It is (widely) considered that many people believe that sending children to school at an early age

is necessary, whereas others think that the age between 6 and 7 years are is more preferable to
learn new things. I personally believe that sending kids to school as early as possible is the best
choice.
On the one hand, there are a number of explanations why some people think that children
should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. For one (Firstly
cho đỡ lặp từ for với câu sau), young children need the attention and care from of their
parents from a very early age (thì mới khớp với ví dụ học đi học nói, 2 cái đấy học trước 2
tuổi mà) so that they can…?. For instance, they can learn basic lessons from their parents such
as how to talk and walk. Furthermore, if young kids/babies/infants get sick, their parents can take
care of them immediately. In addition, young kids staying at home is better and more safely than
at in the school. This is because teachers do not focus on all of the students in the at school and
the schools have many school violence. For example, children fighting over each other's toys
leads to fights without the teacher knowing.
On the other hand, there are a number of (multiple/ a host of/ a multitude of cho đỡ lặp 😊)
explanations on why it is necessary for young kids to go to school as soon as possible. Firstly,
schools teach manner lessons in order to help them become more confident and independent.
These manners are easy to develop in schools rather than at home because parents nowadays
tend to focus on their work rather more than their children. For example, they can improve
communicate skills and make some new friends. In addition Moreover/Furthermore/ Another
reason is that, there are many outdoor activities and games atin the school so that young children
can learn and explore new things. As a result, they have a more confident personality and more
successful studies than who attend it later.
To summarize, the advantages of early education for children is a better choice. Moreover, it is
also useful for students to develop students mentally, physically and socially. I believe that
young kids go to school early will develop better.

Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if its students study board. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that students studying overseas may bring some merits for their country. In my
opinion, I completely agree that a homeland will benefit considerably if its students study
overseas.
On the one hand, it is clear that students studying abroard can offer considerable drawbacks. The
first demerits of studying overseas is that it they may cause significant loss for their country’s
economic development. For example, well-trained workers use their skills and knowledge to
bring benefit for other countries such as economic development. As a result, their homeland loss
increasingly their economic because they do not have talent to support and develop new
research. Besides, what makes the country disadvantageous is that if students study abroad, their
homeland may have a loss in education. This is because top researchers and professors may leave
without educating the next generation. Furthermore, international students often tend to settle in
the country where they study/which they study in, (Không có where they study in) in so they do
not contribute to the benefits of their country.
On the other hand, although the demerits mentioned above, I believe that there are more positive
aspects. First, students learning in a the foreign country can help their country’s economy
develop economic. For instance, international students use the knowledge and experience which
they study abroad to build and improve architectural structures. Therefore, their country can
attract tourists and earn a lot of money. Another advantage of studying overseas for their country
is that they may help their country connect with other nations countries in order to export goods.
One of the best examples is that students overseas can get to know people in other countries to
promote their local brand. In addition, students studying abroad can improve the education
system in their country. They often learn and explore new techniques things, then they apply it
them to the country’s education system to have better teaching methods for students in the
country.
In conclusion, studying overseas brings many benefits for the country, so that I believe that
governments should offer more scholarships for gifted students to study abroad.

Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age.
Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for
their kids.
It is believed that kindergartens bring the best service for kid of preschool age, while working
parents being working think that members of family such as grandmother and grandpa will take
better care of theiryoung children. While people believe that grandparents will care about
young children carefully, I maintain the view that From my point of view, childcare centers
provide the best services for children of preschool age.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that grandparents whose are
famlily members take care of their children more carefully. There are several explanations
behind the thought that young kids took care of by grandparents will be better. First,
grandparents may be more reliable in taking care of their grandchildren due to their experience.
This is because grandparents can have some experience taking care of children. For example,
young kids are often eaten fed many healthy kinds of food by grandparents, so they (chủ ngữ vế
đầu là young kids mà chỗ này là their children thì là con của chúng nó à?) their children are
healthy and rarely get sick. In addition, grandparents can spend more time for young kids and
focus on kids more than preschools’ teachers (cái trường ko chăm các cháu mà là các cô). For
instance, grandparents tell stories to their grandchildren and teach them the first lessons of life
trong khi giáo viên ở mẫu giáo thì không làm được à? Lấy ví dụ khác đi em, kiểu các tai nạn trên
báo đài về cô trông trẻ đánh cháu ở Việt nam thiếu gì.
On the other hand, I would maintain/argue/contend/assert/tend towards (tất cả chỗ này đều + that
được nhé) that kindergartens provide the best services for preschool children for the following
reasons. Firstly, kindergarten may equip provide young kids with important skills such as
communication skills. For example, young kids can make new friends and communicate with
teachers, so/thus they will become more confident and independent. In addition, teachers in
kindergartens teach may provide preschool children with basic knowledge such as alphabet,
maths and numbers science in order to help them prepare for primary school. Furthermore,
childcare centers have a wealth of facilities and school supplies thì…?. For example, a lot of pre-
schoolskindergarten have many big playgrounds and a generous number of toys. Therefore,
kindergarten can organize some outdoor activities and games so that young kids can learn and
explore new things.
In conclusion, though grandparents take good care of their grandchildren, I believe that
preschools can bring the best things for children to develop comprehensively.
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