It is important when writing a book set in a particular time period, that you have researched. Minor errors will annoy your readers. Additionally, wheIt is important when writing a book set in a particular time period, that you have researched. Minor errors will annoy your readers. Additionally, when an English Duke quotes Shakespeare, spelling should be using British English, not US. In the second half of the story, there are quite a few grammatical errors, although the first half is okay.
The story itself is good. I liked the inclusion of the female protagonist from the fringes ofBritish high society. Additionally, the Duke’s brother, whose sexual proclivities were unacceptable at the time, introduced Interest to the story....more
With AI illustrations on the cover, I must admit to wondering whether any of the story was digitally produced. Certainly, some of the opening chaptersWith AI illustrations on the cover, I must admit to wondering whether any of the story was digitally produced. Certainly, some of the opening chapters are a bit circular, which is often an indicator. However, the story did improve. I liked the premise of a young girl moving between two worlds, although I am surprised that given the amount of hugs she got from the demon lords, that none of them realised that she was a girl....more
Firstly, let’s talk titles. Mason and Lark were never about a fling. Things were serious the first time around, and while Lark wasn’t so sure she wantFirstly, let’s talk titles. Mason and Lark were never about a fling. Things were serious the first time around, and while Lark wasn’t so sure she wanted to get involved the second time, it still was not really a fling.
I had to slog a bit to get through this story. While I loved the cooking parts, the rest of the story was a bit boring and frustrating. I wanted to bang both their heads together. I suspect the first person writing style was partly what got on my nerves, but I found that this did not held my interest. Having said that, it was not a bad story....more
Tbh, I found it hard to like the characters. Both were so set in their ways. Bonnie was quite childish in the way she withheld herself from the relatiTbh, I found it hard to like the characters. Both were so set in their ways. Bonnie was quite childish in the way she withheld herself from the relationship, while Easton was selfish in his need to be in the road....more
The first in a series, each book incomplete without the next. Not impressed. The boss is basically a serial sex offender, having sex with one intern aThe first in a series, each book incomplete without the next. Not impressed. The boss is basically a serial sex offender, having sex with one intern after the other and then firing them. The book is also in desperate need of an editor. My favourite was a reference to the laundry mat. Took a few moments before I realised it was meant to be laundromat....more
I found this neither fresh nor funny. It was all about the f…, not romance. Plus it was a bit chaotic — not true sense of a story and it finished veryI found this neither fresh nor funny. It was all about the f…, not romance. Plus it was a bit chaotic — not true sense of a story and it finished very abruptly....more
I enjoyed the story. I kept telling myself, one more chapter then I will go and do some work… but I found I could not put it down. That is not to say I enjoyed the story. I kept telling myself, one more chapter then I will go and do some work… but I found I could not put it down. That is not to say it was without fault. It annoyed me that as a witch and a china connoisseur that she used teabags instead of loose leaf tea; there was something about Andrew that I didn’t quite like; and I wanted to tell Em to just do it, rather than putting things off. (That last one’s a laugh, coming from me.)...more