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Previously released as My Father's Rival
Jared “Mac” MacKenzie is used to making tough decisions as the President of the Silver Saints MC. When a member of a rival MC puts one of his brothers in a coma, he’ll do whatever it takes to get answers—including kidnapping Bridget Pierce, their president’s daughter.

120 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 20, 2017

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Fiona Davenport

207 books2,765 followers
The writing duo of Elle Christensen and Rochelle Paige team up under the USA Today bestselling Fiona Davenport pen name to bring you sexy, insta-love stories filled with alpha males.

If you want a quick & dirty read with a guaranteed happily ever after, then give Fiona Davenport a try!

You can connect with Fiona on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/Fiona-Davenp....

Professional Inquiries: Fiona is represented by SBR Media. For inquiries regarding foreign rights, audio and other media outlets, please contact Laura@sbrmedia.com.

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Profile Image for Coco.V.
50k reviews103 followers
March 18, 2025
2.5 stars. I thought this book would have knocked my socks off...instead it was just an okay story to pass time. This was a sinfully hot, sexy and titillating read don't get me wrong, but it wasn't as good to me as other books by this smutaholic duo. Mostly, because the heroine really lacked backbone and I didn't click with both characters like I would have liked to.
Profile Image for  Leo (Queen of the Rants and Spoilers).
1,147 reviews93 followers
November 25, 2017
So I'm done with this author.
Another one bites the dust.



These are my feelings on this and you can hate me and bash my review all you want but I won't ever change my thoughts on this matter.

I hated this book, this stupid girl helped during her own kidnapping because she was horny for the hero. What kinda example is this for girls who read your books, Authors? Are you sending a message to every girl out there that it's ok to help their own kidnapping, that it's ok to fall for your abductor? What's next for you? rape like Alexa Riley, K Webster and M Robinson only to name few of many of authors writing these types of books? Will your next book be about date rape? A father raping his daughter? Since readers and authors are romanticizing rapists I guess I wouldn't be surprised... When will it be enough for you? I guess as long as you keep selling these books you don't care, right?
Profile Image for ♡Tonya♡.
2,062 reviews569 followers
November 20, 2017
It's Live!

**ARC RECEIVED IN EXCHANGE FOR AN HONEST REVIEW **


When I saw that Fiona Davenport was releasing a MC book, I didn't sqeal with excitement or do an awkward happy dance- I'm totally lying, I did both! THEN, if that wasn't wonderful enough, it was an older man/ younger woman storyline....catnip!

Mac- badass biker president. Sexy, broody, alpha.....Was he always perfect? No. He was a biker president, they had a tendency to walk a fine line from time to time. He tried to keep away from Bridget but the pull was too strong.

Bridget- she was just how I like my heroines. She wasn't alpha at all, but she stiffened her spine when need be. She was sweet and had fallen for Mac when shefirst saw him, never imagining that one day she would be his.

- no cheating
-zero ow/om drama
-mild pushing away by hero (overnight 😂)
-no violence
- nice and steamy
-hero hadn't been with anyone in a long while, heroine was a virgin
-great secondary characters that I hope they explore. I'm curious how they will work Lena's story - if they go that route
-epilogue- about a year out and I wanted more... that is my only "complaint"
Profile Image for Karla.
1,367 reviews348 followers
November 23, 2017
3.25 stars!

This is another guilty pleasure author that I know exactly what I’m getting when I read one of her books, pure smut. This one has a hot possessive MC prez, younger h, insta love/lust and tons of sexy times. A quick read perfect for in between reads.❤️


Profile Image for Helen Power.
Author 10 books621 followers
February 17, 2022
*This book is called “Mac” on Amazon.ca, where I got it on Kindle Unlimited. I’m not gonna lie, it took me a hot minute to find it on GR to give it a review XD *

I’ve been incredibly busy and stressed out with work this week, and this book is just what the doctor ordered! It’s fast-paced, very short (at only 120 pages), and full of sweet and steamy goodness. Despite the short length, Davenport does a fabulous job of introducing a new cast of characters (if this is a spin off, I couldn’t tell, which to me is a sign of a good writer), and while there’s steamy parts, they don’t dominate the entire plot, like they sometimes do for novellas. All in all, this is a great read, especially if you're looking for a brief escape!
Profile Image for Deborah.
3,775 reviews489 followers
April 5, 2022
I have to be honest this wasn’t as good as I’d expected. I was intending to move onto Link which is sitting on my kindle but now I’m not so sure.
Profile Image for Darlene I read WAY to many books.
3,630 reviews2,326 followers
May 13, 2019
This was a pretty decent biker book!! Which is safe!! I knowww lol

Mac is the prez of silver saints he has a problem on his hands someone from hounds of hellfire MC attacked one of his men and landed him in the hospital so he wants revenge and justice so he talks to the prez of the other Rival MC to get the guy... nope wont work whats the next best thing? Kidnap the Rival prez daughter, Bridget has been sorta crushing on Mac since she seen him.. but knows he won't go for a girl like her for many reasons and when he shows up to kidnap her there is a spark and Mac is already sprung.. he tries to fight it lol last one day ONE DAY!! Its steamy forbidden and drama is still going down between the clubs..

Wish Bridget would have fought alittle on her kidnapping.. she was very "Yes" :( wanted her to make this guy work for it.. I'm down for reading the next couple.

No cheating, no ow/om drama, slight drama, secondary charas, sexy times, Virgin gal and celibate guy (i think no mentions of his past)

Recommend- yes/maybe
Cover-⭐⭐⭐

Older/younger couple
Instalove/lust
Safe
No condom
Slight push/pull From h (one day lol)
Hea
Epilogue
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Profile Image for Fatimama.
1,017 reviews64 followers
November 22, 2017
Kinda blah. Heroine is TSTL in helping with her kidnapping just coz she has the hots for her kidnapper. Like how does she know he’s really not a bad guy??!
Profile Image for Andrea Fleury.
1,005 reviews80 followers
January 31, 2021
Mac

Dirty sexy man. Mac is older and very sexy with gray in his hair. One look and woman want him. But he wants Bridget. What becames a kidnapping turns in to love.Mac is the president of a MC club. She is the daughter of there rival mc club
Profile Image for Jel.
148 reviews41 followers
August 20, 2022
Not the best but it’s what I needed

The main issues I had with this was how fast the h was to leave with her kidnapper, H (she even helped him kidnap her😭🙄). I mean girlll be a bit reluctant would you? Or at least pretend to put up a fight. Another issue was she chose a long time crush over her dad, the guy who raised her up. There’s no gratitude whatsoever for her parents. Shame on her. The book was a quick read and fun overall. Very little drama. The ending however, was so abrupt. I didn’t even know it had ended. 😂
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Profile Image for Meg H.
78 reviews65 followers
February 5, 2022
This book (really the whole series) is basically my favorite trope. Big, strong, sexy, older Motorcycle club members treating their young women like princesses? Steamy sex, insta love, obsessed with putting a baby in her belly? Sign me up. these books are also short 120 pages so great to binge in an afternoon, palate cleanse, or scratch that itch :)

This specific book focuses on the MC President kidnapping his Rival MC President's 18 year old daughter. What could go wrong ??
Profile Image for *CJ*.
4,919 reviews599 followers
November 11, 2019
"My Father's Rival" is the story of Bridget and Mac.

In this Motorcycle club romance, the hero kidnaps the heroine, his enemy's daughter, only to realize his feelings for her and sex her 69 ways.

After some angst, MC drama and loads of coitus, they find their HEA.

Honestly, this was just average. I skimmed it because the plot did not engage me.

Safe
2.5/5
Profile Image for May Reads Books.
684 reviews
November 25, 2017
4/5
Safe read

-Insta love
-Virgin h
-Celibate H
-OTT alpha
-Mild pushing away by H, doesn’t last long
-No OW Drama
-would have liked more of an epilogue, but it seems more books are coming from this series!!
Profile Image for Elizabeth Neal.
1,745 reviews145 followers
August 1, 2020
When Mac, president of the Silver Saints, doesn't get the results from a meeting with the  Hounds of Hellfire MC president, Pierce, that he wanted, he decides to look for a bargaining chip, so to speak, and as Pierce's only weakness is his little princess...

Bridget knows her Dad keeps club business as far from her as possible, so when she sees Mac storming out of a meeting with him, she's aware that doesn't bode well. Of course, it doesn't stop her year-long crush on the much older man.

After a few days of surveillance, Mac and a few members make their move. But, upon seeing Bridget in the flesh, Mac knows that not only his plans, but life as he knows it, has changed.

However, Mac fights it, due to her innocence, age, and the situation, but it isn't long before resisting her is no longer possible.

Will Mac's man get his revenge? Will Bridget have to return home? Or has she become Mac's, permanently? Is there a HEA in their future?

One-click now and follow along as two people meet, albeit in less than ideal circumstances, only to realize their paths were always meant to cross. I hope to see more from this club.

**I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book.**
Profile Image for Jami.
617 reviews13 followers
April 23, 2019
Mac wants revenge against a rival MC for putting one of their men in a coma. The perfect solution was to take some precious of the President's that would make him hand over everything he was looking for. Only problem was that Mac didn't expect the instant connection to happen when he first seen Bridget. His caveman possessive instincts kicked in and he made the choice to never let her go.

-safe read
-h was a virgin
-H has been celibate for a while
-no om/ow drama
-older man/younger woman
-epilogue only 1 year out.
Profile Image for Kate V.
1,756 reviews334 followers
December 29, 2023
3 smut-scale stars!

Quick and dirty MC romance. Not bad for what it was!
Profile Image for Babel.
2,304 reviews193 followers
November 19, 2017
Smut romance and bikers? Hell, yeah! :-D

Kidnapping, MC rivalry, and a passion that cannot be reined in.

All these elements combine to create a cute and sexy novella that's got a sweet heroine who knows who she wants and a gruff MC President who can't resist the temptation. I loved these two characters. They fit so perfectly.

The kidnapping scene is hilarious as the characters react so unexpectedly. I enjoyed the whole plot very much from the club rivalry to the age gap, the inner workings of the Silver Saints club, the very detailed steamy scenes and the insta-love that conquers all.

As there are angry bikers everywhere, I thoroughly enjoyed their alpha male plans and actions, which were gladly mixed up with tender displays of affection. Great story to add to this author's collection of lovely romances, and I hope to see this turn into a series!
Profile Image for Cheryl.
1,974 reviews57 followers
September 5, 2021
Kidnapping a princess

Mac kidnaps Bridget the princess of a rival MC. At first it is as leverage for her father to hand over the man that put one of his men in a coma. Bridget has always had a Crush on Mac and the feelings are mutual no matter how much Mac tries to stay away.

I just wished we could have "seen" when Bridget's father met his granddaughter.
Profile Image for Jennifer McGurk Finn.
2,101 reviews52 followers
December 1, 2017
This is the first book in the Silver Saints MC series by Fiona Davenport and I'm hoping she continues with it. Jared MacKenzie "Mac" is the President of the Silver Saints MC and his Road Captain, Logan is currently in the hospital in a coma. Logan was trying to stop a man who was getting rough with his girlfriend and the man ended up beating Logan with a baseball bat. Mac is pissed and he wants retribution but the only information they have is that the man who attacked Logan was wearing a Hounds of Hellfire MC cut. The two clubs are rivals but Mac goes to Pierce, the President of the Hounds of Hellfire and tells him the story thinking he'd be pissed that one of his men was hitting a woman. Pierce refused to tell Mac anything so Mac decides he'll take something important to Pierce to use as leverage. Bridget is the Princess of the HOH MC, her dad is the President and he's always kept her on a short leash. She's had a crush on Mac since she first laid eyes on him even though he's old enough to be her dad and he's her dad's rival. This was a really good start to what I hope is a series. I'd love to read about Logan and Lena next or Scout and Kat.
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694 reviews26 followers
March 5, 2023
I wish the age gaps wasn’t so large but it’s still a good book

Steam- 2/3 breeding kink
Profile Image for Lara.
115 reviews
September 21, 2023
This was terrible😀 i had so much hope that stuff your kindle day wouldn’t disappoint me
Profile Image for Kelly ~Booktrovert~.
722 reviews
July 11, 2024
2nd read - Original review still stands

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I'm not sure how I missed this one, but I loved it!

I love reading MC books, but it's hard to find a decent one that doesn't have all that OW drama.

Safe, sweet, and full of sexy fun times. My heart is happy.

4 big stars!
Profile Image for AussieMum.
1,393 reviews55 followers
nope-not-for-me-not-interested
February 12, 2022
DNF 37%
Cheesy dialogue. Flimsy plot. Weak female lead. And Mac is one of those guys who changes his mind like the breeze blows.
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208 reviews1 follower
April 21, 2025
3.4✨’s

Mac + Bridget’s love story💖

Homegirl is iconic, she provided the ladder for her own kidnapping and I was hereeee for it. 😂


Anywhooo...

⚠️ + Info:
- Instalove
- Dual POV
- Age gap: older H/younger h
- Virgin h🍒 & H is experienced but definitely not a man304
- No: OMD, cheating, separation, sharing, or 3rd act break up
- Misunderstanding: but it’s cleared up immediately
- Slight push/pull: H tries to deny his feelings for h, but thank heavens it doesn’t last long. He redeemed his j@ck@ss ways enough imo.
- Kidnapping? Does it count when you assist the kidnapper?
- Abuse/Assualt: A secondary character is beaten with a bat, and in the hospital. Another is beat up by her boyfriend/ex bf
- OWD: Not due the H having a sexual relationship with OW, but another old lady was mean to Bridget + hurt her physically.
- Side characters: Loved the MC members, but I still think the h should’ve smacked the taste out of Cat’s mouth.
- HEA: Married w/ babies + the bonus epilogues were ev-reeee-thing. 💖
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