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The Overstory by Richard Powers
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it was ok

Well. A long rant has been percolating in my head while I read this overpraised novel by a writer I try over and over and whose work over and over fails to wow me, which is putting it kindly. Lately I've read a number of the 'what to do about great men/geniuses who are also sexual assaulters' think pieces that have been proliferating and what throws me each time is that the artists cited are in reality not a single one of them great, let alone a genius. See for instance Roman Polanski, Woody Allen, David Foster Wallace and so on, none of whose work deserves anything close to the adulation it gets. And no I'm not associating Powers with those accused of misogynist behavior (though who knows, such a revelation about any given man cannot be a surprise at this point). I am however associating him with the long list of white men assigned greatness status when they nowhere near deserve it. What a low bar they have to leap.

There's some good writing here, yes. The theme is of course important, yes, and there's important information shared here, yes. That's about all this novel has going for it. As with every single other of his books I've read, and despite the overabundant effort in this one at conjuring up some, somehow there's no real passion here. As with other of his books, this one never made me feel anything, neither about the urgent matters he's addressing about which I do yes feel a great deal but his writing didn't tap in to even my already existing feelings, nor, most definitely, about the characters who for all his very visible efforts never achieve any depth or dimension. As I've always found with a Powers book, despite or maybe because of everything he desperately throws at it ("cophrophagic" instead of plain old "shit eating" grin kind of epitomizes the problem, as do all the would-be lyrical but actually wearisome lists of natural wonders), in this one he once again misses the mark. The mark being the powerful, stirring, devastating novel this one wants to be but is not.

Along with the general failure there's a specific offense, one that I suppose shouldn't surprise me but still does every time an author commits it, which these boy geniuses yep keep on doing. That is this book's overweening androcentrism. It's a man's man's man's man's world in Powersland, and this is true even though some of the central characters are women, a neat trick. I could go on and on about this but will just mention a few aspects of this insult. One, the most egregious, is the use of the words "man" and "mankind" throughout to refer to human beings. Jesus H. Christ. In the year 2018. Two, following this, every specific tree that plays a part in a scene is referred to as "he." Really!? This even after we've already been told that most trees are male or female. Yet Powers can't manage to adhere to fact when portraying them. Three, in Powers world, it seems, only fathers matter. Just about every story line starts with a depiction of the character's relationship with her/his father, and this father remains a keynote throughout the characters' ensuing lives; mothers are barely mentioned and when they are, it's ridiculously stereotypically (with a nice pinch of cultural racism thrown in, in the case of the Indian mother who gets a handful of lines bobbling her head and nagging her son to get married). Apparently, in Powers' view, only fathers matter. Daddy issues much, sir?

There's more. Like the absence of a single Black or Latinx character in what sets itself up to be a sweeping saga of recent U.S. history. Powers throws a line or a paragraph here and there to a Native person though these characters don't get any actual names or agency of any kind. And like the book's ultimate failure to provide any true vision, any forward thrust that doesn't devolve into dewy mysticism as the closing pages do, any real ideas or analysis about an actual way forward for humans and trees in this book about humans and trees. Which is not surprising, and which also explains the rapturous reviews this book has undeservedly received. When the literary establishment heaps praise on what they label a political novel, the very literary establishment that always vociferously denies there can ever even be such a thing as a political novel that achieves true art, the establishment that will never praise a really political novel that is truly radical and issues a real artistic-ideological challenge to bourgeois consciousness, well then you know the book in question has nothing new or exciting to recommend it.

That book, new and revolutionary, will come. The one that doesn't merely whine about what class society has wrought but tells a winning, gripping story of a real battle, a revolutionary class-struggle battle on a much grander scale than the little scenes depicted here, to save the trees and all the rest of us. I'll be waiting.
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Greg Fantastic review! I agree with everything you say. I loved the first third or so of this book. And then, well, it seemed rather stupid. I don't have your ability with words, so I guess in my review I'll just say, "Interesting till it gets stupid because the author tries to satisfy all readers and so for the alt-right crowd he makes the tree-huggers stupid but then for the alt-left crowd he turns them into heroes." Yea, that's good, that's how I felt.


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Pam If I didn't like any of his previous works, I would not have read this book. Surprised she took the time as it is a pretty long book.


Ayah Abdul-Rauf Could not agree more. As a writer of literary fiction, the “literary” establishment could not be more frustrating and conceited. I am so utterly sick of fiction like this dominating the market


Greg Ayah wrote: "Could not agree more. As a writer of literary fiction, the “literary” establishment could not be more frustrating and conceited. I am so utterly sick of fiction like this dominating the market"

I hardly ever read contemporary literature. But I do read the "rave reviewed" books when the reviews come from NPR and sources I trust (Wall Street Journal, NYtimes, San Fran Chronicle) AND, in this case, I thought the cover beautiful when I saw it at the library, AND, a number of my goodread friends were doing a buddy read.


Greg Of course there are 'political' novels that achieve greatness. Robert Penn Warren's "All the Kings Men" was a devastating indictment of southern politics. And it so depends on how one approaches a book. Climate and forests should NOT be a political issue. But it is, and that in and of itself is terrifying. And this book, intentionally political but trying not to be obvious, fails. If the author had gone balls-to-the-wall about the issue, instead of getting all cutesy/silly with it, this would have been a better book.


CanadianReader A thought-provoking review. It occurred to me, too, that the depiction of women as spiritual guides or figures men turn to for meaning and direction was thin.


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Gary16 I agree at half way through that he’s not quite hitting the mark in bringing characters to life and making you care about them.


Mike Parson What an ugly review! It seems that your complaints are not with the book but with the state of novel writing in general or it's alleged lack inclusiveness. I feel bad for you that you have to stand solid on a certain viewpoint preventing you from understanding the beautifully structured narrative Powers wrote.


Rosemary King I agree with this review. The book couldn’t decide what it wanted to be.


Charlie You put every thought I had about this book into words, thank you so much!


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Mel Totally agree with you! The lack of Black and Latinx characters was so telling in such an "American" novel. The sexism and the racism were terribly ingrained. I laughed at how he took deep pains to describe a woman peeing in the tree twice, but failed to mention what happened when she had periods in the tree for a year! Oh these white male literary authors are so full of themselves...


Terrol Williams Yes yes yes.


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Lia Thank you for putting into words what turned me off so much about this book. I feel deeply connected to trees, and I felt no passion about them from the author, despite all the flowery language. It felt disingenuous, this book. And all the patriarchal, colonialist b.s. - yes! The time has come to focus on the work of women and BIPOC. Thank you for this review, sister! <3


Rachel Keteyian I'd been searching reviews from others with my same train of thought about this novel, so thank you for your review! I just finished the novel moments ago (forced myself to finish it). Throughout reading this book I could feel that this was a white man's perspective. His non-white characters were often depicted as "mysterious" and "mystical." Initially he wrote his women characters engaging, but there always seemed to be a turning point when they became fixated on a male counterpart.

What this novel shows us is a white man telling what he knows and I think it's a perfect metaphor for the white liberal in America: we know our history is dark so we need it romanticized to be palatable. We know that there needs to be stories about nonwhite people so let's listen to this white man sprinkle in a few nonwhite characters and a disabled character to make us feel good about ourselves.

No.

Perhaps the most frustrating aspect is the almost complete lack of regard to Native Americans. This story could be so engaging if it was based in Native people's relationship to the land. In my opinion you can't tell a story about nature and humankind's takeover without discussing the massacre of native people and their relationship with this land and the colonizers.


Sabine fantastic review! Much better than mine but you said it all


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Greg Shelley, All, I just finished reading Ken Follet's "The Hammer of Eden" from the late 1990s. Same story and for Follet, poorly written. In "Hammer" a man (a criminal) starts a commune, then fights to save it in the hills and valleys of California. I don't mind when an author takes a story and MAKES IT BETTER. But Powers pretty much simply rewrites "Hammer" and MAKES IT WORSE.


Cathy Well said. I agree with your assessment wholeheartedly!


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Raquel I can't say I fully agree because I didn't manage to finish the book, I only read first third of it. I was looking into reviews trying to figure out why on earth I just didn't engage with the stories considering that I love nature and aware that there is the need to connect to it. Well, your review have made me feel less guilty for giving up on this book. The author is more concentrated in the form than in the content, it totally loss me...


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Greg Rachel wrote: "I'd been searching reviews from others with my same train of thought about this novel, so thank you for your review! I just finished the novel moments ago (forced myself to finish it). Throughout r..."

Rachel, just IMAGINE all the lost culture, the lost stories, the lost civilizations/lost knowledge that disappeared with America's Native Americans? I love your point/thoughts! (North, Central, and South Americas.)


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Steven you lost me at David Foster Wallace; that man is many things and genius has to be one of them


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digital I generally agree with your take on the female and POC characters being lacking, but this is wincingly uncharitable to what he *did* accomplish with this. He is allowed to use big words if he uses them - as he does - to good effect. He is allowed to focus on the "dewy mysticism" of trees when the scope of his book is to convince us of their importance rather than present a blueprint for the future. I too look forward to the visionary political novel that presents a solution to the problems Powers outlines, but *his* vision is still worth considering.


message 22: by Pat (new) - rated it 4 stars

Pat Thank you for sharing an honest impression of the writing. I think the issue is psychic distance. It starts out at the maximum and never comes in close enough for us to walk in all of the characters' shoes. But lyrical it is.


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Toni I just stopped reading The Overstory at about 25% because I couldn't take the rampant sexism anymore. I completely agree with your review. It's sad because I really wanted to like this book after reading the reviews. I'm just sick of books written by white males who think that this is a man's world and women are just an afterthought. That is how this book feels to me. No more Richard Powers for me!


message 24: by Luke (new) - rated it 4 stars

Luke I don't understand when people who don't like an author Continue to read their books and then moan that they don't like them. Odd.


message 25: by Viki (new) - rated it 2 stars

Viki Sonntag Thanks. I'm halfway through and was underwhelmed by what many considered the engaging part of the book. So not my cup of tea.


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Lynda Now I feel somehow exonerated for my feelings about this book, which I had to jettison before I had quite reached the halfway point. I had expected so much more! While I don't deny the author's talent, I believe that he would solidly reach more readers if he would quit trying so hard to add hordes of unnecessary, meaningless words to his stories. Thank you for putting my feelings into words.


Paul Warren All of these complaints are true and then some, in a story that covers hundreds of years and decades of the specific characters lives we see no character growth- unless it is to switch on a dime after some cosmological intervention in the persons life.
Also, wtf is up with Mimi’s secondary career?


Meghan Arnold THANK YOU for this review. It hit upon so many of the rage points percolating in me while reading this. Down to the “shit-eating” grin.


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Will Shoe Your gripes are all accurate and then some. This book also made me feel nothing. It feels like it was written simply to garner praise. Those who claim to love it seem like people that want to appear to enjoy literature rather than actually enjoy it.


Joseph Mazzola 100% agree!!!


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Girl Thank you for this! The male gaze in this book is really bothering me


Keith Young Created a profile just to say how much I disliked this review. Way to completely miss the forest for the trees…


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Tom Keefe Agree, Keith. While there are things to nitpick in this novel, Shelley is focused on identity politics nonsense. And she even manages to lump Powers in with other artists with histories of sexual assault, all because he's a...wait for it...man. I loved this book - maybe because I'm a man??? or more likely because I love a literary mushroom trip. I have a high threshold for indulgence as long as the writing is incisive. And this hit the mark, despite no Latinx characters. The horror! The horror! Wait, does Colson Whitehead have Latinx characters? I don't remember any. I better reassess his brilliance. JFC, no wonder we're saddled with the Idiot in Chief.


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