Writing Lan 2
Writing Lan 2
Travel alone:
- Convenient and well - organized: tour guide often take care about transportation,
schedule, food, accommodation, travelers have just relaxed and enjoy the trip.
- Safe: unfamiliar places or dangerous areas. Foreign country, the guide can helps:
translation, cultural understanding.
- Improve soft skills: communication skills, critical thinking, problem-solve.
- Fun, share experience and make new friends.
Eat at home:
De 3: overweight = obesity
- Earn higher incomes: Although they work hard in companies, but it is not enough to
make a living -> they choose runs their own business in the hope making more profit and
improve their quality of life.
- More freedom and independence in work: working at companies can be stressful due to
deadline, strict rules, pressure from managers => start business to follow their passions.
(EX: a person who is passionate about fashion may open a clothing store to express
creativity and enjoy more freedom.
- Develop valuable skills: leadership, decision-making, time management skill,
communication skill.
Reasons=causes:
- Focus on building careers before starting a family: have children early often they must
sacrifice time and energy take care of child which can affect their work and performance
and income.
- Value personal freedom and enjoy life before taking on parental responsibilities. (EX:
they can travel, pursue hobbies and live more independently.
Impacts=effects:
- Health problems, older parents may face fertility problems and higher risks during
pregnancy, both for mother and the baby.
- Many people choose to have children later, this may contribute to an aging population ->
the country may face a shortage of young worker, which could negatively affect
economic growth and productivity.
De 6: having a small family rather than a large family. (benefits and drawbacks)
Benefits=advantages=pro
- More economical. Fewer members can spend less on food, clothing, housing, daily
expenses. Ex: nuclear family does not need to buy or rent a large house, which helps
them save money and improve financial situation.
- Avoid conflicts. Parents and children are often closer in age and interests, which makes
it easier for them to understand and help each other. In contrast, generational gap in
large families may lead to disagreements and arguments.
Drawbacks=disadvantages=cons
- Limited support in time of difficultly. Ex: If a family member become ill, they may not
receive much help from other relative especially elder people.
- Miss out valuable advice from grandparents who have more life experiences.
- Living part from extended family members can weaken family bonds.
Benefits:
Drawback:
- Exposure to violence. Many programs and movies contain violent content and children
can copy, imitate these actions in real life.
- Tv often promotes and advertise unhealthy lifestyles like junk food and drinking alcohol
on TV which can negative affect on children’s health.
- Spend too much watching TV can affect children’s health such as obesity, eye-sight
problems, back and neck pain,…
De 8: go to university, but they can not find job after leaving university and encourage to go to
vocational school. (agree or not agree)
Disagree.
- University education provides broad and deep knowledge. While vocational schools
focus on training specific skills. Universities help students develop critical thinking,
problem-solving, general knowledge that can be applied to many fields. These are
important for long-term career development.
- University degrees offer more career opportunities in the future. Many high-paying and
professional jobs such as doctors, engineers, lawyers, or teachers require a university
degree. Without higher education, students may not be able to these careers.
- Job market has changing rapidly due to development of technology. Technology help
people working more effectively and faster without need to many employees. Workers
who have lower degree are replaced by robot, advance machines than higher level of
educational. Ex: In Chinese company, they are built 57-story just in 19 working days
thank to machines instructed by good engineers without builder.
Advantages
- faster and convenient than other transportations because they run elevated tracks ->
avoid road traffic
- environment friendly due to run by electricity which can reduce harmful gases and
emission into air.
- Carry large number of passengers at high speeds which save time and reduce congestion
traffic.
Disadvantages
- The cost of building metro/train is extremely high. Government must invest a lot of
money in instructing, operating, maintaining.
- The ticket price is not affordable and suitable for lower income.
- In case emergency, evacuating people from train/metro is more difficult than the
grounds.
Advantages:
- Better career opportunities with high salary. Ex: HCMc, HN, employees have a better
chances many job with higher salaries than rural areas which can help them save money
and improve quality of life.
- Urban residents can access better healthcare and education services. Many hospitals
and universities in cities, which are equipped with modern facilities and qualified
professionals.
- Cities offer more entertainment places: cinema, mall, shops, restaurants, which help
reduce stress and relax after working day or study.
Disadvantages:
- The cost of living is extremely high. From rent, food, transportation, everything is more
expensive in cities compare to rural areas.
- Traffic congestion is serious problems. There are many cars, buses and motorbikes which
lead to people often traffic jam especially during brush hours, it can cause of wasting
time and traffic accident.
- Cities are noisy and polluted. From air, water to noise pollution have negative effects on
people’s health. Ex: people living in big cities: HCMC, HN often suffer from respiratory
diseases, lung cancer caused by poor air quality.
De 11: Rainforests play an important role in the health of the environment. Individuals or
governments. Discuss whether you agree or disagree.
-agree
+ Individuals can plant more trees, which help absorb carbon dioxide and provide oxygen for
people and animals.
+ people can switch to renewable energy such as solar or wind power stead of using fossil fuels
like coat, gas, oil.
+ people can use public transportations such as buses or bicycles instead of private vehicles to
reduce harmful gas and emission into air.
+ Parents and teacher can educate children how to learn save energy and protect the
environment. Ex: turning off the electrical devices when not use or go out. Educate children by
conducting educational programs or campaigns at school and on social media.
+ Individuals should their awareness to the problem because each small action can contribute
to protecting environment.
+ Should impose strict laws or rules about deforestation and punish activities that causes air
pollution to protecting rainforests.
+ They could offer free or discounted public transportation to encourage people to reduce
private vehicles.
Causes
- Lack of traffic awareness of drivers. Many people are driving when drinking beer and
alcohols or even used mobile, listening to music with headphone which it makes easier
traffic accident.
- Pavements are blocked by street vendors or shops lead to people must walk on the road
which very risky.
- Drivers disobeying traffic laws like speeding, running red light, change lines which causes
of serious traffic accidents.
- The number of private vehicles has been increasing rapidly but road infrastructure is bad
condition.
Effects
Solutions
- People should use public transportation to reduce traffic jams such as: buses.
- Drivers should raise their awareness to laws traffic. People should learn traffic laws and
practice driving properly before driving.
- Governments should impose strict laws or rules about traffic to reduce traffic accidents
and educate citizens by conducting educational programs or campaigns at school and on
social media.
- Government should improve the quality of the traffic infrastructure.
- It helps protecting environment. This means that when many people use public
transportation likes buses or trains instead of private vehicles which reduce air pollution.
- Avoid congestion traffic. Indeed, many people travel by public vehicles which reduce
traffic jams and traffic accidents and traveling will become easier.
- Save money. Ex: the ticket prices are very cheap and people can save on transportation
costs.
- Convenient and worry about weather. People can relax: read book, listen to music or
even take a nap without worry about weathers like rain, windy, sunny,…
Drawbacks:
- Public transportation is often bad quality. Ex: air-conditioning system on old buses does
not work, which makes passengers feel uncomfortable.
- Going by transportation is sometime unsafe. It means that due to overcrowding on
buses, pickpockets can easily steal money or other belongings. Therefore, passengers
feel worried.
- Public transportation is inconvenient. For instance, buses do not arrive on time, so
people may late for work or school.
- Get information for international resources which help broaden knowledge and soft
skills.
- Better opportunities with high salaries. Many companies and multinational organize If
workers are good at English or speak influent can have better opportunities with high
salaries and even working aboard.
- Communicate with foreigners easily. Thank to that they can make a lot of friends to
exchange information with people around the world. Moreover, people can travel
aboard and explore new things about history, culture, traditional and understanding.
Benefits:
- Convenient. People can use social media such as: FB, tiktok, Instagram which are free
make new friends and relax after hard working day,
- People can communicate and exchange information from different place by sitting at
home.
- keep in touch with friends and family which strengthen our relationship.
- People can research and get information on the internet easily.
Drawbacks:
- Privacy and security. Lose personal information and money by hacker on the internet.
- Damage to physical and mental health: headaches, memory loss, obesity.
- Inactive and lazier. People spend too much use internet instead of take park in sports
activities.
- Spread false information, leading to misinformation.
- Children should only focus on necessary subject and not spend time on art:
+ not useful
+ not important as math, sciences or English for academic achievement or career
opportunities.
+ not many challenging as other subjects
- Not beneficial and necessary for children’s health and happiness.
+ not effective or enjoyable and well-being.
+ not affordable.
Arts is crucial for children’s development.
+ help children develop skill in 21st century, such as critical thinking, creativity,…
+ Art can help children explore their talent and passion and pursue their goal and
dreams.
+ improve physical and mental health by reduce stress, boosting confident.
+ fun and meaningful experience that express emotions and identity.
Template advantage/disadvantages
TOPIC has become an essential part of rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam.
While components of arguments are in favor, however opponents completely against relevance
of the TOPIC. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a situation and draw a
conclusion.
To commence with, TOPIC has many good sides. The most prominent one is (AD1). This means
that (GT1). For example, VD1. Another good point would be that (AD2). Moreover, (AD3)
On the other hand, critics may point out that one of the significant disadvantages of (TOPIC) is
(DISAD1). This is because of the fact that (GT1). For instance, VD1. Another problem is that
(DISAD2)
In conclude, everything has two sides, and this situation is no exception. TOPIC has become a
crucial part of our life. Therefore, the efficient use of TOPIC should be promoted, however, its
misuse should be condemned.
Advantages:
Disadvantages:
Advantages:
- Better courses and high-quality programs. With international degree, they can better
chance job opportunities with high salaries which contribute to higher standard of living
in the future.
- More independence. Students have to do everything and how to learn cooking, cleaning
and even make a decision about study, work,… It makes them easier mature and gain a
valuable skill.
- Broaden their knowledge. Students can many opportunities explore new thing about
history, culture, traditional, food,… which help make new friends and relationship.
Disadvantages
- Homesick and culture shock. They have to living for away family so they feel lonely and
depressed lead to not concentrate on study.
- They hard it to adapt to new culture, which lead to negative effects on their mental and
physical health.
- Language barrier. There are many students is difficultly in communicating with foreigners
which make reduce understanding and academic performance at school.
- Costs a great deal of money. The high cost of living and tuition fees in a foreign country
which lead to many students have to get part time jobs after school, it makes reduce
academic performance at school.
Advantages
- Get a lot of money (high income) -> they can buy luxurious cars, expensive clothes,…
therefore they have a better and easier life than normal people .
- Famous person can get special treatment everywhere. Celebrities such as singer, actors
often get good services and special things such as special seat in public places or events.
- They can a lot fan who admire them. They always receive love and support form their
fans so they have a good mental health life.
Disadvantages
- Lack of privacy in life: followed by photographer and journalists who want take a photo
of them and judge everything they do.
- They may be a danger because of bad fan or followers. Some crazy fan may bother
them by email or messages, phone. Therefore, they feel uncomfortable and stressful.
- They are too busy with work. They do not spend much time with family and friends
which make them less closer to others and lonely.
De 22: homeschooling
Advantages
- They can decide children’s study program and course. They can have freedom to
choose what children learn want and do. Therefore, they will feel comfortable and
happy.
- Homeschooling helps to improve the relationship between parents and children.
When parents teach children at home, they can spend more time enjoy with children. As
a result, they become closer to each other.
- Parents can protect children from negative things such as violence and bullying.
Disadvantages
- Parents need to a lot of time and effort to do homeschooling. They have to preparing
materials and lesson plans as well as teaching methods for children at home. Therefore,
they will waste time and money.
- Homeschooling affect children’s social skills. When learning at home, children do not
have friends and not take park in activities at school which make their not improve and
develop social skill such as communication skill, teamwork skill,…
Advantages
- Students can explore and develop their interests. Ex: they can do what they like such as
dancing, singing and so on. Therefore, they can more confident.
- They can improve social skill and soft skills. When doing teams sport such as volleyball
or football, students can communicate with more people and make new friends which
help broaden their relationship.
- Outdoor activities also improve physical and mental their health. Students can relax
and reduce stress after hard-studying day. Besides, they become keep fit when playing
sports.
Disadvantages
- Take a lot of time to do outdoor activities. Therefore, it is difficult for arrange time
balance between study and activities.
- They feel tired and stress after doing these activities which reduce academic
performance and their health.
- Expensive. Students and parents hay to pay extra money for tuition free and necessary
equipment and clothes.
Advantages
- People get information about different products. Advertising helps buyers know about
model, price and quality of each product. Therefore, they can compare prices and
functions of a product at different stores and make a decision buy cheapest prices and
save some money.
- It helps increase the sales of products. Advertisements make more people know about
products or services which attract buy them. Therefore, this helps sellers and producers
get more profits.
Disadvantages
- Buyers can buy products with low quality. Advertisements sometime provide inaccurate
information about products and services. Therefore, people can receive goods with poor
quality than they expect. This may make them feel bored and annoyed.
- Buyers find it difficult to choose products. Because there are many advertisements for
one products, it is hard for them to choose a suitable one.
- Waste a lot of money. People might buy unnecessary things because of attractive
advertisements.
Advantages
Disadvantages
- Public transports have bad quality. Ex: The air conditioning system on old bus does not
work which make them feel uncomfortable.
- Going by public transports is unsafe because buses are often very crowed, noisy and
dirty. Besides, people are easier stolen money and things by pickpockets and thieves.
- Using public transports is inconvenient. Some public transports sometime arrive on
time which lead to people may go to work or school late. This affects their study and
work time badly.
De 26: multitasking
Advantages
- It is a good way increasing effective and productivity. People can complete more tasks
in less time. Therefore, It helps save a lot of time to do many other things.
- Multitasking trains people’s brain. it helps improve focus because people must
concentrate on doing many things at the same time which make brain become active
and strong.
- People become more flexible. People can decide how and when complete each task
suitably.
Disadvantages
- It decreases the quality of work. Ex: when people doing many things at the same time,
people easily make a lot of mistakes which affect to performance at work.
- People often feel worry and stressful. People often feel worry because of too much
work. As a result, they cannot complete it well.
- Suffer from people’s health. Ex: they often having to solve many problems at the same
time lead to they always stress, headaches which harmful to both their physical and
mental health.
Advantages
- Good for people’s health. They can join in different activities in places such as park or
squares. Parks are great places for everyone can walk, do exercise, play sports and enjoy
fresh air. It helps them keep fit and preserving them from serious health problems such
as obesity, diabetes and heart attack.
- Increase social interaction. When coming to public spaces, people have more chances to
meet up new friends and communicate with more new people. They can improve social
skills: communication skill, sharing.
- Enhance their knowledge about nature. People have opportunities to know explore and
learn about animals, plants when they go to zoos and parks. It helps raise their
awareness and protecting the environment.
Co 2 quan diem:
On the other hand, I am among those who support the idea that (viet lai QD dong y tren bai).
The primary reason is that (viet lai sai chu because). This means that … (GT) For example,
Job satisfaction
High salary
- People need a high salary to pay for basic living costs. They have to pay for food,
housing, bills.
- They have a better life.
+ have better healthcare and services and education.
+ improve the quality of life.
- Money partly create job satisfaction.
+ they feel happy and pleased with their jobs.
Advantages:
Disadvantages:
Playing video games = playing computer games = taking part in video games
Benefits:
- Learners and teachers can get a lot of information by using the internet. Ex: students con
look for information to improve their knowledge or do homework. Teachers can access
information and research knowledge for lesson plans. As a result, they can develop
research skill and computer skill which are important in the future.
- Learners can take online course easily. It helps them save time and money because they
can study every time and everywhere they like or even free for some online web.
- Using computer or laptop makes learner more engaged in learning, Ex: some teacher can
use video, short clip, photo, diagram to make lessons more interesting and engaging.
Drawbacks
- It decreases human interaction. Ex: in online class, students cannot discuss with friends
and teachers which make them do not improve soft skills and teamwork.
- Using technology can distract student from learning. While they use technology in
learning, they can easily surf the others web which affect badly performance at school.
- Learner can get wrong information on some website or violent content.
Stress= pressure
effects:
- Serious health problems. Ex: they feel tired and have headache or skin problems.
Therefore, they do not focus on study and work which make reduce effectively and
productivity working.
- Impact on people’s behaviors. When feeling stress, some people tend to have a bad
habit such as drugs or drinking alcohol. As a result, it can affect to physical and mental
health. Sometime people become violent and aggressive with others.
- Stress affects people’s relationship badly. People do not want communicate with others,
so they become lass close to each other.
Solutions:
- People should do exercise regularly. Ex: people can join in some activities like playing
sports and going jogging which they can relaxed and comfortable after hard working day.
- People have to balance diet. Eating healthy food and drinking enough water help them
have a good health and reduce stress.
- They should spend quality with their family and friends. They should have a enough
sleep or can read the favorite books to relax their mind.
Effects:
- Suffer from serious health problems. When suing internet too much, people may get
many serious diseases such as obesity = overweight, headaches, short-sighted and so on.
- The internet affects children’s study. When they spend more time using internet, they do
not focus on study which make reduce performance at school.
- Children spend less time quality with their family and friends. As a result, they become
less close to each other and have not chance to broaden their relationship.
Solutions:
- Parents should limit time children using internet. Children should use internet about 30
minutes per day.
- Teachers should educate students by conducting educational programs and campaign at
school and on social media about using internet.
- Parents should encourage student join in sport club like football, badminton which helps
improve their relationship and health.
- Students should spend more time with family and friends. Ex: going to coffee and
chatting with their friends.
Causes:
Solutions:
- Parents should encourage children have a healthy diet. Ex: they should eat a lot of
vegetables, fruits, and drink more water and avoid fast food which make them become
healthier.
- Teachers and parents should encourage kids taking part in outside activities such as
football, volleyball and so on which help them keep fit and lose weight.
- Government should limit advertisement about junk food on TV.
Causes:
+ Parents are too busy at work to get money, so they do not more time take care and
communicate with their children and teach them about good behaviors.
Solutions
Causes:
Solutions:
Working in glass office building have several negative effects on employees and environment.
- Large glass windows absorb too much sunlight, which make overheating during summer.
- This not only increase the cost of air conditioning but also make uncomfortable for
workers.
- Strong sunlight can produce glare, making it difficult to see computer screens clearly,
which reduce productivity and affect to eye strain or headaches.
- Glass walls is lack of privacy. Employees may feel uncomfortable being constantly
watched and conversation can be easily overheard
- Glass building often have poor insulation, In winter, heat escapes quickly, which lead to
higher heating costs.
- In natural disaster such as earthquakes or storms, glass panels may break and serious
safety risks.
Advantages
- Online shopping brings convenient. People can buy any time and anywhere without
buyers needn’t travel to physical stores.
- Online shopping provides wide range of products. and goods including domestic, local
shops and international brands. Buyers can compare products from different brands or
prices.
- Online shopping offers better prices. Ex: shops have many discount programs and
promote prices for potential customers and memberships.
- It helps save time because people do not need to travel and wait long time checkout at
shops.
Disadvantages
- Online shopping is lack of physical inspection. Buyers do not touch and try the products
such as clothes, electronic and so on which can make us feel disappointments.
- The delivery might be delayed, lose packages or have high shipping costs, which make
customers unhappy or dissatisfied.
- Customers sometime buy a bad quality because buyers is receive goods which different
from advertisements.
Causes:
- Human activities.
+ People burn fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gases from electricity,
transportation, industry which release emission or carbon dioxide into air.
+ Deforestation. This means is tree absorb CO2 but large-scale deforestation reduce this
ability which increase greenhouse gas.
+ industrial and agricultural practice. Methane and nitrous from livestock and rice
farming contribute to global warming.
- Climate change can be affected by natural factors such volcanic eruption and solar
variation.
Effects:
- Climate change has bad effects on the environment. It raises high temperatures,
increase heat waves, melting of polar ice cap, which contribute to rising level of sea.
- Climate change causes loss of biodiversity. Many species do not adapt to rapidly
changing climates, leading to extinction or migration.
- Extremely weather events such as storms, wildfires, flood are becoming more frequent
and intense.
- On human’s health. EX: Since environmental pollution it makes increase serious health
problems such as lung cancer, skin-related problems and so on.
Solutions:
Advantages:
Disadvantages:
- There is lack of job security. Income may be uncertain or unstable at the begin.
- Self - employers have high responsibility and pressure. They are doing everything from
find customers, finances plans, pay taxes.
- There are no employee benefits. They have no health insurance, paid leave, retirement
plans.
Positive:
- The students can gain valuable life experience. They can travel, volunteer, or work to
learn new skills which help them become independent, and better understand the
world.
- Students can more time to relax and think carefully about their future before university.
- Gap year help students more time to taking park in extra curriculum activities which
giving them better career opportunities in the future.
Negatives:
- A gap year can be expensive, especially if students travel abroad or do unpaid work.
- Some students may lose motivation to return to study after a long break.
- Gap years can waste time if people do not benefit from the experience.
Causes:
- Students suffer form academic pressure. They meet high expectation from parents,
teachers and themselves.
- Students always have an overload curriculum and tight deadline foe homework,
assignment, exam.
- Students are facing bullying at school.
- Students have family and personal problems.
- Students move to new environment and have pressure to adapt unfamiliar teachers,
classmate.
Solutions:
In modern day society, learning art has become an essential part of rising debate in the present
world. It is widely debated it is necessary for us to promote learning art at school. Personally, I
strongly disagree with statements. This essay will provide some reasons and relevance examples
to support my arguments.
To commence with, it should be recognized that learning art can develop student’s imagination
and creativity. This mean that students have a chance to think outside the box and explore new
ideas when attending these classes. One example that support this view is when student learn
art which help them can express themselves in unique. This clearly demonstrate learn art has
positive impact on student’s development about knowledge and make feel relax and reduce
stress after hard studying day.
However, I believe that promoting art at school is not important. In fact, students these days
have already been burdened with their academic curriculum at school since important subjects
like Math and English often require a great deal of time and effort to learn and take regular
exam. Moreover, not every student is enthusiastic about art, which may cause this subject to
become to boredom and stress. Therefore, being made is learn art at school can withdraw their
attention from those essential subjects, which can negatively affect the student’s performance
at school.
In conclude, this essay argued that it is unnecessary for us to promote learning art at school..
However, everything has two sides and this situation is no exception. Therefore, the efficient
use of learning art should be promoted, however its misuse should be condemned.
In modern day society, learning art has become an essential part of rising debate in the present
world. It is widely debated that learning art is waste of time. While others argued that it is
better for children to focus on learning math and language. Personally, I strongly agree with this
statement. This essay will provide reasons and relevance to support my argument.
To commence with, it should be recognized that learning art can develop student’s imagination
and creativity. This means that student can think outside the box and explore new ideas when
attending these classes. One example that support this view is students can a freedom express
themselves in unique without answer wrong or right. This clearly demonstrate that learning art
has positive impact on the student’s development and enjoyable.
However, I believe that learning art is a waste of time. In fact, student these days have already
been burdened with their academic curriculum at school since important subjects like Math and
language often require great deal with time and effort to learn and take regular exam.
Moreover, not every student is enthusiastic about art, which may affect to become boredom
and stress. Therefore, being made is learn art at school an withdraw their attention from those
essential subjects, which can negative affect the students perform at school.
In conclude, this essay argued that it is better for children to focus on learning math and
language because learning art is time-consuming. However, everything has two sides and this
situation is no exception. Therefore, the efficient use of learning art should be promoted,
however its misuse should be condemned.
In modern day society, child obesity has become an essential part of rising debate in the present
world. It is widely debated increasing the time spent on physical education at school is the best
way to deal with the problem of overweight children. Personally, I strongly disagree with
statement. This essay will provide reasons and relevance to support my argument.
To commence with, it should be recognized that physical education is good for student’s
physical and mental health. This means that when attending physical education class, student
can burn a lot of calories accumulated from unhealthy diet such as fast food and sugary drinks.
One example that support this view is when student play badminton can help them lose weight
and keep fit because they can burn the high-energy contained in junk food and soft drinks.
Moreover, student can relax and release stress after hard-studying hours. This clearly
demonstrate attending physical education has positive impact on student’s health.
However, I believe that increasing the time spent on physical education at school is not best way
to deal with the problem of overweight children. In fact, student these days have already been
burdened with their academic curriculum at school since important subjects like Math and
language often require great deal of time and effort to learn and take regular exam. Moreover,
not every student is enthusiastic about physical education, which may cause to become
boredom and stress. Therefore, being made is spend more time do exercise can withdraw their
attention from those essential subjects, which can negatively affect to the student performance
at school.
To conclude, this essay argued that increasing the time spent on physical education at school is
the most effective solution to tackle the problem of child obesity. Therefore, the efficient use of
children obesity should be promoted, however its misuse should be condemned.