i was rlly excited to read this and for the first 100ish pages it was good, i liked the treasure hunt idea but it was rlly hard to follow. i never coni was rlly excited to read this and for the first 100ish pages it was good, i liked the treasure hunt idea but it was rlly hard to follow. i never connected with the characters like brandon was almost like an afterthought and he would be contemplating whether he liked her or not after literally running all over town to find her. Also, what’s up with rose crying ALL THE TIME??? i swear every other sentence it would talk about the tears welling up in her eyes! and they would be having a good moment and then it would end up with one of them leaving. The author would be so detailed about the most random parts and then when something cute would happen she would skip over it! it was infuriating to read! half of the description was wrong btw her dad is not his mortal enemy he was his janitor. I only made it to 70% and there was no mention of kids other than the first 100 pages and also this is NOT enemies to lovers brandon said multiple that he doesn’t dislike her. It was like strangers to lovers mainly. i can understand why he didn’t like her in the beginning tho, do you know how hard it is to spot little kids running at you when your not looking down? especially in a place where your not expecting kids?? and then the wine spill??? like bro. Rose honestly angered me so much ngl. like she didn’t want to take the smarter route during the treasure hunt and she would cry every five seconds. also why did she get on the boat with georgie in her hands????? like what were you going to do with her??? Anywho, i gave it a one because it was a DNF and when I DNF a book that means i did NOT like it or it was too smutty and this book was both. ...more