Jay's Reviews > Killer

Definitely expected more from this

Well I gotta say I'm disappointed in this book. While this is pleasant, it just isn't as good as I expected or at the very least hoped for. It's extremely slow and drawn out. That's not alot angst in it. What little bit there is, really isn't enough to give readers the feels about all the situations that happen! Then the heroine turns into this self pitying, whining and crying person all the time. It was completely annoying, and at many points thru out the story it made me want everyone to just drop her and walk away! ( I mean seriously you can only do so much to help someone) The only good thing in this story was Louis, he was perfect. As for the short story, I would of drop that Bitch to! Then when she came crawling back ( after seeing a picture of another woman with Jesse ) I would've made her work for it. Especially after how hard he tried to be with her and she refused!