User contributions for 45154james

22 November 2024

• 10:2210:22, 22 November 2024 diff hist +547 Talk:Iris M. Ovshinsky →Notable in her own right?: new section current Tag: New topic

17 November 2024

• 09:2809:28, 17 November 2024 diff hist −14 Air pollution →Cancer (lung cancer): Lung cancer is not the only cancer linked to air pollution - as the end of this section makes clear.
• 08:4908:49, 17 November 2024 diff hist +13 Air pollution →Cancer (lung cancer): Tagging deadlink - but also note that "equivalent to smoking multiple cigarettes per day" is misleading and inaccurate.
• 08:4708:47, 17 November 2024 diff hist −17 Air pollution →Cancer (lung cancer): No need for intro words MOS:CAPSUCCINCT. Punct per MOS:CAPFRAG
• 08:4508:45, 17 November 2024 diff hist +1 Air pollution →Cancer (lung cancer): Moving general info from photo caption to body. Doesn't belong in the photo caption - but info is a bit dubious WP:MEDRS. Cigarette comparisons are complex and debatable.
• 08:2308:23, 17 November 2024 diff hist +25 Ibn al-Nafis Ambiguous wording (confused sentence subject). Needs to be clear that Ibn al-Nafis, not Galen, is the father of circulatory physiology. Also adding page numbers to references. current

15 November 2024

• 10:4110:41, 15 November 2024 diff hist +77 m Large Binocular Telescope →Mountain controversy: Citations needed please

13 November 2024

• 12:5512:55, 13 November 2024 diff hist +32 Weighted average cost of carbon →References: Dead link. URL no longer exists and no archive version exists either on Wayback current
• 10:4210:42, 13 November 2024 diff hist +133 American Biofuels Now →External links: Replacing dead-url with archived URL - web citation markup
• 10:2410:24, 13 November 2024 diff hist −59 User:45154james No edit summary current
• 10:1710:17, 13 November 2024 diff hist +33 American Biofuels Now Not encyclopedic or neutral in tone. Needs a thorough copyedit. Tagging.
• 10:1310:13, 13 November 2024 diff hist +785 Applied sustainability →Clarification regarding terminology: Citations supplied (secondary and primary) - and I think this quote is attributable to Julian Agyeman et al current
• 09:0909:09, 13 November 2024 diff hist +127 The Clean Air Campaign Restoring usurped URL to infobox with usurp formatting current
• 08:5408:54, 13 November 2024 diff hist 0 m The Clean Air Campaign →Clean Air Schools program: past tense
• 08:5308:53, 13 November 2024 diff hist −18 The Clean Air Campaign →Clean Air Schools program: Deleting defunct URL that no longer resolves
• 08:5208:52, 13 November 2024 diff hist +146 The Clean Air Campaign →Clean Air Schools program: Updated with note about continuation of work through Green Schools Alliance.
• 08:4708:47, 13 November 2024 diff hist +1 The Clean Air Campaign →The One Ton Challenge: Text to past tense
• 08:4608:46, 13 November 2024 diff hist −8 The Clean Air Campaign →Alternative work arrangement consulting: Some text to past tense
• 08:4408:44, 13 November 2024 diff hist +1 The Clean Air Campaign →Employer partnership program: Text to past tense
• 08:4308:43, 13 November 2024 diff hist −156 The Clean Air Campaign →Employer rewards programs: Text into past tense; deleting uncited information
• 08:4008:40, 13 November 2024 diff hist −66 The Clean Air Campaign →Public education: Text into past tense

12 November 2024

• 20:2120:21, 12 November 2024 diff hist +1 The Clean Air Campaign Lead into past tense
• 20:1920:19, 12 November 2024 diff hist −81 The Clean Air Campaign →External links: Removing bare usurped URL http://www.cleanaircampaign.org/
• 20:1720:17, 12 November 2024 diff hist −30 The Clean Air Campaign + Dissolved 2016 to infobox
• 20:1520:15, 12 November 2024 diff hist −53 The Clean Air Campaign Removing bare usurped URL rom infobox. I can't make usurp URL format work here, but the archived URL is on Wayback until December 2016 at http://www.cleanaircampaign.org/
• 20:0820:08, 12 November 2024 diff hist +102 m The Clean Air Campaign Correcting url in previous edit
• 20:0720:07, 12 November 2024 diff hist +436 The Clean Air Campaign Updating per note on talk. Campaign was apparently discontinued in 2016 (+archived citation from georgia.gov).
• 19:4719:47, 12 November 2024 diff hist +578 World Scientists' Warning to Humanity →First publication: Supplying missing citations
• 19:1919:19, 12 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Earth Day Putting citations in numeric order
• 19:1719:17, 12 November 2024 diff hist +235 Nuclear material Fixing missing citation current
• 19:0819:08, 12 November 2024 diff hist +514 Nimitz Glacier Replacing CN with citation; correcting dates (Operation Highjump was 1946-1947); removing "complex" - likely true but not explicitly confirmed by this citation current
• 18:3718:37, 12 November 2024 diff hist +4 Gerry Rafferty →Disappearance: Wikilink Paul Charles current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 November 2024

• 21:1321:13, 11 November 2024 diff hist −20 Deposit gauge →Design and construction: Removing cn. The same (Brimblecombe, Big Smoke) citation applies to both sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 November 2024

• 18:5918:59, 3 November 2024 diff hist +48 User:45154james No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 November 2024

• 13:0313:03, 1 November 2024 diff hist +8 Air pollution →Health effects: Correcting per request in previous edit based on citation, which included "premature". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 October 2024

• 20:4620:46, 23 October 2024 diff hist +32 Deposit gauge Clarifying deposition +wikilink Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 October 2024

• 20:3220:32, 13 October 2024 diff hist −1 Malcolm Gluck →Controversies: Typo current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:0812:08, 13 October 2024 diff hist 0 Frank J Kelly →Academic career and research: Updated from fk website per citation current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 October 2024

• 15:0415:04, 12 October 2024 diff hist −90 Frank J Kelly Per revised policy in MOS:POSTNOM Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 October 2024

• 14:5214:52, 9 October 2024 diff hist −18 User:45154james →People Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 September 2024

• 11:0111:01, 30 September 2024 diff hist −3 m The Book of Healing →Psychology: Fixed typo ["alwayings" --> "always"]

20 September 2024

• 12:0912:09, 20 September 2024 diff hist +562 Heart rate monitor →Accuracy: + better citation
• 11:5511:55, 20 September 2024 diff hist +776 Talk:Heart rate monitor →Comparison of wrist and chest sensors: new section current Tag: New topic
• 11:4811:48, 20 September 2024 diff hist +175 Heart rate monitor →Accuracy: Better source needed --> note on talk

12 September 2024

• 10:4410:44, 12 September 2024 diff hist +255 Carl Cotman + full birth date. not a great source, but ok for now current
• 10:4010:40, 12 September 2024 diff hist +312 Carl Cotman + partial birth date + citations
• 10:3310:33, 12 September 2024 diff hist −57 Carl Cotman + death date in infobox (can't find birth date but will keep looking)
• 10:3110:31, 12 September 2024 diff hist +223 Carl Cotman + additional obituary

2 September 2024

• 06:5706:57, 2 September 2024 diff hist −36 Carl Cotman →External links: Removing Google Scholar link - already linked under "Authority Control"
• 06:5606:56, 2 September 2024 diff hist +282 Carl Cotman + Note about death and citation.