Lesson 15: Phân tích các bài luận và trả

lời các câu hỏi sau:

1/ Intro: is it similar to the previous question types?
2/ Overview: What do you need to include?
3/ Structures: What type of structure do you need to write a report for this type of
question?
4/ What are considered main features in this type?

The pictures show changes that have taken place in a school library over the past five
years.
Overall, the building has witnessed a number of changes, the most important of which are
the repurposing of some rooms and facilities and the addition of a conference room.

In the west of the building, the meeting room stayed the same, and the classroom was
turned into a recording studio. There used to be a borrowing and returning desk five years
ago, but it was then redeveloped into two separate rooms catering for each purpose.

The bookshelves in the northern section remained unchanged, while those in the southern
part were converted into desks for students' laptops. In the center of the library, studying
tables were changed into private studying tables with the addition of two more tables.
Other changes include the library office in the south-west being transformed into a
conference room and the desks for computers in the north- east being converted into
desks for students' laptops.
In the north-west of the town, the golf course remained, and more shops were added
on the left side of the high street branching off from the main road. The shops on the
right of the high street were replaced by apartments, while the farmland was
removed to make way for a resort including a swimming pool, a hotel, and two
tennis courts.

The green area in the south west was expanded, whereas no changes were made to
the sand dunes, and some wind turbines were added by the sea in this area of the
town. A parking lot was built near the hotel in the middle of the map, which was
accompanied by the cafe being moved southwards. A public beach and a private
beach were constructed, replacing the pier, marina and fish market in the south east
of the town.

The pictures illustrate changes that took place in a district park between 2004 and
2014.
Overall, the park saw a number of significant changes, the most important of which
are the addition of recreational facilities and the reduction of the green area.
In the north of the park, the entrance remained unchanged, while the tennis courts
were expanded significantly. The southward expansion of the parking space means
its capacity rose considerably, accommodating up to 50 in 2014 cars instead of 20
cars in 2004, and the football ground in the middle of the park stayed the same. A
picnic area was constructed in the south west, replacing most of the open space
there. To the right of this area, there used to be a pond, but it was then redeveloped
into a boating area.

The play area for children in the north east was expanded southwards, with the
addition of a children's soft play area. In addition, some toilets and a cafe were built
in the south of this playground. It is important to note that these new facilities were
erected at the expense of almost half of the green area in the south east corner of the
park. Finally, a cycling path was built to allow cyclists to go around the park.

Lesson 16: Viết Intro + overview cho các

biểu đồ dưới đây
Viết Intro + overview cho các biểu đồ dưới đây
Viết Intro + overview cho các biểu đồ dưới đây
The Diagrams below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and
2007 summarize the information by selecting main features etc.

Sử dụng từ vựng + cấu trúc

Highlight các từ vựng mô tả sự thay đổi, mất đi, k đổi... của các thành phần trong bài luận
mô tả biểu đồ dưới đây:
In the north-west, most of the trees were cut down, and in the south-west the bicycle track
was converted into a roadway. In the center of the city, the post office, bank and library
remained, while in the northern section, the candy store and butchers shop were
converted into a supermarket. A shopping center was constructed in the center of the
downtown, replacing most of the open space there. There used to be a flower shop in the
southern part, but it was then redeveloped into a travel agent.

There was a river in the north-east of the downtown area in 1936, which then became a
lake in 2007, and a large residential area was built on its shore. Other changes include the
government offices being transformed into a museum and the farmland becoming a golf
course in the south-east of the map.

Dùng các cấu trúc khác nhau để mô tả sự thay đổi trong các câu sau:

Ví dụ:
In the north-west, most of the trees were cut down, and in the south-west the bicycle
track was converted into a roadway.
--> In the north-west, most of the trees were cut down, while in the south-west the
bicycle track was converted into a roadway.

In the center of the city, the post office, bank and library remained, while in the
northern section, the candy store and butchers shop were converted into a
supermarket.
--> gợi ý: vẫn dùng while, nhưng câu sau dùng , replacing...

--> dùng removed to make way for/ there used to be....

There was a river in the north-east of the downtown area in 1936, which then
became a lake in 2007, and a large residential area was built on its shore.
--> Dùng while/ there used to be/ replacing/ which is accompanied by....
Other changes include the government offices being transformed into a museum
and the farmland becoming a golf course in the south-east of the map.
--> Dùng the... saw some significant changes, with.... / while/ and…

Highlight các từ tả vị trí của các thay đổi trong bản đồ dưới đây.

In the north-west of the map, the school and conventional center remained, as did the
footpath encircling a small industrial area, a lake and some trees in the north of the town.
While the industrial zone was converted into a swimming pool, no changes were made to
the lake and trees. In the north-east, the fishing area stayed unchanged, and the two
swimming pools by the sea in the east also saw no changes.

In the middle of the town, the housing area was expanded as three more residential
buildings were added. To the left of this accommodation area, a university was built,
replacing a small industrial zone there. The entire industrial zone in the south of the town
was completely removed to make way for a large green area. Another change is that a
harbor was constructed in the east of the town, which is accompanied by the construction
of a road running across the map to allow access from the harbor to the other side of
town.

Lesson 17: write body paragraphs

Viết thân bài 1:
Thân bài 2:

Viết thân bài 1:

Thân bài 2:

Viết thân bài 1:

Viết thân bài 2: