REVISED OF OUTLINE OF ESSAY
I.    Introduction (Introdductory Paragraph)
      A. General Statement       :_______________________________________
      B. Thesis statement        : There are four parts to make an apple pie, they are
                                 (1) Making the pastry dough; (2) mixing the apple filling;
                                 (3) assembling the pie; (4) baking the apple pie.
II.   Body (Body Paragraphs)
      A. Topic Sentence (BP 1)   : Part one of four is making the pastry dough.
         1. Supporting sentence 1        : Whisk the flour, sugar, and salt.
         2. Supporting sentence 2        : Cut the butter into 1,3 cm cubes and mix it in bowl.
         3. Supporting sentence 3        : Stir in ½ cup of cold water to make a shaggy dough.
         4. Supporting sentence 4        : Roll the dough into a 25x38 cm rectangle.
         5. Supporting sentence 5        : Fold the rectangle twice to make a small, thick
                                           rectangle.
         6. Supporting sentence 6        : Divide the dough into 2 equal portions.
      B. Topic sentence (BP 2)   : Part two of four is mixing the apple filling.
         1. Supporting sentence 1        : Shake the brown sugar, salt, and spices in a
                                           sealable plastic bag.
         2. Supporting sentence 2        : Peel core, and cut the apples into 1,3 cm slices.
         3. Supporting sentence 3        : Add the apples to the bag and shake them.
         4. Supporting sentence 4        : Let the apples rest in the bag at room temperature
                                           for 3 hours.
         5. Supporting sentence 5        : Add the tapioca starch and shake the bag.
      C. Topic Sentence (BP 3)   : Part three of four is assembling the pie.
         1. Supporting sentence 1        : Roll half of the dough into a 35,5 cm circle and lay
                                          it in a pie dish.
         2. Suppporting sentene 2        : Lay the pastry in a 22 cm pie plate and trim the
                                          edges of the dough.
         3. Supporting sentence 3        : Roll the remaining half of the dough into a 35.5 cm
                                           circle.
           4. Supporting sentence 4          : Cover and chill the pastry for 2 hours.
           5. Supporting sentence 5          : Spread the apple filling into the pastry lined shell.
           6. Supporting sentence 6          : Lay the top pie crust over the filling and seal the
                                              edges.
       D. Topic sentence (BP 4)     : Part four of four is baking the apple pie.
           1. Supporting sentence 1          : Preheat the oven to 400 F (204 C) and chill the pie
                                              for 30 minutes.
           2. Supporting sentence 2          : Beat the egg, yolk, cream, and salt to make the egg
                                             wash.
           3. Supporting sentence 3          : Brush the egg wash over the top of the pie and cut
                                             6 vents in the pastry.
           4. Supporting sentence 4          : Set the pie on a baking sheet and bake it for 75
                                              minutes.
           5. Supporting sentence 5          : Cool the pie for at least 1 hour before you serve it.
III.   Conclusion (Concluding Paragraph).
       All in all, there are four part or steps to make an apple pie, first, making the pastry dough;
       second, mixing the apple filling; third, assembling the pie; the last, baking the apple pie,
       and if you want to make a delicious apple pie, you must follow the steps above.