Small text proofreading

KOBUGE-Games · Apr 17, 2016 · 17f4aaa · 17f4aaa
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diff --git a/levels/first_contact/level_1.tscn b/levels/first_contact/level_1.tscn
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 3 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0.207843, 0.333333, 0.215686, 1 )
-text = "Time to see what you know.."
+text = "Time to see what you know..."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0

diff --git a/levels/special_surprise/level_5.tscn b/levels/special_surprise/level_5.tscn
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ custom_colors/font_color_shadow = Color( 0, 0, 0, 1 )
 custom_constants/shadow_offset_x = 1
 custom_constants/shadow_offset_y = 1
 custom_constants/shadow_as_outline = 1
-text = "Oh fine... here is a tip:\nYou can push bombs too!"
+text = "Oh fine... Here\'s a tip:\nYou can push bombs too!"
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_1.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_1.tscn
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ margin/right = 735.0
 margin/bottom = 257.0
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 4 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0.207843, 0.333333, 0.215686, 1 )
-text = "Push the Radioactive Barrel to Acid Lake ... leave none ..."
+text = "Push the radioactive barrel into acid lake...\nLeave none on the surface..."
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0
 max_lines_visible = -1
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ margin/left = -160.0
 margin/top = -96.0
 margin/right = 160.0
 margin/bottom = -71.0
-text = "Move with W, A, S and D\nor the arrow keys"
+text = "Move with W, A, S and D\nor the arrow keys."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ margin/left = -160.0
 margin/top = -96.0
 margin/right = 160.0
 margin/bottom = -46.0
-text = "Push that box \nby moving right"
+text = "Push that box\nby moving right."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ margin/left = -64.0
 margin/top = -64.0
 margin/right = 256.0
 margin/bottom = 36.0
-text = "Let it fall in\nthe acid, but\nbe sure not to\njump with it!"
+text = "Let it fall into the acid,\nbut be sure not to jump with it!"
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_2.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_2.tscn
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ margin/right = 776.0
 margin/bottom = 257.0
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 5 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0.207843, 0.333333, 0.215686, 1 )
-text = "Collect all flowers ... they\'re the only life left in this planet ..."
+text = "Collect all the flowers...\nThey\'re the only life form left on this planet..."
 align = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ margin/left = -160.0
 margin/top = -96.0
 margin/right = 224.0
 margin/bottom = -71.0
-text = "Seems like we will have to push it...."
+text = "Seems like we will have to push it..."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ margin/left = -96.0
 margin/top = -96.0
 margin/right = 160.0
 margin/bottom = -71.0
-text = "Now fall on top of it"
+text = "Now fall on top of it."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ margin/left = -64.0
 margin/top = -96.0
 margin/right = 192.0
 margin/bottom = -46.0
-text = "Then collect that flower \nand push the barrel left"
+text = "Then collect that flower\nand push the barrel to the left."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_3.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_3.tscn
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 5 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0.207843, 0.333333, 0.215686, 1 )
-text = "Its all about jumping ... oh wait ..."
+text = "It\'s all about jumping... oh, wait..."
 align = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_5.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_5.tscn
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "Some boxes, like the one \non the left, can\'t be pushed\ndown into the acid, \nbecause of the terrain..."
+text = "Some boxes, like the one\non the left, can\'t be pushed\ndown into the acid,\nbecause of the terrain..."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "That\'s why you have BOMBS\nThey have to be picked up,\nbefore you can use them..."
+text = "That\'s why you have BOMBS!\nThey have to be picked up,\nbefore you can use them..."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "This is a ladder. On it you can \nmove up and down."
+text = "This is a ladder. While on it, you can\nmove up and down."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "Now... if you press space, \nyou will place a bomb"
+text = "Now... if you press space,\nyou will place a bomb."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "Place me here"
+text = "Place me here!"
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "After you\'ve placed the bomb, \nrun away so that your robot \nwill not be harmed"
+text = "After you\'ve placed the bomb,\nrun away so that your robot\nwill not be harmed."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_6.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_6.tscn
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 5 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0.207843, 0.333333, 0.215686, 1 )
-text = "How can that ladder be used\?..."
+text = "How can that ladder be used\?"
 align = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_7.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_7.tscn
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 5 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0.207843, 0.333333, 0.215686, 1 )
-text = "Be careful! Tricky.."
+text = "Be careful! Tricky..."
 align = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0

diff --git a/levels/tutorial/level_8.tscn b/levels/tutorial/level_8.tscn
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ focus/ignore_mouse = true
 focus/stop_mouse = true
 size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
-text = "See those wooden boxes\?\nThey block your way, but you\ncan destroy them with a bomb"
+text = "See those metal boxes\?\nThey block your way, but you\ncan destroy them with a bomb."
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ size_flags/horizontal = 2
 theme/theme = ExtResource( 8 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 1, 0.118736, 0.118736, 1 )
 custom_colors/font_color_shadow = Color( 0, 0, 0, 1 )
-text = "Destroy\nme!"
+text = "Destroy me!"
 align = 1
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0

diff --git a/main/gui.gd b/main/gui.gd
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ func prompt_finsh_level(turns = 1, has_more_levels = true, wait = 0): # Called w
 
 		var body_text = str("Level passed in ", turns, " turns.")
 		if !has_more_levels:
-			body_text = str(body_text, "\nThere are no more levels left in this pack. You can go to play some other pack, though.")
+			body_text = str(body_text, "\nYou completed all the levels of this pack. Select another pack to play in the level selection menu.")
 
 		show_popup("Good job!", body_text, wait)
 

diff --git a/main/popup.tscn b/main/popup.tscn
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ custom_colors/font_color_shadow = Color( 0, 0, 0, 1 )
 custom_constants/shadow_offset_x = 1
 custom_constants/shadow_offset_y = 1
 custom_constants/shadow_as_outline = 1
-text = "Pack passed!"
+text = "Pack completed!"
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0

diff --git a/menu/menu.tscn b/menu/menu.tscn
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ margin/right = 385.0
 margin/bottom = 49.0
 custom_fonts/font = ExtResource( 11 )
 custom_colors/font_color = Color( 0, 0, 0, 1 )
-text = "Select Pack:"
+text = "Select pack:"
 valign = 1
 percent_visible = 1.0
 lines_skipped = 0