding the adaptation. English translation of “princess”, in LN Quof translated as just “my lady”, and how ferdinand cast the spell in full view.
I kinda like how fake and stiff Rozmyne persona feels. The coldness of nobility is not something I felt as much in the Light Novel.
Also Chekhov stockpiles his heap of guns.
The moon is still there, lighting the night sky, as it always has been.
[Episode] Ascendance of a Bookworm: Adopted Daughter of an Archduke • Honzuki no Gekokujou: Ryoushu no Youjo - Episode 1 discussion (ani.social)
https://lemmyverse.link/ani.social/post/29761018
From the crowd I spotted few familiar faces, Ottilie Bonifatus and Rihyarda. The music is using some similar instrument to harspiels but still it’s different to the real life counter part of bandura.
Model Collapse (ft. Kasane Teto) MV
In this episode there is no epiphany, a lot of time has passed but the changes are very subtle. I like that it’s not explicitly said what epiphany makio’s friend had.
Asa has a conflict where she cannot express her internal state in words. as Maikio put it, she lacks vocabulary.
[Chapter] Slippery okuta-san chapter 12 (comix.to)