User contributions for Emiya1980

25 November 2024

• 23:0823:08, 25 November 2024 diff hist −31 User talk:Emiya1980/Archive 4 →Untitled current
• 23:0823:08, 25 November 2024 diff hist +1,968 User talk:Emiya1980/Archive 4 No edit summary
• 23:0823:08, 25 November 2024 diff hist −1,968 User talk:Emiya1980 Moved to archive. current Tag: Manual revert
• 23:0723:07, 25 November 2024 diff hist +14 User talk:Emiya1980 No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 23:0723:07, 25 November 2024 diff hist +1,954 User talk:Emiya1980 Undid revision 1259470634 by Emiya1980 (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
• 10:2210:22, 25 November 2024 diff hist +15 Hirohito No edit summary
• 10:1810:18, 25 November 2024 diff hist −60 Hirohito See below.
• 10:1710:17, 25 November 2024 diff hist +13 Hirohito Improved flow. Removed Reference to Toranomon Incident becauase assassination attempt where Hirohito was not even personally harmed is relatively trivial for purposes of lede.
• 10:1010:10, 25 November 2024 diff hist −15 Hirohito No need to mention "war crimes" twice within the same sentence.
• 10:0610:06, 25 November 2024 diff hist +3 Hirohito Better flow.
• 10:0210:02, 25 November 2024 diff hist +7 Hirohito Undid revision 1259471086 by LilAhok (talk) [Compromise] No information is removed. Just less pseudo-prepositional phrases.
• 09:5409:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist −1,954 User talk:Emiya1980 Undid revision 1259470575 by LilAhok (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
• 09:5309:53, 25 November 2024 diff hist −163 Hirohito Such speculation is inappropriate for purposes of lede.
• 09:5109:51, 25 November 2024 diff hist +8 Hirohito No edit summary
• 09:5009:50, 25 November 2024 diff hist −38 Hirohito Undid revision 1259469980 by LilAhok (talk) Reverted changes to first sentence. Regardless of what details you want to include (which is another issue altogether), there is no excuse for sloppy writing.
• 09:4809:48, 25 November 2024 diff hist −30 Hirohito More concise and better flow.
• 09:4609:46, 25 November 2024 diff hist −1 Hirohito Better than using the word "after" two sentences in a row.
• 09:4209:42, 25 November 2024 diff hist −48 Hirohito Hirohito's wartime role has already been characterized as controversial. There is little point in repeating it in the final paragraph.
• 09:4109:41, 25 November 2024 diff hist +4 Hirohito Fine-tuned sentence.
• 09:4109:41, 25 November 2024 diff hist 0 Hirohito Fixed capitalization issue.
• 09:3909:39, 25 November 2024 diff hist +30 Hirohito Better flow.
• 09:3809:38, 25 November 2024 diff hist +7 Hirohito Better than referencing "Japan" twice in a row within the same sentence.
• 09:3409:34, 25 November 2024 diff hist −15 Hirohito More concise.
• 09:3209:32, 25 November 2024 diff hist −294 Hirohito Undid revision 1259467461 by LilAhok (talk) The lede is a biographical summary of Hirohito's life not an expose of misdeeds committed by a variety of actors in postwar Japan. Such level of detail is best left for the body. Tag: Undo
• 08:5608:56, 25 November 2024 diff hist −5 Hirohito Japan was engaged in more than one war during his reign.
• 08:5508:55, 25 November 2024 diff hist −6 Hirohito Better than using synonyms for "country" or "nation" twice in a row.
• 08:5408:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist +9 m Hirohito No edit summary
• 08:5308:53, 25 November 2024 diff hist −438 Hirohito Too much detail for purposes of lede.
• 08:5008:50, 25 November 2024 diff hist +7 Hirohito Better than mentioning "and" twice within the same sentence.
• 08:4908:49, 25 November 2024 diff hist +8 Hirohito Mentioning "Emperor Hirohito" once in a paragraph is hardly rises to the level of being used "over and over again."
• 07:4207:42, 25 November 2024 diff hist +29 User:Emiya1980/sandbox →Rise of the Fleet Faction current
• 06:4706:47, 25 November 2024 diff hist +19 Hirohito More descriptive with regards to time.
• 06:4506:45, 25 November 2024 diff hist +12 Hirohito Fine-tuned writing so that it gets the point across better.
• 06:4106:41, 25 November 2024 diff hist +15 Hirohito Better to not mention "Japanese" two sentences in a row. Improved transition in paragraph's last sentence.
• 06:3806:38, 25 November 2024 diff hist −9 Hirohito Fine-tuned sentence.
• 06:3706:37, 25 November 2024 diff hist +8 Hirohito No edit summary
• 06:3606:36, 25 November 2024 diff hist −29 Hirohito It's already been mentioned in the paragraph that Japan's military increasingly dominated its decision-making. It is laying it on too thick to bring it up twice.
• 06:3306:33, 25 November 2024 diff hist −187 Hirohito A relatively insignificant event from his rule best left for discussion in the body.
• 06:3106:31, 25 November 2024 diff hist +30 Hirohito Split sentence in two because it covers two separate events in the lead-up to World War II which make it bloated. Improved transition between sentences. Since it's debatable to what extent Hirohito in fact surrendered unconditionally, I have removed such language from the lede.
• 06:2406:24, 25 November 2024 diff hist +30 Hirohito That is not a common term for the Western World in English Wikipedia.
• 06:1806:18, 25 November 2024 diff hist −4 Hirohito No edit summary
• 06:1806:18, 25 November 2024 diff hist −1 Hirohito More concise.
• 06:1706:17, 25 November 2024 diff hist +2 Hirohito More concise. Better transition.

22 November 2024

• 06:2006:20, 22 November 2024 diff hist −600 Dan Quayle →Vice presidency (1989–1993): WP:TOOMANY current
• 05:5705:57, 22 November 2024 diff hist −5 Dan Quayle →Congressional tenure: less disruption to article format.
• 05:5405:54, 22 November 2024 diff hist +61 Lloyd Bentsen →1988 vice presidential campaign: Moved image to section where it is more relevant.
• 05:5305:53, 22 November 2024 diff hist −61 Lloyd Bentsen →Senate career
• 05:5305:53, 22 November 2024 diff hist −172 Lloyd Bentsen →1988 vice presidential campaign: MOS:DECOR
• 05:5205:52, 22 November 2024 diff hist +9 Lloyd Bentsen →Early political career: More context.
• 05:5105:51, 22 November 2024 diff hist +5 Lloyd Bentsen →1988 vice presidential campaign: Last 2 edits: Moved image downward in section and shifted it to left.