Laini's Reviews > Claimed by the Alphas: Part One
Claimed by the Alphas: Part One
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The writing was great. This 3 star review was not for the writing. The description of the wolves etc was good too. I have one problem and it ruined my entire enjoyment of this story.
If I'm not mistaken this is a paranormal romance.
The female protagonist forms a connection with one male and then ends up sleeping with another, who Incidentally doesn't like her 'soft' body. I like menage but some authors forget it's not just about three people having sex. It's about falling in love with two guys. Two separate and distinctive characters. How can you carry us down a road to intimacy with one character in your story and then by the end of the episode just have the female character have sex, not make love folks, to another character?
If this was just pornography then anyone could sleep with anyone. But I wouldn't be reading it because I'm interested in 'romance.' I want an emotional connection with those characters. So. Disappointed.
If I'm not mistaken this is a paranormal romance.
The female protagonist forms a connection with one male and then ends up sleeping with another, who Incidentally doesn't like her 'soft' body. I like menage but some authors forget it's not just about three people having sex. It's about falling in love with two guys. Two separate and distinctive characters. How can you carry us down a road to intimacy with one character in your story and then by the end of the episode just have the female character have sex, not make love folks, to another character?
If this was just pornography then anyone could sleep with anyone. But I wouldn't be reading it because I'm interested in 'romance.' I want an emotional connection with those characters. So. Disappointed.
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Started Reading
July 1, 2016
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Finished Reading
July 21, 2016
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