3.75 stars
I love Ms. Gadziala's books and will continue to read them as they do nothing but get better. The potential for consistent 5 star writing is there. And, as always, I totally recommend her books. Whether you can tell from my review or not ;)
Damn, I think I just fangirled:
(*shakes head in shame*)
What I liked:
The writing. It's engaging. I want to read the next word even when I'm grumbling about other shit. Maybe it's just her writing-style, or maybe it's the way she puts the story together.
The H. You might find that hard to believe later on ;) He grew on me, because he grew as a character. Granted it took the h's disappearance. He was also charmingly full of himself. But the h's reaction to that behavior made it an issue overall for me. The no OW, that shit right there, THAT should be applauded coming from this character.
The last 25% redeemed a lot.
No spoilers this time :)
I already want to read Wolf and Janie's book.
And Shooter...(*sigh*)
He can hook is pinkie through mine any time he wants ;)
His book...like, now.
(*puppy dog face*)
What I didn't like:
This h should've been a no-brainer for my favorite shelf: chicks-I-wanna-be-when-shit-hits. She was the biggest badass of them all.
Fucking. Swoon.
I couldn't wait for her to put Cash in his place and make him work for her. The fact she didn't breaks my fucking heart. It hurts even more she was reduced to a damsel in distress.
I'm also a bit tired of the trope where the H makes the h a silly, giddy twit sexually. As if she doesn't have a fucking thought in her head but his dick. I'd like to see him pant his ass all over the house for her. Seriously, it gets fucking old. All of these H's that are so full of themselves...which is FINE when they have to work for the h. Here we have a badass h and she's reduced to sopping panties and begging. And he's all: if you don't beg, babe, it ain't happening.
What the fuck ever.
Cash is such a man-ho he needs to be brought down a peg. Not bring down the strongest woman in the entire series as if she's nothing better than a club-ho. All eager beaver.
All it does is make me lose respect for the h. Especially because for the first 70% she gives in every fucking time while mentally castigating him. It's always her initiating sex or him bullying her into it to make some fucking point about his perfection of masculinity. (*eye-mf'ing-roll*)
But, the whole damsel in distress thing, that shit...that shit burns for this h. Having her wait on some man to save her ass just pissed me off. She's a badass bitch. The biggest, baddest bitch of them all.
(A silent moment of mourning)
The scene repeat in both POVs is almost nil...Halle-fucking-lujah. The overlapping scenes are now incorporated into the natural flow of plot so they never felt like the same scene.
Oh with the parentheses, though. Please start using commas or shorter sentences...inner thought inside of inner thought is just too much at 43 times in a novel.
I'd still edit her books for free ;)
Why the 3.75 after all that bitching?
The last 25%.
Ms. G, keep on writing cuz I'll keep on buying ;)
One last thing.
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“...getting into all kinds of shit without even filling him in and HAULING UP with women and not checking in like we were supposed to...”
“He was HAULED UP with Janie”
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WTF does "hauling/hauled up" mean?
Holing/Holed up, perhaps?
Or is this some backwoods shit we don't even say in Louisiana?