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Wilted Orchid
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Wilted Orchid: Mafia Wars World #4
Unfortunately I wasn't able to finish this book. I think this is only the fifth book I've ever DNF'd, out of thousands, before & after GoodReads!😔
I found the writing, in the half of the book I did manage to read, quite shambolic. There were quite a few continuity errors - saying they were in one city when they were in another. This was a complete mistake, not a simple case of not mentioning they'd travelled. This wasn't the only issue of it's kind. The writing sometimes came across as quite juvenile. Even the thirty year old men spoke like teenagers much of the time. The characterization was rather one dimensional & brutish. This book also didn't mesh with the outgoing & incoming sisters books from the other Authors. It made it very jarring!😔
I'm truly disappointed I had to bail out on this book. I've really enjoyed this series up until now. I won't post my review on Amazon as I don't think it's right, as a reviewer, to post reviews on books that I haven't finished, on a selling site!
Debbie, 1970, UK
Wilted Orchid: Mafia Wars World #4
Unfortunately I wasn't able to finish this book. I think this is only the fifth book I've ever DNF'd, out of thousands, before & after GoodReads!😔
I found the writing, in the half of the book I did manage to read, quite shambolic. There were quite a few continuity errors - saying they were in one city when they were in another. This was a complete mistake, not a simple case of not mentioning they'd travelled. This wasn't the only issue of it's kind. The writing sometimes came across as quite juvenile. Even the thirty year old men spoke like teenagers much of the time. The characterization was rather one dimensional & brutish. This book also didn't mesh with the outgoing & incoming sisters books from the other Authors. It made it very jarring!😔
I'm truly disappointed I had to bail out on this book. I've really enjoyed this series up until now. I won't post my review on Amazon as I don't think it's right, as a reviewer, to post reviews on books that I haven't finished, on a selling site!
Debbie, 1970, UK
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February 20, 2022
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February 20, 2022
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February 20, 2022
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February 20, 2022
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