Apartment 52/85

CREATED BY
YASH PUROHIT
PREM CHAND BAKOLIYA

CAST
Aman
Shyojit Kumar
Rishab
Prem Bakoliya
Aanand Yash Purohit
INT. ROOM - NIGHT
Black Screen.
Disclaimer, Voices of credit card, seprating white ledy, and
rishab dialouge. This will be stablishing shot, blurry, again
black screen.
RISHAB
Aaa iska kya likha tha mene...
Provision for doubtful debts...ye mene
aadha likha tha..aaa
Screen open, everthing looks blurry and smokey, Pen tic tic
voice came slow than fast. At Last tic tic voice, Aman lifted
his face, his eyes is red, messy hair falls around his face.
AMAN
Estimated amount of bad debt that will
arise from account receivable that
have been issued but not yet
collected.
RISHAB
haa haa, yahi tha...iska aadha number
to mil jayega...
(Calculating with low voice) Ho
jayega, iss baar jayega
AMAN
Nahi hua toh?
RISHAB
(Pause) kyu nahi hoga, Income Tax ka
thoda issue tha, leking overall
percentage toh sahi bann rahi hai
Rishab calculating, while Aman preparing for the second row
of White lady... Rishabh looks at his hands trembling,
desparate for the dose
RISHABH
(Concerned) Apni haalat dekho, itne
heavy drugs karne ki kya zaroorat hai?
AMAN
(static) White Lady bolte hain isse,
pressure release karti hai, zaroorat
padegi tujhe
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Rishabh backs out while denying it
RISHABH
Sharing dekh kar liya tha, pehle hi
bata dete ak month main chodne wale
ho, main dusra apatment dhundta
AMAN
Tushar ko Bol...
RISHAB
Kya bol rahe hai..kaun tushar, nasha
sar main chadh chuka hai, pagal ho
jaoge....
(pagal ho jaoge, repeat) Aman lost in thoughts, a lady voice
came (Aman), than father..
(Aman ho jayega na iss baar?)
(Aman, Aman, Aman)
AMAN
Aree nahi hua mujhse, ho jayega na, ho
jayega na, dimaag kharab kar diya, aa
jao, aa jao, baith jaao mere sar
pe.... Sabki umeedein toot gayi, sabke
sapno pe paani phir gaya.... Nahi kar
paaya kuch, aur naa hi koi kar
payega.... Mai hoon, yeh hai aur
TUSHAR BHI THAAA!!
Aman start cry with last dialouge, than he sits on chair,
head down, suddenly start laughing(normal)..
RISHABH
Aman...
AMAN
Tu kaun hai? kaun hai tu, ye to bhoot
hai, bhoot hai, per ye dikhta to mere
jaisa hai...ye to main hu, ya hone
wala hu (laugh +Cry + car+ sarcasm)
Low angel (Camera niche rakha hua hai)
AMAN
To kya karu, mar jaau, mar jaau?... ha
Mar hi jaana chahiye, mar jana
chaiye(laughing)....Katu? Kaat ke
dekhu ? Sapne mai kaun marta
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hai(RishabTran).. Try karke dekhte
hain, ha try karta hai, abhi pata chal
jayega ye sapna hai ya sach..
Aman shows his hands by putting shirt's baju back, a scar is
showing on his hand, rishab eyes are in surprised and camera
enter in his eyes.
CUT TO:
INT. ROOM - EVENING (5:00 PM)
The camera capturing rishab's eyes, He was desprate,
breathing havily, His legs tremble, and fear is etched on his
face. He is looking at his results on the laptop. His eyes
widen as he absorbs the information. Whispering to himself,
lost in thought.
Suddenly he starts looking for something on the chair, he
finds a raugh copy and looking for a blank page. He got the
page and start recalculating, but he still fail. He tears the
page and cries. He don't know what to do. Now the phone
vibrate, rishab wait for a minute then attend the call.
FRIEND
(voice coming from phone) Kya raha
result bhai..
RISHAB
(wait for a moment) Tera kya raha ?
FRIEND
Bhai to pass ho gaya, tu apna bata ?
RISHAB
(Hesitation) Main to fail ho gaya..
FRIEND
fail ho gaya !
RISHAB
(he try to share his feeling with him)
Bhai pata nahi kese, kuch samj nahi aa
raha, itni mehnat ki ..
Rishab's friend cut the conversation, try to ignore him.
FRIEND
Abb..Rishab main karta hu vapas
Rishab understand why the call ended. He places his phone on
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the table, checks his results again. He pulls his hair and
cries. Then he sleeps on the chair.
CUT TO:
INT. ROOM - EVENING (6:00 PM)
An hour passes. His phone vibrates, it was already dark, he
awake. Feel scary, and looks at his phone with anxiety, his
mind racing. Unable to grasp the situation, he hesitates as
the phone rings for the first time, he didn't have the
courage to pick up the call, but on the second ring, he
attend.
RISHAB
Hello..
PAPA
(voice coming from phone) Kya kar raha
hai ?
RISHAB
(hesitate) Ji, kuch nahi..
PAPA
Aaj tera result aane wala tha na, aa
gaya ?
RISHAB
(stunned) Ha..
PAPA
Kya ?
RISHAB
Ha result aa gaya
PAPA
kesa raha ?
RISHAB
Ji papa
PAPA
Result kesa raha ?
RISHAB
Abb,(Pause) thik raha
PAPA
Theek matlab clear ho gaya na ?
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RISHAB
ha papa ho gaya
PAPA
Acha (laugh), bahut badiya, or...
RISHAB
papa rakhte hu, dost aaye huve hai
Rishab abruptly ends the call, his head throbbing with
emotion. Camrea start moving round.
INT. ROOM - EVENING (CONTINUOUS)
Black Scree: For seconds.
Screen Open: Stablish shot, Blurry, Rishab Walking.
Moments later, he rises and start walking around the room. He
takes deep breaths, trying to calm himself. Then he back to
his chair , glances at his result, feeling headhack. He
lowers the laptop screen and rises again.
On Fridge or something, a note left by aman. Rishab check, it
was powder. (Aman background voice came..white lady
bolte....)
Black Screen: Aman Dialouge (White lady, repeat)
Screen open: (It's like jaha se aman ki kahani suru hui thi,
black screen, credit card...same cycle repeat)
Rishab empties the powder, onto it, and takes it as RAW.
After taking the powder, Rishab reclines on the chair, his
face turned upwards, eyes half-open, everything appearing
blurry. Feeling disoriented.
He gets up to drink water. He gropes for the bottle nearby,
takes a sip, then lies down on the bed, breathing heavily. He
opens his eyes, then closes them, thoughts of his friends and
father swirling in his mind. Suddenly, he opens his eyes
wide, gets up, and heads to the bathroom , he peed. There, he
notices his reflection in the mirror.
[The scene captures Rishab's disorientation and
introspection, leading him to confront himself in the
mirror.]
He saw himself in the mirror for a minute and laughing, and
for every dialouge his emotion is continuously changing
(happy, sad, fear, anger, selfdout)
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RISHAB
Ye hai failure, dekho to kesa dikhta
hai, fail ho gaya tu, fail ho gaya (1)
? Ak minute ye tu hai ? nahi ye tu
nahi hai, to fir ye kaun hai, kaun hai
tu ? kaun hai tu ? ye to bhoot hai,
bhoot hai, ye dikhta to mere jesa hai,
ye to main hu, has kyu raha hai ? papa
ko jhut bola clear ho gya, kaha hua ?
hua pass..nahi, fir aab.. aab kya
karu, kya karu, mar jau, ha mar jana
chaiye, mar jana chaiye ? (Laughing)
kya chiz hai be ye white ledy, dimag
kaam nahi kar raha, aisa lag raha hai
jese koi sapna dekh raha hu, ak minute
kahi ye sapna to nahi (1), ha ye sala
sapna hi hai, main fail ho hi nahi
sakta, itni mehnat ki hai, main fail
nahi ho sakta(.5), lekin ye sach hua
fir ? fir to muje mar jana chaiye, or
agr sapna hua to, sapne main kaun
marta hai ? ha sapne main kaun marta
hai, try karke dekhte hai, ha try
karte hai...
Camera still on the mirror, rishab steps outside, retrieving
a blade, and return to the frame.
RISHAB
katu ? nahi mar jaunga, par ye to
sapna hai.. sapne to sach nahi hote,
abhi pata chal jayega ye sapna hai ya
sach..
Rishab cut his vein, hand was bleeding.
RISHAB
(he saw blood on his hand) ye bhi
sapna hai..
Rishab write "PASS" with blood on the mirror.
RISHAB
Ye loo rishab bhaiya aap ho gaye pass.
Rishab falls down and disappear from the frame, Camera still
focuses on the mirror, blood came down from the mirror.
Black Screen
CUT TO:
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INT. DOOR - AFTER 6 MONTHS - EVENING OR NIGHT.
Rishab opens the door, his hairs looks like aman, long, his
eyes were red, dark circle, looks like not sleept for many
days.
Another boy standing outside, his look was same as rishab,
bright eyes, studious guy, padhaku bacha.
AANAND
Hii, aanand, vo apni baat hui thi room
dekho pe, vo main CA ki preparation ke
liye aaya hu, vese kamal hai, yaha ass
pass itne mahange rooms hai, but ye
apartment itna sasta hai....
Rishab give reaction like devil, like he knew the future,
naya bakra mil gaya. screen holds for some time, background
music (there will be blood), camera starting taking distance,
another boy enter with luggage.
FADE OUT
ON BLACK
Apartment 52/85
THE END