Fabi NEEDS Email Notifications's Reviews > The Fallen: Genesis

I really liked it! It's dark and brutal. Especially so since it involves children.

I wish this had been a fully developed novel length book. It has such high potential. Because it's short, I found some of the "coincidences" that twisted and moved the plot along a little too convenient to be believable. But I can easily picture how well they would have worked given a little more background and build-up.

Mild spoiler explaining the missing star:
(view spoiler)[There's a huge time gap at the end of the story with no details of the what the characters went through or how they developed during those many years. I pretty much hate time gaps in any story so simply due to personal preference I deducted a star. (hide spoiler)]