Muwaffaq Salti's Reviews > Forsaken Commander
Forsaken Commander (The Aternien Wars, #1)
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I mean it's not terrible. Perhaps I have read too much sci-fi. My issue is - non-stop fights, with one against the odds victory after another and a large reliance on super human capabilities and tech, with some very mediocre relatively constant repartee. There is nothing in between. No subtlety, no real character development and not much story progression beyond the obvious and predictable. I really hate writing negative reviews because it is easy to criticise somebody else's work which I know requires effort and dedication, but this was just too predictable for me
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May 11, 2024
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May 12, 2024
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May 12, 2024
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