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Sunday, April 19, 2026

Weird Tales, May 1942: D Quick, R Bloch and M Jameson

Back in 2019, we read Henry Kuttner's twist-ending story "Masquerade," a tale I wasn't crazy about but which was admired by anthologists and even the people who produce TV programs.  "Masquerade" debuted in the May 1942 issue of Weird Tales, an issue which has three other stories the MPorcius Fiction Log staff is curious about, so let's take some time to check them out.

But before we get to the fiction, I am going to recommend you look at this issue of Weird Tales even if you couldn't care less about Henry Kuttner, Robert Bloch, Dorothy Quick or Malcolm Jameson, because this issue is chock full of striking illustrations by Hannes Bok and Boris Dolgov.  Skeletons!  Male and female nudes!  A woman being strangled!  Reptilian monsters! Ships in the moonlight!  Evocative architecture!  McIlwraith got some stellar work out these guys for this issue, work that deserves to be widely known among fans of horror and fantasy illustration.   

"The Enchanted River" by Dorothy Quick

This will be the sixth story by Dorothy Quick with which the staff of MPorcius Fiction Log has grappled.  Below find links to our first five bouts with Quick, who, it seems, was famous in her lifetime for her friendship with Mark Twain, a relationship immortalized in a TV movie in 1991.  Maybe this weekend you can watch Mark Twain and Me as the life-affirming half of a Weird Tales double feature with the movie in which Vincent D'Onofrio plays Robert E. Howard, The Whole Wide World, as the downer half.  (Are there Ray Bradbury, Robert Bloch and H. P. Lovecraft biopics?  Clark Ashton Smith and E. Hoffmann Price are probably the most suitable Weirdies for cinematic memorialization, as Smith could be shown carving his crazy sculptures and Price actually spent time in foreign countries and participated in thrilling violence.)    

"The Enchanted River" is a decent happy-ending fantasy story, though it has some horror elements (a guy gets trampled into paste by an invisible elephant, after all.)  Quick's story also incorporates some elements we see all the time in weird fiction but which are pretty superfluous here, but these unnecessary components don't quite wreck the story.  Moderate recommendation.

You know how Arthur C. Clarke went to Ceylon and found the place and its people so captivating he spent the remainder of his life there enjoying its native beauty?  Well, the guy in this story does the same thing!  A rich business guy from the West, Wells Barrington, comes to Ceylon and falls in love with the place and decides to give up his career to stay forevermore.  Wells gets along just fine with the natives, especially after he shoots down a tiger that was terrorizing everybody.

One day Wells sees a beautiful girl bathing in the river.  Ava is her name.  Ava tells Wells that this is a magic river, that the spirit of the river helps guide lovers together.  She is at the river because she hopes the river will somehow bring the man she loves to her--Ava is in one hell of a pickle, the local priests having set her up with a guy she doesn't want to marry.  Of course, the man she wants to marry is Wells, the white savior who slew the tiger and has a pile of money.  And of course Wells is willing to marry Ava, she being so good-looking.  This story is pretty realistic!

Wells talks to the priests and the local prince and tries to solve Ava's problem the way we solve problems over here in the West, by handing out money.  Nothing doing--these natives care more about their faith than your filthy silver and gold and the gods have decreed that Ava will marry the prince.  As a last resort, Wells takes a nude dip in the river himself, Ava having maintained that the spirit of the river might help bring the lovers together.

At the bottom of the river Wells finds a little bell.  When rung, the little bell summons an invisible elephant.  This phantom pachyderm comes in handy when the prince and the priests lead a mob to Wells' house to kill him and Ava.  The elephant stomps the prince and cows the populace, who now see Wells as a hero blessed by the divine.  Wells and Ava live happily ever after.

Then comes the superfluous denouement that Quick tacked on to the end of her story or no reason I can discern after the satisfying gore climax and the assertion that our heroes will be living long happy lives in paradise.  You see, the prince, Wells, and Ava are the reincarnated members of a love triangle that rocked Ceylon thousands of years ago!  Tragedy befell the sympathetic couple that made up the base of the triangle even though an elephant tried to save them from the evil prince who was the disruptive third angle of the love triangle.  Today the ghost of that elephant finally finished the job it started so long ago by mashing the prince into a stain on the ground and making sure the two lovers could be reunited.  To my mind this reincarnation business is quite unnecessary, and if Quick felt the need to include it, maybe she should have hinted at it before the resolution of the plot instead of after.

"The Enchanted River" would not be reprinted until 2024 when S. T. Joshi retrieved it from the depths and included it in the Quick collection entitled The Witch's Mark and Others.

"Black Bargain" by Robert Bloch

Here's a Bloch story that both the aforementioned Joshi and editor Marvin Kaye included in anthologies, and which was included in a bunch of Bloch anthologies in English and in other tongues.  Everyone here at MPorcius HQ so enjoyed making the list of links above for Quick that we're putting together a list of Bloch links for this segment of the broadcast--links to my blog posts about stories that we have already read from the 1998 Arkham House Bloch collection Flowers from the Moon and Other Lunacies, one of those books in which "Black Bargain" reappeared.

"Black Bargain" is a pretty good horror story, and it qualifies as a tale of the Cthulhu Mythos because it mentions the forbidden book invented by Bloch, Mysteries of the Worm.  (Several of H. P. Lovecraft's friends created their own books of mind-blowing lore in imitation of and homage to HPL's famous Necronomicon.)  

Our narrator is a pharmacist who is operating a drug store.  Almost all his customers come in for ice cream, Coca-Cola, cigarettes, etc., and so his work more resembles that of a waiter or candy store clerk than that of a man who has a degree in pharmacy.  Probably the best part of the story is the narrator describing his customers and bitching about them like a butter guy in a mainstream story.

One evening, a nerdy-looking guy (he is skinny and has glasses and the narrator compares him to "Caspar Milquetoast") comes in and asks for specific chemicals.  He has with him a very old book, and drops clues we Weird Tales readers, and the narrator, recognize as signs that this joker is going to sacrifice a cat to a supernatural entity!

Our narrator crosses paths with this guy multiple times, and he learns that ol' "Caspar" in a matter of days has risen in status from an impoverished goofball with no women to a wealthy guy with a high status job and dates with the hotties!  His new position is at a chemical company--he already has his own office and authority over an entire division!  The mysterious chemist invites our guy to join the chemical firm as his assistant--after all, the narrator knows about chemistry from getting his pharmacy degree, and is sick to death of dishing out the ice cream and the cokes to the local brats.  But our guy notices something strange about the newly minted success' shadow--it seems to move independently of "Caspar," and it seems to become more solid and more independent the more successful "Caspar" is in his career and with the ladies!  Will this alien monster, the devil the chemist has made a deal with to secure success, become fully independent?  Will it take over the chemist's body?  Who will live and who will die?

It is no masterpiece, but "Black Bargain" is a competent bit of weird fiction that Bloch successfully integrates into a little early-20th century career drama.  


"Vengeance in Her Bones" by Malcolm Jameson

Naval officer Jameson's contribution to this issue of Weird Tales, the cover story, is a sentimental and somewhat silly thing, a real product of its time.  Captain Tolliver is retired--he lost a hand and a leg in the Great War.  But the United States government calls upon him to again serve his country!  In World War I, Tolliver commanded a cargo ship that had many wild adventures, including sinking multiple German naval vessels.  The ship was to be broken up after the war, but when workers went aboard to tear her apart, they died in mysterious accidents!  So it was decided to just let the ship sit and rust.  But come World War II, the government had her refurbished  and returned to service.  However, the ship keeps running aground, her rudder and engines inexplicably refusing to accept orders.  The government realizes only Tolliver can command this temperamental vessel.

Tolliver takes command, and just lets the ship run itself.  This ship is a genius, not only detecting torpedoes, submarines, and German raiders disguised as Allied merchantmen, but also figuring out which crewmembers aboard are German saboteurs!  Jameson's story is repetitive, the ship pulling off one improbable feat after another, such as pointing out to friendly warships the locations of enemy boats and ships so they can be destroyed or just ramming them herself.  Eventually the ship is totally wrecked and everyone aboard killed, and we get a sappy ending as Tolliver and his ship sink beneath the waves.

Barely acceptable.

I hope it goes without saying that I am a fan of the United States Navy and think that the Navy has been a force for good in the world since its founding and up to this day and so forth.  And I have no reason to doubt that as an officer in the Navy that Jameson did good work and contributed to the success of that great institution and our great country.  I baldly state all this because, as you may remember, a reader once took me to task for criticizing Alistair MacLean's writing, apparently thinking MacLean's exemplary war service rendered the man immune from criticism, and I have to report that Jameson's work, four specimens of which I have read as of today, have not exactly knocked my socks off.  If you are interested, check out my three earlier blog posts touching upon Jameson's career at the following links:


A lot of people seem to be more impressed with Jameson than I am.  Donald Wollheim included "Vengeance in Her Bones" in his Avon Fantasy Reader in 1949 and Frank McSherry, Jr. reprinted it in 1990's Fantastic World War II.


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Another step in our eerie march lies behind us--before you know it, we will have read a story from every issue of Weird Tales published in 1942.  We've already dealt with every year from 1930 to 1941, as the links below will attest.

1930    1931   1932   1933    1934    1935    1936    1937    1938    1939    1940   1941

More such material when next we meet here at MPorcius Fiction Log.

Sunday, February 22, 2026

Weird Tales, January 1942: D Quick, M E Counselman and F Leiber

In December we completed a step in our journey to dark enlightenment when we achieved our goal of reading at least one story that appeared in each issue of D. McIlwraith's Weird Tales in the year 1941.  Today we begin our eldritch slither through the year 1942 with the January issue of WT.  This issue includes one of H. P. Lovecraft's best stories, "The Shadow Over Innsmouth," and in the letters column we find August Derleth discussing the place of this story in the Cthulhu Mythos.  I've read "The Shadow Over Innsmouth," multiple times, and blogged about it in 2018, so we won't be dealing with that masterpiece today.  Instead, we'll read stories by Dorothy Quick, Mary Elizabeth Counselman and Fritz Leiber.

An interesting note.  In Canada, a version of this issue of Weird Tales appeared with an Innsmouth-inspired cover and a May cover date.

"The White Lady" by Dorothy Quick

Like "The Shadow Over Innsmouth," "The White Lady" is afforded an illustration by the great Hannes Bok.  I have to admit I am not crazy about the way Bok depicts the ghost, however.  

Our story begins with a long description of the looks and attire of two people, the handsome but cruel Abbot Telva and beautiful and elegant Mary Vetrell.  The Abbot, resident in England but of Spanish blood, wants the English Mary to marry his nephew, Clement, but she is not interested; sure, the Abbot's family is prestigious, but so is Mary's, and Mary is not in love with Clement, but with heroic soldier Sir John de Winton.  The Abbot is insistent, because he himself is in love with Mary, whom he has tutored since she was a little child, and if she marries into his family she'll always be nearby.  Besides, a union of the Telva and Vetrell families will allow him to add some valuable real estate to the Abbey's.  (Of course, we readers won't be placing any bets on the future prosperity of this Abbey, as we realize this story is taking place during the reign of Henry VIII.)  Mary and her father refuse to agree to the marriage, so the Abbot storms off, promising to use his high position in the Catholic church to make life tough for Mary; for example, making it impossible for her to marry John de Winton.

John de Winton arrives and we get a long description of him.  Quick's style is not very good.
He had a great chest and arms, with a figure to match, and was the type of man that women love.

Then arrives Mary's father, whom we are told looks like Santa Claus.  Sir Charles Vetrell is on good turns with Cardinal Wolsey, the king's closest advisor, so Sir Charles writes a letter to Wolsely requesting relief from Telva's prohibition on any cleric marrying Mary and John.  After John rides off with the letter, Sir Charles, a widower, and John's mother, a widow, reveal that they are in love and they plan to get married.  Quick seems to be more interested in writing about jejune vanilla sexual relationships than about anything weird.

Halfway through the story it looks like the Abbot and Clement have gotten to the King before John got to Wolsey, so the King is on Team Telva and will make sure Clement and Mary wed.  Mary says she'll commit suicide before marrying a Spaniard and then faints.

John, Wolsey, and Anne Boleyn concoct a scheme to get Mary out of marrying Clement.  They convince King Henry that Sir Charles' manor house is haunted by a Lady in White.  When the King and his court come by to attend the wedding of Clement and Mary the ghost--somebody in disguise--will appear and warn that the marriage should not take place, that Mary must marry for love.

There is a mix-up--Mary thinks she is to play the ghost and Anne Boleyn thinks she is to play the ghost, so there are two ghosts at the appointed hour and the whole thing is a shambles, both girls being seized by Henry's soldiers.  But then a real ghost, Mary's mother, appears, and lays down the law.  The king will compel the Church to marry Mary and John.

We have here a poorly-written and totally boring story.  Quick makes a hash of the personality of the Abbot and we readers have no idea how we are supposed to feel about him--he is in the villain slot, but we keep hearing that Mary had a good relationship with him for years.  Quick clumsily tries to exploit the reader's supposed interest in the court politics of Henry VIII and the English Reformation and supposed hostility to Spaniards and the Catholic Church, which feels like a cheap short cut, like she can't generate emotion in the reader on her own and so resorts to latching on to feelings she thinks you already have.  Th descriptions are tedious and numb the mind instead of building atmosphere or painting images.  As for the plot, "The White Lady" reads like a caricature of what men suspect fiction by women is like, a bunch of women using their social connections to get married.

Thumbs down!

"The White Lady" was reprinted in 2001 in an anthology by Forrest J. Ackerman and in the 2024 Quick collection The Witch's Mark and Others.  I believe this is the fifth Quick story I have read--click the links to see how I rated "The Witch's Mark," "Turn Over," "Edge of the Cliff," and "The Lost Gods" and rest assured that I didn't dislike all of them.


"Parasite Mansion" by Mary Elizabeth Counselman

"Parasite Mansion" is also adorned with a Hannes Bok illustration, but I am finding the composition of this one, and the faces and poses of the figures, below par for Bok.  Too bad. 

More bad news.  "Parasite Mansion" is another long and tedious and poorly-written story.  What is the world coming to?

Blue-eyed redhead Marcia Trent is a grad student in Psychology and a teacher at a girl's school in Carolina.  When she hears that her fiancĂ© is marrying her sister back home in Birmingham, Alabama, she hops in her car and sets out on a 400-mile trek, full of rage.  She somehow ends up on a lonely road where she crashes the car because a sniper puts two rounds through her windshield.  She hits her head and sprains her ankle and is carried into a decaying mansion by some weirdos, the Mason family.  Counselman provides us, with sleep-inducing detail, descriptions of the Mason mansion and its occupants that stress how contradictory or paradoxical the milieu and its occupants are--the mansion is full of beautiful antiques, for example, but is also in a terrible state of repair.  Our heroine is stuck in bed and a succession of mentally ill people shuttles in and out of Marcia's room for page after page after page.

We've got the sniper, Renny Mason, a murderous little boy who, having failed to slay Marcia with his rifle, tries to strangle her.  Little Renny is trying to kill our redheaded academic because he fears she has come to take away his older sister.  Renny's campaign of destruction is arrested by his adult brother, Victor Mason, a filthy drunk who is also a trained physician who wraps up Marcia's ankle and puts stiches in her noggin.  (Victor is one of Counselman's paradoxes, a man of science who has become a slave to superstition, a handsome chap under a thick coat of booze and dirt.)  We've also got a hideous old woman who married into this insane family long ago, Gran, whom we are told multiple times looks like a mummy.  Gran thinks she is better than the others and is acquisitive, steals Marcia's money and jewelry.  Finally we have teenaged girl Lollie Mason, Renny and Victor's sister, blonde and skinny and innocent; she thinks Marcia is a princess.  Poltergeist-type phenomena attend Lollie, and she spontaneously suffers bloody wounds, as if an invisible demon has scratched her.  Marcia, a scientist (you know, we all pretend psychology is a science, our of politeness), thinks Lollie's gruesome injuries are psychosomatic.

"Parasite Mansion" is like 17 pages long.  Halfway through, Victor tells the history of the cursed Mason family.  His great aunt and then his aunt were terrorized by an invisible monster, tormented until their deaths; Lollie is the third such victim.  The first two victims of the monster were admitted to asylums but the doctors could do nothing for them, so Lollie and her family are determined to keep victim #3 from being similarly taken away, uselessly, to a depressing institution and so the Masons have shut themselves off from the world, leaving the family in poverty and Renny and Lollie with no education or social skills.  Victor declares he cannot let Marcia leave, as she would attract the authorities and lookie-loos to the dilapidated estate and Lollie would end up in an asylum.

In the last third or quarter of the story, Marcia figures out what is going on and saves the day.  Gran has the power of telekinesis and has been using it to terrorize the pretty Mason women whom she envies and resents because the Masons were not as wealthy a family she thought they were when she married into their family.  As for the injuries, they really are psychosomatic, like stigmata.  After she has been discovered, Gran tries to murder Marcia, fails, and has a heart attack and dies.  We are led to expect that Victor, Lollie, and Renny will rejoin society and have normal lives--Victor will quit the booze and marry Marcia, he being a hunk once he is shaved and washed up.

Long, slow and repetitive, and irritating to read because of the clumsy style.  I can't blame Counselman for the typos, but I can blame McIlwraith, and I can blame both of them for some of the lines that are so wacky as to take you right out of the story:
"It sounds like the supernatural, I know. But so did television, to people of Shakespeare’s time."
Thumbs down for "Parasite Mansion."  Arkham House put out a Counselman collection, Half in Shadow, in 1978, and you can find "Parasite Mansion" in there.  In 1987 Peter Haining included this clunker in his anthology Poltergeist: Tales of Deadly Ghosts.

For some reason I have read a stack of Counselman stories--behold the links: "The Unwanted," "The Black Stone Statue," "Twister," "The Girl with the Green Eyes," "The Cat-Woman," "Mommy," "The Web of Silence" and "Drifting Atoms."  As with the list of Quick, stories, I actually didn't condemn all of these.


"The Phantom Slayer" by Fritz Leiber

After those two long boring pieces it is a relief to read a well-written story with some human feeling and some strong images.  "The Phantom Slayer"'s content is just OK, but thanks to superior technique the story is miles ahead of Quick's and Counselman's.

Our narrator is sort of a loser who is going through some tough times.  An uncle he never met dies, and he inherits unc's meagre estate; unc was a retired police lieutenant and paid his rent in advance, so our narrator gets to live in unc's apartment in the big city and eat unc's stockpiled canned food.  Leiber does a good job describing the narrator's loneliness and what it is like to move into a little apartment in the big city.  This material is right up my alley; I am fascinated by city life and small apartments, the sounds and the smells, the light and shadows and all that.

The plot concerns the narrator going through his uncle's things, in particular newspaper clippings about a series of murders by what we today would call a serial killer, and horrible dreams the narrator has after moving in to unc's flat.  Or are they dreams?  Is the narrator's uncle trying to communicate with his nephew from the grave?  Trying to take over the narrator's body?  Is the uncle trying to solve the case of the Phantom Slayer, or is he himself the Phantom Slayer?  Is the narrator going to become a murderer himself or save the day and solve the crime?

It is not rare for a character in weird fiction to learn something dreadful about his own ancestry and/or identity, to have dreams that may in fact be memories of things he is doing while he thinks he is asleep, and to fear someone else is taking over his body.  But Leiber handles this conventional material pretty skillfully.  I can moderately recommend "The Phantom Slayer."

Sometimes under the title "The Inheritance," "The Phantom Slayer" has been reprinted many times, in various Leiber collections and in several anthologies. 
      

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Not a great start of the 1942 leg of our long march through the history of Weird Tales, but when walking the weird road, you gotta take the rough with the smooth.  And Fritz's contribution is good.  As for this issue of the magazine, of course "The Shadow Over Innsmouth," Bok's illo for that story and Derleth's commentary on it make it worthwhile for the student of the weird.

We'll continue our explorations of 1942 weird stories soon, but first a novel from the late 1920s.

Tuesday, August 26, 2025

Weird Tales, Sept '41: R Bloch, T McClusky, D Quick and M W Wellman

The September 1941 issue of Weird Tales is full of material of interest to us here at MPorcius Fiction Log.  We've got multiple great illustrations by Hannes Bok as well as good ones from Boris Dolgov and Andrew Brosnatch.  In the letters column we find that a guy, prompted by Robert Bloch's story "Beauty's Beast," wrote in to explain aspects of Hindu philosophy; Bloch responds in warm-hearted but jocular fashion.  And we've got the fiction.  Highlighted on the cover is August Derleth's "Beyond the Threshold," which we read back in 2023, and thought was not bad.  But there's also work by Bloch, Thorp McClusky, Manly Wade Wellman, and Dorothy Quick which we haven't read yet, stories which after today will be woven into the fabric of the long winding history of MPorcius Fiction Log.

(We're skipping the Nelson S. Bond story, which I think is part of a long series of joke stories.  For my health I need to limit my intake of joke stories and I'm already running considerable risk by reading the Bloch story.)


"A Sorcerer Runs for Sheriff" by Robert Bloch

We might consider this a minor Bloch story; it looks like it has not been anthologized in English, and has only appeared in one Bloch collection, 1974's Flowers from the Moon and Other Lunacies.  You can find "A Sorcerer Runs for Sheriff" in the 1974 German anthology Exklusive Alpträume alongside works by, among others, H. G. Wells, Richard Matheson, and Dorothy Quick, whose "The Lost Gods," which we will soon read, appeared in both the September 1941 ish of WT and that German volume.

"A Sorcerer Runs for Sheriff" appeals to the reader's supposed disgust at obese people and envy of businesspeople.  Our narrator, a writer named Bob, hates Allan Wando, a factory owner who is fat and pays his workers low wages but is nevertheless "one of the most popular men in town."  I guess Bloch also means to appeal to WT readers' supposed alienation from society as a whole.  And their alienation from politics--Wando is going to run for public office and asks the narrator to write some speeches for him.  Bob refuses.

In a recursive inside-joke bit, Wando has a copy of the May 1941 issue of Weird Tales, and it has apparently inspired him to practice, or play at practicing, black magic.  One reason Wando is popular despite his obesity and sharp business practices is that he throws unusual, memorable, parties.  The narrator attends a party where Wando provides the dozen attendees wax voodoo dolls (he calls them "poppets" and ties them to European, not African, tradition) and paper and fabric with which to fashion hair and clothes so the dolls resemble Adolf Hitler--the party-goers will try to kill Hitler from the safety of this side of the Atlantic Ocean via black magic!  At once Wando and his twelve guests stab their dolls in the head, but it isn't der Fuehrer who dies, but one of the party goers, a sort of vapid and vain woman.  A doctor among the attendees declares it a cerebral hemorrhage, but our narrator notices one of the woman's hairs is stuck in the wax of the doll that their host Wando stabbed!  Hmmm...Wando doesn't seem to have made much effort to make his doll look like Hitler!  Is Wando a real sorcerer using black magic to destroy his enemies?

Sure enough, as the election gets going--Bob is writing speeches for a rival candidate of Wando's and the incumbent in this three man race--Wando is often seen in the company of three dark hook-nosed foreigners (Bob compares them to "mulattoes" and "Cab Calloway's orchestra"), and Bob discovers evidence that Wando has been trying to acquire some of the incumbent's hair!  

After the incumbent keels over, Wando begins making dolls of Bob and the candidate Bob is working for.  In a way I didn't quite find credible, Bob manages to switch the doll of himself made by Wando with a doll of Wando made by him (Bob), so when fat Wando, who I guess doesn't look at the doll closely, stabs it he himself, not thin Bob, dies.  Then Bob tosses the Wando doll in the fire and Wando's body melts as if it itself is wax.

This story is OK; maybe I would like it more if it was told from the point of view of the fat wizard or one of the dark hook-nosed foreigners and not a wisecracking scribbler who tells us ahead of time that we should hate Wando--in a better story we readers would learn to hate Wando by observing his actions.  (I'll note here that Bloch in real life in 1939 worked on a mayoral campaign in Milwaukee.) 

"The Music from Infinity" by Thorp McClusky

In September of 1777, after Boswell had explained to him how "musick" "agitate[s] my nerves painfully, producing in my mind alternate sensations of pathetick dejection...and of daring resolution," Dr. Johnson responded that "I should never hear it, if it made me such a fool."  I feel like we have read quite a few stories here at MPorcius Fiction Log that attest to the power of music to affect people, among them Carl Jacobi's "The Satanic Piano," Maria Moravsky's "The Soul of the Cello,"  Bloch's "The Fiddler's Fee," Charles Beaumont's "Night Ride," Barry Malzberg's "Concerto Academico," and no doubt a stack of others I am forgetting.  Well, here's another one, this one by Thorp McClusky.

Among anthologists, only Kurt Singer seems to have favored "The Music from Infinity," but he got it into a British book in 1974 and a German one in 1975, so he seems to have been doing his level best to expose McClusky's tale to the SF world.  And understandably so; "The Music from Infinity" is a moderately good story, McClusky successfully developing settings and moods and the story moving along at a good pace, presenting situations which are compelling to the reader.  The ending is likely an overreach, but the bulk of the piece is solid.

We've got a bunch of interlocking frame stories, which often bothers me but isn't so bad here.  Our narrator is a musician who visits a friend who lives in a boarding house occupied by middle-class bachelors, junior executives and guys like that.  The friend tells a story of a man who recently died, a nervous man he met here in the boarding house with whom he was briefly chummy.  This nervous dude hated hearing live piano music, and eventually explained why.  You see, he was married to a famous pianist who died suddenly, and she was haunting him!  Whenever he was within earshot of a piano, but couldn't actually see the instrument, he heard his wife's most famous song being performed in her signature style.  Nobody else could hear the ghost music, even though the music assumed the idiosyncratic nature of the instrument upon which it was being played (if the piano was out of tune, for example, the music he heard was out of tune in just that way.)  The city is full of bars and hotels and private homes with pianos, and the widower was hard pressed to find a place where he was far enough from a piano to escape this haunting.  Eventually this nervous wreck was confronted by a piano in a place he was not expecting to find one, and cracked up, admitting he murdered his wife because he was envious of her fame and shamed by her ability to make more money than he.

McClusky does a good job with all this material, but pushes a little too far, trying to add some additional supernatural oomph to his story, an effort that, in my opinion, actually weakens the story, undermining some of its best elements.  The narrator, a musician, and his friend, who has some minor psychic ability, are able to hear the music of the ghost at the moment when the murderer is executed, either because the ghost is celebrating her revenge or because at the moment of death the murderer's brain emits a psychic eruption.  Personally I think having other people hear the ghost music undermines the eeriness of the music element, and the idea that the wife is gloating to men she never met over her husband's execution makes little sense and renders her less sympathetic.

Still, a commendable effort.


"The Lost Gods" by Dorothy Quick

I've already mentioned that "The Lost Gods" was reprinted in the German anthology Exklusive Alpträume; Quick's story saw print again in its original language in the 2024 collection edited by S. T. Joshi, The Witch's Mark and Others.  

I feel like we've read quite a few stories about ancient lovers trying to reincarnate in the bodies of modern people and reunite,* and "The Lost Gods" is another of those.  Luckily, Quick's style is good, the emotions of the narrator feel real, there are cool images, the plot doesn't have any glaring holes, and the heroine is more than a victim of fate or destiny, making decisions and pursuing her own goals,  goals founded on natural human desires--this is a legitimately good story, so thumbs up for "The Lost Gods."

*Robert E. Howard's "People of the Dark," Edgar Rice Burroughs' The Eternal Lover, and C. L. Moore's "Tryst in Time" are the ones I can think of on short notice.   

Our narrator is a woman writer, Irene, interested in Cortez and the conquest of Mexico and related topics.  She gets engaged to Harvey, a handsome rich guy, but he is kind of a weirdo, and all Irene's family and social set are doubtful they should marry.  You see, this joker has dreams, all the time, of an impossibly beautiful woman, and is more or less in love with this dream woman.  Can he really love Irene if he has this mystery woman on his mind all the time?   Irene and Harvey do wed, but Irene has many a rough moment of doubt, in particular when she sees her husband's face one night while he dreams of the dream woman--his mug bears an expression of happiness that Irene has never seen before, a level of happiness she is not able to inspire in him!  Ouch!

The newlyweds go on their honeymoon to the jungles of Mexico to look at remote and ancient temples very few white people have ever seen.  In a sudden downpour they take refuge in a cave.  A landslide traps them in there, compelling them to explore deeper, and they discover a subterranean chamber with an altar built by a race of redheaded white people who predate the Mayans and Aztecs and have been almost entirety forgotten.  A painting of a handsome man and a beautiful woman adorns the wall--these are ancient gods and Harvey recognizes the goddess as the woman from his dreams!

Another landslide destroys the wall that bears this painting but offers our main characters a way out, and the visages of the lost gods are permanently etched in Irene and Harvey's minds, anyway.  The cave-in also exposes ancient jewelry of astronomical value.  Our heroes don this jewelry, putting Harvey in psychic contact with the lost god!  Back in America, the lost god directs Harvey to build in the Hamptons a modernistic mansion with glass walls and roof, and then coaches him on how to summon the god and goddess back to Earth!  What will be the outcome of the ancient ceremony Harvey and Irene perform in the mansion under the stars and above the sea?  Will the gods rise to the stars after thanking our heroes?  Or possess their bodies and exploit them?  Can our heroes survive the direct contact of mortal and divine?  And if they can, will their love endure?

A solid story I can definitely recommend.  One might see it as a traditional pre- or un-feminist women's romance story, with a plot centered on a woman's pursuit of a man's true love in the face of a battery of obstacles, but feminists might appreciate that the villain is male, the sympathetic lead male is a dupe, and a woman saves the day and achieves happiness through her own willpower and courage.  Also, because all the characters' actions seem totally logical based on their personalities and goals, "The Lost Gods" doesn't feel like it is trying to make an argument about sex roles or gender roles or any of that, but merely depicting how real people might act in an unlikely situation.  Contrast this with the Bloch and McClusky stories, which I like but are full of characters whose actions I found questionable--why did the fat businessman in Bloch's story kill the woman at the party, and why did he ask Bob to be his speech writer even though Bob hated him?  Why did the pianist in McClusky's story want the narrator, a man she had never met, to hear her celebrating her husband's execution?  We already have a hundred reasons to disbelieve stories that are full of ghosts and psychic powers and other ridiculous nonsense, so it is incumbent on the author of such stories to portray people acting in a natural manner if he or she wants us to take his or her story seriously at all, and Quick succeeds here where Bloch and McClusky come up a little short.


"The Half-Haunted" by Manly Wade Wellman 

"The Half-Haunted" is one of Wellman's stories about Judge Keith Hilary Pursuivant, and appears here in Weird Tales under the Gans. T. Fields penname.  I wasn't crazy about the Pursuivant tale "The Dreadful Rabbits," but heyeah come da judge to MPorcius a second time regardless.

This is a pretty good supernatural terror story that seeks to take advantage of readers' interest in early American history (Wellman is of course a history buff and published historian) and, perhaps, early 1940s hostility to Germany.  And it takes place in the state where I was born, grew up, and attended university!  

Judge Pursuivant (whom Wellman reminds us is friends with Seabury Quinn's Jules de Grandin and Dr. Troubridge) wants to visit a purportedly haunted colonial house in New Jersey, greatest state in the Union.  He arrives at the house's remote address in early evening to find it has been demolished and sitting on the site is a modern home.  It is starting to snow, so the owner, a retired country newspaper editor, suggests the Judge stay the night.

The house owner and Pursuivant discuss the haunt and its origin.  During the War of Independence, one particularly ferocious Hessian mercenary, one of the most skilled of German hunters, served in the area.  According to legend, this psycho stripped naked and fought the colonists like a guerilla, murdering civilians as well as ambushing and sneak attacking uniformed rebel soldiers.  Two women who owned the house then sitting on this site conspired to destroy this Teutonic menace; posing as Loyalists, they invited the Hessian to dinner one day and stabbed him in the back as he sat at their table.  But the Hessian's ghost terrorized them, scaring one of the women into jumping out a window to her death; the other just died of fright on the spot.  Ever since, the ghost of the Hessian has haunted the place.  Destroying the house hasn't exorcized the spirit--most recently it has scared the retired newspaperman's servants away.

The Judge, using his wits and muscles and knowledge of exorcism spells you can say in English (convenient for those of us who lack Latin, Aramaic, and all those languages from before the sinking of Atlantis), battles the Hessian, whose spirit lives in the basement and can only haunt the half of the 20th-century house that lies over the colonial cellar.  (Hence the title.)  Wellman does a good job with all the supernatural images and the fighting--the ghost of the Hessian and the ghosts of the two women all behave appropriately and exhibit real emotion the reader can identify with.  Thumbs up for "The Half-Haunted." 

Kurt Singer, apparently a big fan of this issue of WT, included "The Half-Haunted" in his Ghost Omnibus, and you can also find it in the 2001 Wellman collection Fearful Rock and Other Precarious Locales.


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An issue with at least five stories worth reading and lots of memorable illustrations--kudos to Dorothy Stevens McIlwraith and all the contributors.  

Only one more issue stands between us and our goal of reading at least one story from each issue of Weird Tales with a 1941 cover date.  Stay tuned as we approach another milestone in our ambitious speculative fiction project!  And feel free to reminisce about all the years of Weird Tales we have already explored at the links below!  

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Saturday, June 21, 2025

Weird Tales March 1941: D Wandrei, D Quick, A Derleth and T McClusky

Our aim is to read at least one story from each issue of Weird Tales published in the year 1941, and today we look at the second of the six 1941 issues, March.  This issue reprints a poem from a 1938 British fanzine by C. S. Youd, the man also known as John Christopher and responsible for the Tripods books and No Blade of Grass AKA The Death of Grass, which I blogged about ten years ago.  (Joachim Boaz blogged about No Blade of Grass in 2019.)  That is sort of interesting.  There is also an ad for the upcoming appearance of the posthumously published Lovecraft story The Case of Charles Dexter Ward, which I have read multiple times but not during the period of this blog's apocalyptic life.  Our focus today will be the stories in the issue by founders of Arkham House Donald Wandrei and August Derleth, by Thorp McClusky, who has made like a dozen appearances here at MPorcius Fiction Log, and by Dorothy Quick, a relative newcomer to these pages, we only having read two stories by her.

"The Crystal Bullet" by Donald Wandrei

I feel like we've read a stack of stories by Donald Wandrei from a variety of magazines including Astounding, of course Weird Tales, and even detective magazines.   OMG, it's links time.


"The Crystal Bullet" starts with some romantic slosh about the beauty of the natural world in the spring, the birds and the squirrels and a farm with big strong horses and black loamy soil, etc.  In contrast to these images and themes of warmth and life and peace and quiet is the sound of some sort of airborne object flying overhead and crashing nearby, atop a hill; when a farmer goes to investigate he finds a two-foot long thing like a crystal torpedo that radiates cold and a green glow.  Though the cold is more severe than any he has experienced, as if hypnotized he grasps the fallen artifact and brings it to the yard outside his house.  At home he seems to regain his mind, decides that when he is done with the spring planting he'll write a letter to somebody at the university or in the government about the crystal from space.  His wife wants him to take the thing away, but he tells her maybe they can sell it for a lot of money.  That night, his wife leaves their bed and goes to the crystal and, I guess, is frozen to death by it.  The farmer takes the crystal away and hurls it into an artificial lake, a flooded quarry.  He has the impression that the crystal is a spacecraft, fashioned by aliens with feathers and eyes on stalks whose bodies are part-gas, to carry either passengers or advanced three-dimensional means of communication; it might have offered humanity invaluable secrets but immersion in water totally destroys the object and its passengers and/or cargo.  It seems his wife is doomed, though maybe if the farmer hadn't destroyed the crystal the people/knowledge it carried could have revived her, even transformed her into a superior being?

This story is written poetically; it is full of mind-numbingly long sentences and much of what goes on is kind of vague and mysterious, maybe in part because I am not inclined to pout in the effort to laboriously decipher those long sentences.  I'm not crazy about "The Crystal Bullet."  We'll be generous and call this sterile literary exercise and effort to achieve the famous "sense of wonder" "acceptable."  August Derleth was more generous still, reprinting "The Crystal Bullet" in an anthology of "Masterpieces of Science Fiction" entitled Strange Ports of Call.  You can also find it in two Donald Wandrei collections, The Eye and the Finger and Colossus: The Collected Science Fiction of Donald Wandrei.


"Edge of the Cliff" by Dorothy Quick

Here we have a two-page story that was reprinted in one of those Barnes and Noble anthologies, a story about assisted suicide.  

An attractive young woman (I don't think we learn her name), was in love with Bob but her family made her marry Jim, who had money.  She hated Jim, a "drunken beast" who beat her.  She cheated on Jim with Bob, who promised to take her away when he had enough money.  Jim caught them and killed Bob; "Jim got off--he was a wronged husband."  Tonight she is standing on the edge of a seaside cliff, rocks below, wanting to commit suicide but too scared to do so.

The ghost of Bob comes along and urges her, pleads with her, to kill herself so they can be together for "Eternity."  She jumps and that is our happy ending.

We might see this as a pro-suicide story, and/or as a feminist story about how society puts so much pressure on women that it drives them to destroy themselves--the decision to live or die is the only decision the patriarchy leaves to women!  It is certainly odd to see a man plead that the woman he loves kill herself so that she will be with him; everyone in this story acts very selfishly.  It is also sort of interesting that Quick asserts there is an afterlife, so "Edge of the Cliff" is more or less a religious story, but totally ignores the prohibition on suicide of those religions which have been dominant in the West for many centuries.

Acceptable.

"Come to Me!" by August Derleth

I don't find lawyers and court room dramas very interesting, so kind of groaned when the first paragraph of "Come to Me!" introduced us readers to Judge Hillier and the case of Elsa Laing over which he is presiding.  Derleth's story only gets more boring and stupid as it proceeds.  Thumbs down!

"Come to Me!" is a deus-ex-machina Christian wish-fulfillment fantasy of a very childish type.  You have heard me in the past praise speculative fiction stories for addressing or promoting Christian thinking, and of course two of the most exciting and talented SF writers, Gene Wolfe and R. A. Lafferty, are serious Christians.  But Derleth here produces a dreadful piece of junk that has me shaking my head.

Elsa Laing, a single woman responsible for her aged mother, is on trial for selling people valueless stocks and bonds through the mails.  She has just been convicted when a message comes to the court--a higher power is intervening and will take over the trial tomorrow!

The next day a charismatic figure arrives and takes Judge Hillier's place.  This figure explains that Elsa Laing was tricked by a fat (Derleth tells us he looks like a pig) banker and a rich guy who wears pince-nez, hat and gloves, into unknowingly defrauding people.  As part of their operations the fatso and the clotheshorse also blackmailed some other woman.  This substitute judge seems to know what everyone has done, what everyone thinks, and everybody feels compelled to obey him.  This super-judge specifies at tedious length how the obese banker and the fancy dresser are to recompense their many victims (the two women and all the people who bought worthless stocks and bonds) and of course rules that the two women are totally absolved of any wrongdoing.  The government attorney who prosecuted Elsa Laing is also to be investigated by the local authorities, while Judge Hillier is commended for doing his best.  Then the mysterious judge glows and vanishes.  The substitute judge was Jesus Christ!  

A strikingly silly and bad story, with no plot tension, no characters, an idiotic view of theology and of the legal system of the United States, and also a story that tries to exploit readers' disgust at obese people and envy of the wealthy.  If Jesus can come down and stop people from getting defrauded, why isn't he doing anything about German and Soviet imperialism and tyranny?  Jesus, look at the calendar, it's 1941, if you are going to intervene in Earthly affairs, you've got bigger fish to fry!  

Abysmal.           

This embarrassment was reprinted in the Derleth collections Dwellers in Darkness and That is Not Dead.   


"The Graveyard Horror" by Thorp McClusky

When we talked about the January 1941 issue of Weird Tales, I was mesmerized by a Hannes Bok illustration of a tall skinny woman and Bok delivers another such image for this story.  The female lead in Henry Kuttner's "Dragon Moon" was a sort of fish-woman, providing Bok a reason to depict an impossible slender woman, and "The Graveyard Horror" offers him a similar opportunity because the women in this story are having the life sucked out of them by vampires!  

Like Quick's "Edge of the Cliff," "The Graveyard Horror" is about suicide and people who welcome death, but this 16-page story takes a very different attitude towards self-destruction and religion than does Quick's brief tale.

Young Karl and Jorma were in love, but Jorma's father Sven opposed their marriage because Karl's family were a different Protestant sect than his own.  (This story argues that the Christian religion is true and that conflict between different Christian denominations is dangerously counterproductive.)  So Karl committed suicide by tying a weight to himself and jumping in a body of water.  Jorma wasted away within a month, dying though she suffered no apparent disease.  The local undertaker of this small town tells the local doctor, our narrator, in a sort of roundabout way, that he thinks Karl became a vampire because suicides can't go right to heaven and murdered Jorma.  Of course the doctor scoffs.  But when Jorma's sister Hildur begins wasting away and tells people she is looking forward to joining Jorma, the doctor, the mortician, and Hildur's husband spring into action!  The mortician deliberately takes a page from the book of the Roman Catholics and employs an arsenal of crucifixes to attack Karl and Jorma and to defend Hildur.

I don't like the way "The Graveyard Horror" is constructed.  The narrator and the mortician go to Karl's grave three times, the first two times deciding that their suspicions he is a vampire have not been confirmed and so not doing anything.  I find it boring and annoying in stories when people do the same thing again and again.  On the other hand, I like that the vampires in the story don't open their coffins, bust out of their vaults and dig through the dirt of their graves to stalk the night, but issue forth as gaseous or immaterial beings.  And I like that Karl and Jorma, decent sweet people when alive, are foully evil vampires when undead.    

We're going to rate this one marginally good; it is certainly the best of today's stories.  Quick's, which has the virtue of brevity, is second.  

German anthologists Kurt Singer and Manfred Kluge included "The Graveyard Horror" in volumes of ghost, horror and vampire stories.

It turns out I'm not going to get out of this blog post without a lot more copying and pasting of links to all the Thorp McClusky stories we have talked about here at MPorcius Fiction Log.  Here they are:  

"Monstrosity of Evolution"        

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Looking on the bright side, none of these stories is rote uninspired filler; they all do something novel or tweak the formula or make some kind of counterintuitive argument.  Of course, the most entertaining one is the most traditional one, a reflection that stretching yourself and doing something off the beaten path is a risk.

We'll take a break from Weird Tales for our next episode, but the material we examine will likely be quite weird-adjacent.  So stay tuned!

Monday, June 16, 2025

Weird Tales, Nov 1940: R Bloch, A Derleth and D Quick

Today we are on the final leg of our quest to read at least one story from every 1940 issue of the classic fantasy magazine Weird Tales, fabled in story and song for its role in the careers of H. P. Lovecraft, Robert E. Howard, Clark Ashton Smith, Robert Bloch, Ray Bradbury, and others.  On this day our subject is the November issue, the last of the year.  We've actually already read a good story from that issue, H. P. Lovecraft and Zealia Bishop's "The Mound," a story I likened to "At the Mountains of Madness" and "The Shadow Out of Time," it being a science fiction horror story that integrated within its text Lovecraft's late in life technocratic ideas.

When I read "The Mound" in 2017 I didn't actually read the version of the tale printed in Weird Tales, but a more complete version that hadn't been edited by August Derleth and WT editor D. McIlwraith.  But today when we read stories by Robert Bloch, Derleth, and Dorothy Quick we'll read a scan of the actual magazine, grappling with the same texts enjoyed (or endured?) by the weirdies of 85 years ago.

Looking over this issue, we see it has a pretty tame cover--did McIlwraith put an end to the sexy covers so common under the reign of her predecessor Farnsworth Wright?  (If you want to hear me gab about exciting WT covers bubbling over with monsters and women who are either dangerous or in danger, check out my recent post on my favorite 1930s WT covers.) Fortunately, inside we find some striking renderings by Hannes Bok of some disturbingly twisted and some eerily beautiful semi-human beings.  The letters column includes a notice of the death of Wright, and an obituary full of praise for the man from perennial WT contributor Seabury Quinn.  And there are the usual ads for products and services that promise to improve your health ("Do You Want to Stop Tobacco?"; "Need Relief from Agony of Stomach Ulcers") or advance your career ("Make More Money Taking Orders for the Nimrod Line"; "Become an Expert Bookkeeper".)  I have to admit, these reminders of pain, death and poverty in the pages of WT are more upsetting to me than the fiction the magazine regularly dishes out about vampires, witches and lost cities full of aliens--being a salesman or a bookkeeper who suffers ulcers and is addicted to nicotine sounds pretty horrible.


"Wine of the Sabbat" by Robert Bloch

Here we have a story narrated by a struggling novelist living in Los Angeles, a man who habitually hangs out at the house of a wealthy woman with a crowd of all the California types we see in fiction, the Hollywood writers and actors and the mystics and so forth.  The story takes place in 1940 and is full of references to classic and contemporary writers, Poe, Thorne Smith, Ben Hecht, etc.  The many uninteresting characters all make smart alecky comments all the time.  To me, "Wine of the Sabbat" feels mind-numbingly long and slow, but maybe fans or students of old Hollywood would find it more compelling.

On Walpurgis Night, the rich woman brings to the regular get-togethers at her house a guy who looks like the devil and a huge Haitian guy and we witness the reactions of the novelist and all the other LA character types to these sinister weirdos.  Everyone assembles for dinner and the new attendees, presumably a Satanist and a voodoo priest, provide wine they say is from Europe.  The narrator is canny enough not to drink his share, but to pour it out onto the carpet under the table.  With many metaphors and references to literature and much repetition Bloch describes how the wine turns the Hollywood people into beasts--dogs and cats, pigs and rats and so on; the rich woman has been cultivating the acquaintance of all these celebrities and creatives for three years so tonight she and her coreligionists could hold a Black Mass and sacrifice these Angelenos, or something.  The narrator foils the event, starting a fire that burns down the house, but is himself temporarily turned into a wolf when he accidentally drinks some of the wine.

"Wine of the Sabbat" is tedious, and so boring I had trouble paying attention to what is going on.  Bloch uses lots of words, but fails to paint vivid pictures or delineate clear personalities or relationships, rendering the story hard to follow.  Everybody in the story is a sort of drunken libertine who lives in a haze or an intentionally obscure sneak who seeks to deceive, so maybe the vagueness of the story is intentional, but I don't like it.  Thumbs down!

I suspect Bloch and publishers recognize that this is one of the Psycho scribe's lesser works, and isfdb only lists it being reprinted in a single anthology (a German one) and a sole Bloch collection, 1998's Flowers from the Moon and Other Lunacies, which reappeared in 2000 in Italian. 


"The Sandwin Compact" by August Derleth

"The Sandwin Compact" has been reprinted numerous times, including in the many editions of the Derleth collection The Mask of Cthulhu and in one of those Italian Lovecraftian anthologies that has a Boris Vallejo bestiality-themed cover illustration.  (isfdb lists 38 volumes in the 1985-1991 series I Miti Di Cthulhu and 20 of them have Boris covers, and most of the those I have looked at depict or imply sex between a human woman and some kind of monster.)      

"The Sandwin Compact," like a lot of Derleth's "Cthulhu Mythos" stories, controversially imbeds Lovecraftian alien deities within a framework of a universal struggle of good versus evil and the ancient concept of the four elements, with Cthulhu representing water and Yog-Sothoth representing Earth, for example.  If you believe that what makes Lovecraft's work unique and appealing is HPL's apparent argument that the universe is meaningless and inexplicable, then you of course might find Derleth's facile moralism and effort to taxonomize the alien monster gods to be a superfluous distraction or even a castration that robs the Lovecraftian sub-genre of all of its power and value.

Our narrator is a librarian at Miskatonic U in Arkham, and is familiar with The Necronomicon and what happened at Innsmouth and all that.  As a child he spent a lot of time with his cousin at the seaside house of his uncle, his cousin's father.  Unc was always an odd character, a man squat and frog-like who had access to plenty of money but had no visible source of income.

At the start of "The Sandwin Compact" the narrator receives an urgent but cryptic phone call from his cousin, and the narrator rushes to the old house to see what is up.  While there at the house he figures out, by Unc basically telling him, that he (Unc) and his ancestors got rich by making a deal with the evil deities Cthulhu, Ithaqua, etc., promising to them the service of their sons after their deaths.  Unc's father and grandfather are, apparently, now undead automatons doing the bidding of the evil alien gods in remote parts of the world.  Derleth here has produced a sort of deal-with-the-devil story, a story with a Christian framework, in which the forces of evil tempt mankind and humans have the free will to submit to them--selling their souls and betraying their kin--or to stand up to them, sacrificing themselves to preserve those for whom they have responsibility.  These are not bad themes for a story, but they assume human beings have agency and put the human race at the center of the universe, a contrast to a lot of Lovecraft's original work, in which it is suggested the aliens have a relationship with humanity akin to that of humans to insects or cattle, that we humans are impotent and have no way to resist the aliens and very little to offer them.  

Unc has refused to continue the deal--the narrator's cousin will not become an undead servant and Unc will soon be punished by Lloiger, like Ithaqua a "wind elemental" whom Derleth himself contributed to the Mythos.  During the story, alien agents come to negotiate with Unc, and while the narrator and his cousin don't actually see these aliens, they hear their voices and footsteps and witness other evidence of their visits, like wet footprints and wind within the house when there is no wind outside.  The story's tension is undermined by the fact that the aliens come by again and again and nothing is ever concluded, and that weeks go by between cousin's phone call and the story's climax, with the narrator leaving the house to return to Miskatonic U to read up on Cthulhu and co and then coming back to find Unc looking even more like a frog.  The climax takes place behind a door which the narrator and his cousin cannot open until long after Unc has been carried off by Lloiger.  This is one of those stories in which the man we see as the protagonist, the narrator, makes no decisions and has no effect on the plot but is merely a spectator.

Reducing Cthulhu and other alien monster gods from incomprehensible divinity to the status of organized crime figures who cut deals with legitimate businessmen and then send their muscle over in an effort to pressure the guy paying protection money from welching is probably Derleth's worst sin here in "The Sandwin Compact" but there is also the fact that Derleth overdoes everything in this story.  I've already suggested the story is too long and that adding the concept of the four elements is superfluous.  Another example is how he doubles up the terrible things that happen to Unc--he becomes a frog man and he is carried away by winds; having two horrible things happen to a guy doesn't make a story twice as horrifying, instead it dilutes the story, makes it less powerful.  And then we have to wonder why there is a narrator outside the immediate family--the librarian character adds nothing to the story other than giving Derleth a chance to namecheck Miskatonic U and Arkham and The Necronomicon.  The story would be improved if the nephew was eliminated and the son was the narrator--his father's sacrifice would be all the more powerful, and the horror of seeing his father turn into a frog and die in an eerie way all the more shocking.

The more I think about "The Sandwin Compact" the worse it seems; when I had first finished reading it I planned to say "The Sandwin Compact" was merely acceptable but writing about it has convinced me that I gotta give it a thumbs down.  Sorry, August.


"Turn Over" by Dorothy Quick

In 2023 we read Quick's Weird Tales cover story about an Irish-American in a love triangle, "The Witch's Mark," and judged it acceptable.  I told you then that "The Witch's Mark" had never been reprinted, but today I see that a Quick collection was put out in 2024, a volume edited by the indefatigable literary scholar S. T. Joshi and titled The Witch's Mark and Others.  Today's Quick tale, "Turn Over," also appears in that book. 

"Turn Over" is a tiresome joke story with a plot like a ridiculous comedy movie, maybe with Jerry Lewis or something.  A rich old man has a family full of irresponsible people whose behavior does not meet his approval.  His granddaughter Celia is promiscuous, going on dates even though she is engaged to the son of Gramps' lawyer.  (Celia's betrothed is our narrator.)  One family member is a drunk.  One is a commie.  And so on; there are a lot of boring and forgettable family members.  Gramps dies and his lawyer reveals the absurd instructions of his will.  His many heirs will receive their inheritances in monthly installments.  Gramps is to be buried in a coffin equipped with an array of electronic devices.  Should Gramps turn over in his grave in reaction to the outrageous behavior of any of his beneficiaries, this event will be detected and reported in the lawyer's office via a bell, and the bad actor will lose this month's installment.

The bell rings again and again as Gramp's heirs misbehave again and again.  Celia, now the narrator's wife, goes out dancing with another man while our narrator is working late.  The drunk gets drunk.  One heir signs a business deal Gramps would not have approved of.  The commie donates to the CPUSA and then plots a bombing.  And so on.  Quick's story has no real climax or twist.  The family members decide to change their ways, and they do so, and the ringing stops, and they get the dough.

I'd like to endorse a story that offers the valuable advice that you should refrain from being a faithless slut, a self-destructive boozehound or a Bolshevist terrorist, but I cannot; "Turn Over" is absurdity and tedium--thumbs down!

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Ouch, three bad stories.  Derleth's story has a clear narrative but is full of what I would consider poor artistic choices, while Bloch's and Quick's stories are so diffuse and so lacking in substance I had a hard time focusing my attention on them.  A definite rough patch in our journey through the pages of Weird Tales.  We have to hope McIlwraith will marshal a higher grade of material as we slither forward into 1941.