Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Noise

chattering noise brewing inside
irritates the sensibilities
and shakes the core of my sanity
the wait is long and arduous
while hope is feeble and tired
gathering wild rosebuds at my feet
I take what I can as I ponder defeat
the girl in the mirror, so foreign now
change is certain
no looking back now

6 comments:

Kay said...

oh, the similar concept of one i just wrote earlier today, entitled 'defeat' although, i know yours is much different, the hopelessness remains the same... ugh....may peace find you.

Anonymous said...

noise makes me a little crazy. I love peace and quiet. *hugs*

Poetic Artist said...

Your words sometimes make me think they are coming from inside my own head.
Take care my friend.
Katelen

Opaque said...

I have written something similar but in a very very unconventional manner.

I love this one!

Felicitas said...

Noelle, this sounds so hopeless. Please don't believe that - even if the worst happens, and yes, you will be changed by it, things will get better again. And they will get better than better... one day, they'll be great again! You just have to hold on and see those possibilities. Many blessings, from my heart to yours!

A Joyful Chaos said...

Great post. Thanks for sharing.