Discussion about this post

User's avatar
James Maliszewski's avatar

These are all good and useful comments. Thank you!

I have been distracted by the preparations for my upcoming trip (I leave today), so more substantive replies will have to wait until I return next week. Once I am back, expect more regular posting.

Zephyr Bonilla's avatar

My strong instinct is that you ought to err on the side of comprehensibility. This may mean "$" but it could mean you just write out "credits" every time.

That said, If it's it just "¤" for money, I can keep track of that, especially if the equipment tables all have a "cost" column and then each entry doesn't just say "50" or "1200" but "50¤" or "1200¤." But if I have to remember that "¤" means money and "bruteborns" means space orcs and "Lixua Engine" means FTL drive and a dozen other bits of reskinned jargon, then that adds a big layer to my comprehension.

You can get away with neologisms if they are self-explanatory. For instance, you could have never read the Stars Without Number and see "vacc suit" in an adventure written for that system and instantly know it's a space suit. "Shear rifle" is slightly less obvious, but I would be surprised if you read that term and thought anything other than "some kind of really gnarly directed energy small arms." But a single character can't be self-explanatory unless it's already in wide use, which means it lacks the unfamiliarity you're trying to convey. Most of us know the symbols for dollars, pounds, euros, pesos, and yen, but not the generic symbol for currency.

Incidentally, one issue with the term "sols" is I would hear that and assume it's a unit of time, not a currency. think it means "a 24 hour unit of time used by people who need to know the time and date on Earth but are either in space or on another planet that has days of a different length." Your meaning as currency would be clear in a context like "the salvage is worth a paltry 300 sols" but it would be ambiguous in a context like "passage on the freighter is 30 sols" as that could refer to the length or the cost of the journey.

9 more comments...

No posts

Ready for more?