Jai M {Cat Crazy Dragon }'s Reviews > Mars

Not offensive, just a weak story. DNF 49%

-Think ‘Sons of Anarchy’, but cheesy and rushed.
-The dialogue is too wordy, over explained, and comes across as fake.
-The story moves too fast, too easy, too fake.
-The FMC is copacetic with everything, too cool, too perfect.
-Never got a real feel for the MMC, he was too flat.
-The MC was a washed out version of S.O.A., and presented as all acceptable 🫤
-So not a feminists read, despite the FMC surface tough act:
*Only she is branded by the ‘Goddess’ as being owned.
*Only she is bitten and marked as being ‘claimed’.
*She wears his scent, he doesn’t wear hers.
*She gives up her lifestyle and home for his, no discussion, yes or no mating.
*’Bunnies’, earn their keep on their backs, only women, no males.
*Old ladies are just as replaceable as ‘Bunnies’, only ‘mates’ are privileged to be ‘kept’.

I could go on, but you get the idea.
This will work for some, and not for others. But style and plot aside, the writing was subpar, and the plot not given the space and detail needed to make it work.