Jason Smith's Reviews > Forsaken Commander

This has the makings of a good story, enough to make me give the rest of the series a shot, but the author’s constant need to remind us every two to three sentences that the main character is a genetically enhanced superhuman starts to drag you down after the first few pages. Hopefully they lay off of that in the rest of the series, because the basic storyline is interesting and I want to see where it goes.