Jan 's Reviews > Killer

I enjoyed it mostly, I was just left with too many questions when I'd finished.

There are a lot of hot sexy scenes, like a lot! There's a kidnapping, stalking, damaged pasts, skin colour is questioned, an ex pops up wanting Jesse back then disappears as quick as she entered the plot, Jesse's mother and what she was going through I did not get at all and then there's Jesse,s come back after his last fight that left him with mental scares.

I felt it was all to much, drip fed overload. It felt like the author threw into the storyline everything she thought the reader would want and really any one of those things would still have enhanced the story if it had been focused on more and there had been a build up to it while Laurie and Jesse developed their relationship before his big fight.

I had high hopes after reading reviews, unfortunately I saw to many flaws in the plot to really enjoy the story.