ᗰ.ᑕ. ⛵ O͎L͎D͎E͎R͎ ͎&͎ ͎W͎I͎S͎E͎R͎'s Reviews > Falling for My Husband

2022 = DNF'd

The writing is so bad it could win a prize for cringeworthy literature. The characters are bland and indistinct with similar voices. I tried to skim through, but I DNF'd after seeing some of the nauseating sex scenes. I didn’t know whether to laugh or look for a barf bag! 🫢

🤢 Sickening Sex Scene Excerpts:

▪️ The sight of her pink, untried slit, was epic beauty for my eyes.

▫️ ...I sucked on her essence...

▪️ ...humping the sheets of the bed as I paid homage to her sweetness.

▫️ I was a blue ball of racketing pain as I eyed her slit.

▪️ ...I pulled out my cock, stroked it and came all over her pussy, covering it with my white essence.

▫️ Her wetness, the musky scent that I laved on last night made me want to taste a drop of her nectar...

▪️ I felt the wall of her purity, and I felt it break open-it felt like it was peeling my cock...

▫️ ...I rolled her skirt up and ripped the scrap of hindrance that was blocking my way into her channel.

▪️ ...I'm going to f*ck it until I feel like I am blasting through space, blazing hot and ready to come to earth...

▫️ ...my orgasm peaked, about to spurt out of my dick.

▪️ ...she looked up, waiting for me to bless her with my seed.

▫️ ...the ropes of my essence landed on her cheek...

▪️ A quick glance at our joined sexes and I was delighted to see white liquid coated my length as I slid in and out of her hole.



The FMC promised her deceased mother that she would wait to give her virginity to her husband. So she does everything including anal, but thankfully still has her hymen. Umm, yeah. I'm sure her mother would have been pleased. 🙄