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The Phoenix Crown by Kate Quinn
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did not like it

While Quinn is not one of my favorite authors, she usually writes a solid enough book that you can count on it being good book. This book falls way short of her normal bar.

There are so many issues with this book:

- The characters are not well developed. They are very flat and uninspired. Quinn is usually really good at writing interesting characters so this was a huge disappointment.

-This mystery lacks any real mystery There was no feeling of intrigue. The whole thing felt very anticlimactic leading up to the obvious reveal.

- Felt completely uninspired. This book felt like the authors were trying to write to fulfill specific requirements and following a tired writing formula. The story had the emotion and entertainment of a mundane college textbook. It was impossible to become engaged in this lackluster story.

- Moreover, for being historical fiction it didn't feel historical either. One of the reasons I kept going with this book was because of the impending SF earthquake. The entire book leads up to the earthquake, counting you down to it, so you expect the earthquake to be the focal point, the main drama. However, this major historical event that the story was leading us up to all along, is completely glossed over and overshadowed by the attention to the LGBTQ theme. Which is funny because the whole relationship felt like a token gay couple to check off a diversity box. It didn't feel genuine at all.

I hope this is only a hiccup in Quinn's writing career and not a sign of what's to come. I wasn't able to finish this book without skimming. With all my issues with the writing and the fact that I had to skim to finish the book gets 1*.
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Reading Progress

April 2, 2023 – Shelved as: to-read
April 2, 2023 – Shelved
February 13, 2024 – Started Reading
February 14, 2024 –
10.0%
February 16, 2024 –
35.0% "Only interested in how the earthquake plays into the story; that's it. I have no connection to the characters; they are flat. The story itself is not all that intriguing. For some reason I just cannot DNF because the earthquake countdown at the beginning of every chapter has me mildly intrigued and I think the only reason for that is from reading The Nature of Fragile Things, about the earthquake,which I loved"
February 18, 2024 –
55.0% "I'm constantly telling myself, "ok, now it will get better," with this book. I thought once I hit 30ish% I'd be far enough along for the story to quit being a drag, but no. Then the story shifted around 50% and I thought it again, no. Now The Earthquake hits which is what has pulled me along so far and I'm sitting here hoping it improves again. I feel like a sucker being taken for a ride."
February 19, 2024 –
75.0%
February 19, 2024 – Finished Reading

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Jennifer Excellent assessment.


Sarah I’m at 47% and deciding if I should finish. I think I’m going to move on.


Grace Woodard Exactly my thoughts, I’m thinking it’s not Kate Quinn but just because it’s a collaboration novel. The lesbian couple in The Huntress doesn’t overshadow the theme, but this one just seemed too polished to fit modern political correctness and feminism.


Monica Deregt I agree with all of this! The earthquake scenes seemed rushed and incomplete, while the repeated descriptions of lesbian love and why it was ok felt like awkward political correctness. Not what I wanted to hear more about after all that lead up to the earthquake.


Shelley Completely agree.


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Teresa Pierce Glad to know this. Thanks for the review.


Jayne Accurate review. I totally agree.


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