WRITING PORTFOLIO
Student's Name: Nguyen Thi Thu Van
Class/Course: Writing 2 – K20
Instructor: Ms. Thu xinh đẹp
Institution: IUH
Date: August 2025
Week 2: WRITE A 4-PARAGRAGH ESSAY ABOUT THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF
ONLINE LEARNING
My version Chat GPT’s version
Online learning is becoming very popular in today’s Online learning is becoming very popular in today’s
society. Students can join the classes with the internet society. Students can join classes through the internet
and without going to school. This way of learning has a without going to school. This way of learning has many
lot of advantages but also has many disadvantages advantages but also has some disadvantages, which
which be discussed in the following essay. will be discussed in the following essay.
One of the main benefits of online learning is access One of the main benefits of online learning is access
to many resources. Students can watch videos, practice to many resources. Students can watch videos, practice
with AI or do more exercises. This will help them with AI, or do extra exercises. This helps them expand
expand and understand more the subject. Besides, their knowledge and understand the subject better.
online classes is also flexibility. Students can choose Besides, online classes are also flexible. Students can
flexible study hours according to their personal time choose study hours according to their personal
and especially do not need to go to school every day. schedule and especially do not need to go to school
For example, busy people or those who live far from every day. For example, busy people or those who live
school can easily attend classes. far from school can easily attend classes.
However, E-learning still has many drawbacks. The However, e-learning still has some drawbacks. The
first one is technology problems. Sometimes slow first one is technology problems. Sometimes a slow
internet and old computer or phone can make it internet connection and an old computer or phone make
difficult to access and participation in classes. This it difficult to access and participate in classes. This
causes many students to miss lessons. The second one causes many students to miss lessons. The second
is lack of communication. Students cannot disadvantage is the lack of communication. Students
communicate directly with friends and teachers. It can cannot communicate directly with friends and teachers.
cause boredom and limit social communication skills, This can cause boredom, limit social communication
even lack of motivation to learn. skills, and even reduce motivation to learn.
In short, online learning brings great learning In short, online learning brings useful resources and
resources and flexibility but it also has problems with flexibility, but it also has problems with technology
technology and communication. Students should be and communication. Students should be careful when
careful in choosing online learning. If done correctly, it choosing online learning. If used correctly, it will be
will be very good for them and vice versa, it will lead very helpful for them; otherwise, it may lead to poor
to bad results. results.
Write 10 good words/phrases you could learn from Chat GPT’s version:
1. a wide range of resources: nhiều tài nguyên khác nhau
2. practice with AI tools: luyện tập với công cụ AI
3. extra exercises: bài tập thêm
4. flexibility: sự linh hoạt
5. study time / study hours: thời gian học
6. face-to-face communication: giao tiếp trực tiếp
7. lack of motivation: thiếu động lực
8. limit social skills: hạn chế kỹ năng xã hội
9. benefits and challenges: lợi ích và thách thức
10.think carefully before choosing: suy nghĩ kỹ trước khi lựa chọn
