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Free Fellows League #1
Barely a Bride
Can a lady tempt a Free Fellow to surrender his heart?
As a founding member of the Free Fellows League—a group of four gentlemen who signed a pledge to never wed when they were lads—Griffin, Viscount Abernathy, swears that he will put off marrying as long as possible. But when he is suddenly called off to war, he has no choice but to obey his father’s wishes and find a wife…
Just days later, he marries the lovely Lady Alyssa. For a man committed only to his freedom, she seems a perfect—and perfectly undemanding—bride. Intelligent and self-sufficient, Alyssa craves her independence just as much as Griffin loves his. But as the irresistible attraction between them flourishes with every look and touch, they discover there is something they desire even more than a loveless marriage of convenience—the passion they find in each other’s arms…
As a founding member of the Free Fellows League—a group of four gentlemen who signed a pledge to never wed when they were lads—Griffin, Viscount Abernathy, swears that he will put off marrying as long as possible. But when he is suddenly called off to war, he has no choice but to obey his father’s wishes and find a wife…
Just days later, he marries the lovely Lady Alyssa. For a man committed only to his freedom, she seems a perfect—and perfectly undemanding—bride. Intelligent and self-sufficient, Alyssa craves her independence just as much as Griffin loves his. But as the irresistible attraction between them flourishes with every look and touch, they discover there is something they desire even more than a loveless marriage of convenience—the passion they find in each other’s arms…
303 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 5, 2003
About the author
Rebecca Hagan Lee
31 books99 followersRebecca Hagan Lee has had many different jobs, earning her beads of experience on the necklace of life with each one, but her desire to write was constant. After graduating from college, she set out to make her mark in the world of television journalism, but somewhere along the way, she decided she was a small town girl at heart and settled in a town where the media consisted of a weekly newspaper and an AM radio station.
Seeking a creative outlet, she turned to writing romance and began to write stories far different from those in the world of television news, but not that far removed from the hundreds of episodes of Daniel Boone, Big Valley, Gunsmoke and Bonanza she had watched growing up. She decided to create stories where good guys win, bad guys lose, prostitutes have hearts of gold and the heroes and heroines who fall in love and persevere are richly rewarded with incredibly bright futures and happy endings. In her world, heroines don't die or get killed off to make way for the next episode's new love interest. Her heroines get their men and help them become ideal husbands, lovers, friends and fathers.
Rebecca lives in a small southern town with her husband, a miniature schnauzer, two rat terriers, a half dozen barn cats, and two extraordinary horses. She is currently seated at the computer working hard to make her dreams come true, or riding off with her hero into the sunset. . .
Seeking a creative outlet, she turned to writing romance and began to write stories far different from those in the world of television news, but not that far removed from the hundreds of episodes of Daniel Boone, Big Valley, Gunsmoke and Bonanza she had watched growing up. She decided to create stories where good guys win, bad guys lose, prostitutes have hearts of gold and the heroes and heroines who fall in love and persevere are richly rewarded with incredibly bright futures and happy endings. In her world, heroines don't die or get killed off to make way for the next episode's new love interest. Her heroines get their men and help them become ideal husbands, lovers, friends and fathers.
Rebecca lives in a small southern town with her husband, a miniature schnauzer, two rat terriers, a half dozen barn cats, and two extraordinary horses. She is currently seated at the computer working hard to make her dreams come true, or riding off with her hero into the sunset. . .
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October 13, 2019
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In the introductory installation of this series, the reader is gifted with bouts of silliness and HUMOR. However, there are other aspects not quite as appealing. The inclusion of humor in a historical romance grabs my attention quickly and since it so rarely displayed, I grab it when I can!
DESCRIPTION:
The noblemen of the Free Fellows League have vowed to "avoid the inevitable leg-shackling to a female for as long as possible." But when Viscount Abernathy is called off to war, he must obey his father's wishes that he marry-and fast.
Abernathy is lucky to find Lady Alyssa as agreeable to a marriage of convenience as he is. But, two years later, scarred to his soul from the war, all Abernathy wants is love. And now he must win his wife's heart, by wooing the bride he left behind...
This is a quirky and silly tale loosely based on the historical Regency era. The details are not all correct. But what I found interesting was the sense of humor displayed regarding the entire oddity presented. Obviously things would go so much smoother with actual communication of one's feelings.
The horrors and after-effects of war were significantly portrayed. The atrocities of war continue to plague people around the world every day.
This installation is able to stand on its own and delivers a well-deserved H.E.A. I would be interested in reading the remainder of the series, but alas I cannot afford to purchase it.
Those that prefer a clean read should SKIP this series to avoid being offended. It definitely does not fit in a clean category. Be warned so that you don't deduct points on your reviews. The authors do dedicate their time and effort to research their topics and surroundings, then pour their imagination into their works. And, believe it or not, there are some readers that prefer 'steamy' to clean and wholesome reads.
It would indeed be more beneficial to readers and authors if the promoters would work together with Amazon and/or Goodreads to provide notification of a category that clarifies sexually explicit content, to better inform the entire reading audience. It would definitely be a Win-Win situation!
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Barely a Bride (Free Fellows League Book 1) Kindle Edition
by Rebecca Hagan Lee (Author)
Print Length: 303 pages
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In the introductory installation of this series, the reader is gifted with bouts of silliness and HUMOR. However, there are other aspects not quite as appealing. The inclusion of humor in a historical romance grabs my attention quickly and since it so rarely displayed, I grab it when I can!
DESCRIPTION:
The noblemen of the Free Fellows League have vowed to "avoid the inevitable leg-shackling to a female for as long as possible." But when Viscount Abernathy is called off to war, he must obey his father's wishes that he marry-and fast.
Abernathy is lucky to find Lady Alyssa as agreeable to a marriage of convenience as he is. But, two years later, scarred to his soul from the war, all Abernathy wants is love. And now he must win his wife's heart, by wooing the bride he left behind...
This is a quirky and silly tale loosely based on the historical Regency era. The details are not all correct. But what I found interesting was the sense of humor displayed regarding the entire oddity presented. Obviously things would go so much smoother with actual communication of one's feelings.
The horrors and after-effects of war were significantly portrayed. The atrocities of war continue to plague people around the world every day.
This installation is able to stand on its own and delivers a well-deserved H.E.A. I would be interested in reading the remainder of the series, but alas I cannot afford to purchase it.
Those that prefer a clean read should SKIP this series to avoid being offended. It definitely does not fit in a clean category. Be warned so that you don't deduct points on your reviews. The authors do dedicate their time and effort to research their topics and surroundings, then pour their imagination into their works. And, believe it or not, there are some readers that prefer 'steamy' to clean and wholesome reads.
It would indeed be more beneficial to readers and authors if the promoters would work together with Amazon and/or Goodreads to provide notification of a category that clarifies sexually explicit content, to better inform the entire reading audience. It would definitely be a Win-Win situation!
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Barely a Bride (Free Fellows League Book 1) Kindle Edition
by Rebecca Hagan Lee (Author)
Print Length: 303 pages
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June 12, 2018
“It’s a gentleman’s world, my darling. And marrying well is your best way of succeeding in it. Being a spinster is no life for you—not if you wish to pursue those dreams of yours.” Alyssa frowned. “No need to make such a face at me. I’ve only your best interests at heart. You may believe there’s no reason for you to marry, but eventually, you’ll see the wisdom of it.” Lady Tressingham arched a brow at her daughter.
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Neither the heroine or hero want to get married, hero sees heroine and knows she is the ONE he has to marry. There is a charter created by the hero and his friend's when they were nine that they immaturely try to stick to following, some telling with no showing falling in love, going off to war, and "I'm not worthy" ending forced angst.
This started off good with some good ideas but, especially, the second half ended up feeling very scattered with the plot and characters getting lost and not knowing what they wanted to be.
February 10, 2012
Lemon Tree
★★★★✩ This is a review of the audiobook, narrated by Virginia Leishman. I’ve never heard this reader before, and she does a nice job of it, doing the accents and voice inflections – English and Scottish, male and female, children and adults – quite nicely.
This book, the first in the Free Fellows League, wasn’t exactly what I thought it would be. I expected the hero, Griffin Abernathy, AKA Viscount Abernathy, to hastily do his duty and marry to please his father. Then he would happily hurry off to war, leaving his bride, Lady Alyssa Carrolton – also equally delighted by the arrangement – behind to do as she pleases. I assumed the story would then be about these two strangers getting to know each other after his return from war.
Instead, over two-thirds this story is about the courtship, wedding, and honeymoon that ensue once Griff sets his sights on Alyssa. I eventually realized this author was in no hurry to tell this pleasant little tale; then I was able to sit back and relax. Another surprise: after it got going, it a little hotter than I was expecting – given the sweet cover and the story up until then – which was also fine with me. A little sugar and spice is just my cup of tea. I will even admit to shedding a tear or two near the end. All together a GoodRead.
I enjoyed listening to Ms. Lee’s story set in Regency England and Ms. Leishman’s lovely narration and look forward to the rest of this charming series.
★★★★✩ This is a review of the audiobook, narrated by Virginia Leishman. I’ve never heard this reader before, and she does a nice job of it, doing the accents and voice inflections – English and Scottish, male and female, children and adults – quite nicely.
This book, the first in the Free Fellows League, wasn’t exactly what I thought it would be. I expected the hero, Griffin Abernathy, AKA Viscount Abernathy, to hastily do his duty and marry to please his father. Then he would happily hurry off to war, leaving his bride, Lady Alyssa Carrolton – also equally delighted by the arrangement – behind to do as she pleases. I assumed the story would then be about these two strangers getting to know each other after his return from war.
Instead, over two-thirds this story is about the courtship, wedding, and honeymoon that ensue once Griff sets his sights on Alyssa. I eventually realized this author was in no hurry to tell this pleasant little tale; then I was able to sit back and relax. Another surprise: after it got going, it a little hotter than I was expecting – given the sweet cover and the story up until then – which was also fine with me. A little sugar and spice is just my cup of tea. I will even admit to shedding a tear or two near the end. All together a GoodRead.
I enjoyed listening to Ms. Lee’s story set in Regency England and Ms. Leishman’s lovely narration and look forward to the rest of this charming series.
December 20, 2018
I was equally charmed and irked by the book.
*With spoilers* The writing is overly descriptive at places and that’s a strength as well a weakness of this book.
I don’t think any other HR has told me that Almack’s assembly rooms don’t have terraces or gardens for a couple’s privacy (and I never wondered!) and people had to make do with only alcoves and retiring rooms- and that men could enter the women’s retiring room to assist swooning females!
The details of gifts at wedding for friends, family and staff was interesting too.
As was the bequeathal of titles by the prince regent and the politics thereof.
But the characters definitely behave, think and speak in an anachronistic way.
Maids and butlers are talked to as equals.
The h easily speaks of things sexual/marital with the H’s friends.
The overly independent h with gardening above all else outlook.
Easy talks of letting go (divorce?) between married couples.
The whole Free Fellow’s razzmatazz got wearying as well. Imagine 8-10 years old boys founding a league to serve the country but all of the 10 clauses of their signed charter refer only to women, leg shackling and how to keep away from love? The boys thought like men and the men, now thought more like boys!
I liked both the mcs.
The secondary characters were very well etched – especially her parents.
The mother’s a typical, formidable mother/mother-in-law who wanted her daughter to snap up at least a duke and never let the H forget that he’s a mere viscount.
And the father is so interesting (and this guy’s considered a bore by the ton!) with his obsession with dogs and horses. I couldn’t help laughing at his description of his daughter in equine terms.
“Alyssa. Alyssa. Oh, yes, that one. Filly. Light brown mane, streaked with blond. Nice big eyes. Blue, if I’m not mistaken. Good ground manners. Hasn’t been broken to ride. But that’s only natural as she lacks an adequate handler.”
*With spoilers* The writing is overly descriptive at places and that’s a strength as well a weakness of this book.
I don’t think any other HR has told me that Almack’s assembly rooms don’t have terraces or gardens for a couple’s privacy (and I never wondered!) and people had to make do with only alcoves and retiring rooms- and that men could enter the women’s retiring room to assist swooning females!
The details of gifts at wedding for friends, family and staff was interesting too.
As was the bequeathal of titles by the prince regent and the politics thereof.
But the characters definitely behave, think and speak in an anachronistic way.
Maids and butlers are talked to as equals.
The h easily speaks of things sexual/marital with the H’s friends.
The overly independent h with gardening above all else outlook.
Easy talks of letting go (divorce?) between married couples.
The whole Free Fellow’s razzmatazz got wearying as well. Imagine 8-10 years old boys founding a league to serve the country but all of the 10 clauses of their signed charter refer only to women, leg shackling and how to keep away from love? The boys thought like men and the men, now thought more like boys!
I liked both the mcs.
The secondary characters were very well etched – especially her parents.
The mother’s a typical, formidable mother/mother-in-law who wanted her daughter to snap up at least a duke and never let the H forget that he’s a mere viscount.
And the father is so interesting (and this guy’s considered a bore by the ton!) with his obsession with dogs and horses. I couldn’t help laughing at his description of his daughter in equine terms.
“Alyssa. Alyssa. Oh, yes, that one. Filly. Light brown mane, streaked with blond. Nice big eyes. Blue, if I’m not mistaken. Good ground manners. Hasn’t been broken to ride. But that’s only natural as she lacks an adequate handler.”
March 9, 2017
The beginning chapters of this book were so promising that I was willing to overlook the awkward prologue displaying the author's inability to write child characters. While there's nothing terrible special about Griffin, Viscount Abernathy, who needs to get himself a bride and an heir before he rides off to war, there's this puppy-dog earnestness about him that is refreshing in a sea of cynical rogues and jaded rakes, and the heroine Alyssa's passion for gardening gives a fresh angle on the practical-minded beauty. The whirlwind courtship between the two doesn't feel sappy, trite, or forced, because there is this tacit understanding in each of the leads point of view that it is not actually a whirlwind romance, it just looks like one of the surface, while underneath is a match made of cool-headed rationality and expediency.
And then, once they actually marry, that narrative crumbles like old wedding cake. All of the sudden, the leads are in LOVE, truly, madly, deeply, and are heartbroken over their pending separation. Once that separation occurs, the story spins its wheels, and there is nothing to distract from how poorly the plot is put together, and how many inconsistencies in character, tone, and historical accuracy there are. For some reason, Griff's best friends decide the best way they can help their friend's lonely wife is to strong-arm the handsome, wealthy, single duke she almost married into visiting her... and then a few chapters later angrily confront him about his actions. Or Alyssa's closest friend inviting her to call her by her first name as if they have just become friends, when Alyssa WAS using her first name over ten chapters ago (not to mention Alyssa using an inaccurate title to address her in the first place). There are specific dates and details about battles, yet boneheaded errors when it comes to the social side of things, and the whole charming feel of the the first third is lost in a morass of clunky writing and directionless plot.
Then, in the last third, the author suddenly decides this is a story about PTSD, and tries to cram a whole "love heals" plot into about twenty pages. Most of this reads like the author constantly forgot to go and add scenes she intended to write. For example, Alyssa hints she will seduce her husband in the carriage... and then she doesn't. Or the Duke of Sussex says he will help her make Griffin jealous... and then he does nothing... I could go on. It all culminates with them spilling their emotional guts in the middle of a crowded ballroom, while explicitly in company with others. I kept cringing and waiting for the inevitable "but we should really go somewhere private" embarrassment to fall, but it never did.
Overall, just a mess of a book all the more frustrating because it could have been something lovely and fun.
And then, once they actually marry, that narrative crumbles like old wedding cake. All of the sudden, the leads are in LOVE, truly, madly, deeply, and are heartbroken over their pending separation. Once that separation occurs, the story spins its wheels, and there is nothing to distract from how poorly the plot is put together, and how many inconsistencies in character, tone, and historical accuracy there are. For some reason, Griff's best friends decide the best way they can help their friend's lonely wife is to strong-arm the handsome, wealthy, single duke she almost married into visiting her... and then a few chapters later angrily confront him about his actions. Or Alyssa's closest friend inviting her to call her by her first name as if they have just become friends, when Alyssa WAS using her first name over ten chapters ago (not to mention Alyssa using an inaccurate title to address her in the first place). There are specific dates and details about battles, yet boneheaded errors when it comes to the social side of things, and the whole charming feel of the the first third is lost in a morass of clunky writing and directionless plot.
Then, in the last third, the author suddenly decides this is a story about PTSD, and tries to cram a whole "love heals" plot into about twenty pages. Most of this reads like the author constantly forgot to go and add scenes she intended to write. For example, Alyssa hints she will seduce her husband in the carriage... and then she doesn't. Or the Duke of Sussex says he will help her make Griffin jealous... and then he does nothing... I could go on. It all culminates with them spilling their emotional guts in the middle of a crowded ballroom, while explicitly in company with others. I kept cringing and waiting for the inevitable "but we should really go somewhere private" embarrassment to fall, but it never did.
Overall, just a mess of a book all the more frustrating because it could have been something lovely and fun.
July 2, 2020
I loved it. I think this was one of the first Historical romance books I ever read. I really liked the hero and heroine and his group of friends. I liked the part after they got married and their correspondence with each other even more. Then when he returned and suffered PTSD, I really connected with him. Really lovely read.
What I didn’t really like was how quickly things moved before they married, but that was easily overlooked. A lovely book altogether.
What I didn’t really like was how quickly things moved before they married, but that was easily overlooked. A lovely book altogether.
September 11, 2020
Where do I start!! Barely a Bride is one of the best Historical Romance stories I have read all year. It will go on my re read list. This was my first Rebecca Hagan Lee book and I am very impressed by her storytelling.
I fell in love with the Free Fellows League and I loved reading there Charter signed in blood. They are just the cutest 9 and 10 year old heirs to titles. They become friends at school and when one of them gets his feelings hurt by a very young female girl they come up with the Free Fellows League. Rules to protect them from marrying and to follow if they have to marry. Typical 9 and 10 year boy stuff. However when they grow up they find its not that easy to follow the rules.
The main characters of this story is Viscount Griffin Abernathy heir to the 17th Earl of Weymouth. Griff is about to join his Calvary The Blues going to fight Napoleon. His father the Earl has decided he must marry first and beget an heir before he leaves to fight. He might die and he is the only child so he must leave an heir. This is just funny!! Griff has one week to marry and get his heir!!
Lady Alyssa Carrollton is the youngest daughter of the Earl Tessingham. Tessingham is only interested in breeding his horse flesh and his fox hounds. You can say he is obsessed with his stables and kennels. Lady Tessingham Alyssa mother wants her daughter to marry a Duke the Duck of Sussex as a matter of fact.
Griff and Alyssa do marry and this starts the best sensual Historical Romance I have read in a long time. There is great character development and a good about of back story for the characters. The story is rich in the banter between the characters. The setting or scenes are perfectly matched to the Georgian Era. There is also sad events along with but with lots of very happy funny moments. You can easy see the love progressing between Griff and Alyssa. The only thing I felt left out was they didn't make the heir!! Its always a great HEA when the next heir is born.
Barely a Bride was an Excellent Story and I got it Free on Amazon what A boon for me!! I Highly Recommend Barely a Bride!!! Well Done Ms. Lee!!
I fell in love with the Free Fellows League and I loved reading there Charter signed in blood. They are just the cutest 9 and 10 year old heirs to titles. They become friends at school and when one of them gets his feelings hurt by a very young female girl they come up with the Free Fellows League. Rules to protect them from marrying and to follow if they have to marry. Typical 9 and 10 year boy stuff. However when they grow up they find its not that easy to follow the rules.
The main characters of this story is Viscount Griffin Abernathy heir to the 17th Earl of Weymouth. Griff is about to join his Calvary The Blues going to fight Napoleon. His father the Earl has decided he must marry first and beget an heir before he leaves to fight. He might die and he is the only child so he must leave an heir. This is just funny!! Griff has one week to marry and get his heir!!
Lady Alyssa Carrollton is the youngest daughter of the Earl Tessingham. Tessingham is only interested in breeding his horse flesh and his fox hounds. You can say he is obsessed with his stables and kennels. Lady Tessingham Alyssa mother wants her daughter to marry a Duke the Duck of Sussex as a matter of fact.
Griff and Alyssa do marry and this starts the best sensual Historical Romance I have read in a long time. There is great character development and a good about of back story for the characters. The story is rich in the banter between the characters. The setting or scenes are perfectly matched to the Georgian Era. There is also sad events along with but with lots of very happy funny moments. You can easy see the love progressing between Griff and Alyssa. The only thing I felt left out was they didn't make the heir!! Its always a great HEA when the next heir is born.
Barely a Bride was an Excellent Story and I got it Free on Amazon what A boon for me!! I Highly Recommend Barely a Bride!!! Well Done Ms. Lee!!
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December 28, 2019
Very much liked Barely a Bride and look forward to reading Colin’s story next. I found myself caring about the supporting characters just as much as the MCs. Crossing my fingers Miranda and the Duke of Sussex end up together as this book seems to foreshadow an enemies-to-lovers romance between them!
In the beginning, Griffin and Alyssa’s wedding planning details were a bit of a bore, but I did enjoy Griffin negotiating with Alyssa’s horse and hound obsessed father for her hand in marriage as well as the details about Alyssa’s homemade remedies, gardening and home improvements. I haven’t read a historical romance in awhile and one thing I realized is that I like the sex in them much more than in contemporary romances. Sex outside of marriage is forbidden so there’s a slower build-up and seduction. And the sexual awakening of a virginal bride is always entertaining.
Four stars.
In the beginning, Griffin and Alyssa’s wedding planning details were a bit of a bore, but I did enjoy Griffin negotiating with Alyssa’s horse and hound obsessed father for her hand in marriage as well as the details about Alyssa’s homemade remedies, gardening and home improvements. I haven’t read a historical romance in awhile and one thing I realized is that I like the sex in them much more than in contemporary romances. Sex outside of marriage is forbidden so there’s a slower build-up and seduction. And the sexual awakening of a virginal bride is always entertaining.
Four stars.
October 6, 2021
This took place in 1810-1811. Book #1.
Front & center we had 3 childhood brother-like friends
who created the Free Fellows League: Griff (viscount H)
Colin (Scots viscount) & Jarrod (marquess). They swore
never to marry, except when they had no choice or were
old, & when/ if wed to never love their wives etc.
The H + h wed to satisfy family obligations and before
Griffin served as a cavalry officer against Napoleon.
Heroine Alyssa's social climber mother thought only
the Duke of Sussex would do for this daughter. And
came across as rude toward the H. She never groveled
when the H was later honored by the Prince of Wales.
The H+ h barely knew each other before he left for war
& grew closer after exchanging letters. She sent H via
her War Office FIL: soaps, lotion, scarves, hats, etc
to ease the burden of war. In the midst of war, the H
quickly realized he'd idealized war.
This HR was uneven in places but still better than
most HRs I've read in the last year. Onward to the
other men in the FFL.
Front & center we had 3 childhood brother-like friends
who created the Free Fellows League: Griff (viscount H)
Colin (Scots viscount) & Jarrod (marquess). They swore
never to marry, except when they had no choice or were
old, & when/ if wed to never love their wives etc.
The H + h wed to satisfy family obligations and before
Griffin served as a cavalry officer against Napoleon.
Heroine Alyssa's social climber mother thought only
the Duke of Sussex would do for this daughter. And
came across as rude toward the H. She never groveled
when the H was later honored by the Prince of Wales.
The H+ h barely knew each other before he left for war
& grew closer after exchanging letters. She sent H via
her War Office FIL: soaps, lotion, scarves, hats, etc
to ease the burden of war. In the midst of war, the H
quickly realized he'd idealized war.
This HR was uneven in places but still better than
most HRs I've read in the last year. Onward to the
other men in the FFL.
November 20, 2014
Good, but the actual idea of three grown men following a blood oath they formed as children when it dictates such important things in life like love and marriage is ridiculous. I mean, how can the ideas and minds of small children know what's best for them as adults?
While the passion was hot between the hero and heroine, the romance was lackluster. So there was good and bad parts.
While the passion was hot between the hero and heroine, the romance was lackluster. So there was good and bad parts.
September 17, 2014
It was a good story, nothing exciting though... I actually got bored half-way thru.
January 31, 2017
Loved the deeply emotional writing. I listened to the Audio, and the narrator is fabulous. Happy reading!
January 24, 2019
DNF 24%
May 18, 2018
Rounding down to a 3.5, but leaning towards 4
Pleasantly surprised at this book! I had a few qualms, like the angst that felt like it was put there for the sake of just having angst in the novel, it literally served no purpose. Also, the whole free fellows thing was so dumb. Really? Keeping an oath yall made when you were 9. Super unrealistic and I can't believe they didn't forget about it. Lol I made promises when I was nine that I forgot about an hour after I promised it. So that was a big annoying part of it. But I actually liked the pacing of the book. I thought it would be a short intro where they got married, and he left, and then the rest of the book was him returning home, wooing her, as the blurb stated. This was inaccurate. It was steadily paced, starting from when they met, married, when he left and exchanged letters with her, their lives then, and then when he came back. Overall, I'd like to read the next book! Looking forward to it, and hope I like it even better than this one.
Pleasantly surprised at this book! I had a few qualms, like the angst that felt like it was put there for the sake of just having angst in the novel, it literally served no purpose. Also, the whole free fellows thing was so dumb. Really? Keeping an oath yall made when you were 9. Super unrealistic and I can't believe they didn't forget about it. Lol I made promises when I was nine that I forgot about an hour after I promised it. So that was a big annoying part of it. But I actually liked the pacing of the book. I thought it would be a short intro where they got married, and he left, and then the rest of the book was him returning home, wooing her, as the blurb stated. This was inaccurate. It was steadily paced, starting from when they met, married, when he left and exchanged letters with her, their lives then, and then when he came back. Overall, I'd like to read the next book! Looking forward to it, and hope I like it even better than this one.
July 20, 2018
The premise:
Griffin ‘Griff’ Abernathy is a viscount and one of the very secret ‘Free Fellows League’, consisting of Griff and two close friends, who—as young schoolboys—decided they would devote their lives to serving their country and would never ever fall in love.
But, come 1810 and the Peninsular War, Griff buys a commission in the cavalry and is getting ready to leave when his father throws a spanner in the works. Griff is sole heir; he must therefore marry and supply an heir before he goes off to war, possibly to be killed. So Griff has two weeks to find a bride and get married and have her conceive.
Tall order. Fortunately, there is the lovely Alyssa, who would rather be a viscountess and have a garden to create and tend than be duchess. So, after sharing a series of heady kisses soon after they’re introduced, Griff and Alyssa are betrothed. And married, with a honeymoon of three nights before Griff goes off to war.
The problems:
First, the lack of believable feeling between the hero and heroine. Yes, they have loads of sex—they go at it like rabbits, really—but the impression I got was more of lust than love. Where and how that turned into love, I never got a taste of.
Second, the sheer idiocy of so many characters—Griff, his parents, Alyssa, their family and friends—actually believing that it was not just possible, but highly likely for her to get pregnant after three nights and as many days of hectic sex. (Umm, it’s not the number of days that matter, it’s something else. And just because she has two sisters who’re pregnant and one who’s just had a baby, it doesn’t mean she will get pregnant at the drop of a hat).
Thirdly, the many gaps in research. The ease with which ‘setting one free’ of a marriage—annulment or divorce—is spoken of (both very difficult in Regency England). The idea of multiple bridesmaids (not something that came into vogue until the Victorian era). The bride signing in the registry with her married name (she didn’t; her maiden name was used). And more, including wedding rings, the social norms dictating interactions between people of different classes, the ease and frequency (or not) with which soldiers in the Peninsula received and sent packages and letters.
Then, the dangerously horny character of the heroine. Yes, I know and acknowledge that you want to make love to the husband you haven’t seen for a year, but surely you can keep your hands off him while he recovers from wounds that seem hair-raisingly horrible (a cart and horse having been driven over a man already battered by saber and bullet and bayonet is hardly likely to leave him capable of much in the way of husbandly duties)… but then, I suppose if the husband is the type to eagerly grab at bared breasts simply because he’s just had a breakdown because of post-battle trauma, it’s fair.
Lastly, the Americanisms and anachronisms. Write me, randy and Watch me are not likely to be words people in Regency England would have used, and I’d bet a butler in that period wouldn’t have told his mistress (a duchess, no less) “Don’t be so bloody noble”.
I have a soft spot for the marriage of convenience trope. This book, despite using that trope, was too tiresome.
Griffin ‘Griff’ Abernathy is a viscount and one of the very secret ‘Free Fellows League’, consisting of Griff and two close friends, who—as young schoolboys—decided they would devote their lives to serving their country and would never ever fall in love.
But, come 1810 and the Peninsular War, Griff buys a commission in the cavalry and is getting ready to leave when his father throws a spanner in the works. Griff is sole heir; he must therefore marry and supply an heir before he goes off to war, possibly to be killed. So Griff has two weeks to find a bride and get married and have her conceive.
Tall order. Fortunately, there is the lovely Alyssa, who would rather be a viscountess and have a garden to create and tend than be duchess. So, after sharing a series of heady kisses soon after they’re introduced, Griff and Alyssa are betrothed. And married, with a honeymoon of three nights before Griff goes off to war.
The problems:
First, the lack of believable feeling between the hero and heroine. Yes, they have loads of sex—they go at it like rabbits, really—but the impression I got was more of lust than love. Where and how that turned into love, I never got a taste of.
Second, the sheer idiocy of so many characters—Griff, his parents, Alyssa, their family and friends—actually believing that it was not just possible, but highly likely for her to get pregnant after three nights and as many days of hectic sex. (Umm, it’s not the number of days that matter, it’s something else. And just because she has two sisters who’re pregnant and one who’s just had a baby, it doesn’t mean she will get pregnant at the drop of a hat).
Thirdly, the many gaps in research. The ease with which ‘setting one free’ of a marriage—annulment or divorce—is spoken of (both very difficult in Regency England). The idea of multiple bridesmaids (not something that came into vogue until the Victorian era). The bride signing in the registry with her married name (she didn’t; her maiden name was used). And more, including wedding rings, the social norms dictating interactions between people of different classes, the ease and frequency (or not) with which soldiers in the Peninsula received and sent packages and letters.
Then, the dangerously horny character of the heroine. Yes, I know and acknowledge that you want to make love to the husband you haven’t seen for a year, but surely you can keep your hands off him while he recovers from wounds that seem hair-raisingly horrible (a cart and horse having been driven over a man already battered by saber and bullet and bayonet is hardly likely to leave him capable of much in the way of husbandly duties)… but then, I suppose if the husband is the type to eagerly grab at bared breasts simply because he’s just had a breakdown because of post-battle trauma, it’s fair.
Lastly, the Americanisms and anachronisms. Write me, randy and Watch me are not likely to be words people in Regency England would have used, and I’d bet a butler in that period wouldn’t have told his mistress (a duchess, no less) “Don’t be so bloody noble”.
I have a soft spot for the marriage of convenience trope. This book, despite using that trope, was too tiresome.
February 19, 2013
I missed an entire day of reading due to illness and I was wishing the whole day I had this book on audio. I fell in love with Griffin immediately. He is a happy, non-brooding character who is one of the most honorable gentlemen I've ever read about. 2/3s of the story are about his meeting Alyssa and their wedding and three days of honeymoon. Then he leaves to join his cavalry regiment in the peninsula. Hagan Lee needed few pages to set the stage for a man who has fallen in love with his wife and a wife who has fallen in love with her husband, she is that good at descriptive writing. Both live for the letters they receive from each other with Griff's close comrades: his valet, who has accompanied him, and a young Lieutenant Hughes also enjoying her descriptions of her work and plans on the Abernathy estate. The battle where Griff is wounded is specific enough to feel like one is there seeing it but not so graphic as to be violent. I appreciated this because I didn't have to just accept that it made sense Griff came home with nightmares I understood, at a low level, why he had nightmares. Once Griff is home there are only about 50 pages left but, again, Hagan Lee is deft with her pen and completes the story without leaving me feel like its been forced closed.
The teaser synopsis is incorrect. They aren't expecting love but their marriage is not loveless, they both feel a strong attraction to each other from the beginning. Griffin, indeed, is scarred to his soul but feels he's not deserving of Alyssa. He doesn't set out to woo his bride, he can barely walk, he actually leaves to free her. She now pursues him. Bradley Cooper consistently came up in my mind as the face of Griffin.
I want the rest of this series. Badly. My bookstore doesn't have them available even to order and they are not in e-book format either. I found this one at a second hand bookstore. Time to go searching for more of this author.
The teaser synopsis is incorrect. They aren't expecting love but their marriage is not loveless, they both feel a strong attraction to each other from the beginning. Griffin, indeed, is scarred to his soul but feels he's not deserving of Alyssa. He doesn't set out to woo his bride, he can barely walk, he actually leaves to free her. She now pursues him. Bradley Cooper consistently came up in my mind as the face of Griffin.
I want the rest of this series. Badly. My bookstore doesn't have them available even to order and they are not in e-book format either. I found this one at a second hand bookstore. Time to go searching for more of this author.
July 9, 2013
Liked this first in series, writing style good, leads excellent and ensemble cast has real potential.
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October 12, 2014DNF at 50%.
Nobody talks this way. Even 200 years ago.
Nobody talks this way. Even 200 years ago.
May 12, 2018
In Barely a Bride Griffin Abernathy is set to go off to war to fight against Napoleon in Spain. The problem from his parents point of view is that he is an only child and making him the heir to the family title. His father demands he find a bride and marry in the two weeks he has before he is to leave to join his regiment.
Only one woman will do and after negotiating with her husband and some breeding agreements, he get his bride, wedding and a few days of honeymoon before he leaves. The story that follows has humor, the horrors of warfare and the problems of returning soldiers. It also has honor, love, loyalty and friendship, which is set in the times of London Society.
Only one woman will do and after negotiating with her husband and some breeding agreements, he get his bride, wedding and a few days of honeymoon before he leaves. The story that follows has humor, the horrors of warfare and the problems of returning soldiers. It also has honor, love, loyalty and friendship, which is set in the times of London Society.
October 26, 2019
One of the best books I’ve read in quite a while. Kept my interest from beginning to end. Masterfully written. Great plot. I particularly enjoyed the fact that it kept faithfully to the period, and dealt with issues of the era. The research and knowledge of the period woven through the tale elevated its enjoyment and I would recommend this book to any lover of Regency romance.
Thank you Rebecca for providing me with hours of delightful and meaningful escapist reading.
Thank you Rebecca for providing me with hours of delightful and meaningful escapist reading.
August 17, 2021
This is full on Romancelandia, and very “Regency tropes.” But in all the ways I love most and this entire book was like a dessert I’ve been craving but couldn’t find, and after trying so many approximations, almost gave up. It’s sweet and dear, and ballsy and forthright. So glad I found this author!
August 27, 2018
What could have been a beautiful book is spoiled by the immaturity of the hero in hanging onto the ideals he and his mates had when they were 9, and the idea that sex will cure PTSD (called “nostalgia” in the 1600s and 1700s as I have just learnt). There are other issues such as the language used by 9 and 10 year old boys writing up a contract, a slight problem with titles, and a few pages where the heroine is negotiating with her best friend about what to call her.
A shame because the story otherwise was engaging and a little different.
A shame because the story otherwise was engaging and a little different.
January 3, 2025
Entertaining but could’ve used a proofreader, as well as more time either way the couple post war.
February 6, 2017
This book pleasantly surpassed my expectations. I was a little unsure thinking this was going to be the same ol' run-of-the-mill HR. Guy doesn't want marriage. Guy wants army life and freedom. Guy meets gal. Gal is independent. They fall in love and marry. Yes, yes, this is an HR and of COURSE, they get their happily ever after. However, it was a lot of work and a lot of time. WHICH I liked.
Griffin and Alyssa (stupids names - I'll rant about that later) are both super independent people. Griffin is part of a club who thinks marriage is pointless and love is a waste. The only things that matter is their friends and England. However, his father forces him to get married, so he can produce an heir. If doesn't do it he'll use his pull with the War Office to not let him go to war. Alyssa is the youngest daughter who is the last one not married. All she wants is a home of her own so she can pursue her love of gardening. They meet and decide to get married so they can get what they want and little strings attached. Like that pesky thing called love.
I do get annoyed when people, especially men, hate love and marriage. I don't get it. I get not wanting to marry someone you don't love. SURE! But if you find the one you love marriage is good. So yeah, I thought Griffin and his friends were silly beyond belief with their club and pact. However, I wouldn't be surprised if there were clubs and pacts like this throughout history. Men are silly. But the whole concept was interesting.
But yes, the romance was a hard earned one. They are married only a couple of days. He goes to war. They fall in love in the letters they exchange - which was super duper cute - and then he comes home physically and mentally hurt. Lots of internal and external battles they have to deal with before they finally get that HEA. Loved it.
Now..... with my one and only issue with the book.....the names in this book annoyed me. Alyssa? Griffin? C'mon. I feel like these names are totally not something in the 19th century. But who am I? Maybe they were being used, but not from my knowledge. Also, some of the language was out of place for the time period.
UGGGGH! MIRANDA AND THE DUKE NEED TO BE TOGETHER NOW! *shakes fist* Ugh I'm so tempted to skip ahead to their book.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book. The characters were amazing and complex. Their love was hard earned because of external factors and internal factors which were nice. My only issue were with the names and some of the language used but that is minor overall. In the end, I'll give this 5 stars. More like 4.5, but I rounded up since I don't give decimals.
August 5, 2014
I really enjoyed this book. This is my first read of this author and it won't be my last! I loved all of the details that were left in where most of the time they are left out. The planning of the wedding and the wedding itself were so interesting. Of course the best part was the love that grows between Alyssa and Griffin. I am really excited to read the next book in the series. This was really a 4.5 stars for me.
May 10, 2021
This book 100% earns its 4-star rating. It was a really surprising read.
I don't know if I will read the others, as I sort of think this book is a fluke in the series if I go by the other reviewers but just wanted to say it's a really good story.
I don't usually love war stories but it gets like 1 chapter in the book, I actually skipped ahead a couple of times to make sure I wasn't gonna read 10 chapters about Waterloo.
definitely did not disappoint.
I don't know if I will read the others, as I sort of think this book is a fluke in the series if I go by the other reviewers but just wanted to say it's a really good story.
I don't usually love war stories but it gets like 1 chapter in the book, I actually skipped ahead a couple of times to make sure I wasn't gonna read 10 chapters about Waterloo.
definitely did not disappoint.
February 16, 2010
Alas, I wanted a nice escapist plot, and the plot in this book was more of an excuse to plug raunchy scenes than it was to weave something meaningful or particularly amusing together.
July 7, 2018
A must read
The only way to find love, it seems, is to make a blood path with your two best friends. That is, until your father insists you marry before you go off to battle.
The only way to find love, it seems, is to make a blood path with your two best friends. That is, until your father insists you marry before you go off to battle.
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