May 20, 2009
Mod Note: This review was initially posted for the one-shot, Rabu Yome, and was subsequently merged into Hajimete no Ofuro.
This is a student/teacher romance that has zero momentum. This a story lacking in depth, structure, or even real romance or passion. The only time that I saw some action was towards the end when "teacher-hubby" was calling "student-wifey," STUPID. Then I took notice.
There's not even much to commentate on because the story starts out with them married, having zero conflict except for the issues about their fathers---which could have been great had the mangaka developed it, and beyond that there was
...
nothing.
The teacher-hubby was a good guy because you find out he cared about her enough to "wait." Ladies, I'm sure you know what that means. So although they're married, he doesn't want to endanger her hopes and dreams to fulfill his libido. That's about the only depth to it and you can see it's fairly shallow.
The art is mediocre at best which matches the overall storyline which was precariously fluctuating between mediocre and poor. The characters were so-so; making my overall enjoyment almost nil.
For those planning to read it, I have nothing to say but be prepared to being bored or uninterested. For those who read it because you want to read student/teacher---you might have better luck.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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